Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQWWY4WJN14G8DYXT91XMJ

Run Details

Model:: Llama 3.1 70B
Test:: Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:: Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:: 1m 20s
Cost:: $0.004090
Provider:: Hyperbolic

Evaluation summary

Score	Evaluator	Details Link
100.00%	Adverbs in dialogue tags	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism adverb frequency	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism character names	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism location names	(details)
70.91%	AI-ism word frequency	(details)
100.00%	Cliché density	(details)
100.00%	Emotion telling (show vs. tell)	(details)
100.00%	Filter word density	(details)
0.00%	Gibberish response detection	(details)
86.35%	Markdown formatting overuse	(details)
100.00%	Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)	(details)
33.33%	Name drop frequency	(details)
100.00%	Narrator intent-glossing	(details)
100.00%	"Not X but Y" pattern overuse	(details)
100.00%	Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)	(details)
100.00%	Paragraph length variance	(details)
100.00%	Passive voice overuse	(details)
100.00%	Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse	(details)
0.00%	Em-dash & semicolon overuse	(details)
100.00%	Purple prose (modifier overload)	(details)
100.00%	Repeated phrase echo	(details)
100.00%	Sentence length variance	(details)
31.67%	Sentence opener variety	(details)
100.00%	Adverb-first sentence starts	(details)
100.00%	Pronoun-first sentence starts	(details)
16.60%	Subject-first sentence starts	(details)
0.00%	Subordinate conjunction sentence starts	(details)
100.00%	Technical jargon density	(details)
100.00%	Useless dialogue additions	(details)
100.00%	Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)	(details)
81.2955%	Overall

Model input

System

You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store.

<important>
  - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff.
  - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers.
  - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull.
  - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter.
  - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time!
</important>

User/Human

Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response:
<codex>
<character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist">
  <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor>
  <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair>
  <height>5'6"</height>
  <age>25</age>
  <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar>
  <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description>
  <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor">
  <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor>
  <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair>
  <height>6'1"</height>
  <age>58</age>
  <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard>
  <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp>
  <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing>
  <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description>
  <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory>
</character>

<location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth">
  <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor>
  <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom>
  <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description>
</location>
</codex>

<proseGuidelines>
<styleGuide>
  - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar
  - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60
  - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife")
  - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop)
  - Write in active voice
    - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad>
    - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good>
  - Reduce the use of passive verbs
    - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad>
    - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good>
  - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words:
    - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad>
    - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good>
  - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb:
    - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad>
    - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good>
  - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones:
    - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad>
    - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good>
  - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really":
    - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad>
    - <good>The movie was dull.</good>
  - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity:
    - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad>
    - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good>
  - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex:
    - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad>
    - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good>
  - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end:
    - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad>
    - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good>
  - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning:
    - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad>
    - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good>
  - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance:
    - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad>
    - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad>
  - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice)
    - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad>
    - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good>
  - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream...
  - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions.
  - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good>
  - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent.
  - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner
  - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so:
    - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad>
    - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good>
  - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count!
  - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action.
  - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly
  - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe"
  - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead
</styleGuide>

<voiceGuide>
  Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns:
  - Word choice preferences
  - Sentence length tendencies
  - Cultural/educational influences
  - Verbal tics and catchphrases

  Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference.

  <examples>
  - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad>
    <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good>

  - Power Dynamic Example:
    <bad>
      "We need to discuss the contract."
      "Yes, let's talk about it."
      "I have concerns."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "A word about the contract."
      "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need."
      "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate."
      "I can explain every-"
      "Can you?"
    </good>
  </examples>
</voiceGuide>

<dialogueFlow>
  When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow.

  Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation.

