Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQVW52DN4PG9QQG0JT1JBP

Run Details

Duration:
23.5s
Cost:
$0.003037
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The cool evening air brushed against Aurora's face as she stepped through the shimmering barrier, the Veil parting around her like a veil of mist. Her boots crunched on the twisted roots underfoot, and she paused, glancing back at the others who followed close behind. "Whoa," Eva breathed, awe creeping into her voice as she took in their new surroundings. "This place is... incredible." Indeed it was. The Fae Grove was unlike anything Aurora had ever seen. Ancient, gnarled oaks and towering pines rose all around them, their branches reaching up towards a sky the color of warm amber. Wildflowers in shades of lavender, indigo, and crimson carpeted the forest floor, their petals swaying gently in a breeze that carried the sweet scent of honeysuckle. "Stay close," Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper that seemed to drift through the trees. The Shade's silhouette flickered, shifting between solid and incorporeal as they moved forward. "This place is... unpredictable." Aurora nodded, one hand moving to the Fae-forged dagger at her hip. The chill of the blade's metal seeped through the leather of her scabbard, a stark contrast to the mild temperature. She could feel the weight of the Heartstone pendant resting against her chest, the gem pulsing faintly with a comforting warmth. As they ventured deeper into the grove, the ancient standing stones came into view, their runes and sigils glowing faintly. Aurora paused, reaching out to trace the unfamiliar markings. "Do you know what these say, Nyx?" The Shade moved closer, their violet eyes narrowing as they examined the stones. "Ancient protective wards," they murmured. "Warnings, of a sort. This place is... guarded." A sudden rustling in the undergrowth made them all jump, and Aurora's hand flew to the hilt of her blade. But it was only a small, rabbit-like creature that emerged, its fur a shimmering silver. It paused, regarding them with large, luminous eyes before darting back into the bushes. "Fae creatures," Nyx murmured, relaxing slightly. "They are... curious, but not hostile." "Good to know," Eva muttered, her own hand resting on the small crossbow at her hip. As they continued on, the forest seemed to shift and change around them. One moment, the trees were tall and imposing, their branches blocking out the sky; the next, the canopy opened up, bathing the clearing in warm, golden light. The very air seemed charged with an energy that Aurora could almost feel humming beneath her skin. Suddenly, a figure emerged from the shadows, causing them all to freeze. A woman stood before them, her silver hair cascading down her back and her pale lavender eyes regarding them with a curious tilt of her head. "Isolde," Nyx breathed, and Aurora felt a sense of relief wash over her. The Half-Fae seer had been their guide to this place, after all. "Welcome, little lost ones," Isolde murmured, her voice carrying a melodic lilt. "I have been expecting you." "Where are we?" Eva asked, her eyes darting around nervously. "The Fae Grove," Isolde replied simply, as if that explained everything. "A place between realms, where the lines between Earth and the Fae courts blur." Aurora could feel the weight of the Heartstone pendant against her chest, the gem pulsing with a steady warmth. "And what is the significance of this place?" she asked, her gaze fixed on the seer. Isolde's lips curved into a small smile. "That, my dear, is a question with many answers. But the most important one is this: this is a place of power, where the Veil between worlds is at its thinnest." Nyx shifted, their form flickering. "Then that means..." "Yes, Nyx," Isolde interrupted, her tone almost chiding. "The Veil is weakest here, and the barriers between realms are more... permeable." Her gaze shifted to Aurora, locking onto the Heartstone pendant. "And you, Aurora Carter, have been chosen to witness what lies beyond." Aurora felt a shiver run down her spine, and she instinctively reached up to grasp the pendant. "Chosen? By whom?" Isolde's smile widened, but there was a hint of sadness in her eyes. "That, my dear, is a mystery even I cannot unravel. But you have been given a great gift — and a great responsibility." Eva stepped forward, her brow furrowed. "What do you mean?" But Isolde's gaze had already shifted, her attention drawn to the forest around them. "The threads of fate are in motion," she murmured, almost to herself. "The path ahead is shrouded in uncertainty, but I sense... great change is coming." Aurora watched as the seer turned and began to walk away, her silver hair and flowing robes seeming to drift on an unseen breeze. "Wait!" she called out, her voice echoing through the trees. "What do you mean? What change?" But Isolde merely glanced over her shoulder, her eyes glowing with a faint, unearthly light. "That, my dear, you must discover for yourself." And with that, she vanished into the shadows, leaving them alone in the Fae Grove. For a long moment, the three of them