Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQXCAVYM07Q6C9N4WSBN5G

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Duration:
50.4s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the murmur of clinking glasses and low conversations. Dim lights cast soft shadows against the peeling wallpaper, revealing maps of a long-forgotten London. The air felt thick with an unspoken history, punctuated by the distinct scent of aged whiskey and smoke. Aurora Carter, or Rory as everyone called her, leaned against the bar, her fingers tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist. She absently watched Silas serve a group of patrons. His silvery signet ring glinted under the muted overhead light. Time had added grey streaks to his hair, yet the sharpness in his hazel eyes remained unchanged, a reminder of the man she once knew. “Beer looks good. Strong enough to drive out old ghosts?” Silas's voice cut through the noise, smooth and low. “Depends on the ghosts, doesn’t it?” Rory replied, her gaze fixed on the cold pint sitting before her. The amber liquid shimmered, mirroring the chaos of memories that brewed in her mind. Silas chuckled lightly, wiping a glass dry. “Well, I don’t have any strong brews tonight, only the usual. Unless you’re feeling adventurous?” Rory flashed him a smile, the corners of her mouth turning upwards, but it didn’t reach her eyes. “I think I’ll keep it simple.” Suddenly, the bell above the entrance clanged, drawing both their eyes. A tall figure stepped inside, drenched from the London rain, shaking droplets from his old leather jacket. Rory squinted, recognition blooming in her chest, followed by an uneasy twist. “Evan,” she muttered, the name slipping from her lips like a bitter pill. His eyes scanned the dim bar, pausing on a familiar face. “Rory?” he called out, disbelief lacing his tone. She braced herself as he approached. Evan’s presence felt heavy, like an iron ball dragging behind him. He had changed, no doubt; the boy she knew had morphed into a man sculpted by hardship. The shadows under his eyes told stories of sleepless nights and battles fought. “Long time no see,” he said, an uneasy smile attempting to bridge the years. “Yeah, well, life happens,” Rory replied, her voice steady but cool, betraying none of the anxiety that twisted her stomach. “Still working as a delivery driver, I see.” He gestured to her uniform with an odd mixture of pride and condescension. “Part-time. Planning on moving up soon,” she countered, meeting his gaze head-on. The weight of old resentments simmered beneath the surface. “Good to hear. Cardiff must be boring now that you’re…” He trailed off, glancing around the bar, searching for something to anchor their conversation. “Since I moved?” Rory raised an eyebrow, allowing him to squirm. “You could say that.” Evan chuckled lightly, his laughter lacking warmth. The corner of his mouth quirked up in a way that sparked a familiar discomfort. She remembered when they used to laugh until tears streamed down their cheeks. Back then, everything felt simple, light—until it wasn’t. Silas, sensing the tension, slid a whiskey glass across the bar towards Rory. “Here, this one’s on the house." “Thanks,” she said absently, still focused on Evan, who fidgeted, running a hand through his damp hair. “Got a minute?” he said, gesturing towards a secluded corner table shrouded in shadows. “Why?” Rory snapped, her heart pounding. “You just want to recap old times?” “I’m not here to make trouble,” Evan said, the softness in his voice contrasting sharply with her guardedness. Rory glanced at Silas, who raised an eyebrow as if searching for an answer in her expression. He watched from behind the bar, arms crossed, silently assessing the situation. “Fine,” she conceded. “Just for a moment.” They slipped into the corner, the din of the bar muted as they entered their own bubble of awkwardness. Evan leaned back, but the tension in his rigid posture betrayed his attempt at ease. “So… you’ve changed. A lot.” “Doesn’t matter,” Rory replied, eyes focused on the scratched table. “What’s the point of discussing the past?” He leaned forward, peering intently. “Because we can’t just pretend it doesn’t exist. What I did… how I was…” “Was?” she interrupted, sharp as broken glass. “You still are. Just because you’ve thrown on a different suit doesn’t mean the monster has disappeared.” Evan’s face fell. “Rory, I’m trying here. You don’t think I regret those days?” “You regret being caught,” she snapped. “You regret losing control. Not me. I fled.” She crossed her arms, feeling small yet powerful, knowing she had escaped, even if the scars remained. He fell silent, mouth opening and closing as if searching for the right words. The intimacy they once shared lay in shards between them. Regret punctured the air, heavy and suffocating. “Have you seen anyone since…” He hesitated, the tender memory lodged in his throat. “Since you? No. And I won’t.” It felt liberating to say that, yet the glimmer of possibility dimmed something inside. Evan swallowed hard. “You deserve better than what