Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQWVSEBV2M5Q0YC8M6B6DE

Run Details

Duration:
22.9s
Cost:
$0.008268

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy against Rory’s collarbone, its crimson glow bleeding through her shirt like a slow, steady heartbeat. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the weight of the takeout containers inside suddenly oppressive. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks black against the bruised twilight sky. Richmond Park should’ve been empty this late, but the air hummed with something else—something that prickled the hairs on her arms. She wasn’t supposed to be here. Not after dark. Not after the last time. But Eva had texted her an hour ago, voice shaking through the phone: *"Rory, I’m at the Grove. Something’s wrong. The stones—they’re not right. Please."* No other details. Just static, then silence. Rory stepped past the first stone, the ground beneath her boots shifting from damp grass to something softer, like moss. The wildflowers here never wilted, even in winter, but tonight their petals looked too bright, too *alive*, their colors bleeding into the dark like wet paint. The pendant pulsed against her skin, warmer now, as if responding to something she couldn’t see. A twig snapped. She spun, heart hammering. The trees stood still, their branches weaving a lattice against the sky. Nothing moved. Nothing *should’ve* moved. The Grove didn’t have squirrels, didn’t have foxes—just silence, thick and suffocating. "Eva?" Her voice sounded too loud, too *human*, in the quiet. No answer. She took another step, boots sinking slightly into the earth. The air smelled wrong—too sweet, like rotting fruit beneath the usual scent of damp earth and wildflowers. Her fingers twitched toward the pendant, but she stopped herself. If something was here, she didn’t want to draw attention to it. Then she heard it. A whisper. Not from the trees. Not from the wind. From *behind* her. Rory turned slowly, breath shallow. The standing stones stood in a perfect circle, their edges jagged against the sky. But one of them—just one—had shifted. The gap between it and the next stone was wider now, as if something had passed through. Her pulse roared in her ears. "Eva, if this is a joke—" A laugh. High, breathy, not Eva’s. It came from the trees, then the stones, then nowhere at all, bouncing between the trunks like a ricocheting bullet. Rory’s hands clenched. "Who’s there?" The pendant burned now, searing through her shirt. She yanked it out, the crimson gem pulsing in time with her heartbeat. The glow cast long shadows across the stones, and for a second, she thought she saw *something* move in the dark between them—a shape, too tall, too *wrong*, its limbs bending at angles that made her stomach lurch. Then it was gone. She exhaled, forcing her legs to move. Eva was here. She had to be. Rory stepped toward the center of the Grove, where the wildflowers grew thickest, their petals brushing against her jeans. The air here was heavier, pressing down on her like a hand. "Eva, *answer me*." A rustle. Not from the trees. From *below*. Rory looked down. The flowers at her feet were wilting. Not naturally—*shriveling*, their petals blackening as if burned from the inside. The rot spread outward in a perfect circle, the grass turning to ash beneath her boots. The pendant flared. She stumbled back, but the circle was already closing around her, the flowers dying in a wave. The air turned thick, cloying, like breathing through wet cloth. Her vision swam. Then the whispers started again. Not one voice. *Many*. Overlapping, hissing, words she almost understood but couldn’t quite grasp, like a radio tuned between stations. They slithered into her ears, cold and wet, and she clapped her hands over them, fingers digging into her skull. "Stop—*stop*—" The ground trembled. Rory dropped to her knees, the pendant swinging free, its glow now a violent, pulsing red. The whispers sharpened, forming a single, guttural word: *"Malphora."* Her breath caught. That wasn’t her name. Not really. But she’d heard it before—in dreams, in the dark, in the moments before Evan’s fist connected with her ribs. A name only *he* had ever called her. The stones groaned. She looked up. The standing oaks were *moving*, their roots tearing free of the earth with wet, rending sounds. They twisted, bending toward her, their branches knitting together like fingers lacing into a cage. The space between them darkened, swallowing the last of the twilight, and something *breathed* in the black. The pendant burned white-hot against her skin. Rory screamed.
total_cost0.008268

