| 91.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said cryptically [cryptically]" | | 1 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.378 | | leniency | 0.757 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.108 | |
| 72.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1258 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "warmly" | | 5 | "quickly" | | 6 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 4.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1258 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "pounding" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "racing" | | 12 | "flicked" | | 13 | "reverberated" | | 14 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.01% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1256 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.48% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1015 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.97 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 20 | | December | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Nyx | 10 | | Isolde | 11 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Blade" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.515 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 47.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed impossible" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 2 | "as if struggling to hold solidity" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.796 | | wordCount | 1256 | | matches | | 0 | "not what is, but what could be" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 31.4 | | std | 19.97 | | cv | 0.636 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 75 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 50 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 57 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 67 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 58 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 15 |
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| 92.58% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "was filled" | | 2 | "was carpeted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "were walking" | | 1 | "was calling" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.68% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1017 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.04129793510324484 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02261553588987217 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 11.85 | | std | 5.5 | | cv | 0.464 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 41.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3018867924528302 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Their leaves shimmered faintly, as" | | 1 | "She took a step forward," | | 2 | "She reached out, but Isolde’s" | | 3 | "She hadn’t noticed the faint" | | 4 | "They moved deeper, the path" | | 5 | "She glanced back at Nyx," | | 6 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 7 | "Her reflection stared back at" | | 8 | "She leaned closer, her breath" | | 9 | "She jerked back, her heart" | | 10 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 11 | "Her hand went to the" | | 12 | "Its body was lean and" | | 13 | "Its eyes glowed with the" | | 14 | "It sniffed the air, its" | | 15 | "It turned and vanished into" | | 16 | "They pressed on, the meadow" | | 17 | "They glowed faintly, the same" | | 18 | "She hesitated, glancing back at" |
| | ratio | 0.235 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened as Aurora" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly" | | 2 | "Aurora murmured, her gaze sweeping" | | 3 | "The trees here were taller," | | 4 | "Their leaves shimmered faintly, as" | | 5 | "The air smelled of honey" | | 6 | "Isolde said, her voice soft" | | 7 | "Aurora glanced back, but the" | | 8 | "Nyx’s violet eyes glowed faintly" | | 9 | "Aurora nodded, her hand brushing" | | 10 | "The metal was cool against" | | 11 | "She took a step forward," | | 12 | "The ground beneath her feet" | | 13 | "The path ahead was narrow," | | 14 | "Bioluminescent insects darted between the" | | 15 | "Aurora paused, crouching to examine" | | 16 | "She reached out, but Isolde’s" | | 17 | "Aurora straightened, nodding." | | 18 | "She hadn’t noticed the faint" | | 19 | "The sound echoed in her" |
| | ratio | 0.938 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 46.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened as Aurora stepped through the standing stones, her boots crunching on a carpet of wildflowers that shouldn’t have been blooming in December." | | 1 | "The ground beneath her feet felt oddly spongy, as if the earth itself was alive and breathing." | | 2 | "The path ahead was narrow, flanked by towering ferns that glowed with an inner light." | | 3 | "The trees began to thin, revealing a vast expanse of water that stretched as far as the eye could see." | | 4 | "The path continued along the shore, the trees thinning further until they were walking through a meadow of golden grass that swayed as if alive." | | 5 | "The pendant pulsed warmly against her chest, and she felt a strange pull, as if the creature recognized it." | | 6 | "They pressed on, the meadow giving way to a dense forest of towering trees with bark that glowed faintly blue." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora murmured, her gaze sweeping the clearing" | | 1 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her lavender eyes fixed on the water" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice calm" | | 5 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed, its warmth lingering" | | 6 | "Aurora said, her voice firm" | | 7 | "Isolde said, her voice reverent" |
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| 68.92% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.351 | | leniency | 0.703 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.162 | |