Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQXMQ0DWSK8VSEKN94JVRE

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9.3s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the heart of Soho, The Raven's Nest pulsed with a quiet, unassuming life. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance cast an eerie glow on the damp cobblestones, a beacon for those in the know. Inside, the air was thick with the scent of aged wood and the hum of hushed conversations. The walls, adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, seemed to whisper tales of a bygone era. Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, pushed open the heavy door, a bell jingling softly overhead. Her eyes, bright blue and sharp as a winter's day, scanned the room, taking in the familiar scene. She'd been here countless times before, but it felt different tonight. Perhaps it was the weight of the day, or the loneliness that had become her constant companion since leaving Cardiff. Whatever it was, she felt a strange sense of detachment, as if she were watching herself from afar. She stepped up to the bar, her reflection in the polished surface showing a young woman with straight shoulder-length black hair, her eyes tired but determined. She was 5'6", her frame slight but strong, a testament to the years she'd spent running from her past. A small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a memento from a childhood accident, was hidden beneath her sleeve, a secret only the shadows knew. "Usual, Rory?" Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner, asked without looking up. His voice was a low rumble, like distant thunder, and his hands moved with practiced ease as he poured her drink. Rory nodded, a small smile playing on her lips. "You know me too well, Si." Silas glanced at her, his hazel eyes reflecting the warm glow of the bar lights. "I thought I did," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. He slid the glass towards her, his silver signet ring glinting in the light. "But people change, Rory. Even those we think we know best." Rory's fingers wrapped around the glass, the cold seeping into her skin. She took a sip, the whiskey burning its way down her throat, leaving a trail of warmth in its wake. "Some of us more than others," she murmured, her gaze flicking to the signet ring. Silas followed her gaze, his hand automatically going to the ring, a habit he'd developed over the years. He looked at her, his expression inscrutable. "You've been gone a long time, Rory. I heard you were in London." Rory nodded, her eyes never leaving his face. "I needed a change of scenery," she said, her voice nonchalant. But her eyes betrayed her, the blue depths swirling with unspoken regrets. Silas leaned against the bar, his left leg bearing most of his weight, a slight limp the only sign of the old knee injury that had forced him into retirement. "And how have you been, Rory? Really?" Rory's gaze flicked away, her eyes landing on a photograph of a younger Silas, standing tall and proud in a uniform. She took another sip of her drink, the silence stretching between them like a taut wire. "I've been... surviving," she finally said, her voice barely audible. Silas nodded, his gaze never leaving her face. "Surviving is a start," he said, his voice gentle. "But it's not living, Rory. Not really." Rory's eyes flashed, a spark of anger igniting in their depths. "And what would you know about living, Si? You've spent your life hiding behind this bar, playing at being a spymaster. You're no better than me." Silas didn't flinch at her words, his expression never changing. "Maybe not," he said, his voice quiet. "But I've learned a thing or two about regret, Rory. And I can see it in your eyes. The weight of it. The way it clings to you like a second skin." Rory's fingers tightened around her glass, the knuckles turning white. She opened her mouth to speak, but no words came out. Instead, she took another sip of her drink, the whiskey leaving a bitter taste in her mouth. Silas watched her, his expression thoughtful. "You know, I've often wondered what would have happened if you'd stayed, Rory. If you'd let me help you, like I promised I would." Rory's gaze snapped to his, her eyes wide with a sudden, intense emotion. "You couldn't have helped me, Si. Not with this," she said, her voice barely a whisper. Silas' gaze softened, a hint of sadness in his eyes. "You don't know that, Rory. You never gave me the chance." Rory looked away, her eyes landing on the photograph again. She took a deep breath, her shoulders rising and falling with the effort. "I couldn't stay, Si. Not after... not after what happened." Silas' gaze followed hers, his eyes lingering on the photograph. "I know," he said, his voice quiet. "But that doesn't mean you have to keep running, Rory. It's time to face what happened. To forgive yourself. To move on." Rory's eyes flashed again, but this time there was no anger in them, only pain. "You make it sound so easy, Si. Like I can just... snap my fingers and make it all go away." Silas shook his head, his gaze never leaving hers. "It's not easy, Rory. Nothing worth doing ever is. But it's necessary. For your own peace of mind, if nothing else." Rory looked at him, her eyes searching his face, looking for something she couldn't quite put her finger on. She took another sip of her drink, the whiskey now warm and smooth on her tongue. "I don't know if I can, Si," she said, her voice barely a whisper. "I don't know if I'm strong enough." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers on the bar. His fingers were warm, his grip firm. "You're stronger than you think, Rory. Stronger than you even know. And you're not alone. You have people who care about you. People who want to help you." Rory looked at him, her eyes filled with unshed tears. She opened her mouth to speak, but the bell above the door jingled, the sound shattering the moment. She blinked, the tears retreating as quickly as they'd come, leaving behind a blank expression. Silas followed her gaze, his eyes landing on the newcomer. He sighed, his hand dropping away from hers. "Duty calls," he said, his voice resigned. Rory nodded, her gaze flicking back to her drink. She took another sip, the whiskey now tasting of regret and missed opportunities. She watched as Silas greeted the newcomer, his voice warm and welcoming, a stark contrast to the tension that had filled the air just moments before. As the night wore on, Rory found herself lost in thought, her gaze flicking between the photograph of Silas and the real man behind the bar. She knew he was right, that she couldn't keep running forever. But she also knew that facing what had happened, facing the truth of what she'd done, would be the hardest thing she'd ever had to do. And so, she sat there, in the warm glow of The Raven's Nest, her heart heavy with the weight of time and unspoken regrets, and drank her whiskey, one slow sip at a time. Waiting for the courage she knew she would need, but hoping it wouldn't come too soon.
