Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQWESNV6VC5XY0D7HD5NKY

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora yanked the door open, breath short and eyes fierce, expecting Eva. Instead, she found herself face-to-face with Lucien Moreau. The Frenchman. Her grip tightened around the door handle, knuckles paling. "Rory," he murmured, his heterochromatic eyes unreadable. "Lucien." From the corner of her eye, Aurora caught a shadow moving behind him—a tabby cat. Ptolemy. The door to Eva's flat swung shut. The room was a research battleground: notes, scrolls, open books, all giving the place its usual cluttered charm. "What are you doing here?" Aurora's voice was sharp, the edge of her irritation cutting through the small distance between them. "Eva thought..." He tilted his head, studying her like one of his encrypted texts. "Eva felt I might be able to help." "Help?" Aurora's skepticism was a fortress. "I don't need any help." Lucien's cane clicked against the wooden floor as he stepped forward, the sound resonating in the small flat. "You’ve always had that stubbornness about you." Aurora's lips thinned. Memories flickered: heated arguments, promises broken, and a magnetic pull neither could deny nor escape. She crossed her arms, a brittle shield against his presence. "Don't pretend you're here out of the goodness of your heart, Lucien." "Why would I pretend?" His lean frame seemed to relax, but she recognized the predatory patience lurking beneath his civil exterior. "I’m here because Eva believes you might be... compromised." "Compromised?" The word tasted bitter on her tongue. "Your ex, Evan," he continued, voice steady. "The man's been seen in London. Dangerous, with dark connections. The kind that intertwine too closely with my world." Aurora's heart skipped a beat. Evan. Not a name she liked hearing, especially from Lucien, who knew too much about her past. "I can handle myself. I've done well enough so far." "Have you?" Lucien's gaze flickered to her wrist, where the old crescent-shaped scar lay hidden beneath her sleeve. Aurora felt exposed, as if he'd peeled away the layers she'd carefully constructed. "He doesn't scare me anymore." "Really? Then why is your voice trembling?" Aurora regretted speaking aloud as soon as she saw a smirk curve on Lucien’s lips, resembling both mockery and deep understanding. A mix that confused her, internally stirring things left to settle. She turned sharply, pacing to the small table covered in scrolls and shattered memories. "Eva’s not here. This changes nothing." "Ah, but it does." Now beside the table, Lucien reached for an aged manuscript. "Eva made arrangements with me while you were away at the Golden Empress." Unbidden, Aurora’s mind conjured the scent of hot food, the crowded restaurant where she managed her mundane daily life. She missed that chaotic simplicity most days. Today, faced with Lucien, she longed for it even more. "And these arrangements involve—what? Babysitting?" He chuckled, a gravelly sound that always managed to send shivers down her spine. "More of... supervision. You’re intelligent, but reckless. A trait I’ve always admired and feared." Aurora's composure faltered. The dance of words, dripping with subtext, always had her spiraling back to the slivers of shared intimacy and intertwined fates. She looked at him, the candlelight casting shadows on his impeccable suit. "Lucien, I've moved past all that." "I know." His step closer had her catching her breath. "But some shadows stay with us. They twist around our veins, binding us tighter." Aurora bristled, her arms dropping to her sides in surrender to her emotions. "Why do you care?" Lucien’s face softened. "Why wouldn’t I?" The simplicity of his words disarmed her. Lost in his dual-coloured gaze, she saw echoes of the nights they shared—intense, passionate, heartbreakingly beautiful. But those were memories. Ghosts. She shook her head slowly. "Too much has happened. I'm different now." "Perhaps. But you still aren’t safe." He raised his hand, and with a gentle motion brushed a stray lock of black hair behind her ear. The touch—light and familiar—had Aurora blinking away the sudden moisture in her eyes. She stepped back. Distance was crucial to keep sanity. "Boundaries, Lucien. Let's establish them." "Ptolemy clearly has none." He pointed behind her, where the tabby cat decided to jump on the table, knocking over several books. A small laugh escaped Aurora's lips—Ptolemy always knew how to lighten tense situations. Lucien's eyes softened further, the outside persona cracking just a bit. He reached for one of the fallen tomes. "Eva thought this might help. If we start on common ground.” "Eva's brilliant." Aurora agreed. "Still..." She trailed off, renewing the wall she constructed since Evan's departure. "Let’s not make it about power-play," Lucien asserted, placing the book back on the table. "We both know that never works." Their history haunted every exchanged glance. Aurora felt herself weakening but tried masking it behind defiance. She couldn't trust him, yet she couldn't pull away. Standing there, inches apart, it was impossible not to acknowledge what simmered between them. "Did you come alone?" "Evidently." Aurora fixated on the cane, a symbol of both his frailty and strength. She remembered the times he wielded it as a weapon, yet also the times he leaned heavily, burdened by the weight of their shared secrets. "Fine." She relented. "One drink. But don’t overstay." Lucien's smile teetered between playful and profound. "One drink," he agreed, "might be the least of our worries." Aurora turned, rummaging through the cabinets for two glasses. The bottle of whiskey emerged next—a relic from more cheerful days. Pouring, she felt Lucien's eyes on her, studying and decoding her every gesture. "Eva didn’t tell you the whole story, did she?" Aurora asked. "Likely not." Holding out his glass, Aurora pushed aside the intense flood of emotion, burying the weight of their connection. "Here's to... new beginnings." "Or revisited endings." Lucien offered, his glass clinking against hers. Aurora downed her drink with fervour, setting the empty glass down harshly. Lucien followed suit, breaking their usual pattern of delicate exchanges. Silence engulfed. A soft knock interrupted, both heads turning towards the door. Aurora's heart pounded faster as her mind raced—Evan? Or someone else entirely? The suspense crackled in the air, space suddenly feeling too small for unresolved paths.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
