Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQXDQ8Z54C9CKXB8GS07V2

Run Details

Duration:
29.4s
Cost:
$0.001428
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove was too still. Rory adjusted the strap of her bag, her fingers brushing the cold metal of the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. It pulsed faintly—not warm, not yet, but she could feel the thrum of it against her skin like a second heartbeat. The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks twisted into unnatural shapes, their bark blackened in places as if scorched by something that wasn’t fire. She’d come because Eva had begged her to. A lead, she’d said. Something about the disappearances near Richmond Park, about the way the police reports kept mentioning wildflowers blooming out of season. Rory had rolled her eyes at first, but Eva had that look—the one that meant she wasn’t going to let it go. So here she was, stepping over the threshold between the stones, the air thickening around her like syrup. The first thing she noticed was the silence. No birds, no rustle of leaves, not even the distant hum of traffic from the city. Just the whisper of her own breath and the soft crunch of grass underfoot. The second thing was the smell—sweet, cloying, like rotting fruit left too long in the sun. Rory pulled her jacket tighter. “Okay,” she muttered, more to hear her own voice than anything. “Just a quick look around.” The path ahead twisted, the trees pressing in too close. Their branches didn’t sway. The wildflowers Eva had mentioned were everywhere, petals too bright, too perfect, like they’d been painted onto the earth. Rory crouched, brushing a finger against one. It didn’t bend. It didn’t feel like a flower at all. A sound behind her—a snap, like a twig breaking. She straightened, turning slowly. Nothing. Just the grove, the stones, the too-still trees. “Hello?” No answer. Rory exhaled through her nose, forcing her shoulders to relax. Paranoia wouldn’t help. She reached for the pendant again, but this time, it burned. She hissed, yanking her hand back. The crimson gem glowed faintly through the fabric of her shirt, pulsing faster now, like it was trying to warn her. Another sound. Not a twig this time. A whisper. Not words. Not anything human. Her skin prickled. She wasn’t alone. The trees seemed taller suddenly, their branches weaving together overhead, blotting out what little moonlight there’d been. The flowers gleamed in the dark, their colors too vivid, their edges too sharp. Rory’s breath came quicker. She took a step back—then froze. Something moved between the trees. Not an animal. Not anything with a shape she could name. Just a flicker, a shadow that didn’t belong, slipping between the trunks like oil on water. The pendant seared against her chest. Run. She didn’t wait. Rory turned, boots slipping on the damp grass, and bolted for the standing stones. The path twisted, the trees shifting, their roots rising to snag at her ankles. She stumbled, caught herself, kept moving. Behind her, the whisper came again—closer now, hungry. The stones were ahead. Just a few more steps. The air thickened, pressing against her like hands trying to hold her back. Rory gritted her teeth and lunged forward, breaking through the boundary with a gasp. The sounds of the city rushed back in—cars, voices, the distant wail of a siren. She collapsed onto the pavement outside Richmond Park, her chest heaving, the pendant cooling against her skin. When she looked back, the grove was gone. Just trees. Just a park. But the smell of rotting fruit clung to her clothes.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount592
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount592
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count3
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"could feel"
2"loomed"
3"silence"
4"whisper"
5"perfect"
6"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords584
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount577
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Eva3
Richmond2
Park2
Rory8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.807
windowScore1
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed taller suddenly, their branches weaving together overhead, blotting out what little moonlight there’d been"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords3.425
wordCount584
matches
0"not warm, not yet, but she could feel the thrum of it against her skin like a secon"
1"not yet, but she could feel the thrum of it against her skin like a secon"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean24.33
std22.37
cv0.919
sampleLengths
074
172
254
321
451
59
613
71
82
951
109
115
126
1341
145
1527
166
171
1845
199
2027
2132
2213
2310
94.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"been painted"
1"was gone"
73.02% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs105
matches
0"was, stepping"
1"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences65
ratio0.108
matches
0"It pulsed faintly—not warm, not yet, but she could feel the thrum of it against her skin like a second heartbeat."
1"Rory had rolled her eyes at first, but Eva had that look—the one that meant she wasn’t going to let it go."
2"The second thing was the smell—sweet, cloying, like rotting fruit left too long in the sun."
3"A sound behind her—a snap, like a twig breaking."
4"She took a step back—then froze."
5"Behind her, the whisper came again—closer now, hungry."
6"The sounds of the city rushed back in—cars, voices, the distant wail of a siren."
96.11% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount585
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.044444444444444446
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006837606837606838
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean8.98
std6.26
cv0.696
sampleLengths
09
120
221
324
48
54
620
722
818
98
1016
1114
1216
135
1411
155
1610
174
1819
197
203
218
229
234
241
258
261
272
2810
293
3011
316
3221
332
345
352
362
373
383
393
4017
4114
424
436
445
453
468
4716
486
491
44.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3230769230769231
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners21
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences56
matches
0"Just the whisper of her"
1"Just the grove, the stones,"
2"Just a flicker, a shadow"
3"Just a few more steps."
4"Just a park."
ratio0.089
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences56
matches
0"It pulsed faintly—not warm, not"
1"She’d come because Eva had"
2"she muttered, more to hear"
3"Their branches didn’t sway."
4"It didn’t bend."
5"It didn’t feel like a"
6"She straightened, turning slowly."
7"She reached for the pendant"
8"She hissed, yanking her hand"
9"Her skin prickled."
10"She wasn’t alone."
11"She took a step back—then"
12"She didn’t wait."
13"She stumbled, caught herself, kept"
14"She collapsed onto the pavement"
ratio0.268
85.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences56
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"It pulsed faintly—not warm, not"
3"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
4"She’d come because Eva had"
5"A lead, she’d said."
6"Something about the disappearances near"
7"Rory had rolled her eyes"
8"The first thing she noticed"
9"The second thing was the"
10"Rory pulled her jacket tighter."
11"she muttered, more to hear"
12"The path ahead twisted, the"
13"Their branches didn’t sway."
14"The wildflowers Eva had mentioned"
15"Rory crouched, brushing a finger"
16"It didn’t bend."
17"It didn’t feel like a"
18"A sound behind her—a snap,"
19"She straightened, turning slowly."
ratio0.75
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks twisted into unnatural shapes, their bark blackened in places as if scorched by something that wasn’t fire."
1"The crimson gem glowed faintly through the fabric of her shirt, pulsing faster now, like it was trying to warn her."
2"The trees seemed taller suddenly, their branches weaving together overhead, blotting out what little moonlight there’d been."
3"The path twisted, the trees shifting, their roots rising to snag at her ankles."
4"She collapsed onto the pavement outside Richmond Park, her chest heaving, the pendant cooling against her skin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
75.5512%