| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 893 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 893 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "racing" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "loomed" | | 14 | "resolve" | | 15 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "y with warmth" | | 1 | "a sense of belonging" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 16 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 891 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.92% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 886 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 11 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.879 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "voice that seemed to be calling to her, drawing her deeper into the heart of the grove" | | 1 | "energy that seemed to be suffocating her" | | 2 | "energy that seemed to seep into her bones" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 891 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.93% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 15 | | mean | 59.4 | | std | 12.43 | | cv | 0.209 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 56 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 47 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "was racing" | | 1 | "was lying" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 888 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.03153153153153153 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01126126126126126 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 81.93% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 12.73 | | std | 4.52 | | cv | 0.355 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 44.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.2 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 14 | |
| 47.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the pendant flared to" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 94.29% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come here for a" | | 1 | "She cursed under her breath," | | 2 | "She'd been warned about this" | | 3 | "It pulsed faintly with warmth," | | 4 | "She'd always felt a connection" | | 5 | "She shivered, despite the warmth" | | 6 | "She stopped walking, her ears" | | 7 | "She took a step back," | | 8 | "It pulsed stronger now, a" | | 9 | "She took another step back," | | 10 | "She spun around, but there" | | 11 | "She tried to take a" | | 12 | "She knew she had to" | | 13 | "She took a step forward," | | 14 | "She felt a presence closing" | | 15 | "She stumbled forward, the pendant's" | | 16 | "She sat up slowly, her" | | 17 | "She scrambled to her feet," | | 18 | "She knew she had to" | | 19 | "She didn't stop until she" |
| | ratio | 0.314 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's feet crunched on the" | | 1 | "The wildflowers that bloomed year-round" | | 2 | "She'd come here for a" | | 3 | "A twig snapped beneath her" | | 4 | "She cursed under her breath," | | 5 | "The stillness was broken, and" | | 6 | "She'd been warned about this" | | 7 | "An hour in here could" | | 8 | "It pulsed faintly with warmth," | | 9 | "Rory slowed her pace, her" | | 10 | "She'd always felt a connection" | | 11 | "The trees seemed to loom" | | 12 | "She shivered, despite the warmth" | | 13 | "The air was heavy with" | | 14 | "Something earthy and decaying." | | 15 | "She stopped walking, her ears" | | 16 | "The silence was absolute, a" | | 17 | "Leaves stirring in the underbrush." | | 18 | "Rory's skin prickled with gooseflesh." | | 19 | "She took a step back," |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers that bloomed year-round seemed to writhe in the flickering moonlight, like restless spirits." | | 1 | "But as she walked deeper into the grove, the silence began to feel oppressive, a heavy blanket that suffocated her." | | 2 | "She stopped walking, her ears straining to pick up any sound." | | 3 | "The trees seemed to be closing in, their branches reaching out like grasping fingers." | | 4 | "The presence seemed to be everywhere and nowhere at the same time, a cold, dark energy that seeped into her bones." | | 5 | "The energy seemed to be pulling her back, drawing her deeper into the grove." | | 6 | "Rory's heart was racing now, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps." | | 7 | "A soft, seductive voice that seemed to be calling to her, drawing her deeper into the heart of the grove." | | 8 | "She felt a presence closing in around her, a cold, dark energy that seemed to be suffocating her." | | 9 | "But the feeling of being watched lingered, a cold, dark energy that seemed to seep into her bones." | | 10 | "As she stumbled towards the entrance, the trees seemed to loom closer, their branches reaching out like grasping fingers." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |