Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQXPDKMWNAST7X32VDAZDQ

Run Details

Duration:
23.4s
Cost:
$0.008616

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy against Rory’s collarbone, its crimson glow bleeding through her shirt like a slow, steady heartbeat. She adjusted the strap of her backpack, the weight of the takeout containers inside shifting with the movement. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oak trunks black against the moonlit sky. Richmond Park stretched empty around her, the usual rustle of deer and night birds absent. Just the wind, whispering through the grass like a warning. She shouldn’t have come. Not at this hour. Not alone. But Eva had been insistent. *"Meet me at the Grove. Midnight. Don’t tell anyone."* And then the call had cut out, leaving only static and the echo of something that wasn’t Eva’s voice. Rory stepped between the stones. The air thickened. The crickets stopped mid-chirp. The wildflowers at her feet, usually dormant in late autumn, unfurled in her wake, petals stretching toward her boots as if reaching. The pendant pulsed hotter, the glow seeping between her fingers when she pressed a hand to her chest. "Eva?" Her voice sounded too loud, too small. No answer. Just the creak of branches bending in a wind that didn’t touch her skin. She moved deeper into the clearing. The trees here grew too close, their roots twisting above the earth like veins. The moonlight didn’t reach the center, leaving a pool of darkness that seemed to breathe. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. She fumbled for her phone, the screen casting a sickly blue glow over her face. No signal. Of course. A twig snapped. Rory spun, the beam of her phone light slicing through the dark. Nothing. Just the trees, their branches swaying in that impossible wind. She exhaled, slow. "Paranoid," she muttered. "Just the—" A shadow detached itself from the trunk of an oak. Not a shadow. A shape. Tall. Too tall. Its limbs bent at angles that made her stomach clench. It didn’t move so much as *unfold*, like a spider testing the air. The phone slipped from her fingers, the screen cracking against a root. The thing tilted its head. No eyes. No mouth. Just the suggestion of a face, shifting beneath the surface like something struggling to break free. Rory backed up. The pendant burned against her skin, the heat licking up her neck. The shape mirrored her, stepping forward when she stepped back. The air smelled of copper and wet earth. "You’re not real," she said. "You’re not *here*." The thing *laughed*. Not with a voice. With the creak of branches, the snap of twigs underfoot. The sound wrapped around her ribs and squeezed. She turned to run. The standing stones were gone. The path behind her had twisted into a labyrinth of thorns, the flowers now blackened and rotting. The trees leaned in, their branches knitting together overhead, blocking out the moon. The pendant flared, the crimson light casting long, writhing shadows across the ground. Something brushed her ankle. Rory looked down. A hand—pale, skeletal—emerged from the earth, fingers curling around her boot. Then another. And another. The ground *breathed*, rising and falling like a chest. The hands dragged her down, the soil soft and warm and *hungry*. She screamed. The thing from the trees was in front of her now, its body stretching, reforming. A face took shape—Eva’s face, but wrong. The eyes too wide, the mouth stretched into a grin that split her cheeks. *"You came,"* Eva whispered. Or maybe it wasn’t Eva at all. The voice came from everywhere, from the trees, from the ground, from the thing wearing her friend’s skin. The hands yanked Rory to her knees. The pendant seared her palm when she ripped it from her shirt, the chain snapping. The crimson light flared, pushing back the dark just enough to see the truth. The Grove wasn’t empty. Dozens of shapes stood between the trees, their forms flickering like candle flames. Some wore faces she knew—Evan, her father, strangers from the street. Others had no faces at all. They watched. Waited. The thing that wasn’t Eva reached for her. Rory hurled the pendant into the dark. A shriek tore through the clearing. The hands recoiled. The trees shuddered, their bark splitting like flesh. The thing wearing Eva’s face *screamed*, its body unraveling into smoke and shadows. The standing stones reappeared. Rory didn’t wait. She ran, the thorns tearing at her clothes, the ground solid beneath her feet. The wind howled in her ears, but she didn’t look back. Not when the trees groaned behind her. Not when the air filled with the sound of something *hungry* giving chase. The edge of the park loomed ahead. The streetlights of London burned like beacons. Rory burst from the trees, her lungs burning, her legs trembling. She collapsed onto the pavement, the cold seeping through her jeans. The pendant lay at her feet, its crimson glow extinguished. She didn’t pick it up.
total_cost0.008616

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.714
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount822
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount822
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count2
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"loomed"
2"echo"
3"pulsed"
4"pulse"
5"stomach"
6"unraveling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords18
totalWords817
ratio0.022
matches
0"\"Meet me at the Grove. Midnight. Don’t tell anyone.\""
1"unfold"
2"here"
3"laughed"
4"breathed"
5"hungry"
6"\"You came,\""
7"screamed"
8"hungry"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount796
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory10
Park1
Eva7
Grove1
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
globalScore0.872
windowScore0.833
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reaching"
1"darkness that seemed to breathe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount817
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean22.69
std18.66
cv0.822
sampleLengths
077
110
233
35
447
58
616
756
84
93
1031
1110
1243
1325
1433
158
1625
174
1848
194
203
2136
222
2336
2429
2536
264
2733
288
297
3030
314
3248
3336
3410
355
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
57.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences100
ratio0.03
matches
0"A hand—pale, skeletal—emerged from the earth, fingers curling around her boot."
1"A face took shape—Eva’s face, but wrong."
2"Some wore faces she knew—Evan, her father, strangers from the street."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount801
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay heavy against Rory’s"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03745318352059925
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003745318352059925
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean8.17
std5.52
cv0.675
sampleLengths
020
118
214
315
410
54
64
72
85
928
105
113
124
1322
1418
158
162
1714
186
1914
2015
216
2215
232
242
253
2612
271
2810
293
303
312
3210
333
342
351
362
3710
3813
3912
405
412
422
4316
443
4512
4610
478
485
493
27.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.29
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences80
matches
0"Just the wind, whispering through"
1"Just the creak of branches"
2"Just the trees, their branches"
3"Just the suggestion of a"
ratio0.05
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences80
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She shouldn’t have come."
2"Her voice sounded too loud,"
3"She moved deeper into the"
4"She fumbled for her phone,"
5"She exhaled, slow."
6"Its limbs bent at angles"
7"It didn’t move so much"
8"She turned to run."
9"She ran, the thorns tearing"
10"She collapsed onto the pavement,"
11"She didn’t pick it up."
ratio0.15
41.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences80
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
3"Richmond Park stretched empty around"
4"She shouldn’t have come."
5"Rory stepped between the stones."
6"The air thickened."
7"The crickets stopped mid-chirp."
8"The wildflowers at her feet,"
9"The pendant pulsed hotter, the"
10"Her voice sounded too loud,"
11"She moved deeper into the"
12"The trees here grew too"
13"The moonlight didn’t reach the"
14"Rory’s pulse hammered in her"
15"She fumbled for her phone,"
16"A twig snapped."
17"Rory spun, the beam of"
18"She exhaled, slow."
19"A shadow detached itself from"
ratio0.838
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The wildflowers at her feet, usually dormant in late autumn, unfurled in her wake, petals stretching toward her boots as if reaching."
1"Its limbs bent at angles that made her stomach clench."
2"The thing wearing Eva’s face *screamed*, its body unraveling into smoke and shadows."
3"Rory burst from the trees, her lungs burning, her legs trembling."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.571
79.6429%