| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 31 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said absently [absently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.585 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.032 | | effectiveRatio | 0.032 | |
| 63.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1249 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "really" | | 5 | "slowly" | | 6 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1249 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "unspoken" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "eyebrow" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "tension" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "resolve" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "silence" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "tinged" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "tears streamed down" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "tears streamed down" | | 1 | "hung heavy in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1242 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.12% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 916 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.64 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | London | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Silas | 6 | | Evan | 10 | | Silence | 1 | | Time | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Silence" | | 7 | "Time" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.681 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 42.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if searching for an answer in her expression" | | 1 | "as if searching for the right words" | | 2 | "quite reach her eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.805 | | wordCount | 1242 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 22.58 | | std | 11.58 | | cv | 0.513 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 41 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "He had changed, no doubt; the boy she knew had morphed into a man sculpted by hardship." | | 1 | "Back then, everything felt simple, light—until it wasn’t." | | 2 | "She met his gaze, a torrent of emotions swirling behind his brown eyes—longing, guilt, and perhaps a flicker of remorse." | | 3 | "“Caring doesn’t erase the past. It’s a nice thought, though.” Rory took a deep breath, leaning back against the cool wood of the table, feeling the bar sway around them—a world brighter and more alive than the darkness they lingered in." | | 4 | "He nodded slightly, a reminder that beneath the tangled mess of history, a steady heartbeat rushed on—life waited, relentless and unforgiving." | | 5 | "The floors of their lives felt distance apart, but they lingered in this moment—two figures, shadows of who they once were, forever marked by the scars of their choices." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 923 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.03358613217768147 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014084507042253521 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 12.55 | | std | 6.3 | | cv | 0.503 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 82.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5050505050505051 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 44.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the bell above the" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 49.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She absently watched Silas serve" | | 1 | "His silvery signet ring glinted" | | 2 | "she muttered, the name slipping" | | 3 | "His eyes scanned the dim" | | 4 | "he called out, disbelief lacing" | | 5 | "She braced herself as he" | | 6 | "He had changed, no doubt;" | | 7 | "he said, an uneasy smile" | | 8 | "He gestured to her uniform" | | 9 | "she countered, meeting his gaze" | | 10 | "He trailed off, glancing around" | | 11 | "She remembered when they used" | | 12 | "she said absently, still focused" | | 13 | "he said, gesturing towards a" | | 14 | "He watched from behind the" | | 15 | "They slipped into the corner," | | 16 | "He leaned forward, peering intently." | | 17 | "she interrupted, sharp as broken" | | 18 | "She crossed her arms, feeling" | | 19 | "He fell silent, mouth opening" |
| | ratio | 0.427 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest hummed with" | | 1 | "The air felt thick with" | | 2 | "Aurora Carter, or Rory as" | | 3 | "She absently watched Silas serve" | | 4 | "His silvery signet ring glinted" | | 5 | "Time had added grey streaks" | | 6 | "Silas's voice cut through the" | | 7 | "Rory replied, her gaze fixed" | | 8 | "The amber liquid shimmered, mirroring" | | 9 | "Silas chuckled lightly, wiping a" | | 10 | "Rory flashed him a smile," | | 11 | "A tall figure stepped inside," | | 12 | "Rory squinted, recognition blooming in" | | 13 | "she muttered, the name slipping" | | 14 | "His eyes scanned the dim" | | 15 | "he called out, disbelief lacing" | | 16 | "She braced herself as he" | | 17 | "Evan’s presence felt heavy, like" | | 18 | "He had changed, no doubt;" | | 19 | "The shadows under his eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.947 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber liquid shimmered, mirroring the chaos of memories that brewed in her mind." | | 1 | "He fell silent, mouth opening and closing as if searching for the right words." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 31 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, the name slipping from her lips like a bitter pill" | | 1 | "he called out, disbelief lacing his tone" | | 2 | "he said, an uneasy smile attempting to bridge the years" | | 3 | "Rory snapped, her heart pounding" | | 4 | "Rory replied, eyes focused on the scratched table" | | 5 | "he said, his voice barely above a whisper" | | 6 | "she asked, disbelief lacing her words" | | 7 | "he shot back, a hint of anger lacing his tone" | | 8 | "Evan replied, his disappointment clear" | | 9 | "She met, but the word hung heavy in the air" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 22 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "he called out (call out)" | | 2 | "Rory snapped (snap)" | | 3 | "she conceded (concede)" | | 4 | "she interrupted (interrupt)" | | 5 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 6 | "It felt (feel)" | | 7 | "Rory interjected (interject)" | | 8 | "Rory agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.415 | | leniency | 0.83 | | rawRatio | 0.409 | | effectiveRatio | 0.34 | |