total_cost0.0003936

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory's fingers wrapped around [around]"
1"Rory's gaze flicked away [away]"
2"Rory looked away [away]"
3"Rory's eyes flashed again [again]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.649
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
79.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1223
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"really"
3"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1223
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"beacon"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count4
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"weight"
count4
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"determined"
count1
8
word"testament"
count1
9
word"practiced ease"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"depths"
count2
13
word"unspoken"
count2
14
word"flicked"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"stark"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"beacon"
2"whisper"
3"scanned"
4"familiar"
5"weight"
6"sense of"
7"determined"
8"testament"
9"practiced ease"
10"glinting"
11"warmth"
12"depths"
13"unspoken"
14"flicked"
15"silence"
16"stark"
17"tension"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
1"a spark of anger"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences62
matches
0"a spark of anger"
73.73% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"think know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1219
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount991
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Rory16
Cardiff1
Silas13
Blackwood1
You4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.693
windowScore0.5
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite put her finger on"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1219
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"know that, Rory"
62.87% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean42.03
std15.56
cv0.37
sampleLengths
071
184
270
332
415
552
647
738
831
937
1047
1124
1237
1349
1438
1530
1629
1721
1833
1939
2035
2130
2256
2345
2443
2525
2648
2763
2850
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs180
matches
0"were watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount426
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.03051643192488263
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.002347417840375587
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean19.05
std15.12
cv0.794
sampleLengths
014
123
217
317
417
518
611
720
818
926
1044
1132
1215
1345
147
1547
1632
176
1831
1936
201
2139
228
2322
242
2519
2613
275
2827
298
304
3110
3238
3319
3411
3519
3610
3715
386
3927
402
414
4227
436
443
453
4622
474
489
4913
67.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.453125
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"Perhaps it was the weight"
1"Even those we think we"
ratio0.035
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences57
matches
0"Her eyes, bright blue and"
1"She'd been here countless times"
2"She stepped up to the"
3"I heard you were in"
4"You've spent your life hiding"
5"You're no better than"
6"You never gave me the"
7"It's time to face what"
8"You have people who care"
ratio0.158
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences57
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"The walls, adorned with old"
2"Aurora Carter, known to most"
3"Her eyes, bright blue and"
4"She'd been here countless times"
5"Whatever it was, she felt"
6"She stepped up to the"
7"Silas Blackwood, the bar's owner,"
8"Rory nodded, a small smile"
9"Silas glanced at her, his"
10"Rory's fingers wrapped around the"
11"Silas followed her gaze, his"
12"I heard you were in"
13"Rory nodded, her eyes never"
14"Silas leaned against the bar,"
15"Rory's gaze flicked away, her"
16"Silas nodded, his gaze never"
17"Rory's eyes flashed, a spark"
18"You've spent your life hiding"
19"You're no better than"
ratio0.702
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"If you'd let me help"
1"To forgive yourself."
ratio0.035
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Perhaps it was the weight of the day, or the loneliness that had become her constant companion since leaving Cardiff."
1"You've spent your life hiding behind this bar, playing at being a spymaster."
2"Rory nodded, her gaze flicking back to her drink. She took another sip, the whiskey now tasting of regret and missed opportunities. She watched as Silas greeted…"
3"As the night wore on, Rory found herself lost in thought, her gaze flicking between the photograph of Silas and the real man behind the bar. She knew he was rig…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
1"she murmured, her gaze flicking to the signet ring"
2"she said, her voice nonchalant"
3"he said, his voice gentle"
4"he said, his voice quiet"
5"he said, his voice quiet"
6"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
7"he said, his voice resigned"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory's gaze snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.108
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.054
80.9018%