Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQVMN4J71A9B37YJDGQDP7

Run Details

Duration:
38.5s
Cost:
$0.002226
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy door of The Raven's Nest, a beacon of light from the green neon sign outside spilling into the dimly lit interior. She blinked a few times, adjusting to the change in lighting as she scanned the room. Her eyes roamed over the worn leather booths and weathered tables, drinking in the familiar sights and sounds of the bar she'd come to know so well since moving to London. She made her way towards an empty stool at the far end of the bar, carefully avoiding the grasping hands of a tipsy patron who was clearly a little too eager for some late-night companionship. She slid onto the seat, her bright blue eyes meeting the gaze of the bartender on the other side of the polished mahogany. His neatly trimmed beard, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair, twitched upwards in recognition and he gave her a small nod. "Evening, Aurora," Silas said, his deep voice warm and familiar. "The usual?" She nodded, a small smile gracing her lips. "Please, Silas." He set to work, his deft hands making quick work of preparing her go-to martini. As she waited, Aurora found her gaze drawn to the myriad of old maps and black-and-white photographs that adorned the walls, chronicling the many decades Silas had seen in his time from MI6 agent to seasoned barkeep. Her drink appeared before her, condensation already beading on the cool glass. She reached for it, her fingers brushing over the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist as she did. The mark, a remnant of a childhood accident, was a constant reminder of her past—a past she couldn't shake, no matter how hard she tried. Aurora took a sip of her martini, savoring the cool burn of the alcohol as it slid smoothly down her throat. She closed her eyes, letting her mind wander for just a moment. That was when she heard it. A voice, deep and rich, one that she'd know anywhere. One that sent an electric shock racing down her spine. "Well, if it isn't Aurora 'Rory' Carter." Her eyes snapped open. She whirled around on her stool to find herself face to face with a ghost from her past. "Malphora," she breathed, the name feeling foreign and familiar all at once. He looked different than she remembered. His once neatly styled blond hair had grown unruly and his sharp jaw was hidden beneath a thick beard. But his eyes, bright green and shimmering with mischief, were exactly the same. "Aren't you a sight for sore eyes," he chuckled, sliding onto the stool next to her. "What's it been, three, four years?" "Try five," she replied, trying to keep her voice steady. She watched as Silas approached, his limp more pronounced than usual as he neared them. "What brings you back to London?" "Oh, you know, just blowing in with the breeze. You know me, Rory, I can never stay in one place too long." She did know that. It was part of why they'd parted ways in the first place. Aurora couldn't bring herself to match his wanderlust, her roots too deeply entrenched in the life she'd built for herself in the city. "So, how've you been?" Malphora asked, signaling to Silas for a drink of his own. "Still working for that law firm?" "I'm not, actually," Aurora said, shaking her head. "I left about a year ago. I'm working part-time at a restaurant now." Malphora raised an eyebrow. "Really? I never thought I'd see the day Miss By-the-Books traded in her pencil skirts for an apron." Aurora bristled at his words, the nickname he'd so affectionately given her years ago now feeling like a barb. "Things change, Mal. People change." Malphora held up his hands in mock surrender. "Easy there, tiger. I wasn't trying to offend you." She sighed, running a hand through her straight, shoulder-length black hair. "I know. I'm just…tired." "Tired of what, the rat race? Because I could've told you years ago that busting your ass at that soul-sucking firm wasn't going to make you happy." Aurora fixed him with a pointed stare. "And I suppose gallivanting around the globe, never staying in one place long enough to put down roots is the key to happiness?" Malphora shrugged. "It works for me." "Yeah, well, maybe it doesn't work for everyone." They sat in silence for a moment, the tension between them thick and heavy. Aurora took another sip of her martini, scarcely tasting it this time. "You ever think about it?" Malphora asked suddenly, his voice low. "About what could've been?" Aurora's breath caught in her chest. "Every day," she whispered, her bright blue eyes meeting his green ones. "I think about it every damn day." Malphora's gaze softened. He reached out, his hand coming to rest on top of hers. "Same here, babe. Same here." They sat like that, lost in the weight of the years between them until Silas returned with a drink for Malphora. He slid it across the bar, his hazel eyes darting between the two of them. "On the house," he said gruffly, a knowing look on his face. "Consider it a little blast from the past." Aurora offered him a grateful smile, murmuring her thanks as she pulled her hand from beneath Malphora's. They fell into easy conversation after that, reminiscing about days gone by and dreams left unfulfilled. The weight of all those unspoken regrets hung heavy between them, a reminder of the time they'd lost.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
62.07% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Malphora asked suddenly [suddenly]"
1"he said gruffly [gruffly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.621
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.138
83.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount929
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount929
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"reminder"
count2
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"racing"
count1
6
word"down her spine"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"race"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"reminder"
4"electric"
5"racing"
6"down her spine"
7"eyebrow"
8"race"
9"silence"
10"tension"
11"weight"
12"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords917
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount702
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Malphora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Aurora10
Silas5
Malphora8
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Malphora"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.788
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount917
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean26.97
std16.62
cv0.616
sampleLengths
074
178
212
310
452
555
633
726
87
922
1012
1138
1222
1331
1422
1539
1621
1721
1822
1924
2017
2115
2227
2330
246
258
2626
2715
2825
2920
3036
3120
3217
3334
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs120
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences71
ratio0.014
matches
0"The mark, a remnant of a childhood accident, was a constant reminder of her past—a past she couldn't shake, no matter how hard she tried."
90.80% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount710
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.04366197183098591
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.018309859154929577
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean12.92
std7.86
cv0.608
sampleLengths
027
116
231
335
423
520
610
72
88
92
1015
1137
1212
1318
1425
1521
1612
176
1810
1910
207
214
2218
2312
246
2519
2613
2716
286
2910
3015
316
3222
334
3412
3523
3615
376
388
3913
404
4118
4219
435
448
459
4611
474
4827
497
81.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5070422535211268
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences50
matches
0"She blinked a few times,"
1"Her eyes roamed over the"
2"She made her way towards"
3"She slid onto the seat,"
4"His neatly trimmed beard, matching"
5"She nodded, a small smile"
6"He set to work, his"
7"Her drink appeared before her,"
8"She reached for it, her"
9"She closed her eyes, letting"
10"Her eyes snapped open."
11"She whirled around on her"
12"she breathed, the name feeling"
13"He looked different than she"
14"His once neatly styled blond"
15"he chuckled, sliding onto the"
16"she replied, trying to keep"
17"She watched as Silas approached,"
18"She did know that."
19"It was part of why"
ratio0.56
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences50
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
1"She blinked a few times,"
2"Her eyes roamed over the"
3"She made her way towards"
4"She slid onto the seat,"
5"His neatly trimmed beard, matching"
6"Silas said, his deep voice"
7"She nodded, a small smile"
8"He set to work, his"
9"Her drink appeared before her,"
10"She reached for it, her"
11"The mark, a remnant of"
12"Aurora took a sip of"
13"She closed her eyes, letting"
14"That was when she heard"
15"A voice, deep and rich,"
16"Her eyes snapped open."
17"She whirled around on her"
18"she breathed, the name feeling"
19"He looked different than she"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She made her way towards an empty stool at the far end of the bar, carefully avoiding the grasping hands of a tipsy patron who was clearly a little too eager fo…"
1"As she waited, Aurora found her gaze drawn to the myriad of old maps and black-and-white photographs that adorned the walls, chronicling the many decades Silas …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Silas said, his deep voice warm and familiar"
1"she breathed, the name feeling foreign and familiar all at once"
2"she replied, trying to keep her voice steady"
3"Malphora asked suddenly, his voice low"
46.55% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"he chuckled (chuckle)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.621
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.207
73.3985%