Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQWER068K5KESAQG0AAWT3

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood at the edge of The Fae Grove, her breath visible in the crisp night air. The ancient oak standing stones loomed like sentinels, their gnarled forms casting long shadows under the pale moonlight. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant, its faint inner glow barely illuminating the path ahead. Rory had come here for answers, drawn by the whispers of the pendant and the promise of secrets hidden within the Grove. Yet, as she stepped past the boundary marked by the stones, a shiver ran down her spine, a warning she couldn't quite place. The Grove was eerily silent, save for the occasional rustle of leaves that seemed to echo louder than they should. Wildflowers, vibrant even in the darkness, carpeted the ground, their colors muted by the night. Rory's footsteps were soft, almost swallowed by the earth, but each step felt heavier, as if the ground itself resisted her presence. She paused, listening, her bright blue eyes scanning the shadows for any sign of movement. A faint sound, like distant laughter, drifted through the trees. It was gone as quickly as it came, leaving Rory to wonder if it had been real or merely a trick of the wind. She shook her head, trying to dispel the unease that clung to her like a second skin. The pendant pulsed gently against her chest, a reminder of its purpose, urging her forward. "Just a few more steps," she whispered to herself, her voice barely audible. The words hung in the air, unanswered, swallowed by the darkness. The path twisted and turned, leading her deeper into the Grove. Shadows danced at the edge of her vision, fleeting shapes that vanished when she turned to look. Her heart beat faster, each thud echoing in her ears. She was not alone; she could feel it, a presence lurking just beyond sight, watching, waiting. Rory stopped, her breath catching as she heard a soft whisper, indistinct yet unmistakable. It was close, too close, and she spun around, searching for the source. The trees stood silent, their branches unmoving, yet the whisper persisted, a ghostly murmur that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere. "Who's there?" Her voice was steady, but her hands trembled slightly as she gripped the pendant tighter. The crimson gemstone pulsed in response, its warmth a small comfort against the chill that seeped into her bones. Silence answered her, a heavy, oppressive quiet that pressed down on her shoulders. She took a deep breath, forcing herself to move, to continue down the path that seemed to stretch endlessly before her. The Grove was a labyrinth, twisting and turning, each step leading her further from the safety of the world she knew. A flicker of movement caught her eye, a shadow darting between the trees. Rory's heart skipped a beat, her instincts screaming at her to run, to flee from whatever lurked in the darkness. But she held her ground, her curiosity outweighing her fear. She had come here for a reason, and she would not leave without answers. The pendant grew warmer, its glow brightening as she approached a clearing. The air felt different here, charged with an energy that prickled at her skin. Rory hesitated at the edge, her gaze drawn to the center where a single stone stood, taller and more imposing than the rest. It was ancient, its surface etched with symbols that seemed to shift and change under her scrutiny. She stepped forward, the pendant pulsing in time with her heartbeat. The whispers grew louder, a chorus of voices that filled the air, their words just beyond comprehension. Rory's pulse quickened, her senses heightened, every nerve on edge as she approached the stone. A sudden gust of wind swept through the clearing, carrying with it the scent of wildflowers and something else, something darker. Rory shivered, her skin prickling as the wind wrapped around her, tugging at her hair and clothes. The whispers rose to a crescendo, a cacophony that threatened to overwhelm her. "Show yourself!" Her voice was strong, defiant, cutting through the noise like a blade. The wind stilled, the whispers falling silent, leaving only the sound of her breathing in the night. The pendant flared, its glow illuminating the clearing in a crimson light. Rory's eyes widened as she saw them — figures, pale and ethereal, emerging from the shadows. They moved with a grace that was both beautiful and terrifying, their forms shifting and changing, never quite solid. Rory's heart raced, her mind struggling to comprehend what she was seeing. The figures circled the stone, their movements fluid, almost hypnotic. She felt drawn to them, an inexplicable pull that urged her forward, closer to the heart of the Grove. The pendant pulsed, its warmth a steady presence against her chest. Rory took a step, then another, her feet moving of their own accord. The figures watched her, their eyes glowing with an inner light, their expressions unreadable. She stopped before the stone, the pendant's glow casting long shadows across its surface. The symbols shimmered, their meaning just out of reach, tantalizingly close yet frustratingly elusive. Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against the cold, rough surface. The figures moved closer, their whispers a soft murmur that filled the air. Rory's breath caught, her pulse pounding in her ears. She was surrounded, trapped in a world that was both familiar and alien, a place where time twisted and reality blurred. The pendant pulsed, its warmth a steady beat against her skin. Rory closed her eyes, focusing on the sensation, letting it guide her. The whispers faded, replaced by a single voice, clear and strong, resonating within her mind. "Welcome, Aurora Carter." Her eyes snapped open, her gaze meeting the figures that stood before her. They were close now, their forms solid, their presence undeniable. Rory's heart raced, her mind a whirlwind of thoughts and emotions. "Why am I here?" Her voice was steady, her resolve unyielding. She had come for answers, and she would not leave without them. The figures smiled, their expressions enigmatic, their eyes glowing with an ancient wisdom. The pendant pulsed, its warmth a comforting presence, a reminder of the path she had chosen. "You seek the truth," the voice replied, its tone gentle yet firm. "And the truth you shall find." Rory's breath caught, her pulse quickening as the figures stepped back, their forms dissolving into the shadows. The clearing was silent once more, the air charged with an energy that hummed beneath the surface. She stood alone, the pendant's glow a beacon in the darkness. The Grove was still, its secrets hidden, waiting to be uncovered. Rory took a deep breath, her resolve firm, her mind clear. She had come for answers, and she would not leave until she found them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"her hands trembled slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