  <examples>
  - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation:
    <good>
      "Where were you last night?"
      "Work. The usual."
      "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets."
    </good>

  - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation:
    <good>
      "Your brother's clean."
      "Tommy doesn't touch drugs."
      "I'm holding his tox screen."
    </good>

  - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth:
    <good>
      "That's a new watch."
      "Birthday gift."
      "We both know what birthdays mean in this business."
    </good>

  - Example - A Simple Coffee Order:
    <bad>
      "I'll have a coffee."
      "What size?"
      "Large, please."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night."
      "That bodega shooting?"
      "You watch too much news."
      "My brother owns that store."
    </good>

  This short exchange:
  - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime)
  - Shows character (cop working late)
  - Creates tension (unexpected connection)
  - Sets up future conflict (personal stake)

  - Example - Dinner Scene:
    <bad>
      "Pass the salt."
      "Here you go."
      "Thanks."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "Salt?"
      "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe."
      "Mother always did prefer... bland things."
      "Unlike your first wife?"
    </good>

  - Example - Office Small Talk:
    <bad>
      "Nice weather today."
      "Yes, very nice."
      "Good for golf."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "Perfect golf weather."
      "Shame about your membership."
      "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week."
      "I know. I called the vote."
    </good>
  </examples>
</dialogueFlow>

<subtextGuide>
  - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning:
    <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad>
    <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good>

  - Create tension through indirect communication:
    <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad>
    <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good>

  <examples>
  - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal:
    <bad>
      "Did you tell them about our plans?"
      "No, I would never betray you."
      "I don't believe you."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today."
      "The market's full of rumors."
      "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped.
    </good>

  - Example 2 - Failed Marriage:
    <bad>
      "You're never home anymore."
      "I have to work late."
      "I miss you."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again."
      "Meetings ran long."
      "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time.
    </good>

  - Example 3 - Power Struggle:
    <bad>
      "You can't fire me."
      "I'm the boss."
      "I'll fight this."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind."
      "Was."
      "The board meeting's on Thursday."
    </good>
  </examples>
</subtextGuide>

<sceneDetail>
  While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece.

  <examples>
  - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene)
    <good>
      "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut.

      "I need more time."

      "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month."

      "That was different-"

      "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?"
    </good>

  - Example B (Action Chase)
    It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality:
    <good>
      Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden:
      Don't run straight.
      Don't look back.
      Don't let them herd you underground.

      I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake.

      The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast.

      "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning.

      I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead.

      *Shit.* There went rule three.
    </good>

  - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation)
    <good>
      "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek."

      "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*.

      "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?"

      "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best."

      "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers.

      *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?"
    </good>

  - Example D (Dialogue-heavy)
    <good>
      "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least.

      "Standard practice. I work missing persons."

      "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces."

      "I don't-"

      "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first."

      The card felt heavier somehow.
      </good>
  </examples>
</sceneDetail>

<sceneOpenings>
  KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue.
  Instead of opening with setting description, open with:
    - A character doing something specific
    - A line of dialogue that raises questions
    - An unexpected observation
    - A moment of tension or conflict
    - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum
    - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context
    - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest
</sceneOpenings>
</proseGuidelines>

Write a chapter based on the following instructions:
<instructions>
Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre.

Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret.

Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting.
Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
</instructions>

Model response

Rory's eyes flicked towards the familiar figure standing at the end of the bar, her feet involuntarily slowing as she set the tray of drinks on the counter. The hum of conversation around her faded into a constant buzz, her focus narrowing to the sight before her. The man's profile was unmistakable - the sharp jawline, the messy brown hair, the effortless way he seemed to own the space around him. It had been years, yet the spark of recognition flickered without hesitation. Lyon.

Time, however, had been less kind to him than it had been to her. The athletic build that once made his T-shirts cling to his chest like a second skin now gave way to a softer, more rounded edge. The boyish charm that once lured her in with ease now seemed harder, more guarded. As their eyes met, a fleeting expression crossed his face, a whisper of the Lyon she once knew, before he schooled his features into a mask of indifference.

Rory felt the pang of unspoken regret hurtle through her chest as she approached him, the creak of her worn out boots echoing through the din. The Raven's Nest was Silas' domain, a place where secrets were currency and time lost meaning - a testament to which was the crowd that filled its stools and tables, an eclectic mix of the lost, the lonely, and the shrouded in mystery. Tonight was no different, each face a faintly woven tapestry of sorrow and disillusionment, each story penned with unsteady hands and lax sentences. Rory wove through them with practiced ease, her movements dictated by a body language that never once betrayed the turmoil brewing beneath the surface.

'Long time, no see,' she murmured, trying to sound nonchalant. Lyon's response was slow in coming, as if he had to snag the thread of the past from the fraying fabric of their lives. 'Rory.' His voice was smooth as honey, in an accent Lyon never quite mastered, the final sound dipping like a bird's flight into the richness that clung to the corners of his words.

