Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQVV2JSPF9QEV5VV1SJT0S

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Duration:
5.0s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered above the door like a dying ember, casting long shadows across the polished wood of the bar’s floor. The air smelled of aged whiskey and damp wool, the kind of scent that clung to a place long after its last customer left. Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her—paused outside the entrance, her fingers brushing the scar on her wrist, the one she’d earned from a childhood accident. She hadn’t been here in years. Not since the night she’d left London without a word, without even a goodbye. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his back to her, his hand resting on the silver signet ring that always gleamed against his skin. He didn’t turn. Didn’t need to. The way his shoulders hunched slightly, the way his limp made the floorboards creak beneath his weight, told her everything. She stepped inside. The moment the door clicked shut behind her, the bar hummed to life. The kind of quiet that only exists when the world outside is too loud. The kind of quiet that makes you listen. The kind of quiet that makes you remember. Silas finally turned, his hazel eyes sharp as they locked onto hers. His beard was longer now, his hair streaked with grey, but his face was still sharp, still unreadable. He didn’t smile. Didn’t ask how she’d been. He just waited. Aurora exhaled, the breath curling around her like smoke. She’d been waiting for this. Waiting for the way his voice would crack, the way his hands would tremble when he reached for a glass. She’d been waiting for the way his eyes would burn into hers like they used to, like they had when they were younger, when they were still two people who could talk about anything, no matter how broken it made them feel. “You look different,” she said. Silas didn’t answer right away. He poured two fingers of whiskey into a glass, the amber liquid catching the light. “You too.” The bar was full now, the kind of full that meant people were talking over each other, laughing too loud, drinking too fast. But Rory didn’t mind. She didn’t need the noise. She needed this. “You still work here?” she asked. Silas set the glass down with a quiet clink. “Same as always.” “And you still run things.” A flicker of something passed over his face—amusement, maybe. “You’re not the only one who’s changed.” She laughed, but it was hollow. “I’m not the one who left.” Silas didn’t deny it. He just watched her, his expression unreadable. “You should’ve called.” “And miss the chance to see you?” The words hung between them, heavy as the whiskey in his glass. Rory reached for the door, but Silas grabbed her wrist before she could step outside. His grip was firm, his touch unexpected. “Don’t,” he said. She pulled back, her fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist again. “What’s that for?” “Because you’re not leaving.” The bar door swung open behind her, and Eva stepped inside, her dark eyes widening when she saw them. “Aurora! Silas! What the hell are you doing here?” Silas didn’t release her. “Eva’s been looking for you.” Eva’s mouth opened, but no words came. She just stared at them, her usual sharp wit gone, replaced by something raw and desperate. “You’re both here because of me.” Rory didn’t say anything. She just looked at Silas, at the way his eyes were dark with something she didn’t understand. At the way his hands were still around her wrist, like he couldn’t let her go. “Eva’s in trouble,” Silas said. “And she needs you.” The bar door slammed shut behind them. The noise of the crowd faded into the background, swallowed by the weight of what they were about to do. Rory’s breath came fast, her fingers digging into Silas’s wrist. “What do you mean, *in trouble*?” she asked. Silas didn’t answer right away. He just looked at her, at the way her eyes were wide, at the way her hands were shaking. He pulled her closer, his voice low, his words sharp. “You remember what happened to Evan,” he said. Aurora’s stomach twisted. She remembered the way his hands had been around her throat, the way his voice had been a blade. She remembered the night she’d left, the way she’d run, the way she’d never looked back. “He’s dead,” she said. Silas didn’t say anything. He just watched her, his expression unreadable. The bar door swung open again, and a man in a suit stepped inside, his eyes locked onto Silas. “Blackwood. I need to speak to you.” Silas didn’t move. He just looked at Rory, at the way her eyes were burning with something she didn’t understand. At the way her hands were still shaking. “Go,” he said. She didn’t hesitate. She turned and ran. The bar door slammed shut behind her. The noise of the crowd faded into the background, swallowed by the weight of what she’d just done. Rory’s breath came fast, her fingers digging into the door handle, her heart pounding in her chest. She needed to go. She needed to get away from Silas, from the way his eyes were burning into hers, from the way his hands were still