Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQWBFACVT6Z937JMKWMM4N

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
**Chapter 5: Uninvited** The door creaked, its three deadbolts releasing with a metallic clunk, clunk, clunk. Aurora's gaze snapped up from the sprawl of research notes and open books on her lap, her bright blue eyes narrowing as the door swung open. A sea of tailored charcoal filled the frame, and for an instant, time contracted, leaving only the thrum of unresolved tension between them. Lucien Moreau's heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, met hers with a spark of recognition, a flicker of something more that he promptly extinguished behind a mask of impeccable politeness. "Rory, darling. May I come in?" The low, smooth voice, tinged with a hint of his Marseille upbringing, sent a shiver down her spine, a reaction she swiftly suppressed. Aurora's grip on her pen tightened, the plastic creaking in protest. "Lucien. What are you doing here?" Her tone was even, a careful balancing act between curiosity and the wariness that came with their complicated history. He stepped inside, his movements economical and precise, the ivory-handled cane in his right hand a subtle reminder of the half-demon's idiosyncrasies. "An impromptu visit, I'm afraid. I was in the neighborhood and thought of you." The smile that accompanied this statement was charming, but Aurora's defenses were already on high alert. "Save it, Lucien. You don't 'think of' people in the middle of Brick Lane on a Tuesday evening without a reason," she said, her eyes never leaving his face as she gestured for him to enter, the movement curt. As he moved further into the flat, his gaze roamed the cluttered space, taking in the chaotic arrangement of books, scrolls, and the sleepy form of Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, who was sprawled across a pile of manuscripts. "Eva's decor sense hasn't changed, I see," he observed, his voice laced with a hint of amusement. "Unlike some people, Eva doesn't feel the need to change who she is to suit everyone else's tastes," Aurora replied, the edge in her voice a clear warning against further commentary on her friend or her living space. Lucien's expression remained unchanged, but a small, almost imperceptible tension in his jawline betrayed a flicker of irritation. "Indeed. Well, since I'm here, might I have a word with you in private?" Aurora raised an eyebrow, skepticism etched on her face. "This isn't about 'a word,' Lucien. You don't show up unannounced for trivialities. What do you want?" The air seemed to thicken, heavy with unspoken words and unresolved emotions as Lucien approached her, his eyes locked onto hers with an intensity that made her heart stumble. "Very well, Rory. If we're to dispense with the pleasantries... I have information regarding your ex, Evan. Information you might find... enlightening." The mention of Evan's name was akin to throwing a spark into a powder keg. Aurora's composure wavered, her mind racing back to the tangled web of their past, the hurt and the fear that Lucien, with all his mysterious ways, had somehow been intertwined with. "What about him?" she asked finally, her voice tight, controlled. Lucien's face was a mask of neutrality, but the amber eye seemed to gleam in the dim light of the flat. "Let's just say Evan's current endeavors have attracted certain... unsavory attention. Attention that might spill over into your life, given your history." Aurora's laughter was short, bitter. "You think I'm afraid of Evan? After everything, you think that's what brings you to my doorstep?" Lucien's step closer was deliberate, invasive, his voice dropping to a whisper. "I think, Rory, that you're more afraid of what you feel when I'm near. And that, perhaps, is what I'm here to discuss." The space between them was electrified, the unspoken words hanging in the air like a challenge. Aurora's heart pounded in her chest, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist seeming to throb in sync with her racing thoughts. For a moment, they just stared at each other, the tension so thick it was almost palpable. Then, with a swiftness that belied her turmoil, Aurora stood, the sudden movement sending books and papers sliding off her lap. "There's nothing to discuss, Lucien. As for Evan, I can handle myself. Your concern is... misplaced." The silence that followed was the only indication that the battle lines had been drawn, the war for control, for truth, and perhaps, for hearts, far from over. "Indeed," Lucien murmured finally, his eyes never leaving hers, a small, enigmatic smile playing on his lips. "I'll take my leave, then. For now." With a fluidity that was almost unsettling, Lucien turned and walked back to the door, the sound of the deadbolts engaging once more behind him the only sign of his departure. Aurora was left standing amidst the chaos of her flat, her thoughts in disarray, the only constant the lingering sense of Lucien's presence, a presence that seemed to haunt her very breath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she asked finally [finally]"
1"Lucien murmured finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.25
87.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount821
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount821
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"tension"
count3
1
word"flicker"
count2
2
word"tinged"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"wavered"
count1
11
word"racing"
count2
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"throb"
count1
14
word"palpable"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"enigmatic"
count1
17
word"amidst"
count1
18
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"flicker"
2"tinged"
3"down her spine"
4"reminder"
5"chaotic"
6"eyebrow"
7"etched"
8"unspoken"
9"intensity"
10"wavered"
11"racing"
12"whisper"
13"throb"
14"palpable"
15"silence"
16"enigmatic"
17"amidst"
18"sense of"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"sent a shiver down"
2"a spark of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences31
matches(empty)
4.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences31
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences39
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords818
ratio0.004
matches
0"Chapter 5: Uninvited"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
67.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount604
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Marseille1
Aurora10
Ptolemy1
Eva1
Lucien9
Evan1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Evan"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore0.672
windowScore0.833
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences29
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"presence that seemed to haunt her very breath"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount818
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
65.54% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean40.9
std15.52
cv0.379
sampleLengths
03
162
260
336
452
539
655
738
832
926
1051
1156
1243
1322
1435
1556
1637
1728
1824
1963
48.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences31
matches
0"was sprawled"
1"been intertwined"
2"was electrified"
3"been drawn"
4"was left"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs83
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences39
ratio0
matches(empty)
91.52% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount607
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.042833607907743
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.013179571663920923
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences39
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences39
mean20.97
std8.98
cv0.428
sampleLengths
03
113
226
323
431
529
611
725
822
930
1039
1138
1217
1338
1418
1514
169
1717
1829
1922
2015
2131
2210
2321
2422
255
2617
2712
2823
2916
3023
3117
3221
3316
3428
3517
367
3731
3832
98.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5897435897435898
totalSentences39
uniqueOpeners23
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences31
matches
0"Then, with a swiftness that"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences31
matches
0"Her tone was even, a"
1"He stepped inside, his movements"
2"she said, her eyes never"
3"he observed, his voice laced"
4"she asked finally, her voice"
ratio0.161
24.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount27
totalSentences31
matches
0"**Chapter 5: Uninvited**"
1"The door creaked, its three"
2"Aurora's gaze snapped up from"
3"A sea of tailored charcoal"
4"Lucien Moreau's heterochromatic eyes, one"
5"The low, smooth voice, tinged"
6"Aurora's grip on her pen"
7"Her tone was even, a"
8"He stepped inside, his movements"
9"The smile that accompanied this"
10"she said, her eyes never"
11"he observed, his voice laced"
12"Aurora replied, the edge in"
13"Lucien's expression remained unchanged, but"
14"Aurora raised an eyebrow, skepticism"
15"The air seemed to thicken,"
16"The mention of Evan's name"
17"Aurora's composure wavered, her mind"
18"she asked finally, her voice"
19"Lucien's face was a mask"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences31
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"As he moved further into the flat, his gaze roamed the cluttered space, taking in the chaotic arrangement of books, scrolls, and the sleepy form of Ptolemy, Eva…"
1"The air seemed to thicken, heavy with unspoken words and unresolved emotions as Lucien approached her, his eyes locked onto hers with an intensity that made her…"
2"Then, with a swiftness that belied her turmoil, Aurora stood, the sudden movement sending books and papers sliding off her lap."
3"With a fluidity that was almost unsettling, Lucien turned and walked back to the door, the sound of the deadbolts engaging once more behind him the only sign of…"
4"Aurora was left standing amidst the chaos of her flat, her thoughts in disarray, the only constant the lingering sense of Lucien's presence, a presence that see…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she asked finally, her voice tight, controlled"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"Lucien murmured finally (murmur)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.25
68.3993%