2"sharply"
3"slowly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"charm"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"magnetic"
count1
4
word"skipped a beat"
count1
5
word"constructed"
count2
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"dance"
count1
10
word"echoes"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"profound"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"charm"
2"flickered"
3"magnetic"
4"skipped a beat"
5"constructed"
6"shattered"
7"chaotic"
8"down her spine"
9"dance"
10"echoes"
11"familiar"
12"weight"
13"profound"
14"silence"
15"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1015
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
11.11% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount756
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.78
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Lucien14
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Aurora21
Unbidden1
Ptolemy2
Evan3
Holding1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Evan"
6"Holding"
places(empty)
globalScore0.111
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.985
wordCount1015
matches
0"neither could deny nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean19.52
std12.42
cv0.637
sampleLengths
031
17
21
341
421
522
611
725
828
912
1030
118
1226
1332
1431
155
167
1746
186
1927
2036
215
2228
2336
246
2524
2617
276
2833
297
306
3141
325
3322
3432
3511
3616
3721
3839
394
401
4138
428
4318
4433
4511
462
4722
4810
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences104
ratio0.058
matches
0"From the corner of her eye, Aurora caught a shadow moving behind him—a tabby cat."
1"Lost in his dual-coloured gaze, she saw echoes of the nights they shared—intense, passionate, heartbreakingly beautiful."
2"The touch—light and familiar—had Aurora blinking away the sudden moisture in her eyes."
3"A small laugh escaped Aurora's lips—Ptolemy always knew how to lighten tense situations."
4"The bottle of whiskey emerged next—a relic from more cheerful days."
5"Aurora's heart pounded faster as her mind raced—Evan?"
92.49% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount767
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"old crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.041720990873533245
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01564537157757497
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean9.76
std5.55
cv0.569
sampleLengths
012
18
22
39
47
51
615
71
87
918
1021
1114
128
136
145
1518
167
173
1815
1910
2012
2121
229
238
247
2519
265
271
2816
2910
3018
3113
325
337
3421
3511
3614
376
3814
3913
4019
417
4210
435
4414
4514
463
4721
4812
496
80.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners52
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Instead, she found herself face-to-face"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences67
matches
0"Her grip tightened around the"
1"he murmured, his heterochromatic eyes"
2"He tilted his head, studying"
3"She crossed her arms, a"
4"His lean frame seemed to"
5"he continued, voice steady"
6"She turned sharply, pacing to"
7"She missed that chaotic simplicity"
8"He chuckled, a gravelly sound"
9"She looked at him, the"
10"His step closer had her"
11"She shook her head slowly."
12"He raised his hand, and"
13"She stepped back."
14"He pointed behind her, where"
15"He reached for one of"
16"She trailed off, renewing the"
17"Their history haunted every exchanged"
18"She couldn't trust him, yet"
19"She remembered the times he"
ratio0.299
42.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences67
matches
0"Aurora yanked the door open,"
1"Her grip tightened around the"
2"he murmured, his heterochromatic eyes"
3"The door to Eva's flat"
4"The room was a research"
5"Aurora's voice was sharp, the"
6"He tilted his head, studying"
7"Aurora's skepticism was a fortress"
8"Lucien's cane clicked against the"
9"Aurora's lips thinned."
10"Memories flickered: heated arguments, promises"
11"She crossed her arms, a"
12"His lean frame seemed to"
13"The word tasted bitter on"
14"he continued, voice steady"
15"Aurora's heart skipped a beat."
16"Lucien's gaze flickered to her"
17"Aurora felt exposed, as if"
18"Aurora regretted speaking aloud as"
19"A mix that confused her,"
ratio0.836
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Now beside the table, Lucien"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Aurora regretted speaking aloud as soon as she saw a smirk curve on Lucien’s lips, resembling both mockery and deep understanding."
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he murmured, his heterochromatic eyes unreadable"
1"he continued, voice steady"
2"Lucien offered, his glass clinking against hers"
41.30% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"he continued (continue)"
2"Aurora agreed (agree)"
3"Lucien asserted (assert)"
4"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.13
leniency0.261
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.217
80.2115%