I…” “Don’t pretend like you care,” Rory interjected, cutting through the tension, her resolve sliding into defensiveness. “You chose your path.” “Doesn’t mean I don’t think about it,” he said, his voice barely above a whisper. “Really think about it. About you.” Silence filled the space, hanging thick around them. She met his gaze, a torrent of emotions swirling behind his brown eyes—longing, guilt, and perhaps a flicker of remorse. “Do you want to apologize?” she asked, disbelief lacing her words. “No,” he said, shaking his head slowly. “I want to understand. I want you to know—” “Understand what? The lies? The promises made then broken? The scars I carry every day?” Evan’s face tightened, the rawness of her words cutting into him. “I didn’t ask you to forgive me,” he shot back, a hint of anger lacing his tone. “I’m here because I care enough not to ignore it anymore.” “Caring doesn’t erase the past. It’s a nice thought, though.” Rory took a deep breath, leaning back against the cool wood of the table, feeling the bar sway around them—a world brighter and more alive than the darkness they lingered in. “What do you want from me?” she asked after a moment, her voice lowered, less aggressive but filled with doubt. “I want you to know that I’ve changed too. That I’m not that person anymore.” The bitterness tinged her laughter, cold and sharp. “And I’m supposed to believe that?” “Believe what you want,” Evan replied, his disappointment clear. “But I’m not the enemy here.” “Not anymore,” Rory agreed, forcing a smile that didn’t quite reach her eyes. He nodded slowly, the weight of unspoken regrets settling between them once again. Rory glanced back towards the bar, catching Silas’s eye. He nodded slightly, a reminder that beneath the tangled mess of history, a steady heartbeat rushed on—life waited, relentless and unforgiving. Evan shifted, uncertainty pooling in his expression. “Maybe I’ll come around again,” he said. “And we can talk. For real this time.” “Maybe.” She met his gaze without flinching, but the word hung heavy in the air. Time had stretched between them, leaving gaps she couldn’t fill with old promises or friendly platitudes. The floors of their lives felt distance apart, but they lingered in this moment—two figures, shadows of who they once were, forever marked by the scars of their choices. And as they sat in that dim corner, framed by flickering light, Rory realized some ghosts neither faded nor disappeared. They just waited for a chance to resurface.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said absently [absently]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.585
leniency1
rawRatio0.032
effectiveRatio0.032
63.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1249
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count2
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"suddenly"
2"sharply"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"really"
5"slowly"
6"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1249
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"unspoken"
count2
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count2
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"eyebrow"
count2
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"tension"
count3
11
word"pounding"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
16
word"tinged"
count1
highlights
0"unspoken"
1"tracing"
2"reminder"
3"shimmered"
4"scanned"
5"familiar"
6"stomach"
7"weight"
8"eyebrow"
9"warmth"
10"tension"
11"pounding"
12"resolve"
13"whisper"
14"silence"
15"flicker"
16"tinged"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"tears streamed down"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"tears streamed down"
1"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences78
matches
0"a flicker of remorse"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1242
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.12% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount916
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.64
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Carter1
Rory15
Silas6
Evan10
Silence1
Time2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
6"Silence"
7"Time"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.681
windowScore0.833
42.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if searching for an answer in her expression"
1"as if searching for the right words"
2"quite reach her eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.805
wordCount1242
matches
0"neither faded nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean22.58
std11.58
cv0.513
sampleLengths
046
166
219
332
422
524
640
713
819
947
1014
1120
1221
1321
1424
1515
1643
1719
1817
1914
2013
2118
2229
237
2419
2520
2617
2719
2824
2914
3031
3131
3214
3320
349
3520
3621
3728
3811
3916
4015
4139
4241
4320
4415
4514
4615
4713
4813
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs182
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences99
ratio0.061
matches
0"He had changed, no doubt; the boy she knew had morphed into a man sculpted by hardship."