stood in stunned silence, processing what had just occurred. Aurora could feel the weight of the Heartstone pendant, the warmth of the gem seeming to pulse in time with her own heartbeat. "Well, that was... cryptic," Eva finally said, breaking the silence. Nyx let out a low, contemplative hum. "The seer's words hold more meaning than they first appear. There is power in this place, and in that pendant you wear." Aurora glanced down at the gem, watching as it glowed softly. "But what does it mean? Why was I 'chosen'?" The Shade's violet eyes narrowed, their form flickering as they moved closer. "I do not know," they admitted. "But I sense that the answers you seek lie deeper within this grove." As they ventured further, Aurora couldn't help but feel a sense of unease. The air seemed to hum with an energy that was both alluring and unsettling, and she couldn't shake the feeling that they were being watched. The forest floor was carpeted with those same shimmering silver flowers, and the trees seemed to lean in, as if drawn to their presence. They passed by more ancient standing stones, their runes glowing faintly, and Aurora couldn't help but reach out to trace the intricate patterns. The chill of the Fae-forged blade at her hip was a comforting weight, and she found herself gripping the hilt tightly as they moved forward. Suddenly, a flash of movement caught her eye, and she turned to see a pair of luminous eyes peering out from the underbrush. Whatever creature it was, it disappeared back into the shadows before she could get a better look. "Did you see that?" she murmured, glancing at the others. Nyx nodded, their gaze fixed on the spot where the creature had been. "Yes. The Fae folk are curious about our presence here." Eva let out a nervous laugh. "Well, that's not at all ominous." Aurora couldn't help but agree. The further they ventured into the grove, the more unsettled she felt. The air seemed to thicken, and the light had a strange, almost ethereal quality to it. She could feel the Heartstone pulsing against her chest, as if responding to the energy of the place. As they rounded a bend, a sight before them stopped them in their tracks. In a large, open clearing stood a towering tree, its branches reaching up towards the amber sky. Nestled amid the roots was a large, ornate stone structure, its surface carved with intricate runes and sigils. "What is this place?" Eva breathed, her eyes wide with wonder. Nyx moved closer, their form flickering as they examined the structure. "This... this is an ancient Fae ruin. A portal, of sorts, to the Fae courts." Aurora felt her heart begin to race, the weight of the Heartstone suddenly feeling heavier. "A portal..." she murmured, her gaze fixed on the glowing runes. She knew, in that moment, that this was the reason she had been drawn here. The answers she sought lay beyond that threshold, waiting to be discovered. And with a deep breath, she stepped forward, her hand grasping the Heartstone pendant as she prepared to cross the threshold.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:41:53.834Z" 2/19/2026, 10:41:53 AM
model"anthropic/claude-3-haiku"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Isolde replied simply [simply]"
1"Eva finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.488
leniency0.976
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.098
67.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count3
4
adverb"nervously"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
6
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slightly"
2"very"
3"suddenly"
4"nervously"
5"softly"
6"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsms38
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count4
5
word"weight"
count5
6
word"comforting"
count2
7
word"warmth"
count3
8
word"imposing"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
10
word"cascading"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count2
12
word"lilt"
count1
13
word"down her spine"
count1
14
word"unravel"
count1
15
word"furrowed"
count1
16
word"echoing"
count1
17
word"silence"
count2
18
word"pulse"
count1
19
word"intricate"
count2
20
word"unsettled"
count1
21
word"structure"
count2
22
word"race"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"flickered"
2"chill"
3"stark"
4"could feel"
5"weight"
6"comforting"
7"warmth"
8"imposing"
9"charged"
10"cascading"
11"sense of"
12"lilt"
13"down her spine"
14"unravel"
15"furrowed"
16"echoing"
17"silence"
18"pulse"
19"intricate"
20"unsettled"
21"structure"
22"race"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
2
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"a sense of unease"
2"couldn't help but feel"
81.71% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences77
matches
0"a sense of relief"
1"felt a shiver"
2"a sense of unease"
3"e with wonder"
12.99% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1365
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1067
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.59
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Aurora17
Veil1
Indeed1
Fae5
Grove2
Shade3
Fae-forged2
Heartstone7
Eva7
Half-Fae1
Isolde7
Nyx7
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Veil"
2"Shade"
3"Heartstone"
4"Eva"
5"Isolde"
6"Nyx"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Fae-forged"
globalScore0.703
windowScore0.5
42.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"whisper that seemed to drift through the trees"
1"seemed charged with an energy that Aurora could almost feel humming beneath her skin"
2"as if responding to the energy of the place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1365
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
93.97% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean31.74
std15.2
cv0.479
sampleLengths
045
119
261
332
453
536
626
749
812
916
1057
1138
1225
1317
1410
1525
1635
1738
188
1943
2020
2136
2210
2340
2440
2538
2640
2710
2829
2920
3031
3162
3248
3340
3410
3523
3612
3751
3849
3911
4026
4126
4248
96.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"was carpeted"
1"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs196
matches
0"were being"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences98
ratio0.01
matches
0"One moment, the trees were tall and imposing, their branches blocking out the sky; the next, the canopy opened up, bathing the clearing in warm, golden light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1070
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03457943925233645
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01588785046728972
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean13.93
std6.53
cv0.469
sampleLengths
025
120
215
34
43
510
622
726
815
913
104
1112
1220
1321
1420
159
167
1713
185
198
2020
2115
2214
236
246
2516
2613
2727
2817
2912
3026
3113
3212
3312
345
3510
3611
3714
3819
3916
407
4131
425
433
448
4523
4612
4717
483
4913
64.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.40816326530612246
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"Indeed it was."
1"Suddenly, a figure emerged from"
2"Suddenly, a flash of movement"
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences75
matches
0"Her boots crunched on the"
1"She could feel the weight"
2"It paused, regarding them with"
3"she asked, her gaze fixed"
4"Her gaze shifted to Aurora,"
5"she murmured, almost to herself"
6"she called out, her voice"
7"They passed by more ancient"
8"she murmured, glancing at the"
9"She could feel the Heartstone"
10"she murmured, her gaze fixed"
11"She knew, in that moment,"
ratio0.16
73.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences75
matches
0"The cool evening air brushed"
1"Her boots crunched on the"
2"Eva breathed, awe creeping into"
3"The Fae Grove was unlike"
4"Wildflowers in shades of lavender,"
5"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
6"The Shade's silhouette flickered, shifting"
7"Aurora nodded, one hand moving"
8"The chill of the blade's"
9"She could feel the weight"
10"Aurora paused, reaching out to"
11"The Shade moved closer, their"
12"A sudden rustling in the"
13"It paused, regarding them with"
14"Nyx murmured, relaxing slightly"
15"Eva muttered, her own hand"
16"The very air seemed charged"
17"A woman stood before them,"
18"Nyx breathed, and Aurora felt"
19"The Half-Fae seer had been"
ratio0.773
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Her boots crunched on the twisted roots underfoot, and she paused, glancing back at the others who followed close behind."
1"Ancient, gnarled oaks and towering pines rose all around them, their branches reaching up towards a sky the color of warm amber."
2"Wildflowers in shades of lavender, indigo, and crimson carpeted the forest floor, their petals swaying gently in a breeze that carried the sweet scent of honeys…"
3"But it was only a small, rabbit-like creature that emerged, its fur a shimmering silver."
4"One moment, the trees were tall and imposing, their branches blocking out the sky; the next, the canopy opened up, bathing the clearing in warm, golden light."
5"The air seemed to hum with an energy that was both alluring and unsettling, and she couldn't shake the feeling that they were being watched."
6"She could feel the Heartstone pulsing against her chest, as if responding to the energy of the place."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her voice carrying a melodic lilt"
1"Eva asked, her eyes darting around nervously"
2"Isolde replied simply, as if that explained everything"
3"Isolde interrupted, her tone almost chiding"
4"she murmured, almost to herself"
5"she called out, her voice echoing through the trees"
6"Eva breathed, her eyes wide with wonder"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount14
fancyTags
0"Eva breathed (breathe)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
3"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
4"Eva muttered (mutter)"
5"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
6"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
7"Isolde interrupted (interrupt)"
8"she murmured (murmur)"
9"she called out (call out)"
10"they admitted (admit)"
11"she murmured (murmur)"
12"Eva breathed (breathe)"
13"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.439
leniency0.878
rawRatio0.778
effectiveRatio0.683
71.9069%