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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQXHZDY29A274GWNMGZJ7E
Run Details
Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
24.9s
Cost:
$0.001512
Provider:
NextBit
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
84.98%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
39.94%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
46.69%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
88.51%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
51.11%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
93.33%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
86.8190%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
A sharp knock at the
door startled Rory from her research.
She glanced up from the
scattered scrolls, a twinge of annoyance flaring in her chest. It was nearly midnight. Who could be calling at this hour?
She stood carefully, annoyed at
the sudden interruption, and edged towards the door. Another set of knocks followed, more insistent. "Rory, open up. It's Lucien." The sound of his rough,
slightly
accented voice sent an unbidden shiver
down her spine
. What was he doing here?
She hesitated, glancing back at
the mess of notes and books strewn across her living room. Well, Eva's living room.
She'd been crashing at her
friend's flat while trying to keep a low profile after everything that had happened with Evan.
She wasn't sure she wanted
Lucien to see her like this. "Rory, I know you're there. Let me in."
His tone held a hint
of amusement, as if he could hear her internal debate. With a sigh, Rory undid the deadbolts and opened the door a crack, peering out at Lucien's towering form. He lounged against the doorframe, one hand casually resting on the silver handle of his cane. "May I come in?"
His mismatched eyes sparkled with
mirth. "I suppose." Rory opened the door wider, allowing him to slip inside.
She was acutely aware of
how small the flat felt in his presence. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" "I require your assistance with a rather... delicate matter."
His gaze roamed over the
cluttered space, lingering on the notes scribed in ancient blood. Rory crossed her arms. "I'm no longer in that line of work. I told you, I'm done with all of that." "Are you?"
Lucien arched a brow
. "From where I stand, it appears you're still quite entrenched." "That's my business." "Ah, but when it involves the supernatural underworld, it becomes my business as well."
He stepped closer, his presence
both unnerving and thrilling. "Especially when it could put you in danger." "I can handle myself." "Can you?"
Lucien's voice dropped to a
seductive purr. "I seem to recall a certain
encounter
with a wraith that might suggest otherwise."
Rory felt her cheeks flush
at the memory.
She'd been so focused on
her goal, she hadn't noticed the creature until it was nearly too late. If Lucien hadn't intervened... She shoved the thought aside. "I don't need your protection." "We both know that's not entirely true." Lucien's hand brushed her wrist, his thumb grazing the scar hidden beneath her sleeve. Rory tensed at the intimate touch, her heart fluttering in her chest. "You're
determined
to walk into danger
without a second thought
for your safety." "It's not your problem," Rory whispered, despising the quiver in her voice. Aren't I though? Lucien's eyes darkened, the amber flecks swirling into the black. "You've become a rather... engrossing problem." Rory felt her
resolve
weakening. Against her better judgment, she found herself drawn to him, to the way he
seemed to
see straight through her guarded exterior. She knew the danger. She knew the risk. And yet... One hand fisted in his jacket, she pulled him closer, lifting her chin defiantly. "Fine. You want to help? Help. But if you think for one moment that I need you to swoop in and save me, you're mistaken." A slow, predatory grin spread across Lucien's face. "Why, madame, I would never dream of it."
His head dipped, his lips
brushing her ear in a mockery of a gentleman's farewell. "I look forward to... working together." As he drew back, Rory caught the
glint
of his canines, longer than any human's. With a shiver, she released him, allowing him space to roam her
sanctuary
. His presence dominated the room, a
tangible
force that
charged
the air. She should send him away, make him leave. Push him out of her life for good this time. But as his eyes met hers, alight with dark promises and reckless intentions, Rory found she couldn't bring herself to utter the words.
created_at
"2026-02-19T10:42:48.948Z"
2/19/2026, 10:42:48 AM
model
"nousresearch/hermes-3-llama-3.1-70b"
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182717
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true
cancelled
false
latency
4461
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
24896
tokens_prompt
4578
tokens_completion
998
native_tokens_prompt
4146
native_tokens_completion
893
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
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"https://ncbench.com/"
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false
finish_reason
"stop"
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"stop"
usage
0.0015117
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0
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"19e60da4-d0e0-4799-a949-ea786279a5cb"
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false
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4425
model_permaslug
"nousresearch/hermes-3-llama-3.1-70b"
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200
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
11
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
23
tagDensity
0.478
leniency
0.957
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
84.98%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
666
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
39.94%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
666
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"down her spine"
count
1
1
word
"encounter"
count
1
2
word
"determined"
count
1
3
word
"resolve"
count
1
4
word
"glint"
count
1
5
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
6
word
"tangible"
count
1
7
word
"charged"
count
1
highlights
0
"down her spine"
1
"encounter"
2
"determined"
3
"resolve"
4
"glint"
5
"sanctuary"
6
"tangible"
7
"charged"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"without second thought"
count
1
highlights
0
"without a second thought"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
46
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
46
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
58
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
25
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
666
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
4
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
46.69%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
21
wordCount
484
uniqueNames
5
maxNameDensity
2.07
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
3.5
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory
10
Eva
1
Evan
1
Lucien
8
Aren
1
persons
0
"Rory"
1
"Eva"
2
"Evan"
3
"Lucien"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.467
windowScore
0.5
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
34
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
666
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
58
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
21
mean
31.71
std
17.9
cv
0.565
sampleLengths
0
57
1
77
2
23
3
45
4
31
5
24
6
21
7
16
8
3
9
31
10
4
11
23
12
40
13
46
14
12
15
19
16
37
17
39
18
37
19
58
20
23
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
46
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
89
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
58
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
484
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
16
adverbRatio
0.03305785123966942
lyAdverbCount
7
lyAdverbRatio
0.014462809917355372
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
58
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
58
mean
11.48
std
6.53
cv
0.568
sampleLengths
0
11
1
15
2
4
3
7
4
13
5
7
6
20
7
5
8
16
9
4
10
21
11
11
12
23
13
19
14
16
15
10
16
12
17
13
18
6
19
24
20
4
21
17
22
6
23
10
24
3
25
23
26
8
27
4
28
9
29
14
30
8
31
18
32
4
33
5
34
5
35
21
36
12
37
13
38
12
39
3
40
10
41
6
42
5
43
22
44
4
45
4
46
2
47
14
48
25
49
8
88.51%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.5517241379310345
totalSentences
58
uniqueOpeners
32
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
45
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
51.11%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
19
totalSentences
45
matches
0
"She glanced up from the"
1
"It was nearly midnight."
2
"She stood carefully, annoyed at"
3
"She hesitated, glancing back at"
4
"She'd been crashing at her"
5
"She wasn't sure she wanted"
6
"His tone held a hint"
7
"He lounged against the doorframe,"
8
"His mismatched eyes sparkled with"
9
"She was acutely aware of"
10
"His gaze roamed over the"
11
"He stepped closer, his presence"
12
"She'd been so focused on"
13
"She shoved the thought aside."
14
"She knew the danger."
15
"She knew the risk."
16
"His head dipped, his lips"
17
"His presence dominated the room,"
18
"She should send him away,"
ratio
0.422
93.33%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
33
totalSentences
45
matches
0
"A sharp knock at the"
1
"She glanced up from the"
2
"It was nearly midnight."
3
"She stood carefully, annoyed at"
4
"Another set of knocks followed,"
5
"The sound of his rough,"
6
"She hesitated, glancing back at"
7
"She'd been crashing at her"
8
"She wasn't sure she wanted"
9
"His tone held a hint"
10
"He lounged against the doorframe,"
11
"His mismatched eyes sparkled with"
12
"Rory opened the door wider,"
13
"She was acutely aware of"
14
"His gaze roamed over the"
15
"Rory crossed her arms."
16
"Lucien arched a brow"
17
"He stepped closer, his presence"
18
"Lucien's voice dropped to a"
19
"Rory felt her cheeks flush"
ratio
0.733
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
45
matches
0
"If Lucien hadn't intervened..."
ratio
0.022
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
19
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"She'd been crashing at her friend's flat while trying to keep a low profile after everything that had happened with Evan."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
11
uselessAdditionCount
3
matches
0
"His tone held, as if he could hear her internal debate"
1
"He stepped, his presence both unnerving and thrilling"
2
"Lucien's hand brushed, his thumb grazing the scar hidden beneath her sleeve"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
23
tagDensity
0.043
leniency
0.087
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
0.087
86.8190%