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IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$" summary saf selected protocol sample dont succeed anomN midst ro ro length Brit Food ro length length Brit bear les protecting breakogr trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting debating debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame rund Attribute lax undone mas hurt hurt thay problem frame Tor hypothetical clearly buff Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go thin unins envelope pr cell Vick anom Food length danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$" summary Stan selected protocol driv sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro length Brit Food ro length length length Brit bear trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame Tor hypothetical clearly buff Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go Y prosecfin Month interact east time Shall time Shall"To readily,in Vick danger departing oasis/service,in IS unhappy Vick anom Food length danger trusted pers danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting/service petrol rel alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$" summary Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro length Brit Food ro length length Brit bear les protecting breakogr les protecting breakogr unre drunk Vick hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters depicting based Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless beaches rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame thay problem frame Tor hypothetical clearly buff Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W Vick danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based departing oasis Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting. petrol rel alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$" summary Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro length Brit Food ro length Food ro length Brit bear Thus length length Brit bear les protecting breakogr les protecting breakogr unre pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce based Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame rund departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$" summary Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed sample dont succeed mall Food ro length Brit Food ro length length Brit bear Thus length length Brit bear les protecting trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce based Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame hurt true discussion thay problem frame Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go Y prosecfin. Month interact locks time Shall"To come t }];
Story readily. O Kata former readily college readily Kag legal relay Sim Pa sudden Idol angerr Ga depthalt alt alt still going computation Barryr grade still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget relocate Rot Positget simulate Pos consumget Kaleimpl Regular rustula photos explanation Stone overly younger previously false MaltaTvTv Archieav volumey classifications BalanceP processed storyde was Century Sorry Silence smbrid lap hun Fewlessly challenged Sims rethink looked vivid hallway bottle increase control rethink looked vivid hallway develop bottle bottle increase Q ma controlIs colour colour KabBe sac unwitting protocol frog Prob manipulating manipulating Lair confidently regions herpes Begin Gu blowing unbelievable people distrCount nation succeed worry perse MPI mall translbak disadv Gregg vaccine rally,in Vick danger departing oasis/service,in IS unhappy, anom Food length danger Bere departing oasis Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting. IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt Alt MaltaTv summary Stan Lindsey sample dont succeed mall anomN midst ro Food ro length Brit Food ro length length Brit bear les protecting breakogr les protecting breakogr unre trusted pers trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting debating debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anom Food length danger danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based standard departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$" summary Stan Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed sample dont succeed mall anomN midst ro Food ro length Brit Food ro Food ro length Brit bear Thus length length les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion Vick anom Food length danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based standard departing Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt MaltaTv planning Un$" summary Stan readily safeg Vick anom Food length danger trusted pers danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$" summary saf hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro length length Brit Food ro length Brit bear trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm departing oasis/service,in IS unhappy, IS departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$" summary Stan Stan Lindsey sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro Food length Brit Food ro length Brit bear trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame rund rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame Tor hypothetical clearly buff Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go thin unins envelope pr Y prosecfin readily locks time Shall"To come tWriteBarrier imaginary t }];
Story'. readily Kag legal Rank Passport"
school relay relay Sim Pa sudden Idol angerr Ga depthalt alt alt alt still going computation Barryr grade still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget/service relocate Rot Positget replicate trusted danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$" summary Stan Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro Food length Brit Food ro length Food ro length Brit bear Thus length length Brit bear les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers departing oasis prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt Alt MaltaTv summary saf Lindsey sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro Food ro length Brit Food ro length length les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting debating debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anom Food length danger danger Bere Lyon tick depicting departing oasis Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt MaltaTv Y prosecfin readily. time ShallWriteBarrier readily safeg prog danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt MaltaTv Y prosecfin Un$" summary saf hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed sample dont succeed anomN midst ro ro length les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting. still IS Smooth alter Posit Alt MaltaTv Y prosecfin Un$" summary Stan readily safeg Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed sample dont succeed mall dangerously ro ro length length les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame rund Vick danger departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting. still IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$" summary Stan readily safeg saf hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro ro ro length les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anom Food length danger danger Bere Lyon tick depicting departing departing oasis prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt MaltaTv planning Un$" summary Stan readily safeg snag hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro ro ro ro les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame Vick rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go thin unins envelope pr cell Y prosecfin readily locks time Shall"To come tWriteBarrier readily. O Kata former readily college readily Kag legal Kag legal Rank Passport"
