| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 707 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "angrily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 707 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "flicked" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "racing" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "loomed" | | 16 | "searing" | | 17 | "pulse" | | 18 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 712 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 709 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 9 | | Eva | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.865 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "wildflowers that seemed to shimmer unnaturally" | | 1 | "as if considering her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 712 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 33.9 | | std | 17.9 | | cv | 0.528 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 59 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove looked just as Eva had described — wildflowers carpeting the ground, their colours unnaturally vivid in the moonlight." | | 1 | "Parks at night were never silent — the rustle of leaves, the distant hum of traffic, the occasional call of a fox." | | 2 | "Something moved there — a flicker of movement, too quick to grasp." | | 3 | "A sound made her freeze — a low, guttural rumble that vibrated through her chest." | | 4 | "The creature stood at least seven feet tall, its form indistinct, cloaked in darkness save for its eyes — twin points of amber light that glowed with malevolent intelligence." | | 5 | "But as she turned to leave, she felt it — a cold, lingering presence that watched from the shadows, waiting." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 704 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "cloying, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.03125 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01278409090909091 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 59 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 59 | | mean | 12.07 | | std | 5.29 | | cv | 0.438 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 44.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3050847457627119 | | totalSentences | 59 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it lunged, its form" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, her breath shallow," | | 1 | "She tightened her jacket against" | | 2 | "She ignored it, focusing instead" | | 3 | "She moved forward, her boots" | | 4 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 5 | "She swallowed hard, forcing herself" | | 6 | "It’s just your imagination." | | 7 | "She knew how to keep" | | 8 | "She followed it, her steps" | | 9 | "It wasn’t human." | | 10 | "She turned slowly, her heart" | | 11 | "She took a step back," | | 12 | "It moved closer, its movements" | | 13 | "Her voice trembled, but she" | | 14 | "She ducked under low branches," | | 15 | "She pushed herself harder, her" | | 16 | "She burst through the stones," | | 17 | "She glanced back at the" | | 18 | "She stood, brushing dirt from" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 12.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed against Rory’s" | | 1 | "The air shifted, thick and" | | 2 | "She paused, her breath shallow," | | 3 | "The Fae Grove looked just" | | 4 | "She tightened her jacket against" | | 5 | "The scar itched, a sensation" | | 6 | "She ignored it, focusing instead" | | 7 | "The pendant had led her" | | 8 | "The silence was wrong." | | 9 | "Parks at night were never" | | 10 | "Here, the quiet pressed down" | | 11 | "She moved forward, her boots" | | 12 | "The flowers swayed as if" | | 13 | "Rory’s gaze flicked to the" | | 14 | "Something moved there — a" | | 15 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 16 | "She swallowed hard, forcing herself" | | 17 | "It’s just your imagination." | | 18 | "Eva had warned her about" | | 19 | "She knew how to keep" |
| | ratio | 0.895 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in the heart" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight filtered through in jagged beams, illuminating patches of wildflowers that seemed to shimmer unnaturally." | | 1 | "The creature stood at least seven feet tall, its form indistinct, cloaked in darkness save for its eyes — twin points of amber light that glowed with malevolent…" | | 2 | "The creature paused, its head cocking to the side as if considering her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |