| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 73.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1111 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "completely" | | 5 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1111 | | totalAiIsms | 41 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "foreboding" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "wavered" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "predator" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "fragmented" | | 13 | "echoed" | | 14 | "amidst" | | 15 | "cacophony" | | 16 | "searing" | | 17 | "trembled" | | 18 | "weight" | | 19 | "determined" | | 20 | "throb" | | 21 | "depths" | | 22 | "resolve" | | 23 | "measured" | | 24 | "familiar" | | 25 | "chill" | | 26 | "tinged" | | 27 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.79% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 20 | | totalWords | 1101 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "Don’t be stupid, Rory. You’ve been here before." | | 1 | "Nothing’s there. Nothing’s there." | | 2 | "shifted" | | 3 | "Run, Rory. You can’t hide forever." | | 4 | "flow" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.23% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1027 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 13 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Like | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Like" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.672 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "reds that seemed to bleed" |
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| 18.35% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.817 | | wordCount | 1101 | | matches | | 0 | "Not words, exactly, but something mimicking them" | | 1 | "not just moved, but *shifted*, twisting" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 36.7 | | std | 18.83 | | cv | 0.513 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 18 |
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| 99.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "was tinged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 214 | | matches | | |
| 12.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.046 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond the standing stones, the clearing stretched into a labyrinth of wildflowers that bloomed unnaturally vibrant—blacks so deep they swallowed light, reds that seemed to bleed." | | 1 | "Something moved—too quick to see clearly, but definitely something." | | 2 | "Shadows moved—not just moved, but *shifted*, twisting and reforming into shapes that defied logic." | | 3 | "The shadows closed in, their shapes now unmistakable—figures with too many limbs, eyes glowing like embers." | | 4 | "Like it had tested her and found her worthy—for now." | | 5 | "She wasn’t safe—not yet—but she wasn’t helpless either." |
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| 84.20% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1037 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.05689488910318226 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.021215043394406944 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 8.4 | | std | 4.41 | | cv | 0.524 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 43.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.2824427480916031 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 87.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Just keep moving." | | 1 | "Still wrong, but less hostile." | | 2 | "Only ten minutes had passed." |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 62.11% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the boundary" | | 1 | "She clenched her fists, her" | | 2 | "You’ve been here before.*" | | 3 | "she muttered, more to herself" | | 4 | "Her trainers crunched on dead" | | 5 | "Her delivery uniform felt too" | | 6 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 7 | "she whispered, though the air" | | 8 | "She pressed on, the sound" | | 9 | "Her skin prickled, and she" | | 10 | "Her breath caught." | | 11 | "She forced herself to take" | | 12 | "Her voice wavered, swallowed by" | | 13 | "She swallowed hard and kept" | | 14 | "It slithered through the air," | | 15 | "She spun around, searching for" | | 16 | "She broke into a jog," | | 17 | "Her chest tightened." | | 18 | "She dared a glance over" | | 19 | "Her throat dried." |
| | ratio | 0.395 | |
| 3.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 104 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly" | | 1 | "The air tasted metallic, sharp," | | 2 | "She paused at the boundary" | | 3 | "The trees here loomed taller" | | 4 | "She clenched her fists, her" | | 5 | "You’ve been here before.*" | | 6 | "she muttered, more to herself" | | 7 | "Her trainers crunched on dead" | | 8 | "Rory moved cautiously, her breath" | | 9 | "Her delivery uniform felt too" | | 10 | "The first sound froze her" | | 11 | "A low hum, almost musical," | | 12 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 13 | "Rory’s hand instinctively went to" | | 14 | "Warmth radiated from the crimson" | | 15 | "she whispered, though the air" | | 16 | "She pressed on, the sound" | | 17 | "The Grove had always been" | | 18 | "Her skin prickled, and she" | | 19 | "A rustle in the undergrowth" |
| | ratio | 0.912 | |
| 43.86% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond the standing stones, the clearing stretched into a labyrinth of wildflowers that bloomed unnaturally vibrant—blacks so deep they swallowed light, reds th…" | | 1 | "Rory moved cautiously, her breath forming faint clouds despite the humidity clinging to her skin." | | 2 | "She swallowed hard and kept moving, her eyes darting to every shadow." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, more to herself than anyone else" | | 1 | "she whispered, though the air was still" | | 2 | "she cried, her voice breaking" | | 3 | "she murmured, her voice barely audible" | | 4 | "Rory lied, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 5 | "Eva said, her tone skeptical" | | 6 | "Rory hung up, her hand lingering on the pendant" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "she screamed (scream)" | | 4 | "she cried (cry)" | | 5 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 6 | "Rory lied (lie)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.45 | | leniency | 0.9 | | rawRatio | 0.778 | | effectiveRatio | 0.7 | |