Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQWY17H0DSAFPFJCGJ847Z

Run Details

Duration:
36.1s
Cost:
$0.000613
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign above The Raven's Nest hummed softly, casting an emerald glow over the street. Inside, the bar was a familiar blend of dim lights and muttered conversations. The walls, adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, seemed to whisper secrets of a bygone era. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, pushed through the door, the cool air of the London evening giving way to the warm, smoky atmosphere of the bar. She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes searching for a familiar face. Her shoulder-length black hair was tied back, and the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist peeked out from the sleeve of her leather jacket. She had been working a double shift at the Golden Empress, and the tired lines around her eyes were a testament to the long day. Silas Blackwood, the owner of the bar, spotted her from behind the counter. His hazel eyes crinkled at the corners as he smiled, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the light. With a slight limp, he made his way towards her, the polished wood of the bar creaking under his steps. "Rory, you look like you've seen a ghost," he said, a hint of concern in his voice. She laughed, a sound that was both tired and warm. "Just a long day, Silas. I could use a drink." "Comin' right up," he replied, winking as he turned back to the counter. Rory took a seat at a small table by the window, her gaze drifting over the room. The place was as comforting as ever, a sanctuary from the chaos of her life. Her thoughts were interrupted by a sharp intake of breath. Across the room, a figure stood by the entrance, their eyes locked on hers. For a moment, time seemed to freeze. Then, a smile spread across the stranger's face, and it clicked. "Eva?" Rory's voice was a mix of surprise and something else, something she couldn't quite place. Eva's smile widened, and she crossed the room in quick strides. "Rory, it's been, what, five years? Ten?" Rory stood, the two women embracing. Eva's presence was a shock, a stark reminder of the past. Eva's hair was still a vibrant red, but it was shorter now, cut into a chic bob. Her eyes, a deep green, sparkled with the same mischievous glint Rory remembered. "It's been too long," Eva said, pulling back to look at Rory. "You look good, Rory. Really good." Rory felt a pang of self-consciousness. "Thanks. You too. You look... different." Eva laughed, a sound that was both familiar and strange. "Yeah, I guess a lot's changed. How's life in London?" Rory hesitated, her mind flashing back to the long hours at the restaurant, the empty flat above the bar, the occasional delivery that lingered a bit too long. "It's... it's good. I'm working at the Golden Empress, still trying to get back on my feet." Eva nodded, her expression softening. "I remember when you used to talk about becoming a lawyer. You were so set on it." Rory's smile was bitter-sweet. "Things change. I needed to get away from certain... things. London's been a good place for that." Eva's gaze grew serious. "I'm sorry about Evan. I heard what happened. That was rough." Rory's jaw tightened. "Yeah, it was. But I'm here now, and that's all that matters." She took a deep breath, trying to shake off the memories. "What about you? What brings you to London?" Eva's eyes sparkled with excitement. "I'm working for a tech startup. We're developing some pretty groundbreaking stuff. It's been a wild ride." Rory nodded, trying to mask her envy. "That sounds amazing. I'm happy for you." Silas appeared at their table, two glasses of whiskey in hand. "I see you two old friends have a lot to catch up on." Rory and Eva both laughed, and Silas placed the glasses in front of them. "To old times," he said, raising his glass. "To new beginnings," Rory replied, clinking glasses with Eva. They sipped their drinks, the familiar warmth spreading through them. The conversation flowed, touching on old memories and new adventures. Eva regaled Rory with stories of her work, the excitement in her voice contagious. Rory, in turn, spoke of her life in London, the small victories and the daily struggles. As the night wore on, the atmosphere in the bar shifted. The murmur of conversations grew louder, and the bar filled with patrons. Rory and Eva's laughter echoed through the room, a melody of old friendship and new camaraderie. But beneath the surface, there was a tension, a weight of unspoken regret. Rory couldn't help but think about the paths they could have taken, the choices that led them to this moment. Eva, too, seemed to carry a burden, a shadow of a life left behind. "I'm glad we ran into each other," Eva said, her voice low. "It's like... it's like we can pick up where we left off." Rory smiled, a bittersweet smile. "I am too. But things are different now. We're different people." Eva's eyes met hers, a mix of understanding and pain. "Maybe. But some things never change. We'll always be the girls who used to dream big and chase the impossible." Rory felt a lump form in her throat. "Yeah, we'll always be that. No matter what." They clinked glasses again, the sound a promise, a bond that time couldn't break. The bar was a sanctuary, a place where the past and the present collided, where old friends could find each other again. And for a moment, it was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.32
leniency0.64
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount946
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount946
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"familiar"
count4
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"testament"
count1
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count2
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"glint"
count1
9
word"pang"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"whisper"
2"scanned"
3"testament"
4"comforting"
5"sanctuary"
6"stark"
7"reminder"
8"glint"
9"pang"
10"warmth"
11"echoed"
12"tension"
13"weight"
14"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"couldn't help but think"
81.14% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences57
matches
0"was bitter"
1"d with excitement"
2"felt a lump"
67.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords940
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount702
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory19
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Eva15
Silas3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Blackwood"
5"Eva"
6"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
globalScore0.147
windowScore0
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount940
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean30.32
std19.01
cv0.627
sampleLengths
046
192
254
317
420
513
674
716
818
947
1018
1112
1220
1345
1422
1521
1615
1734
1822
1914
2024
2122
229
2350
2439
2547
2624
2716
2830
2916
3043
92.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"was tied"
1"were interrupted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs108
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences74
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount708
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.018361581920903956
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002824858757062147
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean12.7
std5.67
cv0.446
sampleLengths
016
113
217
329
413
525
625
713
821
920
1017
1110
1210
1313
1417
1515
1610
1714
187
1911
2016
2111
227
236
2411
2517
2613
2712
286
296
306
3110
3210
3328
3417
355
3617
374
3817
394
4011
413
4223
438
445
4517
467
477
4811
4913
59.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3918918918918919
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners29
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Then, a smile spread across"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences57
matches
0"She scanned the room, her"
1"Her shoulder-length black hair was"
2"She had been working a"
3"His hazel eyes crinkled at"
4"he said, a hint of"
5"She laughed, a sound that"
6"he replied, winking as he"
7"Her thoughts were interrupted by"
8"Her eyes, a deep green,"
9"She took a deep breath,"
10"he said, raising his glass"
11"They sipped their drinks, the"
12"They clinked glasses again, the"
ratio0.228
30.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences57
matches
0"The neon sign above The"
1"The walls, adorned with old"
2"Aurora Carter, known to her"
3"She scanned the room, her"
4"Her shoulder-length black hair was"
5"She had been working a"
6"Silas Blackwood, the owner of"
7"His hazel eyes crinkled at"
8"he said, a hint of"
9"She laughed, a sound that"
10"he replied, winking as he"
11"Rory took a seat at"
12"The place was as comforting"
13"Her thoughts were interrupted by"
14"Rory's voice was a mix"
15"Eva's smile widened, and she"
16"Rory stood, the two women"
17"Eva's presence was a shock,"
18"Eva's hair was still a"
19"Her eyes, a deep green,"
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory hesitated, her mind flashing back to the long hours at the restaurant, the empty flat above the bar, the occasional delivery that lingered a bit too long."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, a hint of concern in his voice"
1"She took, trying to shake off the memories"
2"Eva said, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.0912%