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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQWQDS6CF6ZEDZHC11QQ88
Run Details
Model:
GPT-4o, May 13th (temp=0)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
43.4s
Cost:
$0.066025
Provider:
Azure
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
87.78%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
33.33%
Cliché density
(details)
98.23%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
0.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
58.12%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
99.63%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
96.96%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.09%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
68.15%
Sentence length variance
(details)
45.18%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
77.03%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.16%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
96.77%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
68.5144%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Aurora Carter stood at the
edge of The Fae Grove, the ancient oak standing stones casting long shadows in the moonlight.
The air was thick with
the scent of wildflowers, their vibrant colors muted in the darkness.
She clutched the Heartstone Pendant
around her neck, its faint inner glow providing little comfort.
She had come here for
a reason, though the specifics eluded her in the
oppressive
silence
of the night. The Grove was eerily quiet, the usual sounds of nocturnal creatures conspicuously absent.
Rory's breath fogged in the
cool air, and she pulled her jacket tighter around her. She took a step forward, the crunch of leaves underfoot sounding unnaturally loud. The standing stones
loomed
ahead, their ancient presence both a guide and a warning. As she moved deeper into the Grove, the
sense of
wrongness grew.
The trees seemed to close
in around her, their gnarled branches reaching out like skeletal fingers. She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—following her. But there was nothing, just the dark, empty path she had walked.
A rustling sound to her
left made her freeze.
She turned slowly, her heart
pounding
in her chest.
The shadows between the trees
shifted, but she saw nothing.
She took a deep breath
and continued walking, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any movement.
The pendant pulsed faintly against
her skin, a
reminder
of its purpose.
She had been given the
Heartstone by an unknown benefactor, its significance a mystery. But she knew it was important, that it held some connection to the Grove and the Hel portals.
She just had to find
out what.
A low whispering sound reached
her ears, like the wind through the trees, but more insistent, more deliberate.
She stopped again, straining to
hear.
The whispering grew louder, a
chorus of voices just beyond comprehension.
She turned in a slow
circle, trying to pinpoint the source, but it
seemed to
come from everywhere and nowhere. "Who's there?"
she called out, her voice
sounding small and uncertain in the vast darkness. The whispering stopped abruptly, leaving an
oppressive
silence
in its wake. Rory's
pulse
quickened
, and she took a hesitant step forward. The path ahead was barely visible, the moonlight filtering through the dense canopy above.
She could see the faint
outline of the standing stones in the distance, their presence both a
beacon
and a threat. As she walked, the feeling of being watched grew stronger.
She could almost feel eyes
on her, tracking her every move.
She glanced around, her breath
coming in short, sharp bursts. The shadows
seemed to
shift and
dance
at the edge of her vision, but when she turned to look, there was nothing there. A sudden
chill
ran
down her spine
, and she shivered. The air around her
seemed to
grow colder, the
warmth
of the pendant the only source of heat.
She quickened her pace, her
footsteps
echoing
in the stillness. The standing stones were closer now, their ancient forms
looming
larger with each step. The whispering started again, louder this time, more insistent. Rory's heart
raced
, and she broke into a run, the pendant bouncing against her chest. The stones were just ahead, their presence both a promise and a threat.
She reached the clearing and
skidded to a stop, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The Grove was silent once more, the whispering gone. Rory looked around, her eyes wide with fear. The standing stones cast long shadows in the moonlight, their ancient forms seeming to
pulse
with a life of their own. She took a step forward, the pendant glowing faintly in the darkness. A movement at the edge of her vision made her spin around.
She saw nothing, just the
dark, empty clearing. But the feeling of being watched was stronger than ever, a
palpable
presence that made her skin crawl. She took another step forward, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any sign of movement. The whispering started again, louder and more insistent. Rory's
heart pounded in her chest
, and she clutched the pendant
tightly
. The voices
seemed to
come from all around her, a
cacophony
of sound that made her head spin.
She took a deep breath
and stepped into the center of the clearing, the standing stones towering over her. The whispering grew louder, the voices almost deafening. Rory's vision blurred, and she stumbled, her knees hitting the ground. She looked up at the stones, their ancient forms seeming to
pulse
with a life of their own. The pendant glowed brightly, its
warmth
a
stark
contrast to the cold air around her. "Show yourself!"
she shouted, her voice echoing in the stillness
. The whispering stopped abruptly, and
the silence was deafening
. Rory's breath came in short, sharp bursts, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She looked around, her eyes wide with fear. The shadows
seemed to
shift and
dance
at the edge of her vision, but when she turned to look, there was nothing there. A low, guttural growl reached her ears, and she spun around, her eyes searching the darkness. The growl grew louder, more insistent, and she took a step back, her heart
racing
. The shadows
seemed to
close in around her, their presence a
tangible
force. "Who's there?"
she called out, her voice
trembling. The growl stopped, and the
silence
was
oppressive
.
Rory's breath fogged in the
cool air, and she pulled her jacket tighter around her. She took a step forward, the pendant glowing brightly in the darkness. The standing stones
loomed
ahead, their ancient forms both a guide and a warning. As she moved deeper into the clearing, the
sense of
wrongness grew.
The trees seemed to close
in around her, their gnarled branches reaching out like skeletal fingers. She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—following her. But there was nothing, just the dark, empty path she had walked.
A rustling sound to her
left made her freeze.
She turned slowly, her heart
pounding
in her chest.
The shadows between the trees
shifted, but she saw nothing.
She took a deep breath
and continued walking, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any movement.
The pendant pulsed faintly against
her skin, a
reminder
of its purpose.
She had been given the
Heartstone by an unknown benefactor, its significance a mystery. But she knew it was important, that it held some connection to the Grove and the Hel portals.
She just had to find
out what.
A low whispering sound reached
her ears, like the wind through the trees, but more insistent, more deliberate.
She stopped again, straining to
hear.
The whispering grew louder, a
chorus of voices just beyond comprehension.
She turned in a slow
circle, trying to pinpoint the source, but it
seemed to
come from everywhere and nowhere. "Who's there?"
she called out, her voice
sounding small and uncertain in the vast darkness. The whispering stopped abruptly, leaving an
oppressive
silence
in its wake. Rory's
pulse
quickened
, and she took a hesitant step forward. The path ahead was barely visible, the moonlight filtering through the dense canopy above.
She could see the faint
outline of the standing stones in the distance, their presence both a
beacon
and a threat. As she walked, the feeling of being watched grew stronger.
She could almost feel eyes
on her, tracking her every move.
She glanced around, her breath
coming in short, sharp bursts. The shadows
seemed to
shift and
dance
at the edge of her vision, but when she turned to look, there was nothing there. A sudden
chill
ran
down her spine
, and she shivered. The air around her
seemed to
grow colder, the
warmth
of the pendant the only source of heat.
She quickened her pace, her
footsteps
echoing
in the stillness. The standing stones were closer now, their ancient forms
looming
larger with each step. The whispering started again, louder this time, more insistent. Rory's heart
raced
, and she broke into a run, the pendant bouncing against her chest. The stones were just ahead, their presence both a promise and a threat.
She reached the clearing and
skidded to a stop, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The Grove was silent once more, the whispering gone. Rory looked around, her eyes wide with fear. The standing stones cast long shadows in the moonlight, their ancient forms seeming to
pulse
with a life of their own. She took a step forward, the pendant glowing faintly in the darkness. A movement at the edge of her vision made her spin around.
She saw nothing, just the
dark, empty clearing. But the feeling of being watched was stronger than ever, a
palpable
presence that made her skin crawl. She took another step forward, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any sign of movement. The whispering started again, louder and more insistent. Rory's
heart pounded in her chest
, and she clutched the pendant
tightly
. The voices
seemed to
come from all around her, a
cacophony
of sound that made her head spin.
She took a deep breath
and stepped into the center of the clearing, the standing stones towering over her. The whispering grew louder, the voices almost deafening. Rory's vision blurred, and she stumbled, her knees hitting the ground. She looked up at the stones, their ancient forms seeming to
pulse
with a life of their own. The pendant glowed brightly, its
warmth
a
stark
contrast to the cold air around her. "Show yourself!"
she shouted, her voice echoing in the stillness
. The whispering stopped abruptly, and
the silence was deafening
. Rory's breath came in short, sharp bursts, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She looked around, her eyes wide with fear. The shadows
seemed to
shift and
dance
at the edge of her vision, but when she turned to look, there was nothing there. A low, guttural growl reached her ears, and she spun around, her eyes searching the darkness. The growl grew louder, more insistent, and she took a step back, her heart
racing
. The shadows
seemed to
close in around her, their presence a
tangible
force. "Who's there?"
she called out, her voice
trembling. The growl stopped, and the
silence
was
oppressive
.
Rory's breath fogged in the
cool air, and she pulled her jacket tighter around her. She took a step forward, the pendant glowing brightly in the darkness. The standing stones
loomed
ahead, their ancient forms both a guide and a warning. As she moved deeper into the clearing, the
sense of
wrongness grew.
The trees seemed to close
in around her, their gnarled branches reaching out like skeletal fingers. She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—following her. But there was nothing, just the dark, empty path she had walked.
A rustling sound to her
left made her freeze.
She turned slowly, her heart
pounding
in her chest.
The shadows between the trees
shifted, but she saw nothing.
She took a deep breath
and continued walking, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any movement.
The pendant pulsed faintly against
her skin, a
reminder
of its purpose.
She had been given the
Heartstone by an unknown benefactor, its significance a mystery. But she knew it was important, that it held some connection to the Grove and the Hel portals.
She just had to find
out what.
A low whispering sound reached
her ears, like the wind through the trees, but more insistent, more deliberate.
She stopped again, straining to
hear.
The whispering grew louder, a
chorus of voices just beyond comprehension.
She turned in a slow
circle, trying to pinpoint the source, but it
seemed to
come from everywhere and nowhere. "Who's there?"
she called out, her voice
sounding small and uncertain in the vast darkness. The whispering stopped abruptly, leaving an
oppressive
silence
in its wake. Rory's
pulse
quickened
, and she took a hesitant step forward. The path ahead was barely visible, the moonlight filtering through the dense canopy above.
She could see the faint
outline of the standing stones in the distance, their presence both a
beacon
and a threat. As she walked, the feeling of being watched grew stronger.
She could almost feel eyes
on her, tracking her every move.
She glanced around, her breath
coming in short, sharp bursts. The shadows
seemed to
shift and
dance
at the edge of her vision, but when she turned to look, there was nothing there. A sudden
chill
ran
down her spine
, and she shivered. The air around her
seemed to
grow colder, the
warmth
of the pendant the only source of heat.
She quickened her pace, her
footsteps
echoing
in the stillness. The standing stones were closer now, their ancient forms
looming
larger with each step. The whispering started again, louder this time, more insistent. Rory's heart
raced
, and she broke into a run, the pendant bouncing against her chest. The stones were just ahead, their presence both a promise and a threat.
She reached the clearing and
skidded to a stop, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The Grove was silent once more, the whispering gone. Rory looked around, her eyes wide with fear. The standing stones cast long shadows in the moonlight, their ancient forms seeming to
pulse
with a life of their own. She took a step forward, the pendant glowing faintly in the darkness. A movement at the edge of her vision made her spin around.
She saw nothing, just the
dark, empty clearing. But the feeling of being watched was stronger than ever, a
palpable
presence that made her skin crawl. She took another step forward, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any sign of movement. The whispering started again, louder and more insistent. Rory's
heart pounded in her chest
, and she clutched the pendant
tightly
. The voices
seemed to
come from all around her, a
cacophony
of sound that made her head spin.
She took a deep breath
and stepped into the center of the clearing, the standing stones towering over her. The whispering grew louder, the voices almost deafening. Rory's vision blurred, and she stumbled, her knees hitting the ground. She looked up at the stones, their ancient forms seeming to
pulse
with a life of their own. The pendant glowed brightly, its
warmth
a
stark
contrast to the cold air around her. "Show yourself!"
she shouted, her voice echoing in the stillness
. The whispering stopped abruptly, and
the silence was deafening
. Rory's breath came in short, sharp bursts, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She looked around, her eyes wide with fear. The shadows
seemed to
shift and
dance
at the edge of her vision, but when she turned to look, there was nothing there. A low, guttural growl reached her ears, and she spun around, her eyes searching the darkness. The growl grew louder, more insistent, and she took a step back, her heart
racing
. The shadows
seemed to
close in around her, their presence a
tangible
force. "Who's there?"
she called out, her voice
trembling. The growl stopped, and the
silence
was
oppressive
.
Rory's breath fogged in the
cool air, and she pulled her jacket tighter around her. She took a step forward, the pendant glowing brightly in the darkness. The standing stones
loomed
ahead, their ancient forms both a guide and a warning. As she moved deeper into the clearing, the
sense of
wrongness grew.
The trees seemed to close
in around her, their gnarled branches reaching out like skeletal fingers. She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—following her. But there was nothing, just the dark, empty path she had walked.
A rustling sound to her
left made her freeze.
She turned slowly, her heart
pounding
in her chest.
The shadows between the trees
shifted, but she saw nothing.
She took a deep breath
and continued walking, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any movement.
The pendant pulsed faintly against
her skin, a
reminder
of its purpose.
She had been given the
Heartstone by an unknown benefactor, its significance a mystery. But she knew it was important, that it held some connection to the Grove and the Hel portals.
She just had to find
out what.
A low whispering sound reached
her ears, like the wind through the trees, but more insistent, more deliberate.
She stopped again, straining to
hear.
The whispering grew louder, a
chorus of voices just beyond comprehension.
She turned in a slow
circle, trying to pinpoint the source, but it
seemed to
come from everywhere and nowhere. "Who's there?"
she called out, her voice
sounding small and uncertain in the vast darkness. The whispering stopped abruptly, leaving an
oppressive
silence
in its wake. Rory's
pulse
quickened
, and she took a hesitant step forward. The path ahead was barely visible, the moonlight filtering through the dense canopy above.
She could see the faint
outline of the standing stones in the distance, their presence both a
beacon
and a threat. As she walked, the feeling of being watched grew stronger.
She could almost feel eyes
on her, tracking her every move.
She glanced around, her breath
coming in short, sharp bursts. The shadows
seemed to
shift and
dance
at the edge of her vision, but when she turned to look, there was nothing there. A sudden
chill
ran
down her spine
, and she shivered. The air around her
seemed to
grow colder, the
warmth
of the pendant the only source of heat.
She quickened her pace, her
footsteps
echoing
in the stillness. The standing stones were closer now, their ancient forms
looming
larger with each step. The whispering started again, louder this time, more insistent. Rory's heart
raced
, and she broke into a run, the pendant bouncing against her chest. The stones were just ahead, their presence both a promise and a threat.
She reached the clearing and
skidded to a stop, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The Grove was silent once more, the whispering gone. Rory looked around, her eyes wide with fear. The standing stones cast long shadows in the moonlight, their ancient forms seeming to
pulse
with a life of their own. She took a step forward, the pendant glowing faintly in the darkness. A movement at the edge of her vision made her spin around.
She saw nothing, just the
dark, empty clearing. But the feeling of being watched was stronger than ever, a
palpable
presence that made her skin crawl. She took another step forward, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any sign of movement. The whispering started again, louder and more insistent. Rory's
heart pounded in her chest
, and she clutched the pendant
tightly
. The voices
seemed to
come from all around her, a
cacophony
of sound that made her head spin.
She took a deep breath
and stepped into the center of the clearing, the standing stones towering over her. The whispering grew louder, the voices almost deafening. Rory's vision blurred, and she stumbled, her knees hitting the ground. She looked up at the stones, their ancient forms seeming to
pulse
with a life of their own. The pendant glowed brightly, its
warmth
a
stark
contrast to the cold air around her. "Show yourself!"
she shouted, her voice echoing in the stillness
. The whispering stopped abruptly, and
the silence was deafening
. Rory's breath came in short, sharp bursts, her heart
pounding
in her chest. She looked around, her eyes wide with fear. The shadows
seemed to
shift and
dance
at the edge of her vision, but when she turned to look, there was nothing there. A low, guttural growl
created_at
"2026-02-19T10:42:21.757Z"
2/19/2026, 10:42:21 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
11
tagDensity
1
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
87.78%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
3273
totalAiIsmAdverbs
8
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
4
1
adverb
"tightly"
count
4
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"tightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
3273
totalAiIsms
130
found
0
word
"oppressive"
count
8
1
word
"silence"
count
12
2
word
"loomed"
count
4
3
word
"sense of"
count
4
4
word
"pounding"
count
8
5
word
"pulsed"
count
4
6
word
"reminder"
count
4
7
word
"pulse"
count
12
8
word
"quickened"
count
8
9
word
"beacon"
count
4
10
word
"dance"
count
8
11
word
"chill"
count
4
12
word
"down her spine"
count
4
13
word
"warmth"
count
8
14
word
"footsteps"
count
4
15
word
"echoing"
count
8
16
word
"looming"
count
4
17
word
"raced"
count
4
18
word
"palpable"
count
4
19
word
"cacophony"
count
4
20
word
"stark"
count
4
21
word
"racing"
count
3
22
word
"tangible"
count
3
highlights
0
"oppressive"
1
"silence"
2
"loomed"
3
"sense of"
4
"pounding"
5
"pulsed"
6
"reminder"
7
"pulse"
8
"quickened"
9
"beacon"
10
"dance"
11
"chill"
12
"down her spine"
13
"warmth"
14
"footsteps"
15
"echoing"
16
"looming"
17
"raced"
18
"palpable"
19
"cacophony"
20
"stark"
21
"racing"
22
"tangible"
33.33%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
9
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
4
1
label
"silence was deafening"
count
4
2
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"the silence was deafening"
2
"The air was thick with"
98.23%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
8
narrationSentences
249
matches
0
"e with fear"
1
"e with fear"
2
"e with fear"
3
"e with fear"
4
"e with fear"
5
"e with fear"
6
"e with fear"
7
"e with fear"
0.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
27
narrationSentences
249
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
249
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
23
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
3261
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
11
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
51
wordCount
3239
uniqueNames
7
maxNameDensity
0.86
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Grove"
discoveredNames
Carter
1
Fae
1
Grove
11
Heartstone
5
Pendant
1
Hel
4
Rory
28
persons
0
"Carter"
1
"Pendant"
2
"Rory"
places
0
"Fae"
1
"Grove"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
248
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
3261
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
249
matches
(empty)
58.12%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
72
mean
45.29
std
16.01
cv
0.353
sampleLengths
0
71
1
55
2
51
3
45
4
51
5
55
6
15
7
56
8
54
9
52
10
52
11
50
12
54
13
57
14
52
15
10
16
53
17
44
18
8
19
49
20
51
21
45
22
51
23
55
24
15
25
56
26
54
27
52
28
52
29
50
30
54
31
57
32
52
33
10
34
53
35
44
36
8
37
49
38
51
39
45
40
51
41
55
42
15
43
56
44
54
45
52
46
52
47
50
48
54
49
57
99.63%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
249
matches
0
"been given"
1
"been given"
2
"been given"
3
"been given"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
4
totalVerbs
542
matches
0
"was deafening"
1
"was deafening"
2
"was deafening"
3
"was deafening"
96.96%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
8
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
4
totalSentences
249
ratio
0.016
matches
0
"She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—following her."
1
"She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—following her."
2
"She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—following her."
3
"She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—following her."
94.09%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
3251
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
152
adverbRatio
0.04675484466318056
lyAdverbCount
42
lyAdverbRatio
0.012919101814826207
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
249
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
68.15%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
249
mean
13.1
std
4.2
cv
0.32
sampleLengths
0
21
1
16
2
15
3
19
4
13
5
15
6
13
7
14
8
12
9
16
10
11
11
12
12
9
13
9
14
10
15
17
16
12
17
14
18
18
19
7
20
18
21
6
22
11
23
20
24
15
25
11
26
10
27
14
28
21
29
10
30
11
31
10
32
23
33
10
34
18
35
10
36
14
37
9
38
15
39
13
40
15
41
9
42
8
43
21
44
12
45
12
46
8
47
18
48
16
49
8
45.18%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
12
diversityRatio
0.03614457831325301
totalSentences
249
uniqueOpeners
9
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
249
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
77.03%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
89
totalSentences
249
matches
0
"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
1
"She had come here for"
2
"She took a step forward,"
3
"She glanced over her shoulder,"
4
"She turned slowly, her heart"
5
"She took a deep breath"
6
"She had been given the"
7
"She just had to find"
8
"She stopped again, straining to"
9
"She turned in a slow"
10
"she called out, her voice"
11
"She could see the faint"
12
"She could almost feel eyes"
13
"She glanced around, her breath"
14
"She quickened her pace, her"
15
"She reached the clearing and"
16
"She took a step forward,"
17
"She saw nothing, just the"
18
"She took another step forward,"
19
"She took a deep breath"
ratio
0.357
0.16%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
229
totalSentences
249
matches
0
"Aurora Carter stood at the"
1
"The air was thick with"
2
"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
3
"She had come here for"
4
"The Grove was eerily quiet,"
5
"Rory's breath fogged in the"
6
"She took a step forward,"
7
"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
8
"The trees seemed to close"
9
"She glanced over her shoulder,"
10
"A rustling sound to her"
11
"She turned slowly, her heart"
12
"The shadows between the trees"
13
"She took a deep breath"
14
"The pendant pulsed faintly against"
15
"She had been given the"
16
"She just had to find"
17
"A low whispering sound reached"
18
"She stopped again, straining to"
19
"The whispering grew louder, a"
ratio
0.92
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
249
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
96.77%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
186
technicalSentenceCount
12
matches
0
"She took a deep breath and continued walking, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any movement."
1
"But the feeling of being watched was stronger than ever, a palpable presence that made her skin crawl."
2
"She took another step forward, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any sign of movement."
3
"She took a deep breath and continued walking, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any movement."
4
"But the feeling of being watched was stronger than ever, a palpable presence that made her skin crawl."
5
"She took another step forward, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any sign of movement."
6
"She took a deep breath and continued walking, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any movement."
7
"But the feeling of being watched was stronger than ever, a palpable presence that made her skin crawl."
8
"She took another step forward, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any sign of movement."
9
"She took a deep breath and continued walking, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any movement."
10
"But the feeling of being watched was stronger than ever, a palpable presence that made her skin crawl."
11
"She took another step forward, her eyes darting around, trying to catch any sign of movement."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
11
uselessAdditionCount
11
matches
0
"she called out, her voice sounding small and uncertain in the vast darkness"
1
"she shouted, her voice echoing in the stillness"
2
"she called out, her voice trembling"
3
"she called out, her voice sounding small and uncertain in the vast darkness"
4
"she shouted, her voice echoing in the stillness"
5
"she called out, her voice trembling"
6
"she called out, her voice sounding small and uncertain in the vast darkness"
7
"she shouted, her voice echoing in the stillness"
8
"she called out, her voice trembling"
9
"she called out, her voice sounding small and uncertain in the vast darkness"
10
"she shouted, her voice echoing in the stillness"
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
11
fancyTags
0
"she called out (call out)"
1
"she shouted (shout)"
2
"she called out (call out)"
3
"she called out (call out)"
4
"she shouted (shout)"
5
"she called out (call out)"
6
"she called out (call out)"
7
"she shouted (shout)"
8
"she called out (call out)"
9
"she called out (call out)"
10
"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences
11
tagDensity
1
leniency
1
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
1
68.5144%