Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQWW6K5TYEXS9QABQMD9BH

Run Details

Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
$0.000865
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter settled onto a stool at the end of the bar, unwinding the scarf from her neck as the warmth of the evening wrapped around her. She ordered a whiskey from Silas, who raised an eyebrow as he poured the shot. "Long day, kid?" he asked, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. Rory nodded, taking a sip of the amber liquid. It burned down her throat, warming her chest. She closed her eyes, letting the sounds of the bar wash over her – the murmur of conversations, the clink of glasses, the soft thrum of the jazz quartet in the corner. The Raven's Nest was her sanctuary, the one place where she could shed the skin of her day job and simply be. As she opened her eyes, a figure emerged from the crowd, his gaze locking onto hers with the precision of a magnet. Rory's breath caught in her throat. It couldn't be. Not after all these years. "Aurora," he said, his voice low and rough, like the first autumn leaves. Rory's eyes narrowed, her mind racing to reconcile the man standing before her with the boy she'd left behind. Evan's eyes were still the same piercing green, but his jawline was sharper, his features more defined. The messy brown hair was now slicked back, revealing a prominent widow's peak. A tailored suit hugged his broad shoulders, a far cry from the ripped jeans and faded band tees of his youth. Evan slid onto the stool beside her, his eyes roving over her face as if searching for something. Rory felt a shiver run down her spine, her instincts screaming at her to get out, to get away from him. But her legs seemed rooted to the spot, her curiosity piqued. Silas, ever the astute observer, sensed the tension and made himself scarce, busying himself at the other end of the bar. Evan's gaze lingered on Rory's face, his expression a mixture of nostalgia and something else – something akin to regret. "It's been a long time," he said, his voice laced with a softness she didn't remember. Rory raised an eyebrow, her tone neutral. "You could say that." An awkward silence descended, the only sound the soft hum of the bar. Evan's eyes dropped to his hands, his fingers drumming a staccato beat on the counter. Rory's gaze followed, her eyes snagging on the silver watch encircling his wrist. A Rolex. The kind of watch he'd always dreamed of owning, but never could afford. "You look...different," Rory said, the words tumbling out before she could catch them. Evan's eyes flashed up, a hint of defensiveness creasing his forehead. "I've done all right for myself," he said, his voice tinged with pride. Rory's gaze roamed over him, taking in the tailored suit, the confident air. He'd always been charismatic, but this was something new – a polished, urbane veneer that seemed at odds with the rough-around-the-edges boy she'd known. "What do you do now?" she asked, curiosity getting the better of her. Evan's smile was guarded, his eyes clouding over. "I work in finance," he said, the words dropping like a stone into the conversation. Rory's eyes narrowed. Finance? That wasn't the Evan she'd known – the one who'd dreamed of making a difference, of changing the world. This new Evan seemed...tamed. As the silence stretched out between them, Rory became aware of the weight of unspoken words, of all the things left unsaid between them. The memories they'd shared, the fights they'd had, the way it had all ended – in a messy, brutal breakup that had left her reeling. Evan's eyes met hers, a flicker of understanding crossing his face. For a moment, Rory thought she saw a glimmer of the boy she'd once loved, the one who'd held her hand through the dark times. But it was just a mirage, a fleeting glimpse of what could never be again. "I'm sorry," Evan said, the words spilling out like a confession. Rory's gaze snapped up, her heart racing. Sorry? What was he sorry for? The way he'd hurt her? The way he'd changed? The way he'd left her behind? But before she could ask, Silas appeared, his eyes locked onto Evan's. "Can I get you something to drink?" he asked, his tone neutral. Evan's gaze faltered, his eyes dropping to the counter. "Just a beer, please." As Silas poured the drink, Rory felt the moment slipping away, the tension between them dissipating like smoke on the wind. Evan's eyes met hers once more, a hint of sadness lingering in their depths. "It's good to see you, Aurora," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. Rory's response was caught in her throat, trapped behind a wall of unspoken emotions. She nodded, a small, tight smile the only reply she could manage. As Evan turned to Silas, ordering another round, Rory felt the past rising up to meet her, the weight of unspoken regret threatening to engulf her. She threw a twenty onto the counter, her eyes meeting Silas' in a silent plea for escape. "Sorry, kid," Silas mouthed, as he handed her her coat. Rory shrugged, slipping into the cool night air, leaving Evan and the ghosts of their past behind.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.923
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount874
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount874
