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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQXJ5H4KBKEQSPE3SRSDHD
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.006227
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
96.43%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
67.90%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
33.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
60.39%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
55.10%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
31.57%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
38.51%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
86.1079%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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AI
The pint glass left a
wet ring on the scarred oak bar top as Rory slid into the last empty stool at The Raven's Nest.
The Friday night crowd jostled
behind her, but she ignored them.
She was here for one
reason. "Whiskey. Neat."
Her voice clipped the words
short, all business.
Silas raised an eyebrow but
reached for the mid-shelf bottle. "Rough day?" "Rough year."
She knocked back the amber
liquid in one swallow. "Another." He poured, slower this time. "What's on your mind, Laila?" "Don't call me that."
She gripped the glass tight
enough to turn her knuckles white. "Have you seen him?" Silas' eyes
flicked
to the door, then back. "He's not due." "Not due."
Her laugh was flat, unamused
. "Like a library book. Or a bus."
He didn't rise to the
bait.
Years of bartending had taught
him when to let
silence
work. She rolled her shoulders back. Tried again. "I need a favor." "I'm listening." But his tone made no promises.
Her gaze dropped to the
pale crescent scar on her wrist. "He can't see me." "It's a small bar, Aurora."
She flinched at her full
name. "He can't see me like this, Si." Silas studied her: rumpled t-shirt, faded jeans.
The new lines around her
eyes and mouth.
Too thin, like she hadn't
slept or ate properly in months. Which, he'd bet, she hadn't. He sighed. "The back room's open. Twenty minutes." "Ten."
Her fingertips brushed his, quick
and light. "Thanks." "Malphora-" "I'll be gone before he arrives."
She grabbed her glass and
slid off the stool. "Don't worry." "That's all I do." But he
was speaking
to her back.
The door to the back
room swung shut with a soft click. Silas returned to his customers, but part of him stayed in that back room. Waiting. * * * Eight minutes later, the green neon sign above the entrance
flickered
as the door opened. Silas glanced over, then away. Poured a pint of lager on autopilot. "Oi, Silas!" The new arrival shouldered his way to the bar.
His leather jacket creaked as
he leaned forward. "You hear about the match today?" "Celtic? 2-0."
He slid the pint over
. "Tenner." "Too right."
He fished out a crumpled
note. "Anything interesting tonight?" "Same as always." Silas tucked the money into the till. "What can I get you?" "What's a man got to do to get a McEwan's around here?" Silas pulled a bottle from the fridge under the bar. Popped the cap. "Glass?" "Bottle's fine."
He slid it over, foam
sloshing up the neck. "Anything else I can do you for?" The man's eyes glinted. "You know why I'm here." Silas kept his voice low. "Ten minutes. Back room." "Bloody hot in here, innit?"
He wiped his brow, suddenly
sweaty despite the cool evening. Silas shrugged. "It's a bar." The man snagged his beer and weaved through the crowd. Silas watched him go.
Then he picked up a
rag and began wiping the bar top. Each wet ring took five passes to disappear. * * * Shit shit shit. Sweat trickled down Evan's back as he shut the door behind him. He knew she'd be here. But seeing her...
He wiped his palms on
his jeans.
