| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 73.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 751 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 751 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "lurch" | | 11 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 16 | | markdownWords | 28 | | totalWords | 742 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Rory, I’m at the Grove. Something’s wrong. The stones—they’re not right. Please.\"" | | 1 | "alive" | | 2 | "should’ve" | | 3 | "human" | | 4 | "behind" | | 5 | "something" | | 6 | "wrong" | | 7 | "answer me" | | 8 | "below" | | 9 | "shriveling" | | 10 | "Many" | | 11 | "stop" | | 12 | "\"Malphora.\"" | | 13 | "he" | | 14 | "moving" | | 15 | "breathed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.13% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 716 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.941 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if responding to something she couldn’t see" | | 1 | "quite grasp, like a radio tuned between stations" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 742 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 19.03 | | std | 20.02 | | cv | 1.052 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 48 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | |
| 85.06% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "were wilting" | | 1 | "were *moving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park should’ve been empty this late, but the air hummed with something else—something that prickled the hairs on her arms." | | 1 | "The Grove didn’t have squirrels, didn’t have foxes—just silence, thick and suffocating." | | 2 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet, like rotting fruit beneath the usual scent of damp earth and wildflowers." | | 3 | "But one of them—just one—had shifted." | | 4 | "The glow cast long shadows across the stones, and for a second, she thought she saw *something* move in the dark between them—a shape, too tall, too *wrong*, its limbs bending at angles that made her stomach lurch." | | 5 | "Not naturally—*shriveling*, their petals blackening as if burned from the inside." | | 6 | "But she’d heard it before—in dreams, in the dark, in the moments before Evan’s fist connected with her ribs." |
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| 84.33% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 724 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay heavy against Rory’s" | | 1 | "white-hot against her" |
| | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.04419889502762431 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006906077348066298 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 8.83 | | std | 7.31 | | cv | 0.827 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 38 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 42.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.2857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Just static, then silence." | | 1 | "Then she heard it." | | 2 | "Then it was gone." | | 3 | "Then the whispers started again." |
| | ratio | 0.057 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 2 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 3 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 4 | "She took another step, boots" | | 5 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 6 | "Her pulse roared in her" | | 7 | "It came from the trees," | | 8 | "She yanked it out, the" | | 9 | "She exhaled, forcing her legs" | | 10 | "She had to be." | | 11 | "She stumbled back, but the" | | 12 | "Her vision swam." | | 13 | "They slithered into her ears," | | 14 | "Her breath caught." | | 15 | "She looked up." | | 16 | "They twisted, bending toward her," |
| | ratio | 0.243 | |
| 95.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "Richmond Park should’ve been empty" | | 4 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 5 | "Rory stepped past the first" | | 6 | "The wildflowers here never wilted," | | 7 | "The pendant pulsed against her" | | 8 | "A twig snapped." | | 9 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 10 | "The trees stood still, their" | | 11 | "Nothing *should’ve* moved." | | 12 | "The Grove didn’t have squirrels," | | 13 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 14 | "She took another step, boots" | | 15 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet," | | 16 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 17 | "Rory turned slowly, breath shallow." | | 18 | "The standing stones stood in" | | 19 | "The gap between it and" |
| | ratio | 0.729 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "If something was here, she" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 27.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park should’ve been empty this late, but the air hummed with something else—something that prickled the hairs on her arms." | | 1 | "The pendant pulsed against her skin, warmer now, as if responding to something she couldn’t see." | | 2 | "The glow cast long shadows across the stones, and for a second, she thought she saw *something* move in the dark between them—a shape, too tall, too *wrong*, it…" | | 3 | "Not naturally—*shriveling*, their petals blackening as if burned from the inside." | | 4 | "The standing oaks were *moving*, their roots tearing free of the earth with wet, rending sounds." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva had, voice shaking through the phone: *" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |