| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1291 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1291 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 183 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 185 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 19 | | markdownWords | 45 | | totalWords | 1298 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "felt" | | 1 | "Not now" | | 2 | "Not here." | | 3 | "It warns against what wishes you harm." | | 4 | "Wrong." | | 5 | "Cut clean. Respect the root." | | 6 | "feeling" | | 7 | "stay" | | 8 | "rest" | | 9 | "belong" | | 10 | "move" | | 11 | "Stay." | | 12 | "We have stories." | | 13 | "We have songs." | | 14 | "We have" | | 15 | "for you." | | 16 | "Run, little bird." | | 17 | "We know your nest." | | 18 | "We know your cage." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1286 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.78 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 7 | | Eva | 2 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 10 | | Metal | 1 | | June | 1 | | Evan | 4 | | London | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Metal" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "June" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 96.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed thicker now, clotting like spilled oil" | | 1 | "seemed muted as if the Grove was holding its breath again" |
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| 45.92% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.541 | | wordCount | 1298 | | matches | | 0 | "not discordant, but wrong, like hearing a song played backwards through water" | | 1 | "Not the melody, but the *feeling*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 20.94 | | std | 17.56 | | cv | 0.839 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 50 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 49 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 241 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 185 | | ratio | 0.076 | | matches | | 0 | "Time didn't work right here — Eva had warned her — but Eva hadn't mentioned how it *felt*." | | 1 | "Dymas gave it to her — or rather, left it wrapped in silk on her windowsill — with instructions she'd memorised and promptly tried to forget." | | 2 | "London's hum — distant traffic, the night bus groan, someone's music through an open window — vanished." | | 3 | "Each bore carvings she'd tried to decipher on her last visit — spirals, animals, phases of the moon." | | 4 | "The smell hit her — damp earth and something sweet underneath, like rotting fruit left too long in the sun." | | 5 | "Animals move with purpose — a crack of twigs, the rustle of undergrowth." | | 6 | "One in particular — near the northernmost stone — didn't just lack light." | | 7 | "University, law books, Evan's hands gripping her wrists too tight — all of it belonged to another person." | | 8 | "Notes twisted in ways that hurt her ears — not discordant, but wrong, like hearing a song played backwards through water." | | 9 | "She caught fragments that almost made sense — *stay*, *rest*, *belong* — but the rest was nonsense poetry that curled inside her skull." | | 10 | "Through her t-shirt, the Heartstone glowed with a deep, bloody light, pulsing in time with—" | | 11 | "Its face was a blur of shifting features — a nose here, an eye there, never settling." | | 12 | "London's sounds returned — distant sirens, a plane overhead, life continuing unaware." | | 13 | "Worse — it knew how to hurt her." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 369 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "resting against cold stone." |
| | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.02981029810298103 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005420054200542005 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 185 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 185 | | mean | 7.02 | | std | 5.16 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 67.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.4540540540540541 | | totalSentences | 185 | | uniqueOpeners | 84 | |
| 90.70% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "More like fabric dragging across" | | 1 | "Then rising, weaving into a" | | 2 | "Even her own breathing seemed" | | 3 | "Then the whispering started." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 94.83% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "They'd grown into themselves, bark" | | 1 | "She came for the mushrooms." | | 2 | "*It warns against what wishes" | | 3 | "She shook her head." | | 4 | "She followed a path of" | | 5 | "Her torch beam cut through" | | 6 | "She knelt by the first" | | 7 | "Her breath fogged the air." | | 8 | "It shouldn't be that cold." | | 9 | "She stood slowly, basket hooked" | | 10 | "It drank it." | | 11 | "Her pulse beat in her" | | 12 | "Her own voice sounded small," | | 13 | "She forced herself back to" | | 14 | "Her hands trembled as she" | | 15 | "It sounded old." | | 16 | "Her throat tightened." | | 17 | "She'd heard this before." | | 18 | "His whistling while her split" | | 19 | "It pressed against her eardrums," |
| | ratio | 0.313 | |
| 58.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 118 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "The door to the Fae" | | 1 | "Rory paused on the threshold," | | 2 | "They'd grown into themselves, bark" | | 3 | "Time didn't work right here" | | 4 | "She came for the mushrooms." | | 5 | "That's what she told herself." | | 6 | "Silas needed hen-of-the-woods for some" | | 7 | "Truth was, she needed air" | | 8 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 9 | "The Heartstone had been quiet" | | 10 | "Dymas gave it to her" | | 11 | "*It warns against what wishes" | | 12 | "Rory stepped inside." | | 13 | "Sound changed first." | | 14 | "London's hum — distant traffic," | | 15 | "Nothing but moonlight through branches," | | 16 | "She shook her head." | | 17 | "Paranoia was a luxury she" | | 18 | "The basket swung from her" | | 19 | "She followed a path of" |
| | ratio | 0.803 | |
| 68.03% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it throbbed against her" | | 1 | "Now they seemed to twist" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 69.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nothing but moonlight through branches, casting shadows that stretched too long." | | 1 | "Notes twisted in ways that hurt her ears — not discordant, but wrong, like hearing a song played backwards through water." | | 2 | "Even her own breathing seemed muted, as if the Grove was holding its breath again." | | 3 | "Syllables that dripped like syrup, too sweet and too cold all at once." | | 4 | "It wore clothes that might have been fashionable a century ago, faded and moth-eaten." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |