Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQVVVM29P17HV4PTZTMZ9W

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16.2s
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$0.032210
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Raindrops hammered the cobblestones like tiny drumbeats sounding an alarm. Detective Harlow Quinn's heart pounded in rhythm. She sprinted down the alley, the faint silhouette of her quarry just barely visible through the shimmering veil of rain. Her worn leather watch glinted under the sporadic flashes of lightning. This was no ordinary chase. Her gut told her tonight's pursuit held a key—if not a piece of the overarching puzzle, at least a clue to something bigger. "Not tonight," Quinn muttered to herself, jaw set with determination. The figure ahead ducked around a corner. Quinn pushed herself harder, her military precision in every stride. She was not losing him again. Puddles splashed at her feet as her shoes hit the slick pavement, the diluted reflections of city's lights smearing into a chaotic dance. The suspect, a lanky man in a hooded jacket, cast a frantic glance over his shoulder. Quinn saw the whites of his eyes widen in panic. He wasn't prepared to deal with a police detective tailing him through the backstreets. With every stride, Quinn closed the distance. They emerged from the labyrinthine alley onto an open street, only momentarily lit by passing headlights of a black cab, its occupants oblivious to the unfolding drama. The man crossed the street in a blind run, forcing a group of pedestrians to leap out of his way. Quinn didn’t have time to shout an apology. She focused on the target, her mind intercepting snippets—not just of her surroundings, but memories of Morris. It had been three years, but the pain remained as fresh as the night it happened, catching her off guard sometimes when she least expected it. Now was not one of those times. "Damn," Quinn cursed under her breath as they neared a derelict building. Her thoughts were momentarily intrusive but she couldn't afford distraction here. The chase took them into the narrow passage leading downwards, hidden behind a thick veil of shadows. The man slowed, looked around desperately, then darted into what seemed like a long-abandoned Tube station. Quinn’s steps faltered, collecting her bearings. She wasn’t unfamiliar with the underground routes, but this was different. The place carried an air of foreboding, and she glimpsed a flicker of recognition. Whispered bits of information about something elusive, illegal—a black market hidden beneath the streets of London. She drew a sharp breath and pushed on, the chill of the wet night sinking deeper into her bones. The space turned increasingly narrow as she ventured into the confines of the old Tube station, the dim light casting eerie shadows on the damp walls. Faded graffiti and decades-old posters flaked off surfaces as she brushed past, her resolve firm. Ahead, the sound of a metallic scrape broke through the silence, followed by hurried footsteps echoing against the tiled walls. Quinn's pace accelerated. She was close. She spotted the entrance bathed in the ghostly glow of incandescent bulbs—the Veil Market. Even in this adrenaline-soaked moment, she couldn't help but marvel. It was a world unto itself, seemingly existing with oblivion to the city above. Quinn's focus shifted when she saw him reach a concealed entry, a hidden turn masked by a bookshelf stacked unevenly with old books and trinkets. He shoved it aside, revealing a narrow passageway sloping downwards. Without thinking, he slipped through. She hesitated. The stories she'd heard about the Veil Market weren't just fodder for urban legends. This was supernatural territory filled with danger unforetold. She patted the handle of her firearm holstered at her side. The grip gave her reassurance she needed. Her training? That would be enough. It had to be. Down she went, mentally bracing herself. Moisture trapped in the underground air mixed with scents both strange and alluring—incense, fresh herbs, and something metallic. The narrow passageway soon opened into a cavernous space, illuminated with flickering torches and low-hanging lanterns casting a golden glow. People milled about in tight formations, exchanging goods, whispering urgently. Quinn's senses sharpened. Her eyes scanned the market, searching for any trace of the suspect, but it wasn’t easy. Stalls filled with bizarre artifacts, odd shaped bottles, and strange concoctions obscured her view. Quintessential 'undercover' models mingled; grey-beards, be-hooded youths, frantic-eyed sellers, buyers, entities that exuded otherworldliness. As she weaved between stalls, her elbow almost knocking over jars filled with suspicious substances, she spotted a man with warm brown eyes and short, curly dark hair chatting someone up in hurried Spanish. Her mind stuttered—Tomás Herrera. She had read about him in files, the former paramedic who lost his license over incidents laced with illegality. "Tommy!" she barked, her voice barely rising above the din. He turned, eyes narrowed and posture stiffened. "Cariño, you’re out of your depth here," he replied, concern flashing across his face as he took in her determined expression. “What’s got you chasing shadows down here?” “No time for pleasantries, Herrera,” Quinn retorted, still scanning the crowd for any movement that could lead her to her quarry. “The hooded guy, scar on his neck. Have you seen him?” Herrera didn’t answer immediately, but the slight droop of his eyebrows gave him away. “You don’t understand