86.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1132
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"gently"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1132
totalAiIsms48
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count5
7
word"reminder"
count2
8
word"fleeting"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count4
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"oppressive"
count1
17
word"flicker"
count1
18
word"skipped a beat"
count1
19
word"charged"
count2
20
word"imposing"
count1
21
word"etched"
count1
22
word"pulse"
count3
23
word"quickened"
count1
24
word"cacophony"
count1
25
word"raced"
count2
26
word"unreadable"
count1
27
word"shimmered"
count1
28
word"pounding"
count1
29
word"familiar"
count1
30
word"resolve"
count2
31
word"enigmatic"
count1
32
word"comforting"
count1
33
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"down her spine"
3"echo"
4"footsteps"
5"scanning"
6"pulsed"
7"reminder"
8"fleeting"
9"echoing"
10"could feel"
11"whisper"
12"trembled"
13"warmth"
14"chill"
15"silence"
16"oppressive"
17"flicker"
18"skipped a beat"
19"charged"
20"imposing"
21"etched"
22"pulse"
23"quickened"
24"cacophony"
25"raced"
26"unreadable"
27"shimmered"
28"pounding"
29"familiar"
30"resolve"
31"enigmatic"
32"comforting"
33"beacon"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"a shiver ran down her spine"
1"eyes widened"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
66.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1133
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1107
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Grove7
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory17
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.732
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"quite place"
1"leaves that seemed to echo louder than they should"
2"murmur that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere"
3"path that seemed to stretch endlessly before her"
4"symbols that seemed to shift and change under her scrutiny"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1133
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
86.19% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean41.96
std18.95
cv0.452
sampleLengths
095
172
266
324
454
549
636
755
857
966
1043
1151
1231
1347
1441
1538
1639
1743
1838
193
2034
2123
2229
2318
2434
2533
2614
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"was gone"
1"was surrounded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was seeing"
68.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences77
ratio0.026
matches
0"She was not alone; she could feel it, a presence lurking just beyond sight, watching, waiting."
1"Rory's eyes widened as she saw them — figures, pale and ethereal, emerging from the shadows."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1106
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.02802893309222423
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.0108499095840868
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
52.12% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean14.71
std4.12
cv0.28
sampleLengths
018
118
214
322
423
520
615
722
815
910
1024
1117
1215
1313
1411
1511
1617
1710
1816
1914
2013
2122
2217
2319
2413
2521
2621
2713
2820
2910
3014
3112
3214
3323
3417
3511
3617
3715
3821
3917
4013
4114
4217
4312
4416
4519
4612
4710
4819
4911
44.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2597402597402597
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences75
matches
0"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant,"
1"She paused, listening, her bright"
2"It was gone as quickly"
3"She shook her head, trying"
4"she whispered to herself, her"
5"Her heart beat faster, each"
6"She was not alone; she"
7"It was close, too close,"
8"Her voice was steady, but"
9"She took a deep breath,"
10"She had come here for"
11"It was ancient, its surface"
12"She stepped forward, the pendant"
13"Her voice was strong, defiant,"
14"They moved with a grace"
15"She felt drawn to them,"
16"She stopped before the stone,"
17"She was surrounded, trapped in"
18"Her eyes snapped open, her"
19"They were close now, their"
ratio0.32
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences75
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood at the"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant,"
3"Rory had come here for"
4"The Grove was eerily silent,"
5"Wildflowers, vibrant even in the"
6"Rory's footsteps were soft, almost"
7"She paused, listening, her bright"
8"A faint sound, like distant"
9"It was gone as quickly"
10"She shook her head, trying"
11"The pendant pulsed gently against"
12"she whispered to herself, her"
13"The words hung in the"
14"The path twisted and turned,"
15"Shadows danced at the edge"
16"Her heart beat faster, each"
17"She was not alone; she"
18"Rory stopped, her breath catching"
19"It was close, too close,"
ratio0.973
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Yet, as she stepped past"
ratio0.013
28.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The Grove was eerily silent, save for the occasional rustle of leaves that seemed to echo louder than they should."
1"Rory's footsteps were soft, almost swallowed by the earth, but each step felt heavier, as if the ground itself resisted her presence."
2"The trees stood silent, their branches unmoving, yet the whisper persisted, a ghostly murmur that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere."
3"The crimson gemstone pulsed in response, its warmth a small comfort against the chill that seeped into her bones."
4"Rory shivered, her skin prickling as the wind wrapped around her, tugging at her hair and clothes."
5"The whispers rose to a crescendo, a cacophony that threatened to overwhelm her."
6"They moved with a grace that was both beautiful and terrifying, their forms shifting and changing, never quite solid."
7"She felt drawn to them, an inexplicable pull that urged her forward, closer to the heart of the Grove."
8"Rory closed her eyes, focusing on the sensation, letting it guide her."
9"Her eyes snapped open, her gaze meeting the figures that stood before her."
10"Rory's breath caught, her pulse quickening as the figures stepped back, their forms dissolving into the shadows."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
1"the voice replied, its tone gentle yet firm"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.286
63.4141%