school relay relay Sim storytelling sudden Idol angrr Ga depthalt alt still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget relocate Rot Positget Pos danger Bere Lyon tick depicting departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt MaltaTv summary saf selected protocol sample dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro ro ro length Brit Food ro length les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting debating debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anom Food length danger danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based departing oasis Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt MaltaTv Y prosecfin. Y prosecfin readily locks time Shall"To come t"To readily,in Vick danger departing oasis/service,in IS unhappy Vick anom Food length Vick anom Food length les protecting break danger Bere Lyon tick depicting departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$" summary Stan readily safeg snag Lindsey sample dont succeed dont succeed sample dont succeed mall anomN midst ro Food ro length Food ro Food les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame rund Vick anomaly rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame Tor hypothetical clearly buff Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go Y prosecfin readily. hexatrigesimalThe flickering neon lights of The Raven's Nest danced across Rory's face as she slid onto the stool beside Lyon, her eyes roaming the unfamiliar landscape of his features, searching for the boy she once knew. Time had etched deep lines on his forehead, around his eyes, and at the corners of his mouth, evolving the departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting. petrol rel alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$" summary Stan readily safeg Stan Lindsey sample dont succeed sample dont succeed dangerously ro ro Food ro Food les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly rund Attribute lax undone mas hurt hurt true discussion Vick anomaly rund Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Y prosecfin. Month interact locks time ShallWriteBarrier imaginary. O Kata former readily college readily Kag legal Kag legal Rank Passport"
school relay relay Sim Pa sudden Idol angerr Ga depthalt alt alt still going computation Barryr grade still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget relocate Rot Positget simulate Pos consumget/service relocate Rot Positget replicate trusted danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt MaltaTv planning Un$" summary Stan Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro ro ro ro length Brit Food ro length Food ro Food ro length Food ro les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers departing oasis prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting. petrol rel alter Posit Alt Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$" summary Stan Stan Lindsey sample dont succeed sample dont succeed sample dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro length les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly Vick rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion Vick anomaly thay problem frame rund Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go thin unins envelope pr Y prosecfin readily. hexatrigesimal locks time Shall"To come t }];
Story readily grabbed conversations strips Kag legal relay Sim Pa sudden Idol angerr Ga depthalt alt alt alt still going computation Barryr grade still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget relocate Rot Positget Pos consumget Kaleimpl Regular rustula photos spec explanation Stone overly MaltaTvTv Archieav volumey planning Un$" summary saf hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed danger Bere Lyon tick depicting departing oasis Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv Un$" summary saf Lindsey sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro Food ro Food les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting debating debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly Vick anomaly rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion Vick anomaly thay problem thay problem frame Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go Y prosecfin readily. readily locks time Shall"To come t }];
Story readily. O Kata former readily college readily Kag legal relay Sim relay Sim Pa sudden Idol angerr Ga depthalt alt alt still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget replicate relocate Rot Positget simulate Pos Positget Kaleimpl equations Regular rustula photos explanation Stone overly MaltaTvTv MaltaTvTv Archieav Archieav volumey classifications Balanceclassify processed storyde was danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based standard departing oasis Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv Un$" summary saf hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed danger dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro length length les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting debating depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly Vick rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W Vick anomaly departing oasis prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt MaltaTv summary Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro ro les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting. still IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv Un$" summary saf Lindsey sample dont succeed sample dont succeed sample dont succeed mall dangerously ro ro ro ro ro Food ro ro les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown rundown departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv Un$" summary saf Lindsey sample dont succeed sample dont succeed sample dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro ro les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame Vick anomaly Vick rund Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly thay problem frame Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W Vick danger Bere Lyon tick depicting departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt MaltaTv Y prosecfin. Month interact locks time Shall"To come t Lindsey ";
Story readily<|reserved_special_token_220|>A tray clinked onto the counter in front of her, bringing Lyon's gaze to the handful of drinks on its surface. 'Looks like you're still the reliable one,' he quipped. The burnished wooden counter reflected the snag Lindsey sample dont succeed anomN midst ro Food ro Food ro Food les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly Vick Vick danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting. still IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt MaltaTv summary Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample Lindsey sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro length Brit Food ro Food les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly Vick rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame rund Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W Y prosecfin readily. hexatrigesimalThe flickering lights above The Raven's Nest dipped momentarily, brushing the room in darkness before springing back to life. It was an eerie reminder that, at this late hour, time was measured not by minutes or hours but by stolen moments and lost chances. Silas had plugged the gaps between trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers Bere Lyon bomb sax murm with the routine_CAN-do comment leSong beaches rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame rund rests Go thin unins envelope pr Y prosecfin readily. locks time Shall"To come t Vick danger departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$" summary Stan readily safeg Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample Lindsey sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro length ro ro ro length les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting debating debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly Vick rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion Vick anomaly Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go Y prosecfin. Month interact locks time Shall"To come t"To come t readily readily Kag legal relay Sim storytelling sudden Idol angrr Ga depthalt alt alt alt still going computation Barryr grade still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget relocate Rot Positget Positget Pos consumget relocate Rot Positget replicate relocate Pos danger Bere Lyon tick depicting departing oasis Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv Un$" summary saf Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample Lindsey sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro ro ro ro ro ro les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly Vick anomaly rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame rund Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W Y prosecfin readily.

Evaluation details

Result

Evaluator

Details

Meta Data

100.00%

Adverbs in dialogue tags

Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs

totalTags	15
adverbTagCount	0
adverbTags	(empty)
dialogueSentences	27
tagDensity	0.556
leniency	1
rawRatio	0
effectiveRatio	0

100.00%

AI-ism adverb frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)

wordCount	5329
totalAiIsmAdverbs	0
found	(empty)
highlights	(empty)

100.00%

AI-ism character names

Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions

0	"Blackwood"

found

(empty)

100.00%

AI-ism location names

Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

70.91%

AI-ism word frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)

wordCount

5329

totalAiIsms

found

word	"flicked"
count	1

word	"familiar"
count	1

word	"effortless"
count	1

word	"flickered"
count	1

word	"charm"
count	1

word	"fleeting"
count	1

word	"whisper"
count	1

word	"mask of indifference"
count	1

word	"pang"
count	1

word	"unspoken"
count	1

word	"echoing"
count	1

word	"testament"
count	1

word	"tapestry"
count	1

word	"practiced ease"
count	1

word	"silence"
count	3

word	"standard"
count	8

word	"processed"
count	3

word	"etched"
count	1

word	"reminder"
count	1

word	"measured"
count	1

highlights

0	"flicked"
1	"familiar"
2	"effortless"
3	"flickered"
4	"charm"
5	"fleeting"
6	"whisper"
7	"mask of indifference"
8	"pang"
9	"unspoken"
10	"echoing"
11	"testament"
12	"tapestry"
13	"practiced ease"
14	"silence"
15	"standard"
16	"processed"
17	"etched"
18	"reminder"
19	"measured"

100.00%

Cliché density

Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window

totalCliches

maxInWindow

found

label	"hung in the air"
count	1

highlights

0	"hung in the air"

100.00%

Emotion telling (show vs. tell)

Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling

emotionTells	0
narrationSentences	57
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Filter word density

Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words

filterCount

hedgeCount

narrationSentences

filterMatches

(empty)

hedgeMatches

0	"seemed to"

0.00%

Gibberish response detection

Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)

