Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQVXSH0QNTKTS16HYFBZJB

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Duration:
35.8s
Cost:
$0.001127

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, drenching the streets of Soho. Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her back against the cold brick wall of a narrow alley, her breath coming in sharp bursts. She peered around the corner, eyes narrowed, scanning the slick pavement for any sign of movement. The neon glow of The Raven's Nest flickered in the distance, casting an eerie green light over the puddles. A figure darted past, a blur of dark clothing. Quinn's heart raced. She pushed off the wall, her worn leather watch creaking against her wrist as she sprinted after the suspect. The sound of her footsteps splashed against the pavement, echoing in the empty street. “Stop!” she shouted, her voice cutting through the rain. The figure glanced back, eyes wide, and then bolted down a side street. Quinn followed, her sharp jaw set in determination. She had to catch him. He was the key to unraveling the web of criminal activity she suspected was tied to the clique. The suspect turned sharply, disappearing into the shadows of an alley. Quinn skidded to a halt, water splashing around her boots. She hesitated, the darkness ahead swallowing the light. A flicker of doubt crossed her mind, but she pushed it aside. She had come too far to back down now. “Where are you?” she muttered, stepping into the alley. The rain drummed on the pavement, drowning out the sounds of the city. She moved cautiously, her senses heightened. The air felt charged, as if something lurked just beyond her vision. A sudden crash echoed from deeper within the alley. Quinn's heart raced. She pressed forward, her instincts guiding her. The alley opened up into a wider space, and she spotted the suspect again, his back turned as he fumbled with a door hidden behind a stack of crates. “Hey!” Quinn shouted, her voice firm. The suspect froze, then turned, eyes wide with panic. He darted through the door just as Quinn reached the threshold. She lunged forward, grabbing the edge of the door before it swung shut. The door creaked open, revealing a dimly lit corridor. The air smelled of damp earth and something else—something sweet and rotten. Quinn hesitated, the darkness beyond the door beckoning her into the unknown. She could hear the suspect's footsteps echoing down the hall, growing fainter. “Damn it,” she muttered, stepping inside. The door swung shut behind her with a heavy thud, sealing her in. She flicked on her flashlight, the beam cutting through the gloom. The walls were lined with old bricks, and the floor was slick with moisture. “Where are you?” she called, her voice echoing. No answer came, just the distant sound of dripping water. Quinn pressed on, her heart pounding in her chest. She had to catch him before he slipped away again. The corridor twisted and turned, leading her deeper into the bowels of the building. She could feel the weight of the darkness pressing in around her, the air thick with tension. Quinn rounded a corner and found herself in a large room, the ceiling lost in shadows. A flickering light caught her attention. She moved toward it, her footsteps muffled by the damp ground. The room opened up into a vast underground market, bustling with figures cloaked in shadows. The air buzzed with hushed conversations and the clinking of glass. Quinn's eyes widened as she took in the scene. Stalls lined the walls, each one overflowing with strange and exotic items. Bottles of shimmering liquids, odd trinkets, and what looked like animal parts filled the tables. The Veil Market. She had heard whispers of it, a hidden world beneath the city, but never imagined she would find herself here. “Where did he go?” she muttered, scanning the crowd. The suspect had vanished among the throng of people, their faces obscured by hoods and scarves. Quinn felt a knot of unease tighten in her stomach. This place was dangerous, filled with people who dealt in the supernatural and the illicit. “Detective Quinn!” a voice called out, cutting through the noise. She turned to see Tomás Herrera, his warm brown eyes wide with concern. He stepped out from behind a stall, his short curly hair damp from the rain. “Tomás,” she said, relief flooding her. “Have you seen a man? Dark clothes, about this tall?” She gestured, her eyes scanning the crowd again. He shook his head, glancing around nervously. “You shouldn’t be here. It’s not safe.” “I’m not leaving without him,” she replied, her voice firm. “He knows something. He’s connected to the clique.” Tomás stepped closer, lowering his voice. “You don’t understand. This place is full of people who don’t take kindly to outsiders. If they catch you asking questions—” “I don’t care,” she interrupted, her jaw tightening. “I need answers.” He hesitated, then nodded slowly. “Alright. But we have to be careful. Follow me.” Quinn followed Tomás through the market, weaving between stalls and avoiding the curious gazes of the vendors. The atmosphere felt electric, a mix of excitement and danger. She could sense the tension in the air, the unspoken rules that governed this hidden world. “Over there,” Tomás said, pointing to a shadowy corner where a group of figures huddled together. “They might know something.” Quinn approached cautiously, her instincts on high alert. The figures turned as she neared, their faces obscured by the dim light. She could feel their eyes on her, assessing her presence. “What do you want, detective?” one of them asked, a sneer curling his lips. “I’m looking for someone,” she replied, keeping her voice steady. “A man who was just here. He’s involved with the clique.” The group exchanged glances, their expressions unreadable. “Why should we help you?” another voice chimed in, dripping with disdain. “Because I can make your lives easier,” Quinn shot back, her patience wearing thin. “Or I can make them a lot harder.” The tension in the air thickened, and she could feel the weight of their scrutiny. Tomás shifted beside her, his unease palpable. “Let’s go,” he urged quietly, but Quinn stood her ground. She had come too far to back down now. “Just tell me where he went,” she pressed, her voice low but firm. The leader of the group leaned forward, a glint of amusement in his eyes. “You really think you can just waltz in here and demand information? This isn’t your world, detective.” Quinn clenched her fists, frustration boiling beneath the surface. She had to find the suspect, had to uncover the truth behind the clique. “Then I’ll find him myself,” she said, turning on her heel. “Good luck with that,” the leader called after her, laughter echoing in the shadows. Quinn pushed through the crowd, her heart racing. She had to keep moving, had to find a way to track him down. The market pulsed with life around her, but she felt isolated, a lone figure in a sea of secrets. “Quinn!” Tomás called, rushing to catch up. “We need to get out of here. This isn’t safe.” She glanced back at him, determination hardening her resolve. “I can’t leave yet. Not until I find him.” “Then let’s find him together,” he said, his voice steady. “But we have to be smart about it.” Quinn nodded, the weight of the chase pressing down on her. She had entered a world she barely understood, but she wouldn’t back down. Not now. Not ever.
total_cost0.0011269499999999998

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he urged quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.647
leniency1
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.045
75.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count2
2
adverb"nervously"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"cautiously"
2"nervously"
3"slowly"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsms38
found
0
word"scanning"
count3
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"raced"
count2
3
word"footsteps"
count3
4
word"echoing"
count4
5
word"unraveling"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"pounding"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count3
13
word"weight"
count3
14
word"tension"
count3
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"electric"
count1
17
word"unspoken"
count1
18
word"unreadable"
count1
19
word"palpable"
count1
20
word"glint"
count1
21
word"racing"
count1
22
word"pulsed"
count1
23
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"flickered"
2"raced"
3"footsteps"
4"echoing"
5"unraveling"
6"flicker"
7"charged"
8"echoed"
9"flicked"
10"gloom"
11"pounding"
12"could feel"
13"weight"
14"tension"
15"stomach"
16"electric"
17"unspoken"
18"unreadable"
19"palpable"
20"glint"
21"racing"
22"pulsed"
23"resolve"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"clenched her fists"
3"A flicker of doubt"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences100
matches
0"t in determination"
1"e with panic"
2"felt a knot"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1237
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
58.74% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1041
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.83
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn19
Raven1
Nest1
Veil1
Market1
Tomás6
Herrera1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Market"
5"Tomás"
6"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.587
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like animal parts filled the table"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1237
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean30.17
std15.22
cv0.504
sampleLengths
066
145
253
350
440
548
639
745
844
937
1047
1143
1259
1350
1438
1524
1614
1718
1827
1911
2014
2143
2220
2331
2414
2521
267
2712
2822
2922
3019
3113
3231
3323
3411
3514
3641
3717
3818
3918
4028
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"was tied"
1"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs195
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences112
ratio0.009
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something else—something sweet and rotten."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1042
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02783109404990403
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008637236084452975
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean11.04
std4.5
cv0.407
sampleLengths
010
121
216
319
49
53
619
714
89
913
108
115
1218
1311
1410
158
1612
179
189
1913
206
2112
229
233
247
2529
266
279
2811
2913
309
3112
3212
3312
346
3513
3611
3714
388
3910
409
4110
4214
4317
4416
456
4611
4715
4811
499
46.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
52.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences98
matches
0"She peered around the corner,"
1"She pushed off the wall,"
2"she shouted, her voice cutting"
3"She had to catch him."
4"He was the key to"
5"She hesitated, the darkness ahead"
6"She had come too far"
7"she muttered, stepping into the"
8"She moved cautiously, her senses"
9"She pressed forward, her instincts"
10"He darted through the door"
11"She lunged forward, grabbing the"
12"She could hear the suspect's"
13"she muttered, stepping inside"
14"She flicked on her flashlight,"
15"she called, her voice echoing"
16"She had to catch him"
17"She could feel the weight"
18"She moved toward it, her"
19"She had heard whispers of"
ratio0.418
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences98
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her"
2"She peered around the corner,"
3"The neon glow of The"
4"A figure darted past, a"
5"Quinn's heart raced."
6"She pushed off the wall,"
7"The sound of her footsteps"
8"she shouted, her voice cutting"
9"The figure glanced back, eyes"
10"Quinn followed, her sharp jaw"
11"She had to catch him."
12"He was the key to"
13"The suspect turned sharply, disappearing"
14"Quinn skidded to a halt,"
15"She hesitated, the darkness ahead"
16"A flicker of doubt crossed"
17"She had come too far"
18"she muttered, stepping into the"
19"The rain drummed on the"
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She could hear the suspect's footsteps echoing down the hall, growing fainter."
1"This place was dangerous, filled with people who dealt in the supernatural and the illicit."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"she shouted, her voice cutting through the rain"
1"Quinn shouted, her voice firm"
2"she called, her voice echoing"
3"she said, relief flooding her"
4"She gestured, her eyes scanning the crowd again"
5"she replied, her voice firm"
6"she interrupted, her jaw tightening"
7"them asked, a sneer curling his lips"
8"Quinn shot back, her patience wearing thin"
9"she pressed, her voice low but firm"
10"the leader called, laughter echoing in the shadows"
11"Tomás called, rushing to catch up"
12"he said, his voice steady"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"Quinn shouted (shout)"
3"she muttered (mutter)"
4"she muttered (mutter)"
5"a voice called out (call out)"
6"she interrupted (interrupt)"
7"another voice chimed in (chime in)"
8"he urged quietly (urge)"
9"she pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.588
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
72.1723%