| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 848 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 848 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "amidst" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "amiss" | | 3 | "anticipation" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "glint" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "raced" | | 12 | "otherworldly" | | 13 | "chilling" | | 14 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 843 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.47% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 764 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.57 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Rory | 12 | | Eva | 6 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.715 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "circle that seemed to guard the grove" | | 1 | "path that seemed to beckon her, winding between the standing stones" | | 2 | "as if struggling through molasses" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 843 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.19% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 44.37 | | std | 19.26 | | cv | 0.434 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 104 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 28 |
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| 92.73% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "was unknown" | | 1 | "being seemed" |
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| 87.96% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "was, standing" | | 1 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "A glance at her watch only added to the confusion; the second hand ticked slower than it should have, as if struggling through molasses." | | 1 | "It was human-like—mostly." | | 2 | "Eyes, wide and manic, caught the moon's light, revealing an unnatural golden flash—like foxfire." | | 3 | "The grove, the pendant, her mother's frequent absences as a child—it all connected in her mind." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 768 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small gift-wrapped box" | | 1 | "piercing yellow-green glint," |
| | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.026041666666666668 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009114583333333334 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 13.82 | | std | 5.92 | | cv | 0.429 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 3 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 75.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4918032786885246 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, in a blur of" | | 1 | "Then Rory heard the most" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "It led her here, to" | | 1 | "Her heart thudded in her" | | 2 | "She took a tentative step" | | 3 | "she whispered, a nervous smile" | | 4 | "She took another step, then" | | 5 | "She couldn't shake the feeling" | | 6 | "she muttered, recalling Eva's words" | | 7 | "Her stomach twisted at the" | | 8 | "She shook her head, certain" | | 9 | "Its eyes, a piercing yellow-green" | | 10 | "She stepped back instinctively, her" | | 11 | "It was human-like—mostly." | | 12 | "She hadn't shared her full" | | 13 | "it spat, its eyes turning" |
| | ratio | 0.259 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove." | | 1 | "The sound of that name" | | 2 | "The moonlight filtered through the" | | 3 | "Aurora, or Rory as she" | | 4 | "Eva had often skipped school" | | 5 | "Eva had said, passing her" | | 6 | "The note had included vague" | | 7 | "It led her here, to" | | 8 | "Rory stood at the edge" | | 9 | "Her heart thudded in her" | | 10 | "Something was amiss." | | 11 | "The air crackled with an" | | 12 | "She took a tentative step" | | 13 | "The standing stones loomed around" | | 14 | "Rory's gaze fell to her" | | 15 | "The pendant's purpose was unknown" | | 16 | "she whispered, a nervous smile" | | 17 | "She took another step, then" | | 18 | "The pendant grew warmer, its" | | 19 | "She couldn't shake the feeling" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The moonlight filtered through the canopy above, casting an eerie glow over the stone circle that seemed to guard the grove." | | 1 | "The golden glow from the moon illuminated a path that seemed to beckon her, winding between the standing stones." | | 2 | "A glance at her watch only added to the confusion; the second hand ticked slower than it should have, as if struggling through molasses." | | 3 | "She stepped back instinctively, her hand going to the pocket of her hoodie for reassurance, reminding herself that she had nothing there to defend herself with." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, a nervous smile playing on her lips" | | 1 | "it spat, its eyes turning to embers in its skull" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva had (have)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "it hissed (hiss)" | | 4 | "it spat (spit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.833 | |