She stood with her back
to him, staring at the scuffed wall. The dim light pooled on her dark hair, turned her skin ghost-pale. "Aurora." "You're late." She didn't turn around. "I got held up." He took a step forward. "You look-" "Don't." Her voice was raw. His hand hovered mid-air, then dropped. "You want to tell me why I'm here?" "The proposed development in Docklands. What do you know about it?" He blinked. "That's what this is about? A story?" She finally faced him. "I need a source at City Hall. I thought..." "You thought of me." He set his beer down. Hard. "After 3 years of
silence
, that's what you need." "It's not like that." Fire sparked in her eyes. Eyes he knew as well as his own. "I wouldn't ask if it wasn't important." "Important." His laugh was hollow. "Guess my bloody heart wasn't important, was it?" She flinched. "I didn't-" "Didn't what? Didn't mean to gut me? Didn't mean to vanish without a word? Didn't mean for me to find your ring in the sink?" "Stop." Her voice shook. "You're not the only one who got hurt." "But I'm the only one who came crawling back." He was in front of her in two strides. "I'm the wanker who couldn't let you go." Her eyes searched his, wide and dark. "Evan-" The snick of the latch cut through the
tension
. Silas stood in the doorway, his face set. "Time's up." Evan didn't look away from her. "Five minutes." Silas held his gaze for a long moment, then nodded once. The door clicked shut behind him. Aurora's breath shuddered out. "This was a mistake." "You're damn right it was." But he didn't back away. "I shouldn't have come." She stepped sideways, but he mirrored her. "You never should've left." "I had to!" "Bullshit." The word was quiet. Final. "You wanted to leave. You wanted out." "I wanted-" She pressed her lips together. Shook her head. "What? What did you want?" He trapped her against the wall, all the anger and hurt of three years seething between them. "Fame? Fortune? A fucking Pulitzer?" "You!" The word exploded out of her. "I wanted you, you bloody idiot!" He froze. "What?" Color flamed high on her cheeks. "I left because I was terrified." Her voice cracked. "Terrified that I'd destroy you like I destroy everything else." "I'm not him." He cupped her face, his thumb stroking her jaw. "I'll never be him." "I know." Her eyes
shimmered
with unshed tears. "But knowing's not the same as believing." He rested his forehead against hers. "You can't keep running." "I'm not." Her hands fisted in his jacket. "I'm terrified and I'm tired and I'm..." She took a shuddering breath. "I'm home." His laugh was soft. "You're in a grimy back room behind a dive bar." "Doesn't matter." She leaned into him. "You're here." He kissed her then. Kissed her like it was the first time. Like it was the last. Poured three years of loneliness and regret into the press of his lips against hers. She clutched at him, her breath hitching. Met him with equal fervor. Equal need. When they broke apart, they were both breathing hard. Aurora's eyes were wide. Wild. Evan brushed her hair back from her face. "What now?" "Now..." She swallowed. "Now we make a plan." "A plan." His lips twitched. "Journalist
to the core
." "You love it." She nipped at his bottom lip. "I love you." The words settled between them, simple and true. Her smile wobbled. "Took you long enough to say it." "You didn't give me much choice." He leaned back. "Does this mean I'm your source?" She narrowed her eyes. "Don't push your luck." "I'll show you luck." He dipped her over his arm, earning a startled yelp. "I'll show you everything." "Everything?" Her arms locked around his neck. "That's a tall order." "I've got time." His grin was wicked. "And quite a bit of motivation." "You always were an overachiever." She tugged him down for another
searing
kiss. "I think I can work with that." * * * Silas wiped down the bar for the hundredth time that night. The crowd had thinned, leaving only a few stalwart drunks hunched over their glasses. He didn't have to stay. But he did.
The door to the back
room opened. Evan emerged first, his arm slung around Aurora's waist. Her cheeks
were flushed
, her eyes bright. They crossed to the bar, their steps almost in sync. Silas set down his rag. "All sorted?" he asked. Evan grinned. "You could say that." Aurora elbowed him. "We're getting there." Her smile was softer than Silas had seen in years. "If you need anything else..." "We know where to find you." Evan extended his hand. "Thanks, mate." Silas shook it. "Take care of her." "Always." Aurora hesitated, then leaned across the bar to press a quick kiss to Silas' cheek. "Thank you." He watched them walk out together, her head on his shoulder. The night was cool and clear, full of promise. Silas picked up the rag again. Began wiping down the bar. This time, each wet ring only took four passes to disappear.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
39
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"She knocked back [back]"
1
"He leaned back [back]"
2
"Her arms locked around [around]"
3
"Aurora hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences
116
tagDensity
0.336
leniency
0.672
rawRatio
0.103
effectiveRatio
0.069
96.43%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1402
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"suddenly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
67.90%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1402
totalAiIsms
9
found
0
word
"eyebrow"
count
1
1
word
"flicked"
count
1
2
word
"silence"
count
2
3
word
"flickered"
count
1
4
word
"tension"
count
1
5
word
"shimmered"
count
1
6
word
"to the core"
count
1
7
word
"searing"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyebrow"
1
"flicked"
2
"silence"
3
"flickered"
4
"tension"
5
"shimmered"
6
"to the core"
7
"searing"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
135
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
135
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
207
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
25
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1408
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
10
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
33.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
35
wordCount
900
uniqueNames
11
maxNameDensity
1.78
worstName
"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity
4
worstWindowName
"Silas"
discoveredNames
Rory
1
Raven
1
Nest
1
Friday
1
Silas
16
Evan
6
Hard
1
Eyes
1
Final
1
Shook
1
Aurora
5
persons
0
"Rory"
1
"Silas"
2
"Evan"
3
"Eyes"
4
"Aurora"
places
0
"Raven"
globalScore
0.611
windowScore
0.333
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
75
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1408
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
207
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
104
mean
13.54
std
8.18
cv
0.604
sampleLengths
0
42
1
10
2
12
3
12
4
10
5
19
6
11
7
14
8
24
9
4
10
8
11
15
12
5
13
13
14
31
15
8
16
9
17
1
18
17
19
11
20
27
21
3
22
27
23
25
24
8
25
11
26
15
27
12
28
14
29
2
30
16
31
9
32
9
33
15
34
5
35
34
36
3
37
30
38
24
39
1
40
6
41
11
42
5
43
14
44
11
45
9
46
13
47
19
48
24
49
13
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
135
matches
0
"were flushed"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
182
matches
0
"was speaking"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
207
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
355
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
9
adverbRatio
0.02535211267605634
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.005633802816901409
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
207
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
207
mean
6.76
std
4.21
cv
0.623
sampleLengths
0
25
1
11
2
6
3
10
4
10
5
2
6
11
7
1
8
5
9
5
10
15
11
4
12
8
13
3
14
7
15
7
16
6
17
11
18
5
19
2
20
4
21
8
22
11
23
4
24
5
25
6
26
7
27
7
28
8
29
11
30
5
31
2
32
6
33
8
34
1
35
1
36
15
37
2
38
11
39
12
40
14
41
1
42
15
43
5
44
7
45
11
46
8
47
6
48
7
49
1
60.39%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.391304347826087
totalSentences
207
uniqueOpeners
81
55.10%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
121
matches
0
"Too thin, like she hadn't"
1
"Then he picked up a"
ratio
0.017
31.57%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
57
totalSentences
121
matches
0
"She was here for one"
1
"Her voice clipped the words"
2
"She knocked back the amber"
3
"He poured, slower this time."
4
"She gripped the glass tight"
5
"Her laugh was flat, unamused"
6
"He didn't rise to the"
7
"She rolled her shoulders back."
8
"Her gaze dropped to the"
9
"She flinched at her full"
10
"Her fingertips brushed his, quick"
11
"She grabbed her glass and"
12
"His leather jacket creaked as"
13
"He slid the pint over"
14
"He fished out a crumpled"
15
"He slid it over, foam"
16
"He wiped his brow, suddenly"
17
"He knew she'd be here."
18
"He wiped his palms on"
19
"She stood with her back"
ratio
0.471
38.51%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
102
totalSentences
121
matches
0
"The pint glass left a"
1
"The Friday night crowd jostled"
2
"She was here for one"
3
"Her voice clipped the words"
4
"Silas raised an eyebrow but"
5
"She knocked back the amber"
6
"He poured, slower this time."
7
"She gripped the glass tight"
8
"Her laugh was flat, unamused"
9
"He didn't rise to the"
10
"Years of bartending had taught"
11
"She rolled her shoulders back."
12
"Her gaze dropped to the"
13
"She flinched at her full"
14
"Silas studied her: rumpled t-shirt,"
15
"The new lines around her"
16
"Her fingertips brushed his, quick"
17
"She grabbed her glass and"
18
"The door to the back"
19
"Silas returned to his customers,"
ratio
0.843
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
121
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
22
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
39
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"He cupped, his thumb stroking her jaw"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences
116
tagDensity
0.017
leniency
0.034
rawRatio
0.5
effectiveRatio
0.017
86.1079%