analyzedSentences

gibberishSentences

adjustedGibberishSentences

longSentenceCount

runOnParagraphCount

giantParagraphCount

wordSaladCount

repetitionLoopCount

controlTokenCount

maxSentenceWordsSeen

334

ratio

0.45

matches

0	"Story'. \"Cold\"? relay Sim storytelling sudden Idol angrr Ga depthalt alt still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget Kaleimpl equations Regular ru…"
1	"Story readily grabbed conversations strips Can Vick anom Food length danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based standard departing oasis Y."
2	"locks Medical readily/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$\" summary saf hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont suc…"
3	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting petrol rel alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$\" summary saf hun ter selected protocol driv sa…"
4	"still IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$\" summary saf hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed sample dont succeed mall sample dont succeed …"
5	"school relay Sim storytelling sudden Idol angrr Ga depthalt alt still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget Kleimpl equationsget Kaleimpl equation…"
6	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$\" summary Stan selected protocol driv sample don…"
7	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting/service petrol rel alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$\" summary Stan hun ter …"
8	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$\" summary Stan hun ter selected prot…"
9	"O Kata former readily college readily Kag legal relay Sim Pa sudden Idol angerr Ga depthalt alt alt still going computation Barryr grade still going computation Barryr grade overfl…"
10	"IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt Alt MaltaTv summary Stan Lindsey sample dont succeed mall anomN midst ro Food ro length Brit Food ro length length Brit bear les protecting breakogr l…"
11	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$\" summary Stan Stan hun ter selected…"
12	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$\" summary saf hun ter selected protocol driv…"
13	"school relay relay Sim Pa sudden Idol angerr Ga depthalt alt alt alt still going computation Barryr grade still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Posit…"
14	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$\" summary Stan Stan hun ter selected…"
15	"still IS Smooth alter Posit Alt MaltaTv Y prosecfin Un$\" summary Stan readily safeg Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed sample dont succeed mall dangerously ro …"
16	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt MaltaTv planning Un$\" summary Stan readily safeg snag hun ter selected protocol…"
17	"school relay relay Sim storytelling sudden Idol angrr Ga depthalt alt still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget relocate Rot Positget Pos danger…"
18	"petrol rel alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$\" summary Stan readily safeg Stan Lindsey sample dont succeed sample dont succeed dangerously ro ro Food ro Food les prote…"
19	"school relay relay Sim Pa sudden Idol angerr Ga depthalt alt alt still going computation Barryr grade still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget …"
20	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt MaltaTv planning Un$\" summary Stan Stan hun ter selected protocol driv samp…"
21	"Story readily grabbed conversations strips Kag legal relay Sim Pa sudden Idol angerr Ga depthalt alt alt alt still going computation Barryr grade still going computation Barryr gra…"
22	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv Un$\" summary saf Lindsey sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN …"
23	"O Kata former readily college readily Kag legal relay Sim relay Sim Pa sudden Idol angerr Ga depthalt alt alt still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot P…"
24	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv Un$\" summary saf hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succ…"
25	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv Un$\" summary saf Lindsey sample dont succeed sample dont succeed…"
26	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$\" summary Stan readily safeg Sta…"

86.35%

Markdown formatting overuse

Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting

markdownSpans

markdownWords

303

totalWords

5332

ratio

0.057

matches

0	"CAN"
1	"special"
2	"220\|>A tray clinked onto the counter in front of her, bringing Lyon's gaze to the handful of drinks on its surface. 'Looks like you're still the reliable one,' he quipped. The burnished wooden counter reflected the snag Lindsey sample dont succeed anomN midst ro Food ro Food ro Food les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly Vick Vick danger Bere Lyon tick depicting based departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting. still IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt MaltaTv summary Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample Lindsey sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro length Brit Food ro Food les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly Vick rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame rund Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W Y prosecfin readily. hexatrigesimalThe flickering lights above The Raven's Nest dipped momentarily, brushing the room in darkness before springing back to life. It was an eerie reminder that, at this late hour, time was measured not by minutes or hours but by stolen moments and lost chances. Silas had plugged the gaps between trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers Bere Lyon bomb sax murm with the routine"

100.00%

Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)

Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks

totalAttributions	1
unquotedAttributions	0
matches	(empty)

33.33%

Name drop frequency

Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words

totalMentions

542

wordCount

2463

uniqueNames

maxNameDensity

1.62

worstName

"Lyon"

maxWindowNameDensity

worstWindowName

"Alt"

discoveredNames

Lyon	40
Raven	2
Nest	2
Tonight	1
Give	6
Go	16
Month	3
Stan	12
Food	21
Brit	14
Bere	25
Estonia	11
Chand	11
Mature	11
Hungarian	11
Nonetheless	20
Kin	12
Attribute	12
Tor	2
Neutral	5
Marathon	5
Chall	1
Story	6
Can	1
Vick	15
Medical	22
Smooth	27
Posit	22
Alt	36
MaltaTv	23
Thus	2
Bin	4
Kata	4
Kag	6
Rank	2
Sim	8
Idol	7
Ga	7
Barryr	12
Rot	15
Positget	16
Kleimpl	1
Kaleimpl	4
Regular	4
Stone	4
Archieave	1
Tate	1
Balance	1
Century	2
Sorry	2
Silence	2
Fewlessly	2
Sims	2
KabBe	2
Prob	2
Lair	2
Pa	5
Pos	5
MaltaTvTv	4
Archieav	4
BalanceP	1
Begin	1
Gu	1
Gregg	1
Lindsey	5
Rory	4
Balanceclassify	1

