Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQVZYJVPF7BZ5NCHCB8C1B

Run Details

Duration:
26.3s
Cost:
$0.009910

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of late-night patrons, the clink of glasses and the occasional burst of laughter cutting through the dim glow of the green neon sign outside. Rory wiped her hands on her apron, balancing a tray of empty pint glasses against her hip as she weaved between tables. The bar was busier than usual, the kind of crowd that spilled over from the pubs down the street, looking for something darker, quieter. She didn’t see him at first. Not until she turned to slide the tray onto the counter and nearly collided with a man leaning against the bar, his hazel eyes fixed on her with the kind of quiet amusement that made her stomach twist. "Christ, Rory," Silas said, his voice rough around the edges, like gravel underfoot. "You still move like you’re dodging landmines." She froze. The glasses on the tray rattled. "Silas?" He hadn’t changed—not really. The same auburn hair, streaked with grey now, the same neatly trimmed beard, the same silver signet ring glinting on his right hand. But his face was thinner, the lines around his mouth deeper, and that slight limp in his left leg was more pronounced than she remembered. "You look like you’ve seen a ghost," he said. Rory exhaled, sharp and unsteady. "I thought you were in Prague." "Was." He tapped his fingers against the bar. "Came back six months ago. Bought this place." She glanced around, as if the walls themselves might have shifted in his absence. The Raven’s Nest. Of course. The old maps, the black-and-white photographs—she’d always assumed they were just decor. Now she wondered how many of them had his fingerprints on them. "You didn’t think to call?" she asked. Silas shrugged. "Didn’t know if you’d want to hear from me." The words hung between them, heavy as the smoke curling from the ashtray beside him. Rory set the tray down with a little too much force. "That’s not—" She stopped. Swallowed. "I looked for you. After." His jaw tightened. "I know." A beat of silence. The kind that stretched too long, too thin. "You’re working here now?" he asked, nodding at her apron. "Part-time. Delivery mostly." She tugged at the hem, suddenly self-conscious. "Pays the rent." Silas nodded, slow and deliberate. "Still living above the bar?" "Same flat." "Good." He exhaled, long and low. "That’s good." Rory wanted to ask why it mattered. Wanted to ask why he’d left without a word, why he’d let years pass without so much as a postcard. But the question stuck in her throat, tangled in the memory of the last time she’d seen him—standing in the doorway of her parents’ house, his face unreadable, his voice steady as he told her he had to go. She’d begged him to stay. She wouldn’t beg now. Instead, she said, "You want a drink?" Silas hesitated, then nodded. "Whiskey. Neat." Rory poured it without looking at him. The amber liquid sloshed over the rim of the glass, and she wiped it away with her thumb, the burn of the alcohol sharp against her skin. Silas took the glass, his fingers brushing hers. "You still take sugar in your tea?" The question caught her off guard. "What?" "Tea," he said. "You used to drink it like syrup." Rory blinked. "That was years ago." "Right." He took a sip, his eyes never leaving hers. "You always did like things sweet." She wanted to laugh. Wanted to tell him he had no idea what she liked anymore. But the words died on her tongue, smothered by the weight of everything unsaid. The bar hummed around them, a living thing, breathing in the scent of spilled beer and old wood. Rory leaned against the counter, her shoulder brushing the edge of the till. "So. The Raven’s Nest, huh? Bit on the nose for a retired spy." Silas smirked, just a little. "Thought it had a nice ring to it." "Clever." "Always were the smart one." She rolled her eyes. "And you were the one who thought he knew everything." His smirk faded. "Still do, sometimes." The air between them thickened, heavy with the ghosts of old arguments, old wounds. Rory traced the rim of her own glass, the condensation slick under her fingers. "You ever think about how things could’ve been different?" Silas didn’t answer right away. He swirled the whiskey in his glass, watching the light catch the liquid. "Every damn day." Rory’s chest ached. She wanted to reach for him. Wanted to shake him. Wanted to turn back time and make him stay. But time didn’t work like that. She took a breath. "You ever miss it? The work, I mean." Silas set his glass down. "Sometimes. Mostly I miss the people." Rory’s throat tightened. "Yeah. Me too." He looked at her then, really looked at her, and for a moment, she was twenty again, standing in the rain outside her parents’ house, her heart in her throat as she watched him walk away. Silas reached into his pocket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. He slid it across the bar toward her. "Found this in an old file. Thought you might want it." Rory unfolded it. A photograph. Black and white. Her and Silas, younger, grinning like idiots in front of some café in Paris. She didn’t remember the trip. Didn’t remember the moment the photo was taken. But she remembered the way his hand had felt in hers, warm and steady. She folded the photo back up and tucked it into her apron pocket. "Thanks." Silas nodded. "You working tomorrow?" "Yeah." "I’ll be here." Rory didn’t know what to say to that. Didn’t know if she believed him. But for the first time in years, she let herself hope.
total_cost0.00991

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.295
leniency0.591
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount973
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount973
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"glinting"
2"silence"
3"unreadable"
4"weight"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords965
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount740
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Rory12
Silas11
Swallowed1
Paris1
Wanted4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places
0"Paris"
globalScore0.689
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount965
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean17.87
std16.86
cv0.943
sampleLengths
078
16
238
320
49
552
69
711
816
943
107
1111
1236
135
1412
1510
1613
1710
182
198
2066
215
224
237
246
2534
2615
277
2810
296
3016
3130
3244
3313
341
355
3614
376
3837
3921
4022
416
4212
4311
446
4536
4632
4749
4814
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"was taken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
67.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences114
ratio0.026
matches
0"He hadn’t changed—not really."
1"The old maps, the black-and-white photographs—she’d always assumed they were just decor."
2"But the question stuck in her throat, tangled in the memory of the last time she’d seen him—standing in the doorway of her parents’ house, his face unreadable, his voice steady as he told her he had to go."
98.46% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount455
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.041758241758241756
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.01098901098901099
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean8.46
std7.6
cv0.897
sampleLengths
032
122
224
36
438
513
67
72
86
91
104
1123
1225
139
145
156
168
178
1814
193
202
2112
2212
237
242
259
2615
2711
284
291
305
313
322
334
348
3510
3610
373
385
395
402
416
422
437
4420
4539
465
474
487
494
59.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3684210526315789
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners42
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Instead, she said,"
ratio0.014
94.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences70
matches
0"She didn’t see him at"
1"He hadn’t changed—not really."
2"He tapped his fingers against"
3"She glanced around, as if"
4"His jaw tightened."
5"he asked, nodding at her"
6"She tugged at the hem,"
7"He exhaled, long and low"
8"She’d begged him to stay."
9"She wouldn’t beg now."
10"He took a sip, his"
11"She wanted to laugh."
12"She rolled her eyes."
13"His smirk faded."
14"He swirled the whiskey in"
15"She wanted to reach for"
16"She took a breath."
17"He looked at her then,"
18"He slid it across the"
19"Her and Silas, younger, grinning"
ratio0.314
74.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences70
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"Rory wiped her hands on"
2"The bar was busier than"
3"She didn’t see him at"
4"Silas said, his voice rough"
5"The glasses on the tray"
6"He hadn’t changed—not really."
7"The same auburn hair, streaked"
8"Rory exhaled, sharp and unsteady."
9"He tapped his fingers against"
10"She glanced around, as if"
11"The Raven’s Nest."
12"The old maps, the black-and-white"
13"The words hung between them,"
14"Rory set the tray down"
15"His jaw tightened."
16"A beat of silence."
17"The kind that stretched too"
18"he asked, nodding at her"
19"She tugged at the hem,"
ratio0.771
71.43% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Now she wondered how many"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Not until she turned to slide the tray onto the counter and nearly collided with a man leaning against the bar, his hazel eyes fixed on her with the kind of qui…"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas said, his voice rough around the edges, like gravel underfoot"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.273
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.7536%