"The air inside was thick with the scent of aged tea and something sharper—burnt coffee, maybe, or the faintest trace of something darker."
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"Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her well—stood frozen in the doorway, her breath fogging the air in the sudden chill that seeped through the thin fabric of her sweater."
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"And now, here she was, standing in the same flat where she’d once slept, where she’d once *dreamed*—or maybe just *hoped*—that things could be different."
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"His cane—ivory-handled, concealing a blade—rested against the wall, and the way he held himself, shoulders back, chin slightly lifted, made her stomach twist in a way that had nothing to do with fear."
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"And then there was *him*—Lucien, his dark hair slicked back, his amber and black eyes locking onto hers like two magnets drawn to each other."
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"She remembered the night they’d met—how he’d found her in a back alley, how he’d dragged her out of a situation that had almost cost her everything."
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"Rory turned to face him, her eyes locked onto his, searching for something—something that had been lost long ago."
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"Rory turned to face him, her eyes locked onto his, searching for something—something that had been lost long ago."
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"The kettle had stopped, the air between them charged with something that wasn’t just tension—it was *electricity*, a spark that had been waiting to ignite for far too long."
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"She opened her eyes, her gaze locking onto his, searching for something—something that had been lost long ago."
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"Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her well—stood frozen in the doorway, her breath fogging the air in the sudden chill that seeped through the thin fabric o…"
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"The scar on her wrist, a small crescent from a childhood accident, pulsed faintly beneath her skin, as if her body remembered the moment she’d cut it open to st…"
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"The man standing in the doorway was taller than she remembered, his presence filling the space like a shadow that refused to fade."
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"His cane—ivory-handled, concealing a blade—rested against the wall, and the way he held himself, shoulders back, chin slightly lifted, made her stomach twist in…"
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"She remembered the night they’d met—how he’d found her in a back alley, how he’d dragged her out of a situation that had almost cost her everything."
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"He reached out, his hand brushing hers, sending a jolt of electricity through her."
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"Rory turned to face him, her eyes locked onto his, searching for something—something that had been lost long ago."
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"Rory turned to face him, her eyes locked onto his, searching for something—something that had been lost long ago."
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"He reached out, his hand brushing hers, sending a jolt of electricity through her."
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"Rory’s eyes locked onto the scar on her wrist, remembering the way it had felt when she’d cut it open, the way it had stopped bleeding."
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"The kettle stopped whistling, the air between them thick with something that was neither coffee nor tea, but something darker, something *hers*."
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"The kettle had stopped, the air between them charged with something that wasn’t just tension—it was *electricity*, a spark that had been waiting to ignite for f…"
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"The kettle had stopped, the air between them thick with something that wasn’t just coffee or tea, but something darker, something that had been waiting for far …"
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"The air between them crackled with something that wasn’t just tension, but something that had been waiting to ignite for far too long."
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"She opened her eyes, her gaze locking onto his, searching for something—something that had been lost long ago."
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"The air between them was thick with something that wasn’t just coffee, but something darker, something that had been waiting to ignite for far too long."
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"She reached for the mug, her fingers trembling, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps."