Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQWPSSZ4CMN0B1AC27GC89

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26.2s
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$0.002084
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, and Aurora Carter's eyes narrowed as she took in the unexpected visitor. Lucien Moreau stood in the dimly lit corridor, his platinum blond hair slicked back, and his charcoal suit immaculate, as always. For a moment, they just stared at each other, the tension between them palpable. It had been months since they'd last spoken, and the complicated history between them still lingered. Aurora's grip on the door handle tightened as she processed Lucien's sudden appearance. Her flat, above Silas' bar, was her sanctuary, and she didn't appreciate the unannounced intrusion. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" she asked, her tone even, but with a hint of wariness. Lucien's heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, locked onto hers, and he flashed a disarming smile. "I see you're still as charming as ever, Rory." He stepped forward, his movements fluid, and Aurora instinctively shifted to block his entry. The sound of Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, meowing from the flat behind her served as a reminder that she wasn't alone. Aurora's gaze flicked toward the cat, and she relaxed her stance, slightly. "What do you want, Lucien?" she repeated, her voice firm. "I need to talk to you about something," Lucien said, his eyes never leaving hers. "May I come in?" Aurora hesitated, unsure if she was ready to face whatever Lucien had come to discuss. Their past was complicated, filled with unresolved emotions and unspoken words. But, something in his expression, a hint of genuine concern, made her nod, and she stepped aside to let him in. As Lucien entered the flat, his eyes scanned the cluttered space, taking in the books, scrolls, and research notes scattered across every available surface. Ptolemy, sensing a stranger, darted under the couch, and Aurora smiled wryly. "Make yourself at home." Lucien's gaze returned to hers, and he raised an eyebrow. "You know I'm not here to make small talk, Rory." Aurora sighed, closing the door behind him, and gestured to the couch. "Sit down, then. What is it that you need to talk to me about?" Lucien settled onto the couch, his movements economical, and pulled out his ivory-handled cane from the side of his chair. The thin blade concealed within the cane's length glinted in the dim light, a reminder of the dangers that lurked in their world. "I've received some information that might interest you," he began, his voice low, measured. "About your... situation with Evan." Aurora's eyes snapped to his, a mix of emotions swirling within her. Evan, her ex, had been a toxic influence in her life, and the memories of their time together still lingered, painful and raw. "What about him?" she asked, her voice cautious. Lucien leaned forward, his eyes locked onto hers. "I have reason to believe he's involved with some... unsavory characters. People who might be looking to hurt you, Rory." Aurora's grip on the armchair tightened as she processed the information. She'd thought she'd left Evan's drama behind, but it seemed her past was still very much a part of her present. "What makes you think this?" Lucien's expression turned grim. "Let's just say I have my sources. People who owe me favors. And I've seen some disturbing patterns, Rory. Patterns that suggest Evan's in deep with some very bad people." The air in the flat seemed to thicken, heavy with unspoken words and unresolved emotions. Aurora's mind reeled as she considered Lucien's warning. She'd thought she'd closed the door on that chapter of her life, but it seemed some wounds still lingered, raw and open. As the silence between them stretched, Lucien's gaze never wavered from hers. Aurora felt the weight of his attention, the unspoken words hanging in the air like a challenge. She knew that she couldn't avoid this conversation forever, not with Lucien, not with herself. "Thank you for telling me," she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien's expression softened, and he leaned back into the couch. "I'm just glad I could help, Rory. You know I'll always have your back." The words hung in the air, heavy with meaning, as Aurora searched Lucien's face. She saw the sincerity in his eyes, the concern etched on his features, and something within her shifted. The complicated history between them, the attraction, the hurt, and the things left unsaid, all swirled together, creating a maelstrom of emotions. As the tension between them grew, Aurora realized that she wasn't sure if she was ready to face what lay between them, not yet. But, with Lucien's warning, she knew she couldn't avoid it forever. The question was, where would they go from here?
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.125
74.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount776
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount776
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"tension"
count2
1
word"palpable"
count1
2
word"processed"
count2
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count2
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count3
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"wavered"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"palpable"
2"processed"
3"sanctuary"
4"reminder"
5"flicked"
6"unspoken"
7"scanned"
8"eyebrow"
9"measured"
10"silence"
11"wavered"
12"weight"
13"whisper"
14"etched"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences53
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords775
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
19.49% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount613
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.61
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Carter1
Moreau1
Lucien16
Ptolemy2
Eva1
Evan2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Eva"
6"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.195
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount775
matches(empty)
40.88% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences53
matches
0"knew that she"
1"realized that she"
57.24% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean38.75
std13.58
cv0.35
sampleLengths
067
145
239
343
419
547
640
720
826
962
1043
1128
1237
1334
1445
1544
1614
1724
1854
1944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs107
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences53
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.76% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount201
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.05970149253731343
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.004975124378109453
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences53
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences53
mean14.62
std5.88
cv0.402
sampleLengths
016
121
214
316
413
515
617
716
823
921
1012
1110
1215
134
1415
1511
1621
1724
1812
194
2010
2110
2212
2314
2420
2523
2614
275
2812
2923
308
318
3220
3311
3421
355
364
3730
3815
398
4022
4112
4217
4315
4414
4510
4614
4714
4818
4922
66.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.39622641509433965
totalSentences53
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences44
matches
0"It had been months since"
1"Her flat, above"
2"she asked, her tone even,"
3"He stepped forward, his movements"
4"she repeated, her voice firm"
5"Their past was complicated, filled"
6"he began, his voice low,"
7"she asked, her voice cautious"
8"She'd thought she'd left Evan's"
9"She'd thought she'd closed the"
10"She knew that she couldn't"
11"she said finally, her voice"
12"She saw the sincerity in"
ratio0.295
28.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences44
matches
0"The door creaked open, and"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2"It had been months since"
3"Aurora's grip on the door"
4"Her flat, above"
5"she asked, her tone even,"
6"Lucien's heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
7"He stepped forward, his movements"
8"The sound of Ptolemy, Eva's"
9"Aurora's gaze flicked toward the"
10"she repeated, her voice firm"
11"Lucien said, his eyes never"
12"Aurora hesitated, unsure if she"
13"Their past was complicated, filled"
14"Ptolemy, sensing a stranger, darted"
15"Lucien's gaze returned to hers,"
16"Aurora sighed, closing the door"
17"Lucien settled onto the couch,"
18"The thin blade concealed within"
19"he began, his voice low,"
ratio0.864
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences44
matches
0"But, something in his expression,"
1"But, with Lucien's warning, she"
ratio0.045
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she repeated, her voice firm"
1"he began, his voice low, measured"
2"she asked, her voice cautious"
3"she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.125
76.5995%