Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQVJCEHBTK2J6ZYS7HQQ10

Run Details

Duration:
3.1s
Cost:
$0.000071

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick and damp, the kind of stillness that didn’t belong to night. She stepped over the standing stones, their gnarled roots twisting into the earth like skeletal fingers, and the world tilted just enough to make her stomach lurch. The golden light from the restaurant’s neon sign flickered behind her, but here, beyond the park’s edge, the sky was wrong—too pale, too still, as if the stars had been plucked and left to hang in the void. A whisper slithered through the trees. Aurora froze. No wind. No breeze. Just the rustle of leaves that didn’t match the wind. She turned slowly, her pulse hammering in her throat. The grove stretched before her, a pocket of green and gold, the wildflowers blooming in hues she’d never seen before—violet veins in white petals, the kind of bloom that shouldn’t exist in autumn. The Heartstone pulsed faintly against her wrist, warm and steady, but the pendant’s glow was nothing compared to the unease coiled in her chest. She exhaled sharply, forcing herself to move. The path ahead was clear, the standing stones marking the boundary, but the trees here weren’t just trees. Their bark shimmered, faintly veined with silver, like old skin stretched too tight. A branch snapped behind her. Aurora didn’t turn. “You’re not supposed to be here,” a voice whispered from the darkness. She spun, heart in her throat. Nothing. Just the whisper of wind, the distant hum of a motorway somewhere beyond the park’s fence. But then—movement. A shadow detached itself from the undergrowth, too large to be a person, too small to be a tree. It hovered, just out of sight, its form shifting like smoke in the dark. Aurora’s breath hitched. “Who—?” The thing lunged. Not at her. Not yet. It skidded to a stop a yard away, its silhouette stretching unnaturally, limbs too long, fingers ending in too many joints. It tilted its head, and for a heartbeat, Aurora saw something like recognition flicker in its eyes—bright, wrong, like a camera lens cracked open. “You’re here for the pendant,” the thing said, its voice a chorus of whispers, layered and overlapping. “But you’re not alone.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around the Heartstone. “What do you want?” The thing tilted its head again, and the air around it rippled, the silver veins in the bark pulsing like veins. “The portal. It’s here. And it’s hungry.” A sound cut through the grove—deep, guttural, like bones grinding. The trees around them stilled, leaves falling from branches that hadn’t been there moments before. Aurora’s blood turned to ice. “What are you?” she demanded. The thing’s form dissolved into the shadows for a moment, then reformed, its mouth stretching too wide. “The Fae don’t remember their hunger anymore,” it hissed. “But you do.” Aurora took a step back, the standing stones biting into her soles. The Heartstone burned against her skin, warm and insistent. She had to leave. Now. “Go,” she snapped. “Get out of here.” The thing didn’t move. Instead, it reached toward her, its fingers elongating, stretching toward the pendant. Aurora’s breath came in ragged gasps as she fumbled for her bag, the straps digging into her shoulders. The thing’s voice slithered closer, closer. “You’re not the first to come,” it murmured. “But you’re the first to stay.” Aurora’s fingers closed around the strap of her bag, the weight of her phone and keys pressing into her palm. She didn’t look back. She ran.
total_cost0.00007076

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount592
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount592
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"lurch"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"lurch"
2"flickered"
3"whisper"
4"pulse"
5"pulsed"
6"shimmered"
7"flicker"
8"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences58
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords587
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.66% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount530
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora10
Heartstone3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
places(empty)
globalScore0.557
windowScore0.667
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like recognition flicker in its ey"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount587
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean26.68
std24.57
cv0.921
sampleLengths
090
16
282
343
43
512
658
74
83
950
1021
1110
1228
1330
145
1529
1626
177
1840
1914
2024
212
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"been plucked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs87
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences58
ratio0.086
matches
0"The golden light from the restaurant’s neon sign flickered behind her, but here, beyond the park’s edge, the sky was wrong—too pale, too still, as if the stars had been plucked and left to hang in the void."
1"The grove stretched before her, a pocket of green and gold, the wildflowers blooming in hues she’d never seen before—violet veins in white petals, the kind of bloom that shouldn’t exist in autumn."
2"But then—movement."
3"It tilted its head, and for a heartbeat, Aurora saw something like recognition flicker in its eyes—bright, wrong, like a camera lens cracked open."
4"A sound cut through the grove—deep, guttural, like bones grinding."
87.57% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount535
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.05420560747663551
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009345794392523364
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences58
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences58
mean10.12
std8.59
cv0.849
sampleLengths
025
127
238
36
42
52
62
710
89
933
1024
117
1218
1313
145
153
1612
176
181
1916
202
2119
2214
233
241
253
263
272
2821
2924
3017
314
326
334
3421
357
3610
3715
385
395
4017
419
423
4312
449
454
461
473
484
494
39.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3103448275862069
totalSentences58
uniqueOpeners18
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences39
matches
0"Just the rustle of leaves"
1"Just the whisper of wind,"
2"Instead, it reached toward her,"
ratio0.077
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences39
matches
0"She stepped over the standing"
1"She turned slowly, her pulse"
2"She exhaled sharply, forcing herself"
3"Their bark shimmered, faintly veined"
4"She spun, heart in her"
5"It hovered, just out of"
6"It skidded to a stop"
7"It tilted its head, and"
8"She had to leave."
9"She didn’t look back."
ratio0.256
11.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences39
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"She stepped over the standing"
2"The golden light from the"
3"A whisper slithered through the"
4"She turned slowly, her pulse"
5"The grove stretched before her,"
6"The Heartstone pulsed faintly against"
7"She exhaled sharply, forcing herself"
8"The path ahead was clear,"
9"Their bark shimmered, faintly veined"
10"A branch snapped behind her."
11"Aurora didn’t turn."
12"a voice whispered from the"
13"She spun, heart in her"
14"A shadow detached itself from"
15"It hovered, just out of"
16"Aurora’s breath hitched."
17"The thing lunged."
18"It skidded to a stop"
19"It tilted its head, and"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The golden light from the restaurant’s neon sign flickered behind her, but here, beyond the park’s edge, the sky was wrong—too pale, too still, as if the stars …"
1"The grove stretched before her, a pocket of green and gold, the wildflowers blooming in hues she’d never seen before—violet veins in white petals, the kind of b…"
2"Instead, it reached toward her, its fingers elongating, stretching toward the pendant."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the thing said, its voice a chorus of whispers, layered and overlapping"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"a voice whispered (whisper)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
2"it hissed (hiss)"
3"she snapped (snap)"
4"it murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.769
74.6783%