Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQX5VZ7M7JH593TG779SWG

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21.4s
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Thunder cracked above London, sending shudders through the city’s labyrinthine streets. Detective Harlow Quinn advanced through the downpour, her trench coat clinging to her like a second skin. Her eyes, sharp and unyielding, never left the figure darting ahead of her. Each step felt like a war against the storm. "He can’t get away, not tonight," she muttered to herself, pushing rain-soaked hair from her eyes. The figure, barely visible amidst the torrent, rounded a corner. Quinn's pulse hammered in her ears as she quickened her pace, boots splashing in filthy puddles. The suspect was quick, a blur, weaving through people huddling under umbrellas and sheltering in doorways. Quinn cursed, her attention split between maintaining her speed and keeping track of her quarry. The neon signs of Soho's endless bars and clubs glowed deceitfully through the rain. "You should've stayed in Seville, Tomás," she called out, voice nearly lost in the storm. But Tomás Herrera, with that familiar Saint Christopher medallion bouncing against his damp shirt, did not slow. Quinn felt the weight of her revolver under her coat—comforting, albeit slightly damp. The memory of her partner, DS Morris, flashed before her eyes. The supernatural interference in that case had cost her dearly, and she wouldn’t let Tomás slip through her fingers, not when he was connected to the same elusive web. Tomás ducked into an alley, and Quinn followed. The darkness seemed to swallow them both. Her steps echoed off the narrow walls, mingling with distant echoes of club music. She spotted Tomás's figure ahead and kicked into gear, closing the distance. The alley ended in an old iron gate, thrust open by Tomás. Beyond it lay a set of worn stone steps leading down. Quinn hesitated for just a breath. An underground market? She hadn’t set foot in one since... since Morris. Her jaw tightened; she couldn’t afford to let fear stop her. Tomás vanished down the steps and Quinn followed, determined. The stairs spiraled down, and she took them two at a time. The echoes grew louder, a cacophony of voices and unidentifiable sounds. The descent ended in a cavernous, dimly lit space—the Veil Market. Quinn was hit with the mingled scents of ancient incense and musty decay. Enchanted goods sparkled faintly under weak fluorescent lights, and hooded figures sold banned substances and darker secrets. Quinn's eyes adjusted, scanning the bustling chaos. Tomás was threading through the crowd, hoping to disappear. Quinn moved, her bearing unmistakably military, reminding her of earlier days when order was simpler. She avoided eye contact with the vendors and patrons, keeping her attention on the olive-skinned man slipping deeper into the market. “Good evening, Detective,” a raspy voice came from her right. A figure she vaguely recognized, cloaked in shadows, nodded at her. She ignored the greeting, pushing past him. The crowd shifted, parting unconsciously as if sensing the storm that was Harlow Quinn. Tomás cast a glance over his shoulder, his eyes wide as he realised she was still on his tail. He picked up his pace. “Not this time, Tomás,” Quinn growled. The market grew less inviting as she progressed. Stalls made of ancient wood and bone tokens dangled ominously. She knew the full moon meant the market would disappear soon, sealing Tomás’s escape. Her chase was against more than just Tomás—it was against time itself. Tomás darted left, slipping through a narrow gap between two stalls. Quinn shoved through after him, ignoring the startled hisses of cloaked vendors. The passage opened into another section of the market, its floor rough cobblestones. Harlow’s training, years of it, had prepared her for foot chases, but supernatural contexts added unpredictable variables. Tomás was nearing the back end, where the market’s light dimmed almost to nothing. Quinn pushed herself harder, legs burning. She drew her revolver, keeping it low but ready. She wasn’t looking for a fatal end. Just answers. The suspect reached the end, skidding to a halt in front of a bookshelf. Panic flashed in his eyes as he shoved the shelf aside with a strength borne of desperation. It revealed a hidden door, just as the codex she had stolen had indicated. This was the clique's main sanctum. Quinn acted on instinct. She lunged, catching Tomás by the arm before he could disappear behind the door. He struggled, his scarred forearm twitching in her grip. “Tommy. Enough. Where do you think you're going?” she challenged, voice steady as her rain-drenched fingers tightened around his wrist. “Detective, you don’t understand... you can’t be here,” he pleaded, eyes darting. Quinn’s resolve did not waver. Memories of Morris's death flared in her mind, driving her to hold her ground. “You owe me,” she spat, voice just above a whisper. “You owe Morris.” The corridor behind the concealed door beckoned—an unknown, dangerous territory. Quinn felt it in her gut, the shift of the air, the promise of dark secrets. This was what she had been seeking, the heart of the clique’s operations. The mad rush of decision-making churned through her. Tomás could lead her straight into a trap, or he could provide the breakthrough she needed to finally understand what happened to Morris. There was no guarantee she would come out unscathed. But hesitation wasn’t an option. Not anymore. “Show me what you’re hiding,” she demanded, releasing her grip slightly, enough for him to understand she wasn’t messing around. Tomás’s shoulders slumped in submission. He stepped into the corridor, Quinn close on his heels. The door closed behind them with a resounding thud, cutting off the noise of the Veil Market. Lanterns with flickering light lined the walls, casting eerie shadows. “This way,” Tomás murmured, leading her into the bowels of the sanctum. It smelled of old paper and something else—something ancient and alive. They moved in silence, the path twisting until Quinn could no longer orient herself. They emerged into a large chamber adorned with mystical symbols and alchemical equipment. Devices she had only seen in Morris's case files lay scattered around, glinting ominously under the dim light. “Welcome to the heart of the clique,” Tomás said bitterly. “This is what you wanted, isn’t it? Answers?” Quinn holstered her revolver, surveying the scene. She felt the weight of impending revelations pressing on her. “Start talking,” she ordered, her voice a mere whisper in the thick, charged air. “And don’t leave anything out.” Tomás took a deep breath, his eyes shifting from the glowing symbols to meet hers. “Alright, Harlow. I’ll tell you everything. But once you know, there’s no going back.” In the silence that followed, the storm raged on outside, tearing through the streets of London. And deep underground, amid secrets and darkness, Detective Harlow Quinn prepared to confront the truths that had eluded her for so long.