Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQXJ4AX55GC54BTRT4YK4B

Run Details

Duration:
4.4s
Cost:
$0.000166

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones loomed like silent sentinels as Rory stepped past the last one, her breath fogging in the crisp night air. The grove swallowed her whole, the scent of damp earth and wildflowers thick enough to taste. Her fingers twitched at her sides, the pendant’s faint warmth against her chest a steady pulse beneath her jacket. *Heartstone.* She’d been told it would guide her here. But the way the trees seemed to lean in, watching, made her skin prickle. She’d come alone, like she always did when things got too loud. Too many questions. Too many voices whispering in the dark. Eva had warned her—*don’t go back to the grove*—but Rory had needed answers. Needed to see for herself. The path narrowed, roots coiling like serpents around her boots. A rustle. Not the wind. Not an animal. Her pulse jumped, but she kept walking. The pendant glowed brighter, just for a second, as if reacting to something she couldn’t see. Then the first sound. A wet, clicking noise, too close. Rory froze, every muscle locking. The air smelled sharper, metallic beneath the earth. She turned slowly, scanning the shadows between the trees. Nothing. She exhaled, shaking her head. *Paranoia.* But her fingers dug into the pendant’s chain, the silver cold against her palm. Another sound. This time, a whisper, just at the edge of hearing. Not words. Not quite. Like something testing the air, seeing if she’d respond. Rory’s breath hitched. She swallowed hard, forcing herself to move again. The deeper she went, the more the grove seemed to shift around her. Branches that hadn’t been there before now stretched across her path, as if reaching. The pendant pulsed again, warmer now, pressing against her ribs. A twig snapped. She spun, heart hammering. The grove was too still. Too quiet. The only sound was the slow, rhythmic *thump* of her own blood in her ears. Then—movement. A flicker of dark between the trees. Not quite a shape. Not quite a shadow. Rory’s stomach twisted. She backed up, her heel catching on a root. She stumbled, but caught herself, fingers curling into the pendant’s chain. The whisper came again, closer this time. Not a voice. A *feeling*. Like something brushing against her skin, just out of reach. She turned in a slow circle, scanning. The trees seemed to lean in, their leaves rustling without wind. The grove wasn’t just watching. It was *waiting*. Rory’s breath came faster. She had to get out. Had to run. But her feet wouldn’t move. The pendant burned against her chest, the warmth spreading up her throat. She clutched it tighter, her nails biting into her palm. Then—silence. Too much silence. She took a step forward, her boots crunching on dead leaves. The grove felt different now. Thinner. Like the air itself had shifted. A branch snapped behind her. Rory whirled, her hand flying to her throat. The pendant glowed brighter, casting eerie shadows between the trees. The whisper was louder now, right beside her ear. She turned, but there was nothing there. Only the grove. Only the waiting.
total_cost0.0001659

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount517
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount517
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count3
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"scanning"
5"whisper"
6"pulsed"
7"rhythmic"
8"flicker"
9"stomach"
10"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
84.15% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords11
totalWords515
ratio0.021
matches
0"Heartstone."
1"don’t go back to the grove"
2"Paranoia."
3"thump"
4"feeling"
5"waiting"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.04% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount515
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Like3
persons
0"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.82
windowScore1
14.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reacting to something she couldn’t see"
1"as if reaching"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount515
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean21.46
std18.73
cv0.873
sampleLengths
081
140
241
34
428
51
620
725
848
93
1026
1139
1222
1326
1417
1522
161
173
1823
195
2027
217
223
233
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs93
matches
0"was *waiting"
25.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences73
ratio0.041
matches
0"Eva had warned her—*don’t go back to the grove*—but Rory had needed answers."
1"Then—movement."
2"Then—silence."
84.23% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount517
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.058027079303675046
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.007736943907156673
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean7.05
std4.69
cv0.664
sampleLengths
023
116
219
39
414
512
63
77
813
95
1010
112
123
133
147
1516
164
176
185
198
209
211
225
2315
242
2510
262
272
289
293
308
3113
3214
3310
343
354
365
372
3815
391
407
414
424
433
449
4511
467
473
482
4910
37.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3013698630136986
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners22
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences63
matches
0"Too many questions."
1"Too many voices whispering in"
2"Then the first sound."
3"Too much silence."
4"Only the grove."
5"Only the waiting."
ratio0.095
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences63
matches
0"Her fingers twitched at her"
1"She’d come alone, like she"
2"Her pulse jumped, but she"
3"She turned slowly, scanning the"
4"She exhaled, shaking her head."
5"She swallowed hard, forcing herself"
6"She spun, heart hammering."
7"She backed up, her heel"
8"She stumbled, but caught herself,"
9"She turned in a slow"
10"It was *waiting*."
11"She had to get out."
12"She clutched it tighter, her"
13"She took a step forward,"
14"She turned, but there was"
ratio0.238
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences63
matches
0"The oak standing stones loomed"
1"The grove swallowed her whole,"
2"Her fingers twitched at her"
3"*Heartstone.* She’d been told it"
4"She’d come alone, like she"
5"Eva had warned her—*don’t go"
6"The path narrowed, roots coiling"
7"Her pulse jumped, but she"
8"The pendant glowed brighter, just"
9"A wet, clicking noise, too"
10"Rory froze, every muscle locking."
11"The air smelled sharper, metallic"
12"She turned slowly, scanning the"
13"She exhaled, shaking her head."
14"*Paranoia.* But her fingers dug"
15"This time, a whisper, just"
16"Rory’s breath hitched."
17"She swallowed hard, forcing herself"
18"The deeper she went, the"
19"Branches that hadn’t been there"
ratio0.714
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The oak standing stones loomed like silent sentinels as Rory stepped past the last one, her breath fogging in the crisp night air."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.9649%