Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQX0RE0Y0N9XZR2ZGW3YAX

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.017788
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The scraped metal gates of the abandoned Tube station at Camden hung crooked on their hinges, the faded "No Entry" sign flapping with a plastic stiffness beneath the jaundiced lamplight. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath the yellow tape and strode forward, boots echoing sharp and authoritative in the hollow darkness. Her hand brushed a flaking pillar, scanning grime and graffiti, and she found herself mouthing the old Tube line name as if it might reveal what lay ahead. Train schedules—those stuck-down posters—remained pasted to the wet-stained tiles, a last, stubborn record of the world above. She counted four SOCO technicians milling about near the stairwell, their headlamps throwing unsteady halos around a patch of tiled floor. DaCosta, a jowly PC with dirt under his nails, waited beside a battered thermos, nose wrinkled. "Scene's clear, Detective. Bit of a madhouse, this. Not like any sight I’ve caught on the job." He jiggled the lid of his flask. "You’ll want to see this before the brass shows up." Quinn dipped her head, offering little beyond a grunt, and took slow inventory of the shadows—places she might hide if she were someone else. Her foot caught on broken glass, a century-old bottle, and then the smell hit: sulphur and old pipe smoke mingling with coppery iron. She bent, knees grinding quietly, as she moved towards the taped-out circle on the floor. Shards of something lay scattered across it, glittering oddly in the artificial blue-white torch beams. Most glass she’d seen in scenes like this never shimmered lilac or hummed so faintly. She narrowed her eyes. Two paces to the left, a length of scorched wire curled into a figure-eight, singed around the edges, blackened. No heat came from the wire now, but Quinn caught the burnt tang. DaCosta called after her, mouth set. "SOCO's already bagged what they can, but one tech says half of this stuff belongs nowhere in our forensic manuals." Quinn’s nostrils flared as she straightened, standing back to take in a wider view. Water pooled in the shallowest dip, sending odd, flickering reflections across the ceiling—a stalactite of mineral stain catching each quiver from the torch beams. No blood, but plenty of smudged boot prints, too heavy for a single person. Harlow fished a notebook from her jacket, pencil balanced in her left hand—a soldier’s well-trained precision in the gesture. "Body?" "Victim’s gone, Detective," came Faye Lin, her partner on duty tonight. Faye wiped her nose on a sleeve, nerves making her jaw tic. "Scene looks like a mugging at first but—well, you'd better look for yourself." Quinn scanned the chalk outline, marked with tape—no actual chalk used in years, but the phrase stuck. The outline was oddly shaped. Not the usual human sprawl—something longer, arms outstretched in ways bodies didn’t bend unless they’d been... encouraged. No sign of weapon or purse, nothing but the glass, the scorched wire, and a neat pile of powder near the boundary. "And no witnesses?" Her voice clipped out, echo sharp. Faye hunched beside the mess, held up a bag. "This was wedged between the tiles, by the stairs. Could be rubbish, could be something else." A brass compass, face etched with crabbed, looping symbols, twitched on its string. Quinn's breath caught—faint recognition. She allowed her curiosity to flicker, just for a moment, then gestured for gloves. "Show me." Faye passed it over with a shrug. "Usual junk at first glance, but the needle keeps spinning. Not magnetic, if that's what you’re thinking." The compass's casing felt damp, a trace of old sweat or rain, and the sigils caught the torchlight best. Verdigris stained the edges green. The needle kept twitching, not with the lazy surety of a well-built instrument, but a panic—always pointing to the far, shadowed corner where a rusted service door hung ajar. "That door wasn’t broken when the first officers arrived," DaCosta added, crossing his arms, "but Smith swears he heard something moving inside when he checked it—nobody there. No forced entry, either. D'you reckon some kid’s playing ghost?" Harlow rolled the compass between her fingers. "You hear of a market running this far underground, DaCosta?" He grunted. "Rumours, sir. Traders, maybe. Plenty of rats and squatters, not much else. If someone’s selling out of here, they’ll move on tonight, after this." "Market folks clean their mess better than this," Faye cut in, pointing with her torch. "I reckon squatters, maybe a deal gone bad. What about the scorch marks?" Quinn crouched. Her gaze traced the pattern around the wire, then to the purple shards. She peeled off a glove to touch the powder, bringing it close to her nose. No familiar note of drugs from the street—something mustier, like mould and bonfire. "Burnt residue here, but the edges are too perfect. Whoever staged this, they knew what they wanted—" She stopped. The compass began to settle, needle straining at a new angle, away from the door this time, towards the tiling behind the defunct ticket booth. Harlow palmed the casing and stood, her sharp jaw working. "Bag the wire, glass, residue. I want the lab on every inch—metals, isotope, you name it. No rough guesses. Faye, run prints on every stair, both sides." Faye squinted up, a curl of red hair escaping from behind her ear as she moved. "None of this fits a normal set-up. If it’s a ritual, I’ve never seen one this... messy." DaCosta gave an incredulous bark of a laugh. "Ritual, now? Since when did we turn witch-hunter?" Quinn ignored him, tilting the compass again, watching the needle jerk and settle, always tugging toward another dark corner. "The victim. Anything odd before?" She fixed Faye with a steady stare, those brown eyes nearly black in this light. Faye shook her head. "No missing persons matches yet, so far as they told me on comms. Only odd thing—witness outside thought she saw someone in a 'cloak.' Spooked, wouldn’t stay for a statement. Said the air felt wrong." DaCosta rolled his eyes. "People see ghosts whenever we get called down here. Old city nerves. Next you’ll tell me the tiles hum when you listen close." Quinn returned the compass. "Why’d the witness mention the air?" Faye shrugged. "She said it tasted like battery acid. I'll chase the CCTV—if I can even get anything down here—" Quinn’s gaze drifted to the tiled wall behind the ticket booth. Cracks radiated from an improbable spot, almost oval, edges blackened. "You force the ticket booth door, DaCosta?" He shook his head. "No. Why?" She motioned them both back, then pressed her weight into the false panel, fingers running across the brittle tiles. Something gave. Air—colder than the rest of the station—spilled out, bearing another waft of burnt wire and cardamom. Harlow ducked inside. The passage beyond was barely wide enough for her height, the walls warped, the floor at a shallow tilt. Drag marks scored the dust; at least two sets of prints moving in, only one coming out. "Fresh," she murmured, as Faye moved in behind, breath quickening. "That track leads deeper, Detective. Could be squatters, but no standard break pattern—too straight." Quinn nodded. Her mind gambolled between anomaly and intent, every thread of training pricked and alert. She ran her fingers along the shallow groove. "Whoever left did so with purpose. Nobody stumbles or drags their feet like that unless they're being marched, or following something else." The path dog-legged sharply left, swallowing up more darkness, and Quinn paused to listen. The silence behind the old tiles clung in her lungs. Faye coughed, voice thinner now. "If the Market set up here, we won't get a second chance if they catch us poking." Quinn flexed her hand, watch strap tight around her wrist. "Market wouldn’t risk leaving trace like this. Too reckless, too obvious. No. This—" she kicked a bit of powder, watched it splay in unnatural shapes, "—this is either staged for us, or for someone who understood what was happening." A dull, metallic thump sounded somewhere deeper in, a warning or a beckoning. Harlow adjusted her jacket, brow furrowed, eyes alive. "Get everyone topside except SOCO. I want silence. Whoever moved through here might still be on our side of the tunnel." She knelt by the gouged floor, notebook ready. "Let’s see what secrets the Market left behind." Her jaw set, detective's mind working at every tick of her worn leather watch, back arched as if marching on parade, she pressed forward, senses tuned for every whisper that sought to slip past her guard.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1448
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1448
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"magnetic"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"standard"
count1
13
word"silence"
count2
14
word"furrowed"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"scanning"
2"shimmered"
3"scanned"
4"echo"
5"etched"
6"flicker"
7"magnetic"
8"traced"
9"familiar"
10"perfect"
11"weight"
12"standard"
13"silence"
14"furrowed"
15"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
87.20% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1418
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount965
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Camden1
Harlow6
Quinn13
Faye11
Lin1
DaCosta5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Faye"
3"Lin"
4"DaCosta"
places(empty)
globalScore0.826
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if marching on parade, she pressed forward, senses tuned for every whisper that sought to slip past her guard"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.705
wordCount1418
matches
0"not with the lazy surety of a well-built instrument, but a panic"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean32.23
std18.36
cv0.57
sampleLengths
095
137
234
347
481
526
652
720
836
961
109
1138
1220
1324
1453
1537
1617
1726
1828
1943
2044
2137
2233
2316
2419
2520
2639
2727
2810
2920
3021
317
326
3321
3455
3510
3614
3746
3824
3922
4049
4121
4237
4336
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences99
ratio0.121
matches
0"Train schedules—those stuck-down posters—remained pasted to the wet-stained tiles, a last, stubborn record of the world above."
1"Quinn dipped her head, offering little beyond a grunt, and took slow inventory of the shadows—places she might hide if she were someone else."
2"Water pooled in the shallowest dip, sending odd, flickering reflections across the ceiling—a stalactite of mineral stain catching each quiver from the torch beams."
3"Harlow fished a notebook from her jacket, pencil balanced in her left hand—a soldier’s well-trained precision in the gesture."
4"Quinn scanned the chalk outline, marked with tape—no actual chalk used in years, but the phrase stuck."
5"Not the usual human sprawl—something longer, arms outstretched in ways bodies didn’t bend unless they’d been..."
6"Quinn's breath caught—faint recognition."
7"The needle kept twitching, not with the lazy surety of a well-built instrument, but a panic—always pointing to the far, shadowed corner where a rusted service door hung ajar."
8"No familiar note of drugs from the street—something mustier, like mould and bonfire."
9"Air—colder than the rest of the station—spilled out, bearing another waft of burnt wire and cardamom."
10"Drag marks scored the dust; at least two sets of prints moving in, only one coming out."
11"\"Market wouldn’t risk leaving trace like this. Too reckless, too obvious. No. This—\" she kicked a bit of powder, watched it splay in unnatural shapes, \"—this is either staged for us, or for someone who understood what was happening.\""
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount947
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"artificial blue-white torch"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03273495248152059
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010559662090813094
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean14.32
std8.73
cv0.61
sampleLengths
030
120
228
317
421
516
624
710
824
923
1015
1115
1215
134
1419
1513
166
1720
1814
1924
2014
2119
221
2311
2412
2513
2617
275
2816
291
3022
319
329
3329
344
3514
362
377
3817
3919
405
4129
4237
437
4410
452
4624
4715
4813
492
78.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.47474747474747475
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her hand brushed a flaking"
1"She counted four SOCO technicians"
2"He jiggled the lid of"
3"Her foot caught on broken"
4"She bent, knees grinding quietly,"
5"She narrowed her eyes."
6"Her voice clipped out, echo"
7"She allowed her curiosity to"
8"Her gaze traced the pattern"
9"She peeled off a glove"
10"She fixed Faye with a"
11"He shook his head."
12"She motioned them both back,"
13"she murmured, as Faye moved"
14"Her mind gambolled between anomaly"
15"She ran her fingers along"
16"she kicked a bit of"
17"She knelt by the gouged"
18"Her jaw set, detective's mind"
ratio0.271
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences70
matches
0"The scraped metal gates of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath"
2"Her hand brushed a flaking"
3"She counted four SOCO technicians"
4"DaCosta, a jowly PC with"
5"He jiggled the lid of"
6"Quinn dipped her head, offering"
7"Her foot caught on broken"
8"She bent, knees grinding quietly,"
9"Shards of something lay scattered"
10"She narrowed her eyes."
11"DaCosta called after her, mouth"
12"Quinn’s nostrils flared as she"
13"Water pooled in the shallowest"
14"Harlow fished a notebook from"
15"Faye wiped her nose on"
16"Quinn scanned the chalk outline,"
17"The outline was oddly shaped."
18"Her voice clipped out, echo"
19"Faye hunched beside the mess,"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her hand brushed a flaking pillar, scanning grime and graffiti, and she found herself mouthing the old Tube line name as if it might reveal what lay ahead."
1"She counted four SOCO technicians milling about near the stairwell, their headlamps throwing unsteady halos around a patch of tiled floor."
2"Her jaw set, detective's mind working at every tick of her worn leather watch, back arched as if marching on parade, she pressed forward, senses tuned for every…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She fixed, those brown eyes nearly black in this light"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"DaCosta added (add)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.118
82.3081%