| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.185 | | leniency | 0.37 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.074 | |
| 74.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 980 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 980 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "dancing" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "measured" | | 4 | "flicked" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "unspoken" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 975 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 627 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.96 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | London | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Aurora | 6 | | Silas | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Blackwood" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 28.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a stranger worn thin by years" | | 1 | "quite shake" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 975 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 29.55 | | std | 15.91 | | cv | 0.539 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 48 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 27.03% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "The scar on her wrist—it was a ghost today, numbed by routine." | | 1 | "It was like time had looped back—he’d been a mentor, a guide through shadowed worlds." | | 2 | "He leaned back, gaze drifting over the old photographs on the wall—images of a different life, a different moments." |
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| 90.56% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 630 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.050793650793650794 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015873015873015872 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 13.18 | | std | 7.32 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 64.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4189189189189189 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 66.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "She sipped her gin, the" | | 1 | "Her black hair caught the" | | 2 | "She didn’t look like someone" | | 3 | "He was older, his face" | | 4 | "He moved with a quiet" | | 5 | "It was like time had" | | 6 | "He approached with a slow," | | 7 | "He pulled out a stool," | | 8 | "His gaze flicked over her" | | 9 | "They stared at each other" | | 10 | "His lips quirked, a trace" | | 11 | "She lifted her glass, took" | | 12 | "Her voice was steady, but" | | 13 | "He rubbed his beard, eyes" | | 14 | "she said softly" | | 15 | "Her fingers tapped the bar’s" | | 16 | "She shot him a wry" | | 17 | "His gaze sharpened" | | 18 | "He was silent for a" | | 19 | "She looked away, a flicker" |
| | ratio | 0.6 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "The dim haze of cigarette" | | 1 | "The Raven’s Nest was quiet" | | 2 | "A low hum of subdued" | | 3 | "Aurora Carter sat alone at" | | 4 | "She sipped her gin, the" | | 5 | "Her black hair caught the" | | 6 | "The scar on her wrist—it" | | 7 | "She didn’t look like someone" | | 8 | "The door swung open, and" | | 9 | "The sign above the entrance" | | 10 | "He was older, his face" | | 11 | "A scar on the side" | | 12 | "He moved with a quiet" | | 13 | "It was like time had" | | 14 | "He approached with a slow," | | 15 | "He pulled out a stool," | | 16 | "His gaze flicked over her" | | 17 | "They stared at each other" | | 18 | "His lips quirked, a trace" | | 19 | "She lifted her glass, took" |
| | ratio | 0.92 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.037 | | leniency | 0.074 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |