Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQWJCEWK1J1YCN5S6C4H46

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Duration:
33.4s
Cost:
$0.000937

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air hung heavy with dampness as Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Graffiti adorned the peeling walls like a chaotic tapestry, and the flickering fluorescent lights cast ghostly shadows across the cracked tiled floor. The faint echoes of distant trains disturbed the silence, whispering old stories of lives once bustling through the cavernous space. She took a deep breath, the musty smell of mildew and rust filling her lungs, instantly committing to memory this eerie tableau. Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as she spotted her colleague, Detective Harper, crouched over a body sprawled on the platform. The figure—a man, possibly in his thirties—lay twisted at an unnatural angle, blood pooling beneath him, a macabre halo of deep crimson on the cold tiles. “Harper,” Quinn called, her voice steady as she approached, surveying the scene. His back straightened, and he turned, a look of curiosity crossing his face. “Evening, Quinn,” he replied, rubbing the back of his neck. “Tough one, eh?” Quinn bent over the body. Prematurely aged by stress, the victim’s features were strained, eyes wide open and glassy, as though frozen in profound terror. “Not just tough,” she said, mystified. “This doesn’t feel right.” Harper stood, brushing dirt from his trousers as he motioned to the suspect’s surroundings. “Seems straightforward to me. Drug deal gone wrong. Witnesses reported seeing him arguing with someone earlier. They scattered when the gunfire started. Classic gang execution.” Quinn’s brow furrowed. “The hairline fracture on his skull isn’t consistent with gunfire. Look at his right wrist.” She pointed to a strange sigil etched on the skin. “That’s not a mark a gang leaves. It's—” “Occult,” Harper finished, glancing at her skeptically. “Maybe he was mixed up with some unsavory types. Camden’s full of them. You know that.” “Possibly,” she said, not willing to leave it at that. “But what’s a gang member doin’ in the Tube?” The place didn’t make sense for a drug deal; sound echoed too freely, easy for law enforcement to hear. A shiver ran down her spine, and she tugged at the worn leather watch on her wrist—a habit formed from years of practice. Harper gestured towards the darkness of the tunnel entrance. “There’s an exit up ahead, leads to some back alleys. Could be someone bolted.” “Or something,” she muttered, grounding herself by steeling her gaze on the body again. The sigil blurred in her peripheral vision, but around it lay no signs of a struggle. A weapon, a footprint—nothing. “You’ve got to dig deeper. We need to find out what he got himself into.” “Right.” Harper frowned. “But let’s not go too far down the rabbit hole. Stick to the evidence.” Quinn stepped back, narrowing her eyes at the already fading sigil. A part of her wanted to reach out and touch it, to feel its energy, but she resisted the urge. “Where’s the bone token?” “The what?” “The bone token,” she reiterated. “The entry requirement to this place. Without one, nobody should be here.” She caught Harper’s frown. “You honestly think some random drug dealer died here?” “Probably borrowed it,” he replied. “The Market’s been known to let people in for a price.” “Right. But it’s all coming together like a puzzle with missing pieces. This place vanishing every full moon, and now this? It’s all connected. We need a direction.” Quinn’s eyes roamed the area. A shadow shifted behind a cluster of crates. She turned her head abruptly. “Did you see that?” she asked, scanning the dim light, but Harper shook his head, dismissing the notion. “Your imagination’s running wild, Quinn.” “You don’t know how many times I’ve seen shadows come to life in this city.” Her fingers grazed the edge of her jacket. The sigil emanated a strange chill as Quinn searched for clarity, a name whispered in her thoughts. What did it mean? “Look,” she began, raising her voice to anchor her conviction. “We find out what’s going on at the Market, and we may find the answers we need. This is beyond drugs or gang fights.” “Okay, let’s say I go along with this,” Harper replied, crossing his arms. “Where do we even start?” Quinn’s brow furrowed deeper, contemplating the swirling possibilities. “Evie.” “Excuse me?” “Eva Kowalski,” she articulated. “The occult researcher. She knows more about these rituals and sigils than anyone. If our victim had dealings with the Market, she might uncover something.” Harper’s face twisted in concern. “You plan on dragging her into this mess? She’s not a field agent.” “Yet she specializes in this type of thing. Add a research assistant’s mind to this case, and we can illuminate the shadows. This is bigger than just us.” He sighed, dropping his arms and acknowledging the current logic. “Fine. We’ll visit the museum. But,” he stressed, “this doesn’t absolve you of protocol. I’m watching you.” Quinn gave him a tight smile, suppressing the urge to roll her eyes. “I wouldn’t expect anything less.” As they backed away from the crime scene, Quinn cast one last glance at the body. The sigil seemed to shimmer, teasing her from the brink of understanding. “It all falls back to this,” she murmured, breath hitching. She straightened her shoulders, ready to head up to the surface. The gears in her mind whirred, forming a web of connections. She couldn't shake the feeling that the veil of secrecy surrounding the Market had tangled with the tragedy beneath Camden. The truth lay somewhere, hidden in the cracks and shadows, waiting for her to uncover it. As they exited the station, the path toward Eve and the British Museum awaited—a threshold that could lead her to answers or further into the dark.
total_cost0.0009369

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.463
leniency0.927
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"tapestry"
count1
2
word"echoes"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"jaw clenched"
count1
5
word"macabre"
count1
6
word"profound"
count1
7
word"furrowed"
count2
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"tapestry"
2"echoes"
3"silence"
4"jaw clenched"
5"macabre"
6"profound"
7"furrowed"
8"etched"
9"echoed"
10"down her spine"
11"scanning"
12"chill"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences52
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords949
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount584
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective2
Harlow1
Quinn11
Tube1
Camden2
Harper9
Market1
Eve1
British1
Museum1
persons
0"Detective"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Harper"
4"Market"
5"Museum"
places
0"Eve"
globalScore0.558
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount949
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean27.11
std17.53
cv0.647
sampleLengths
082
145
225
313
425
510
639
736
823
961
1023
1149
1217
1335
142
1530
1616
1728
1818
1918
205
2123
2221
2334
2418
259
262
2729
2818
2928
3027
3118
3228
3321
3473
98.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"were strained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs114
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences74
ratio0.068
matches
0"The figure—a man, possibly in his thirties—lay twisted at an unnatural angle, blood pooling beneath him, a macabre halo of deep crimson on the cold tiles."
1"“But what’s a gang member doin’ in the Tube?” The place didn’t make sense for a drug deal; sound echoed too freely, easy for law enforcement to hear."
2"A shiver ran down her spine, and she tugged at the worn leather watch on her wrist—a habit formed from years of practice."
3"A weapon, a footprint—nothing."
4"As they exited the station, the path toward Eve and the British Museum awaited—a threshold that could lead her to answers or further into the dark."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount589
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.025466893039049237
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.011884550084889643
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean12.82
std7.55
cv0.588
sampleLengths
018
122
220
322
419
526
612
713
810
93
105
1120
126
134
1414
1525
163
1725
188
197
2016
2110
2228
2323
249
2514
2614
2716
284
2915
303
3114
3211
3320
344
352
365
3716
389
395
4011
4128
425
438
445
4518
465
4723
4817
494
85.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.527027027027027
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners39
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"Prematurely aged by stress, the"
ratio0.021
83.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences47
matches
0"She took a deep breath,"
1"His back straightened, and he"
2"he replied, rubbing the back"
3"she said, mystified"
4"She pointed to a strange"
5"she said, not willing to"
6"she muttered, grounding herself by"
7"She caught Harper’s frown"
8"She turned her head abruptly."
9"she asked, scanning the dim"
10"Her fingers grazed the edge"
11"she began, raising her voice"
12"He sighed, dropping his arms"
13"she murmured, breath hitching"
14"She straightened her shoulders, ready"
15"She couldn't shake the feeling"
ratio0.34
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences47
matches
0"The air hung heavy with"
1"Graffiti adorned the peeling walls"
2"The faint echoes of distant"
3"She took a deep breath,"
4"Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as"
5"The figure—a man, possibly in"
6"Quinn called, her voice steady"
7"His back straightened, and he"
8"he replied, rubbing the back"
9"Quinn bent over the body."
10"she said, mystified"
11"Harper stood, brushing dirt from"
12"Quinn’s brow furrowed."
13"She pointed to a strange"
14"Harper finished, glancing at her"
15"she said, not willing to"
16"The place didn’t make sense"
17"A shiver ran down her"
18"Harper gestured towards the darkness"
19"she muttered, grounding herself by"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Prematurely aged by stress, the victim’s features were strained, eyes wide open and glassy, as though frozen in profound terror."
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn called, her voice steady as she approached, surveying the scene"
1"she said, mystified"
2"she said, not willing to leave it at that"
3"she murmured, breath hitching"
76.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she articulated (articulate)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.488
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.146
79.1516%