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.286
73.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount751
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount751
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count2
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"searing"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"lurch"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"oppressive"
2"loomed"
3"silence"
4"pulsed"
5"whisper"
6"perfect"
7"pulse"
8"searing"
9"stomach"
10"lurch"
11"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans16
markdownWords28
totalWords742
ratio0.038
matches
0"\"Rory, I’m at the Grove. Something’s wrong. The stones—they’re not right. Please.\""
1"alive"
2"should’ve"
3"human"
4"behind"
5"something"
6"wrong"
7"answer me"
8"below"
9"shriveling"
10"Many"
11"stop"
12"\"Malphora.\""
13"he"
14"moving"
15"breathed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount716
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory8
Park1
Eva3
Grove2
Evan1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Grove"
4"Evan"
places
0"Park"
globalScore0.941
windowScore1
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if responding to something she couldn’t see"
1"quite grasp, like a radio tuned between stations"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount742
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean19.03
std20.02
cv1.052
sampleLengths
072
114
225
37
462
53
633
711
82
949
104
112
1211
1342
146
156
1626
175
1859
194
2045
213
228
233
2434
253
2630
275
2840
291
303
3124
321
3336
343
353
3648
377
382
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"was gone"
85.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs116
matches
0"were wilting"
1"were *moving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences84
ratio0.083
matches
0"Richmond Park should’ve been empty this late, but the air hummed with something else—something that prickled the hairs on her arms."
1"The Grove didn’t have squirrels, didn’t have foxes—just silence, thick and suffocating."
2"The air smelled wrong—too sweet, like rotting fruit beneath the usual scent of damp earth and wildflowers."
3"But one of them—just one—had shifted."
4"The glow cast long shadows across the stones, and for a second, she thought she saw *something* move in the dark between them—a shape, too tall, too *wrong*, its limbs bending at angles that made her stomach lurch."
5"Not naturally—*shriveling*, their petals blackening as if burned from the inside."
6"But she’d heard it before—in dreams, in the dark, in the moments before Evan’s fist connected with her ribs."
84.33% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount724
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay heavy against Rory’s"
1"white-hot against her"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.04419889502762431
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006906077348066298
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean8.83
std7.31
cv0.827
sampleLengths
020
117
214
321
46
53
65
725
83
94
1020
1126
1216
133
144
1512
162
173
1812
1911
202
2110
2217
2310
2412
254
262
274
284
293
305
3114
326
3317
346
356
362
374
3820
393
402
418
4213
4338
444
457
463
474
4819
4912
42.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences70
matches
0"Just static, then silence."
1"Then she heard it."
2"Then it was gone."
3"Then the whispers started again."
ratio0.057
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences70
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She wasn’t supposed to be"
2"She spun, heart hammering."
3"Her voice sounded too loud,"
4"She took another step, boots"
5"Her fingers twitched toward the"
6"Her pulse roared in her"
7"It came from the trees,"
8"She yanked it out, the"
9"She exhaled, forcing her legs"
10"She had to be."
11"She stumbled back, but the"
12"Her vision swam."
13"They slithered into her ears,"
14"Her breath caught."
15"She looked up."
16"They twisted, bending toward her,"
ratio0.243
95.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences70
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
3"Richmond Park should’ve been empty"
4"She wasn’t supposed to be"
5"Rory stepped past the first"
6"The wildflowers here never wilted,"
7"The pendant pulsed against her"
8"A twig snapped."
9"She spun, heart hammering."
10"The trees stood still, their"
11"Nothing *should’ve* moved."
12"The Grove didn’t have squirrels,"
13"Her voice sounded too loud,"
14"She took another step, boots"
15"The air smelled wrong—too sweet,"
16"Her fingers twitched toward the"
17"Rory turned slowly, breath shallow."
18"The standing stones stood in"
19"The gap between it and"
ratio0.729
71.43% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"If something was here, she"
ratio0.014
27.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Richmond Park should’ve been empty this late, but the air hummed with something else—something that prickled the hairs on her arms."
1"The pendant pulsed against her skin, warmer now, as if responding to something she couldn’t see."
2"The glow cast long shadows across the stones, and for a second, she thought she saw *something* move in the dark between them—a shape, too tall, too *wrong*, it…"
3"Not naturally—*shriveling*, their petals blackening as if burned from the inside."
4"The standing oaks were *moving*, their roots tearing free of the earth with wet, rending sounds."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva had, voice shaking through the phone: *"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.0760%