around her wrist. She didn’t look back. The neon sign flickered above the door, casting long shadows across the polished wood of the bar’s floor. The air smelled of aged whiskey and damp wool, the kind of scent that clung to a place long after its last customer left. Rory stepped outside, the cold air hitting her face like a slap. She didn’t know where she was going. She didn’t care. All she knew was that she had to get away from Silas, from the way his eyes were still burning into hers, from the way his hands were still around her wrist. She didn’t look back. The street was empty, the kind of empty that made you feel exposed, that made you feel like you were being watched. Rory’s breath came fast, her fingers brushing the scar on her wrist again. She didn’t know what she was running from. She didn’t know what she was running to. But she knew one thing. She had to leave.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1055
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1055
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"unreadable"
count3
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"unreadable"
3"flicker"
4"stomach"
5"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
78.65% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"listen"
1"feel"
2"feel feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1052
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"in trouble"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount955
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Carter1
Rory9
London1
Blackwood1
Silas16
Eva2
Aurora3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
6"Aurora"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.662
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1052
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean23.91
std21
cv0.878
sampleLengths
096
150
23
343
441
576
65
722
835
96
1012
115
1216
1312
1414
157
1634
173
1816
194
2028
219
2229
2337
249
2537
268
2734
288
2938
304
3137
3228
333
347
3542
3630
374
3854
3942
404
4151
425
434
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs177
matches
0"were talking"
1"were shaking"
2"were burning"
3"were burning"
4"was going"
5"were being"
6"was running"
7"was running"
87.38% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences103
ratio0.019
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her—paused outside the entrance, her fingers brushing the scar on her wrist, the one she’d earned from a childhood accident."
1"A flicker of something passed over his face—amusement, maybe."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount958
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03549060542797495
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003131524008350731
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean10.21
std7.69
cv0.752
sampleLengths
026
124
226
36
414
524
63
73
820
93
1013
1114
128
138
1412
1518
163
175
183
199
205
2120
2242
235
245
2515
262
2723
284
295
303
316
329
333
345
359
367
376
386
394
407
413
427
4312
4415
457
463
4713
483
494
34.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.23300970873786409
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
52.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences81
matches
0"She hadn’t been here in"
1"He didn’t turn."
2"She stepped inside."
3"His beard was longer now,"
4"He didn’t smile."
5"He just waited."
6"She’d been waiting for this."
7"She’d been waiting for the"
8"He poured two fingers of"
9"She didn’t need the noise."
10"She needed this."
11"She laughed, but it was"
12"He just watched her, his"
13"His grip was firm, his"
14"She pulled back, her fingers"
15"She just stared at them,"
16"She just looked at Silas,"
17"He just looked at her,"
18"He pulled her closer, his"
19"She remembered the way his"
ratio0.42
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences81
matches
0"The neon sign of *The"
1"The air smelled of aged"
2"Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who"
3"She hadn’t been here in"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"He didn’t turn."
6"The way his shoulders hunched"
7"She stepped inside."
8"The moment the door clicked"
9"The kind of quiet that"
10"The kind of quiet that"
11"The kind of quiet that"
12"Silas finally turned, his hazel"
13"His beard was longer now,"
14"He didn’t smile."
15"He just waited."
16"Aurora exhaled, the breath curling"
17"She’d been waiting for this."
18"She’d been waiting for the"
19"Silas didn’t answer right away."
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The air smelled of aged whiskey and damp wool, the kind of scent that clung to a place long after its last customer left."
1"She’d been waiting for the way his eyes would burn into hers like they used to, like they had when they were younger, when they were still two people who could …"
2"Rory’s breath came fast, her fingers digging into the door handle, her heart pounding in her chest."
3"The air smelled of aged whiskey and damp wool, the kind of scent that clung to a place long after its last customer left."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.6959%