Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQVM9AERYFR83YY4DWR9SB

Run Details

Duration:
7.0s
Cost:
$0.000319

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The doorbell rang, a shrill, unexpected sound that pierced the quiet of Eva's flat. Aurora, buried under a mountain of books and scrolls on the couch, started, sending Ptolemy, the tabby cat, leaping from her lap. She blinked, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the sudden interruption. She wasn't expecting anyone. Her heart pounded as she pushed her straight black hair out of her face, revealing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She approached the door cautiously, her cool-headed demeanor kicking in. Three deadbolts later, she opened it to find Lucien Moreau standing on the other side. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, met hers, a stark contrast to his slicked-back platinum blond hair. He was impeccably dressed, as always, in a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame perfectly. His ivory-handled cane, concealing a thin blade, tapped lightly against the worn welcome mat. "Lucien," she said, her voice steady despite the surprise coursing through her. "What are you doing here?" He offered a small smile, his French accent lending a softness to his words. "Aurora, it's been a while. May I come in?" She hesitated, then stepped aside, allowing him entry. The flat was a cramped one-bedroom above a curry house on Brick Lane, every surface covered with books, scrolls, and research notes. It was a far cry from the sterile, organized world Lucien inhabited. "I must admit," he said, looking around, "I didn't expect your living situation to be quite so... cozy." Aurora bristled at the implication. "Well, it's not like I have a trust fund to fall back on, Lucien." He held up a hand in surrender. "I meant no offense. It's... charming." She rolled her eyes but couldn't suppress the small smile tugging at her lips. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" He turned to face her, his expression serious. "I've been looking into Evan. I thought you should know what I've found." Aurora's heart skipped a beat. Evan, her abusive ex, was a topic they'd avoided since she'd left him and fled to London. She'd asked Lucien for help once, desperate and scared, but he'd refused, citing his neutrality in human affairs. His sudden interest now was unexpected, to say the least. "Alright," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Tell me." Lucien leaned against the counter, his cane tapping a steady rhythm against the floor. "He's been asking around about you. Not just in London, but in Cardiff too. Your family, your friends... everyone who knew you before you came here." Aurora's stomach churned. She'd left her old life behind, changed her name, started fresh. The thought of Evan digging into her past, threatening the life she'd built for herself, was terrifying. "Why are you telling me this, Lucien?" she asked, her voice steady despite the fear gripping her heart. "You've never cared about my problems before." He looked at her, his heterochromatic eyes unreadable. "I care, Aurora. More than you know." The words hung in the air between them, heavy with unsaid things, with history. She looked away, breaking the intensity of his gaze. "I see." Lucien pushed off from the counter, closing the distance between them. "I want to help, Aurora. Let me help." She looked up at him, her blue eyes searching his. She saw sincerity there, and something else. Something that made her heart beat a little faster. "Why now, Lucien? What's changed?" He reached out, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear. His fingers lingered, tracing the line of her jaw. "I have," he said softly. Aurora's breath hitched. She could feel the heat of his body, see the way his eyes darkened as he looked at her. She knew she should step back, put some distance between them, but she couldn't move. She was rooted to the spot, her heart pounding in her chest. Lucien leaned in, his lips brushing against hers in a soft, tentative kiss. It was a question, a request for permission. Aurora's eyes fluttered closed, and she leaned into him, her hand gripping the lapel of his suit. She felt him smile against her lips before deepening the kiss, his hand cupping the back of her neck, pulling her closer. When they finally broke apart, they were both breathless. Lucien's thumb traced her bottom lip, his eyes never leaving hers. "I've wanted to do that for a long time," he said, his voice low. Aurora smiled, her heart feeling lighter than it had in months. "Me too," she admitted. He kissed her again, this time with a hunger that left her knees weak. When he pulled back, he rested his forehead against hers. "I should go," he said, his voice reluctant. "But I'll be back. Soon." Aurora nodded, her eyes still closed. "Okay," she whispered. She listened as he let himself out, the sound of the door clicking shut behind him echoing through the flat. She opened her eyes, a small smile playing on her lips. She didn't know what the future held, didn't know if Lucien's help would be enough to keep Evan away. But she knew one thing for sure - she was no longer alone in this fight. And that made all the difference.
total_cost0.00031875

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.087
71.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount872
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"perfectly"
2"lightly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount872
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"implication"
count1
2
word"skipped a beat"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"churned"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count1
11
word"fluttered"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"implication"
2"skipped a beat"
3"whisper"
4"stomach"
5"churned"
6"unreadable"
7"intensity"
8"tracing"
9"could feel"
10"pounding"
11"fluttered"
12"traced"
13"echoing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"stomach churned"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords868
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.90% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount713
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Ptolemy1
Lucien8
Moreau1
French1
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora8
London1
Evan3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
4"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.939
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
84.79% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.152
wordCount868
matches
0"Not just in London, but in Cardiff too"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean32.15
std19.05
cv0.593
sampleLengths
074
173
217
323
442
518
619
713
820
921
1050
1111
1240
1331
1425
1515
1625
1719
1831
1925
2049
2160
2234
2315
2437
259
2672
94.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"was unexpected"
1"was rooted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs137
matches
0"wasn't expecting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences77
ratio0.013
matches
0"But she knew one thing for sure - she was no longer alone in this fight."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount717
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03626220362622036
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009762900976290097
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean11.27
std5.5
cv0.488
sampleLengths
014
122
211
34
423
510
615
718
816
914
1012
115
1214
139
148
1522
1612
1718
185
1914
207
216
2214
236
248
2513
265
2717
2818
2910
309
312
3214
3326
343
3511
3617
3718
387
398
407
4114
429
432
4411
458
4610
477
489
495
42.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2987012987012987
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences61
matches
0"She blinked, her bright blue"
1"She wasn't expecting anyone."
2"Her heart pounded as she"
3"She approached the door cautiously,"
4"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
5"He was impeccably dressed, as"
6"His ivory-handled cane, concealing a"
7"she said, her voice steady"
8"He offered a small smile,"
9"She hesitated, then stepped aside,"
10"It was a far cry"
11"he said, looking around"
12"He held up a hand"
13"She rolled her eyes but"
14"He turned to face her,"
15"She'd asked Lucien for help"
16"His sudden interest now was"
17"she said, her voice barely"
18"She'd left her old life"
19"she asked, her voice steady"
ratio0.623
0.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences61
matches
0"The doorbell rang, a shrill,"
1"Aurora, buried under a mountain"
2"She blinked, her bright blue"
3"She wasn't expecting anyone."
4"Her heart pounded as she"
5"She approached the door cautiously,"
6"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
7"He was impeccably dressed, as"
8"His ivory-handled cane, concealing a"
9"she said, her voice steady"
10"He offered a small smile,"
11"She hesitated, then stepped aside,"
12"The flat was a cramped"
13"It was a far cry"
14"he said, looking around"
15"Aurora bristled at the implication."
16"He held up a hand"
17"She rolled her eyes but"
18"He turned to face her,"
19"Aurora's heart skipped a beat."
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The doorbell rang, a shrill, unexpected sound that pierced the quiet of Eva's flat."
1"The thought of Evan digging into her past, threatening the life she'd built for herself, was terrifying."
2"She felt him smile against her lips before deepening the kiss, his hand cupping the back of her neck, pulling her closer."
3"He kissed her again, this time with a hunger that left her knees weak."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the surprise coursing through her"
1"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"she asked, her voice steady despite the fear gripping her heart"
3"he said, his voice low"
4"he said, his voice reluctant"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.174
73.2136%