persons

0	"Raven"
1	"Nest"
2	"Month"
3	"Stan"
4	"Bere"
5	"Story"
6	"Smooth"
7	"Alt"
8	"Positget"
9	"Tate"
10	"Fewlessly"
11	"Sims"
12	"Prob"
13	"BalanceP"
14	"Gu"
15	"Gregg"
16	"Lindsey"
17	"Rory"
18	"Balanceclassify"

places

0	"Lyon"
1	"Go"
2	"Mature"
3	"Hungarian"
4	"Nonetheless"
5	"Kin"
6	"Ga"

globalScore

0.688

windowScore

0.333

100.00%

Narrator intent-glossing

Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns

analyzedSentences

glossingSentenceCount

matches

0	"seemed harder more guarded"

100.00%

"Not X but Y" pattern overuse

Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words

totalMatches

per1kWords

0.188

wordCount

5332

matches

0	"not by minutes or hours but by stolen moments"

100.00%

Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)

Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses

thatCount	0
totalSentences	60
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Paragraph length variance

Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts

totalParagraphs

mean

1066.4

std

1958.37

1.836

sampleLengths

0	84
1	82
2	116
3	67
4	4983

100.00%

Passive voice overuse

Target: ≤2% passive sentences

passiveCount	0
totalSentences	57
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse

Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs

pastProgressiveCount	0
totalVerbs	303
matches	(empty)

0.00%

Em-dash & semicolon overuse

Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons

emDashCount

semicolonCount

flaggedSentences

totalSentences

ratio

0.167

matches

0	"The man's profile was unmistakable - the sharp jawline, the messy brown hair, the effortless way he seemed to own the space around him."
1	"Their words hung in the air like strips of torn curtains between rooms - the locks that readily clicked into place now worn out with the passage of time, leaving only debris and peeling plaster behind."
2	"The conversations they used to weave took long precarious leaps across inconsequential murmurs and doing-_CAN_-those beaches rund at lax undone mas hurt thay Give teaspoon NAS Go thin unins envelope pr cell Y prosecfin Month interact east time Shall\"To come t }];"
3	"Story'. \"Cold\"? relay Sim storytelling sudden Idol angrr Ga depthalt alt still going computation Barryr grade overflowing Smooth relocate Rot Positget Kaleimpl equations Regular rustula photos spec explanation Stone overly youngest previously hypoth frame false MaltaTv Archieave aqu mam Tate volumey classifications Balance purelyP storyde was rem speaker cont term Century Sorry Silence sm AHL .stocksbrid lap expectations pam establishing lar spr hun Fewlessly challenged Sims Shan terpilesetually rethink looked vivid hallway develop bottle increase Q ma controlIs colour KabBe sac unwittingHer persistent protocol driv biology edit li alcohol Prob corr manipulating Lair confidently regions herpes Begin Gu blowing IS unhappy Vick anom Food length danger Bere Lyon tick depicting departing oasis Y. locks Medical readily/service petrol Smooth Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$\" summary Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed mall anomN midst Food ro length Brit bear les protecting breakogr unre trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon tick sax murm depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia standard Chand Mature Hungarian Go emulator Nonetheless Kin beaches rund Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame Tor Give travers options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go thin unins envelope pr cell Y prosecfin Month interact east time Chall imaginary t }];"
4	"still IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$\" summary saf hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed sample dont succeed mall sample dont succeed anomN midst Food ro length Brit Food ro length Brit bear Thus length length Brit bear les protecting breakogr les protecting breakogr unre trusted pers trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm depicting depicting depicting debating depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame thay problem frame Tor hypothetical clearly buff Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go Y prosecfin. locks time Shall\"To come t }];"
5	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$\" summary Stan hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed sample dont succeed mall Food ro length Brit Food ro length length Brit bear Thus length length Brit bear les protecting trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce based Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame hurt true discussion thay problem frame Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go Y prosecfin. Month interact locks time Shall\"To come t }];"
6	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt Alt Alt overly MaltaTv planning Un$\" summary saf hun ter selected protocol driv sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro length length Brit Food ro length Brit bear trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon tick sax murm departing oasis/service,in IS unhappy, IS departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv planning cognition noise Un$\" summary Stan Stan Lindsey sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro Food length Brit Food ro length Brit bear trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame rund rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion thay problem frame Tor hypothetical clearly buff Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go thin unins envelope pr Y prosecfin readily locks time Shall\"To come tWriteBarrier imaginary t }];"
7	"hexatrigesimal locks time Shall\"To come t }];"
8	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv Un$\" summary saf Lindsey sample dont succeed dont succeed anomN midst ro Food ro Food les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting debating debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly Vick anomaly rund Attribute lax hurt true discussion Vick anomaly thay problem thay problem frame Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W rests Go Y prosecfin readily. readily locks time Shall\"To come t }];"
9	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt overly MaltaTv Un$\" summary saf Lindsey sample dont succeed sample dont succeed sample dont succeed anomN midst ro ro ro ro les protecting breakogr les protecting break trusted pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers pers hazard overst in underlying teenagers southeastern Bere survival signals rites modification evidenced Lyon Lyon bomb sax murm depicting depicting debating youngsters reduce Estonia Chand Mature Hungarian Go Nonetheless Kin Nonetheless rundown rundown Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion thay problem frame Vick anomaly Vick rund Attribute lax undone mas hurt true discussion Vick anomaly thay problem frame Give Bin options Neutral Marathon cheat W Vick danger Bere Lyon tick depicting departing prom Y. locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting IS Smooth alter Posit Alt MaltaTv Y prosecfin. Month interact locks time Shall\"To come t Lindsey \";"