1"Back then, everything felt simple, light—until it wasn’t."
2"She met his gaze, a torrent of emotions swirling behind his brown eyes—longing, guilt, and perhaps a flicker of remorse."
3"“Caring doesn’t erase the past. It’s a nice thought, though.” Rory took a deep breath, leaning back against the cool wood of the table, feeling the bar sway around them—a world brighter and more alive than the darkness they lingered in."
4"He nodded slightly, a reminder that beneath the tangled mess of history, a steady heartbeat rushed on—life waited, relentless and unforgiving."
5"The floors of their lives felt distance apart, but they lingered in this moment—two figures, shadows of who they once were, forever marked by the scars of their choices."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount923
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03358613217768147
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.014084507042253521
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.55
std6.3
cv0.503
sampleLengths
013
115
218
322
49
510
625
719
818
914
107
1115
1218
136
1411
1517
1612
1713
1811
198
206
2111
2217
2313
2414
2520
2621
2712
289
2924
3011
314
327
3315
3413
358
3613
376
3817
3914
406
417
4218
4317
4412
453
464
4719
4815
495
82.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5050505050505051
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners50
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Suddenly, the bell above the"
ratio0.013
49.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences75
matches
0"She absently watched Silas serve"
1"His silvery signet ring glinted"
2"she muttered, the name slipping"
3"His eyes scanned the dim"
4"he called out, disbelief lacing"
5"She braced herself as he"
6"He had changed, no doubt;"
7"he said, an uneasy smile"
8"He gestured to her uniform"
9"she countered, meeting his gaze"
10"He trailed off, glancing around"
11"She remembered when they used"
12"she said absently, still focused"
13"he said, gesturing towards a"
14"He watched from behind the"
15"They slipped into the corner,"
16"He leaned forward, peering intently."
17"she interrupted, sharp as broken"
18"She crossed her arms, feeling"
19"He fell silent, mouth opening"
ratio0.427
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences75
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"The air felt thick with"
2"Aurora Carter, or Rory as"
3"She absently watched Silas serve"
4"His silvery signet ring glinted"
5"Time had added grey streaks"
6"Silas's voice cut through the"
7"Rory replied, her gaze fixed"
8"The amber liquid shimmered, mirroring"
9"Silas chuckled lightly, wiping a"
10"Rory flashed him a smile,"
11"A tall figure stepped inside,"
12"Rory squinted, recognition blooming in"
13"she muttered, the name slipping"
14"His eyes scanned the dim"
15"he called out, disbelief lacing"
16"She braced herself as he"
17"Evan’s presence felt heavy, like"
18"He had changed, no doubt;"
19"The shadows under his eyes"
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The amber liquid shimmered, mirroring the chaos of memories that brewed in her mind."
1"He fell silent, mouth opening and closing as if searching for the right words."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she muttered, the name slipping from her lips like a bitter pill"
1"he called out, disbelief lacing his tone"
2"he said, an uneasy smile attempting to bridge the years"
3"Rory snapped, her heart pounding"
4"Rory replied, eyes focused on the scratched table"
5"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
6"she asked, disbelief lacing her words"
7"he shot back, a hint of anger lacing his tone"
8"Evan replied, his disappointment clear"
9"She met, but the word hung heavy in the air"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"he called out (call out)"
2"Rory snapped (snap)"
3"she conceded (concede)"
4"she interrupted (interrupt)"
5"she snapped (snap)"
6"It felt (feel)"
7"Rory interjected (interject)"
8"Rory agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.415
leniency0.83
rawRatio0.409
effectiveRatio0.34
70.6562%