Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQVYHX8G2HN73FEGW19BDY

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14.2s
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood at the edge of The Fae Grove, the ancient oak standing stones looming like silent sentinels in the moonlight. She adjusted the strap of her satchel, the Heartstone Pendant tucked safely inside. The pendant had led her here, its faint warmth guiding her steps through the winding paths of Richmond Park. She glanced at her wrist, the small crescent-shaped scar catching the light. It was a reminder of her past, of the things she had survived. But tonight, it felt like a warning. The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers, their blooms unnaturally vibrant even in the darkness. Rory took a deep breath, trying to steady herself. She had come here for a reason, though the specifics eluded her. The Grove had a way of muddling thoughts, of making time slip through one's fingers. She stepped forward, the grass whispering beneath her boots. The moment she crossed the boundary marked by the standing stones, the world seemed to shift. The sounds of the park faded, replaced by an eerie silence. Rory's heart pounded in her chest, each beat echoing in the stillness. She glanced around, her bright blue eyes scanning the shadows. The Grove was beautiful, but there was something off about it tonight. The trees seemed to lean in closer, their branches like skeletal fingers reaching for her. She walked deeper into the clearing, the pendant's warmth a constant presence against her skin. The moonlight filtered through the canopy, casting strange patterns on the ground. Rory's breath hitched as she heard a rustling sound behind her. She spun around, but there was nothing there. Just the trees and the shadows. "Get a grip, Rory," she muttered to herself, her voice sounding too loud in the silence. She continued walking, her steps careful and measured. The Grove had a way of playing tricks on the mind, of making the familiar seem strange. She had to stay focused. A soft whispering sound reached her ears, like the rustle of leaves in the wind. But there was no wind. Rory's pulse quickened, her senses on high alert. She turned her head, trying to pinpoint the source of the sound. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. She took another step, and the whispering grew louder, more insistent. "Who's there?" she called out, her voice trembling despite her efforts to stay calm. There was no answer, just the whispering. She reached into her satchel and pulled out the Heartstone Pendant. It glowed faintly, its inner light casting a crimson hue on her hand. The warmth was comforting, but it did little to dispel the growing sense of unease. Rory continued walking, the whispering following her like a shadow. She could feel eyes on her, though she saw no one. The trees seemed to shift and move at the edge of her vision, their branches swaying in a nonexistent breeze. She tightened her grip on the pendant, its warmth seeping into her skin. The path ahead was shrouded in darkness, the moonlight unable to penetrate the thick canopy. Rory hesitated, her instincts screaming at her to turn back. But she had come this far, and she couldn't leave without finding what she was looking for. She took a deep breath and stepped into the shadows. The darkness was suffocating, pressing in on her from all sides. The whispering grew louder, more frantic. Rory's heart raced, her breath coming in short gasps. She could feel the presence of something watching her, something malevolent. She quickened her pace, her footsteps echoing in the silence. A branch snapped behind her, and she spun around, her eyes wide with fear. There was nothing there, just the darkness. She turned back and continued walking, her steps hurried. The whispering was deafening now, a cacophony of voices that seemed to come from the very air around her. "Leave me alone," she whispered, her voice barely audible over the noise. She clutched the pendant to her chest, its warmth a small comfort in the oppressive darkness. She could see a faint light ahead, a glimmer of hope in the shadows. She hurried towards it, her heart pounding in her ears. The light grew brighter, and she emerged into a small clearing. The moonlight bathed the area in a soft glow, the wildflowers shimmering like jewels. Rory's breath caught in her throat as she saw the figure standing in the center of the clearing. It was a woman, her long hair flowing like a river of silver. Her eyes were dark, and her smile sent a shiver down Rory's spine. "Welcome, Aurora," the woman said, her voice like the rustle of leaves. "I've been expecting you." Rory took a step back, her grip on the pendant tightening. "Who are you?" she demanded, her voice shaking. The woman tilted her head, her smile widening. "I am Isolde, the guardian of this Grove. And you, my dear, have something that belongs to me." Rory's heart skipped a beat. "The pendant," she whispered, realization dawning on her. "You want the Heartstone." Isolde nodded, her eyes gleaming. "Indeed. It is a powerful artifact, and it must be returned to its rightful place." Rory glanced around, her mind racing. She had to get out of here, but the path was shrouded in darkness. She took a deep breath and squared her shoulders. "I'm not giving it to you," she said, her voice firm. Isolde's smile faded, her eyes narrowing. "You don't have a choice," she said, her voice cold. "The Grove will not let you leave with it." Rory's pulse quickened, her fear turning to determination. She had to find a way out, and she had to do it fast. She turned and ran, the pendant clutched tightly in her hand. The whispering voices grew louder, the shadows closing in around her. She could feel Isolde's presence behind her, a cold hand reaching for her. She burst through the trees, the standing stones looming ahead. She could see the park beyond, the safety of the outside world. She pushed herself harder, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The pendant pulsed with warmth, guiding her steps. Just as she reached the boundary, a hand grabbed her wrist, pulling her back. She turned, her eyes meeting Isolde's. The guardian's grip was like iron, her eyes filled with fury. "You cannot escape," Isolde hissed, her voice like the wind through the trees. Rory's heart pounded in her chest, her mind racing. She had to think fast. She glanced at the pendant, its glow brightening. With a surge of determination, she yanked her wrist free and held the pendant up. "Let me go," she said, her voice steady. "Or I'll destroy it." Isolde's eyes widened, her grip loosening. "You wouldn't dare," she said, her voice trembling with anger. Rory met her gaze, her resolve unwavering. "Try me." For a moment, they stood there, locked in a silent battle of wills. Then, with a snarl, Isolde released her. Rory stumbled back, crossing the boundary of the standing stones. The world shifted, the sounds of the park flooding back in. She turned and ran, not stopping until she was far from the Grove. She collapsed on a bench, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The pendant was still warm in her hand, its glow fading. She had escaped, but she knew the Grove would not forget. And neither would she.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsms40
found
0
word"looming"
count2
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count6
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"echoing"
count2
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count2
10
word"quickened"
count3
11
word"comforting"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count3
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count1
16
word"cacophony"
count1
17
word"oppressive"
count1
18
word"pounding"
count1
19
word"skipped a beat"
count1
20
word"gleaming"
count1
21
word"racing"
count2
22
word"pulsed"
count1
23
word"resolve"
count1
24
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"looming"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"reminder"
4"silence"
5"echoing"
6"scanning"
7"measured"
8"familiar"
9"pulse"
10"quickened"
11"comforting"
12"sense of"
13"could feel"
14"raced"
15"footsteps"
16"cacophony"
17"oppressive"
18"pounding"
19"skipped a beat"
20"gleaming"
21"racing"
22"pulsed"
23"resolve"
24"unwavering"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches6
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count2
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
3
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
4
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes widened"
2"The air was thick with"
3"sent a shiver down"
4"a glimmer of hope"
77.83% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells6
narrationSentences106
matches
0"e with fear"
1"d with warmth"
2"filled with fury"
3"d with fury"
4"a surge of determination"
5"g with anger"
75.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1235
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1143
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Grove6
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Richmond1
Park1
Rory16
Isolde7
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.8
windowScore0.667
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a warning"
1"voices that seemed to come from the very air around her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1235
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
97.26% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean41.17
std20.19
cv0.49
sampleLengths
086
162
276
352
446
561
660
754
852
947
1049
1152
1269
1316
1419
1526
1617
1720
1840
1925
2057
2140
2231
2313
2437
2512
2616
279
2841
2950
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"was shrouded"
1"was shrouded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs211
matches
0"was looking"
1"was suffocating"
2"was deafening"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences113
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1144
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.027972027972027972
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004370629370629371
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
80.59% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean10.93
std3.84
cv0.351
sampleLengths
022
113
219
312
413
57
617
79
812
915
109
1116
1211
1312
1410
1512
1615
1715
1812
1911
208
216
2216
238
2417
255
2615
275
288
2912
3010
3111
3214
337
3411
3513
3615
3710
3811
3920
4013
4115
4210
4317
4410
4511
466
479
4811
4910
37.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.22123893805309736
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners25
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"Just the trees and the"
1"Then, with a snarl, Isolde"
ratio0.019
35.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences106
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She glanced at her wrist,"
2"It was a reminder of"
3"She had come here for"
4"She stepped forward, the grass"
5"She glanced around, her bright"
6"She walked deeper into the"
7"She spun around, but there"
8"she muttered to herself, her"
9"She continued walking, her steps"
10"She had to stay focused."
11"She turned her head, trying"
12"It seemed to come from"
13"She took another step, and"
14"she called out, her voice"
15"She reached into her satchel"
16"It glowed faintly, its inner"
17"She could feel eyes on"
18"She tightened her grip on"
19"She took a deep breath"
ratio0.462
11.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences106
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood at the"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The pendant had led her"
3"She glanced at her wrist,"
4"It was a reminder of"
5"The air was thick with"
6"Rory took a deep breath,"
7"She had come here for"
8"The Grove had a way"
9"She stepped forward, the grass"
10"The moment she crossed the"
11"The sounds of the park"
12"Rory's heart pounded in her"
13"She glanced around, her bright"
14"The Grove was beautiful, but"
15"The trees seemed to lean"
16"She walked deeper into the"
17"The moonlight filtered through the"
18"Rory's breath hitched as she"
19"She spun around, but there"
ratio0.896
47.17% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"Just as she reached the"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The whispering was deafening now, a cacophony of voices that seemed to come from the very air around her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she muttered, her voice sounding too loud in the silence"
1"she called out, her voice trembling despite her efforts to stay calm"
2"she whispered, her voice barely audible over the noise"
3"she demanded, her voice shaking"
4"she whispered, realization dawning on her"
5"she said, her voice firm"
6"she said, her voice cold"
7"she said, her voice steady"
8"she said, her voice trembling with anger"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"Isolde hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0.545
effectiveRatio0.545
72.4983%