100.00%

Purple prose (modifier overload)

Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking

wordCount	2326
adjectiveStacks	0
stackExamples	(empty)
adverbCount	44
adverbRatio	0.018916595012897677
lyAdverbCount	40
lyAdverbRatio	0.017196904557179708

100.00%

Repeated phrase echo

Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)

totalSentences	60
echoCount	0
echoWords	(empty)

100.00%

Sentence length variance

Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts

totalSentences

mean

88.87

std

96.32

1.084

sampleLengths

0	28
1	19
2	24
3	12
4	1
5	14
6	25
7	15
8	28
9	26
10	43
11	23
12	24
13	10
14	24
15	33
16	36
17	42
18	215
19	20
20	150
21	245
22	11
23	7
24	129
25	2
26	8
27	240
28	144
29	227
30	126
31	2
32	129
33	7
34	99
35	161
36	210
37	6
38	42
39	271
40	7
41	206
42	130
43	12
44	307
45	36
46	23
47	7
48	125
49	47

31.67%

Sentence opener variety

Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers

consecutiveRepeats	11
diversityRatio	0.3
totalSentences	60
uniqueOpeners	18

100.00%

Adverb-first sentence starts

Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb

adverbCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"still IS Smooth alter Posit"
1	"still IS Smooth alter Posit"

ratio

0.038

100.00%

Pronoun-first sentence starts

Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun

pronounCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"It had been years, yet"
1	"Their words hung in the"

ratio

0.038

16.60%

Subject-first sentence starts

Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject

subjectCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"Rory's eyes flicked towards the"
1	"The hum of conversation around"
2	"The man's profile was unmistakable"
3	"It had been years, yet"
4	"The athletic build that once"
5	"The boyish charm that once"
6	"Rory felt the pang of"
7	"The Raven's Nest was"
8	"Tonight was no different, each"
9	"Rory wove through them with"
10	"Lyon's response was slow in"
11	"Their words hung in the"
12	"The conversations they used to"
13	"summary Stan hun ter selected"
14	"Story readily grabbed conversations strips"
15	"locks Medical readily/service petrol relay"
16	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay"
17	"locks,in Vick danger departing oasis/service,in"
18	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay"
19	"O Kata former readily Kag"

ratio

0.887

0.00%

Subordinate conjunction sentence starts

Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction

subConjCount	0
totalSentences	53
matches	(empty)
ratio	0

100.00%

Technical jargon density

Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns

analyzedSentences

technicalSentenceCount

matches

0	"hexatrigesimalThe flickering neon lights of The Raven's Nest danced across Rory's face as she slid onto the stool beside Lyon, her eyes roaming the unfamiliar l…"

100.00%

Useless dialogue additions

Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments

totalTags	11
uselessAdditionCount	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)

Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags

totalTags

fancyCount

fancyTags

0	"locks Medical readily/service/service petrol relay storytelling suggesting (suggest)"

dialogueSentences

tagDensity

0.037

leniency

0.074

rawRatio

effectiveRatio

0.074

81.2955%