Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQWTRAVVS6QP4Y9AWPE03K

Run Details

Duration:
16.1s
Cost:
$0.002100
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The night air was still and heavy, weighing down on Aurora's shoulders as she stepped into the Fae Grove. Moonlight filtered through the ancient oaks, casting eerie shadows across the mossy ground. Rory's boots crunched on the fallen leaves as she made her way deeper into the grove, the pendant around her neck pulsing faintly with warmth. She had come here with purpose, a need to uncover the truth about her mysterious benefactor and the strange powers of the heartstone artifact. A faint rustling in the bushes made her freeze, her heart pounding. Her eyes darted around, searching the darkness. Nothing seemed out of place, yet the hairs on the back of her neck prickled with unease. Slowly, she continued onwards, hyper-aware of every sound, every movement. As she neared the center of the grove, the air seemed to grow thicker, harder to breathe. The pendant throbbed more insistently against her chest, as if warning her of some unseen danger. Rory paused, straining to hear any telltale sounds over the pounding of her own pulse. A faint whisper, too faint to make out the words, drifted through the trees. Rory's head snapped towards the sound, every muscle tensing. She could feel something—or someone—watching her, the weight of their gaze heavy on the back of her neck. Forcing herself to keep moving, Rory made her way to the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove. The pendant flashed briefly, drawing her attention to a flickering light in the distance. Narrowing her eyes, she could just make out a pale, humanoid figure hovering near the edge of the trees. Rory's breath caught in her throat as the figure seemed to drift closer, its movements unnaturally fluid and graceful. She strained to make out any distinguishing features, but the shadows concealed it, and the longer she stared, the more the outline seemed to warp and shift. Unnerved, Rory turned her gaze away, only to catch a flash of movement in her peripheral vision. Whirling around, she scanned the grove, muscles coiled and ready to run. But there was nothing—no sign of the strange figure, no other movement in the stillness. Rory's heart raced as she slowly backed towards the standing stones, her hand clutching the pendant tightly. The air around her felt thick and oppressive, as if the very forest itself was closing in, suffocating her. A soft rustling came from behind, and Rory spun around, her breath catching in her throat. A towering figure stood among the standing stones, shrouded in shadow. Rory froze, her mind racing to make sense of what she was seeing. The figure seemed to shift and swell, its form blurring at the edges. Rory stared, transfixed, as it slowly drifted towards her, its movements graceful and unnatural. A chill ran down her spine, and she fought the urge to turn and flee. As the figure drew closer, Rory caught a glimpse of a pale, otherworldly face, features indistinct but radiating an unsettling malevolence. She opened her mouth to speak, to demand answers, but the words died on her lips, choked by the thick, oppressive air. The pendant around her neck flashed, its crimson glow illuminating the figure for a brief moment. Rory's eyes widened in horror as she caught sight of long, spindly limbs and a gaping maw filled with sharp teeth. The image seared itself into her mind, and she stumbled backwards, heart pounding. Turning, she broke into a sprint, her boots pounding against the soft earth as she fled through the grove. The air seemed to press in around her, making it harder to breathe, harder to run. Branches tore at her clothes, and the faint whispers that had earlier drifted through the trees now seemed to surround her, a cacophony of voices calling out in an unknown tongue. Rory risked a glance over her shoulder, and her blood ran cold. The shadowy figure was keeping pace, its movements fluid and effortless. She pushed herself harder, lungs burning, but the thing seemed to be closing in, drawing ever nearer. As she neared the edge of the grove, Rory's foot caught on an exposed root, and she tumbled to the ground, the impact knocking the breath from her lungs. She struggled to push herself up, to keep running, but her limbs felt heavy and unresponsive. The figure loomed over her, its pale, inhuman face mere inches from her own. Rory stared up at it, paralyzed by fear, the pendant around her neck pulsing with a frantic, warning glow. The creature's gaping maw opened, and a guttural, inhuman sound rumbled forth, sending a shiver down her spine. Rory squeezed her eyes shut, bracing for the inevitable, but the attack never came. Instead, a deafening crack echoed through the grove, and the weight of the creature's presence vanished. Cautiously, Rory opened her eyes, gasping at the sight before her. The figure was gone, and in its place stood a towering oak tree, its branches twisting and writhing as if alive. Rory stared, wide-eyed, as the tree seemed to pulse with a faint, otherworldly energy. The pendant around her neck grew warm, pulsing in time with the tree's movements. Slowly, Rory pushed herself to her feet, her legs trembling. She cast a wary glance around the grove, half-expecting the creature to reappear, but the forest was still and silent, save for the faint rustling of leaves. Clutching the pendant tightly, Rory made her way out of the grove, her mind racing with questions and a growing sense of dread. Whatever she had encountered, it was not of this world, and the power of the heartstone pendant had somehow been the key to her survival. As she emerged from the trees, Rory glanced back at the Fae Grove, a shiver running down her spine. The ancient oaks seemed to loom over her, their branches casting long, foreboding shadows. She hurried away, her steps quickening with each passing moment, the pendant's warmth a comfort against the chill of the night.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:42:25.168Z" 2/19/2026, 10:42:25 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
60.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1009
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count4
1
adverb"tightly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"tightly"
2"very"
3"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1009
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pounding"
count4
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"oppressive"
count2
10
word"racing"
count2
11
word"sense of"
count2
12
word"transfixed"
count1
13
word"chill"
count2
14
word"down her spine"
count3
15
word"otherworldly"
count2
16
word"maw"
count2
17
word"cacophony"
count1
18
word"effortless"
count1
19
word"loomed"
count1
20
word"echoed"
count1
21
word"foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pounding"
2"throbbed"
3"pulse"
4"whisper"
5"could feel"
6"weight"
7"scanned"
8"raced"
9"oppressive"
10"racing"
11"sense of"
12"transfixed"
13"chill"
14"down her spine"
15"otherworldly"
16"maw"
17"cacophony"
18"effortless"
19"loomed"
20"echoed"
21"foreboding"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"eyes widened"
82.63% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences59
matches
0"y with warmth"
1"d with unease"
2"d in horror"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences59
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1003
ratio0
matches(empty)
41.67% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Slowly, she continued onwards, hyper-aware of every sound, every movement."
45.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1003
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Fae2
Grove2
Rory21
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.453
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if warning her of some unseen danger"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1003
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
2.20% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean45.59
std7.19
cv0.158
sampleLengths
032
149
246
348
441
555
646
744
836
940
1042
1143
1250
1366
1440
1545
1651
1741
1849
1937
2048
2154
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"was gone"
87.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was closing"
1"was seeing"
2"was keeping"
46.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences59
ratio0.034
matches
0"She could feel something—or someone—watching her, the weight of their gaze heavy on the back of her neck."
1"But there was nothing—no sign of the strange figure, no other movement in the stillness."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1009
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.031714568880079286
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.014866204162537165
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
58.48% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean17
std5.04
cv0.296
sampleLengths
019
113
225
324
412
57
617
710
817
916
1015
1114
129
1318
1422
1514
1619
1719
1827
1917
2012
2115
2217
2319
2416
2511
2613
2713
2814
2915
3021
3122
3216
3321
3413
3519
3616
3731
3812
3911
4017
4129
4216
4314
4419
4518
4614
4716
4811
4921
54.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3389830508474576
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners20
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences59
matches
0"Slowly, she continued onwards, hyper-aware"
1"Instead, a deafening crack echoed"
2"Cautiously, Rory opened her eyes,"
3"Slowly, Rory pushed herself to"
ratio0.068
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences59
matches
0"She had come here with"
1"Her eyes darted around, searching"
2"She could feel something—or someone—watching"
3"She strained to make out"
4"She opened her mouth to"
5"She pushed herself harder, lungs"
6"She struggled to push herself"
7"She cast a wary glance"
8"She hurried away, her steps"
ratio0.153
87.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences59
matches
0"The night air was still"
1"Moonlight filtered through the ancient"
2"Rory's boots crunched on the"
3"She had come here with"
4"A faint rustling in the"
5"Her eyes darted around, searching"
6"Nothing seemed out of place,"
7"The pendant throbbed more insistently"
8"Rory paused, straining to hear"
9"A faint whisper, too faint"
10"Rory's head snapped towards the"
11"She could feel something—or someone—watching"
12"The pendant flashed briefly, drawing"
13"Rory's breath caught in her"
14"She strained to make out"
15"Rory's heart raced as she"
16"The air around her felt"
17"A soft rustling came from"
18"A towering figure stood among"
19"Rory froze, her mind racing"
ratio0.746
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.61% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The pendant throbbed more insistently against her chest, as if warning her of some unseen danger."
1"Forcing herself to keep moving, Rory made her way to the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove."
2"The air around her felt thick and oppressive, as if the very forest itself was closing in, suffocating her."
3"Rory froze, her mind racing to make sense of what she was seeing."
4"Turning, she broke into a sprint, her boots pounding against the soft earth as she fled through the grove."
5"Branches tore at her clothes, and the faint whispers that had earlier drifted through the trees now seemed to surround her, a cacophony of voices calling out in…"
6"The figure was gone, and in its place stood a towering oak tree, its branches twisting and writhing as if alive."
7"Clutching the pendant tightly, Rory made her way out of the grove, her mind racing with questions and a growing sense of dread."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
72.4723%