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Tomás said bitterly [bitterly]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.733
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
91.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"amidst"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"echoes"
count2
8
word"determined"
count1
9
word"cacophony"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"variables"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count2
14
word"churned"
count1
15
word"silence"
count2
16
word"glinting"
count1
17
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"amidst"
1"pulse"
2"quickened"
3"familiar"
4"weight"
5"comforting"
6"echoed"
7"echoes"
8"determined"
9"cacophony"
10"scanning"
11"variables"
12"resolve"
13"whisper"
14"churned"
15"silence"
16"glinting"
17"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1126
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1042
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.02
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London2
Harlow4
Quinn21
Soho1
Tomás18
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Morris5
Veil2
Market2
Detective2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Morris"
7"Market"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.492
windowScore0.667
88.27% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a war against the storm"
1"as if sensing the storm that was Harlow Quinn"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1126
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
60.50% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean35.19
std12.73
cv0.362
sampleLengths
050
142
245
332
453
541
652
732
848
945
1042
1124
126
1344
1453
1538
1651
1727
1820
1912
2032
2139
2247
2320
2442
2537
2631
2718
2817
2919
3029
3138
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"was connected"
63.95% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs196
matches
0"was threading"
1"was nearing"
2"wasn’t looking"
3"wasn’t messing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences97
ratio0.062
matches
0"Quinn felt the weight of her revolver under her coat—comforting, albeit slightly damp."
1"Her jaw tightened; she couldn’t afford to let fear stop her."
2"The descent ended in a cavernous, dimly lit space—the Veil Market."
3"Her chase was against more than just Tomás—it was against time itself."
4"The corridor behind the concealed door beckoned—an unknown, dangerous territory."
5"It smelled of old paper and something else—something ancient and alive."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1051
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"under weak fluorescent lights,"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02759276879162702
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.015223596574690771
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean11.61
std4.91
cv0.423
sampleLengths
011
117
213
39
416
510
616
716
815
914
1015
1117
1213
1311
1429
158
167
1714
1812
1912
2011
216
223
237
242
2511
269
2712
2811
2911
3013
3117
327
339
3415
3521
3610
3711
387
3914
4019
415
426
438
4410
4514
4612
4711
4812
4913
55.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3711340206185567
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences89
matches
0"Her eyes, sharp and unyielding,"
1"she muttered to herself, pushing"
2"she called out, voice nearly"
3"Her steps echoed off the"
4"She spotted Tomás's figure ahead"
5"She hadn’t set foot in"
6"Her jaw tightened; she couldn’t"
7"She avoided eye contact with"
8"She ignored the greeting, pushing"
9"He picked up his pace."
10"She knew the full moon"
11"Her chase was against more"
12"She drew her revolver, keeping"
13"She wasn’t looking for a"
14"It revealed a hidden door,"
15"She lunged, catching Tomás by"
16"He struggled, his scarred forearm"
17"she challenged, voice steady as"
18"he pleaded, eyes darting"
19"she spat, voice just above"
ratio0.303
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences89
matches
0"Thunder cracked above London, sending"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn advanced through"
2"Her eyes, sharp and unyielding,"
3"Each step felt like a"
4"she muttered to herself, pushing"
5"The figure, barely visible amidst"
6"Quinn's pulse hammered in her"
7"The suspect was quick, a"
8"Quinn cursed, her attention split"
9"The neon signs of Soho's"
10"she called out, voice nearly"
11"Quinn felt the weight of"
12"The memory of her partner,"
13"The supernatural interference in that"
14"Tomás ducked into an alley,"
15"The darkness seemed to swallow"
16"Her steps echoed off the"
17"She spotted Tomás's figure ahead"
18"The alley ended in an"
19"Quinn hesitated for just a"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"And deep underground, amid secrets and darkness, Detective Harlow Quinn prepared to confront the truths that had eluded her for so long."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she called out, voice nearly lost in the storm"
1"he pleaded, eyes darting"
2"she spat, voice just above a whisper"
3"she ordered, her voice a mere whisper in the thick, charged air"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"Quinn growled (growl)"
3"she challenged (challenge)"
4"he pleaded (plead)"
5"she spat (spit)"
6"she demanded (demand)"
7"Tomás murmured (murmur)"
8"she ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.9
effectiveRatio0.9
70.1515%