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count2
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"racing"
count2
4
word"down her spine"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"tinged"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"unspoken"
count3
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"fleeting"
count1
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"eyebrow"
2"sanctuary"
3"racing"
4"down her spine"
5"tension"
6"silence"
7"tinged"
8"weight"
9"unspoken"
10"flicker"
11"fleeting"
12"depths"
13"whisper"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"the weight of unspoken words"
98.96% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences64
matches
0"felt a shiver"
1"d with pride"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords876
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount818
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Silas6
Rory17
Raven1
Nest1
Rolex1
Evan15
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Raven"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.461
windowScore0.667
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if searching for something"
1"seemed rooted to the spot, her curiosity piqued"
2"something akin to regret"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount876
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean31.29
std17.87
cv0.571
sampleLengths
054
171
236
313
470
550
621
736
811
956
1013
1124
1237
1313
1423
1527
1649
1751
1811
1928
2024
2113
2235
2314
2426
2543
2610
2717
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"was guarded"
1"was caught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences66
ratio0.076
matches
0"She closed her eyes, letting the sounds of the bar wash over her – the murmur of conversations, the clink of glasses, the soft thrum of the jazz quartet in the corner."
1"Evan's gaze lingered on Rory's face, his expression a mixture of nostalgia and something else – something akin to regret."
2"He'd always been charismatic, but this was something new – a polished, urbane veneer that seemed at odds with the rough-around-the-edges boy she'd known."
3"That wasn't the Evan she'd known – the one who'd dreamed of making a difference, of changing the world."
4"The memories they'd shared, the fights they'd had, the way it had all ended – in a messy, brutal breakup that had left her reeling."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount791
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02402022756005057
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006321112515802781
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean13.27
std7.07
cv0.533
sampleLengths
027
115
212
39
48
532
622
722
86
93
105
1113
1219
1317
1413
1521
1618
1721
1811
1921
2020
2116
227
234
2413
2515
2613
272
2813
2913
3011
3113
3213
3324
3413
358
3615
373
381
3919
404
4124
4225
4311
4425
4515
4611
477
481
495
57.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences61
matches
0"She ordered a whiskey from"
1"he asked, his hazel eyes"
2"It burned down her throat,"
3"She closed her eyes, letting"
4"It couldn't be."
5"he said, his voice low"
6"he said, his voice laced"
7"he said, his voice tinged"
8"He'd always been charismatic, but"
9"she asked, curiosity getting the"
10"he said, the words dropping"
11"he asked, his tone neutral"
12"he said, his voice barely"
13"She nodded, a small, tight"
14"She threw a twenty onto"
ratio0.246
41.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences61
matches
0"Aurora Carter settled onto a"
1"She ordered a whiskey from"
2"he asked, his hazel eyes"
3"Rory nodded, taking a sip"
4"It burned down her throat,"
5"She closed her eyes, letting"
6"The Raven's Nest was her"
7"Rory's breath caught in her"
8"It couldn't be."
9"he said, his voice low"
10"Rory's eyes narrowed, her mind"
11"Evan's eyes were still the"
12"The messy brown hair was"
13"A tailored suit hugged his"
14"Evan slid onto the stool"
15"Rory felt a shiver run"
16"Silas, ever the astute observer,"
17"Evan's gaze lingered on Rory's"
18"he said, his voice laced"
19"Rory raised an eyebrow, her"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory's eyes narrowed, her mind racing to reconcile the man standing before her with the boy she'd left behind."
1"Evan slid onto the stool beside her, his eyes roving over her face as if searching for something."
2"Rory's gaze followed, her eyes snagging on the silver watch encircling his wrist."
3"He'd always been charismatic, but this was something new – a polished, urbane veneer that seemed at odds with the rough-around-the-edges boy she'd known."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"he asked, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners"
1"he said, his voice low and rough, like the first autumn leaves"
2"Rory said, the words tumbling out before she could catch them"
3"she asked, curiosity getting the better of her"
4"he said, the words dropping like a stone into the conversation"
5"Evan said, the words spilling out like a confession"
6"he asked, his tone neutral"
7"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Silas mouthed (mouth)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.846
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
71.1271%