the rules here, do you?” “Don’t patronize me,” she snapped. “Just tell me where he went.” A sigh collided with Herrera’s solidarity. “Fine, he went that way—towards the gypsy stall with all the bones.” Quinn nodded her thanks brusquely before setting off. Her path, barely-linear, navigated against stalls full of sold-off facades of London’s underground economy. Enchanted trinkets held past events’ shadows, crystal balls glowed cold futures, charms hummed echoes of their mystic pasts. Gypsy stall was relatively ill-attended, the bright fabric, skeletal remains ornamented in compelling pattern were somewhat off-putting for first-timers. Quinn sidestepped a cauldron and approached steadily. The seller, an old woman with eyes resembling polished pebbles, eyed her skeptically. “Seen a man, hood up, edgy?” Quinn asked, maintaining eye contact. “For seeking what breathes into dark, you flirt foolishly,” came the foreboding response. “I don’t have time for riddles,” Quinn insisted, voice stained with fatigue and urgency. “The prey, hunter aids by current’s chase, lies beyond, where secrets plot and pulse race,” the old woman relented, nodding towards a curtained tunnel-shaped aperture behind her. Quinn muttered a thank you and proceeded. The tunnel, illuminated by scarce amber beams and reeking of roots and earth, muffling overhead sounds into whispered flutters. Her grasp firm on her firearm’s cold steel, footsteps eerily soft. The damp tunnel felt endless, surreal. What had begun as a rain-soaked city pursuit had led her to an underground antechamber that felt like another universe. Quinn remained resolute. She could almost hear Morris chastising her, but she brushed it aside. Light peeked ahead, a room cloaked in the shimmering of mystic energies and less-expected office-like modernities. The hooded man’s silhouette came into view. He had stopped against a wall, turned to face her defiantly—betrayal in his eyes. “Detective Harlow Quinn,” he went for her name, tone acidic, resentment underscored with fear. “Persistent gnat, your prying eyes have buzzed into nest darkly mishandled.” Quinn's firearm materialized, firm toward his direction. “Funny terminologies you have. Flattery gets you nowhere. What do you know about Morris?” The defiant look transitioned, probing, weighing elusive options before the smirk swept past like dark herald. “It’s not Morris you need to worry about.” The overpowering weight of his words hung in the ether. Quinn’s grip tightened, silencing inner turmoil to contain the threat present. The chase had spun dimensions of connection, larger than anticipated. Guarded trust, reluctant truce, unseen alliances these irons would forge. Above echoed raindrops, the kinetic hum of Veil Market continued, their transient peace temporarily disrupted by deeper, suprareality tension sharply anticipated. Scar held stories beneath glances, decisions breached towards unvoiced reckoning percolated slowly of pursuing shadows. Harmony would remain fractured, while hidden truths remained precariously close—threatening to break, orchestrate new pursuits deeper underground, amidst rain-coaxed streets replete with perilous un-midnight.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.579
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1344
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1344
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"dance"
count1
2
word"foreboding"
count2
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"resolve"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"determined"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"navigated"
count1
13
word"crystal"
count1
14
word"echoes"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"race"
count1
17
word"surreal"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
20
word"disrupted"
count1
21
word"tension"
count1
22
word"fractured"
count1
23
word"amidst"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"dance"
2"foreboding"
3"flicker"
4"chill"
5"resolve"
6"silence"
7"footsteps"
8"echoing"
9"scanned"
10"determined"
11"scanning"
12"navigated"
13"crystal"
14"echoes"
15"pulse"
16"race"
17"surreal"
18"weight"
19"echoed"
20"disrupted"
21"tension"
22"fractured"
23"amidst"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"a flicker of recognition"
99.23% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences97
matches
0"t with determination"
1"n in panic"
2"d with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1319
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1157
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn20
Morris2
Tube2
London2
Veil3
Market3
Spanish1
Tomás1
Herrera3
Gypsy1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Market"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.636
windowScore0.5
88.27% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"d unto itself, seemingly existing with obliv"
1"felt like another universe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.758
wordCount1319
matches
0"not just of her surroundings, but memories of Morris"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean36.64
std19.3
cv0.527
sampleLengths
076
110
246
340
454
558
623
780
860
964
1040
1152
1254
1347
1457
1510
167
1728
1832
1922
2011
2118
2240
2339
2411
2513
2614
2727
2837
2941
3037
3125
3221
3324
3441
3560
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs218
matches
0"was not losing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences105
ratio0.086
matches
0"Her gut told her tonight's pursuit held a key—if not a piece of the overarching puzzle, at least a clue to something bigger."
1"She focused on the target, her mind intercepting snippets—not just of her surroundings, but memories of Morris."
2"Whispered bits of information about something elusive, illegal—a black market hidden beneath the streets of London."
3"She spotted the entrance bathed in the ghostly glow of incandescent bulbs—the Veil Market."
4"Moisture trapped in the underground air mixed with scents both strange and alluring—incense, fresh herbs, and something metallic."
5"Quintessential 'undercover' models mingled; grey-beards, be-hooded youths, frantic-eyed sellers, buyers, entities that exuded otherworldliness."
6"Her mind stuttered—Tomás Herrera."
7"He had stopped against a wall, turned to face her defiantly—betrayal in his eyes."
8"Harmony would remain fractured, while hidden truths remained precariously close—threatening to break, orchestrate new pursuits deeper underground, amidst rain-coaxed streets replete with perilous un-midnight."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount797
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.033877038895859475
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.015056461731493099
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean12.56
std6.46
cv0.514
sampleLengths
010
17
220
311
45
523
610
77
810
96
1023
1116
1210
1314
147
1527
1620
178
1817
1926
207
2112
2211
2317
2416
256
2611
2714
2816
2919
3026
3115
3220
333
343
3514
3610
3714
3825
3910
405
412
4214
438
4411
457
462
474
484
496
75.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4666666666666667
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences93
matches
0"She sprinted down the alley,"
1"Her worn leather watch glinted"
2"Her gut told her tonight's"
3"She was not losing him"
4"He wasn't prepared to deal"
5"They emerged from the labyrinthine"
6"She focused on the target,"
7"It had been three years,"
8"Her thoughts were momentarily intrusive"
9"She wasn’t unfamiliar with the"
10"She drew a sharp breath"
11"She was close."
12"She spotted the entrance bathed"
13"It was a world unto"
14"He shoved it aside, revealing"
15"She patted the handle of"
16"It had to be."
17"Her eyes scanned the market,"
18"Her mind stuttered—Tomás Herrera."
19"She had read about him"
ratio0.301
35.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences93
matches
0"Raindrops hammered the cobblestones like"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's heart pounded"
2"She sprinted down the alley,"
3"Her worn leather watch glinted"
4"This was no ordinary chase."
5"Her gut told her tonight's"
6"Quinn muttered to herself, jaw"
7"The figure ahead ducked around"
8"Quinn pushed herself harder, her"
9"She was not losing him"
10"Puddles splashed at her feet"
11"The suspect, a lanky man"
12"Quinn saw the whites of"
13"He wasn't prepared to deal"
14"They emerged from the labyrinthine"
15"The man crossed the street"
16"Quinn didn’t have time to"
17"She focused on the target,"
18"It had been three years,"
19"Quinn cursed under her breath"
ratio0.849
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"Now was not one of"
1"Even in this adrenaline-soaked moment,"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"What had begun as a rain-soaked city pursuit had led her to an underground antechamber that felt like another universe."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she barked, her voice barely rising above the din"
1"Quinn insisted, voice stained with fatigue and urgency"
2"he went, tone acidic, resentment underscored with fear"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
1"she barked (bark)"
2"Quinn retorted (retort)"
3"she snapped (snap)"
4"Quinn insisted (insist)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.526
77.0237%