| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 611 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.17% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 611 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "wavering" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 608 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The Grove. Midnight. Bring the pendant.\"" | | 1 | "\"Aurora.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.77% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 554 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.62 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | October | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.688 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to breathe" |
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| 35.53% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.645 | | wordCount | 608 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the figure but from the trees themselves" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 22.52 | | std | 19.3 | | cv | 0.857 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.01% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "The sounds of the park—distant traffic, the rustle of nocturnal animals—faded into a muffled hum, as if she’d been submerged in water." | | 1 | "The moonlight caught the edge of a face—pale, too smooth, the eyes too large." |
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| 89.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 557 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay heavy against Rory’s" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.04488330341113106 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005385996409335727 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 7.33 | | std | 6.01 | | cv | 0.821 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 40.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3253012048192771 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the same looping script" | | 1 | "Just the trees, their branches" | | 2 | "Too many layers, like two" | | 3 | "Then, a step forward." |
| | ratio | 0.07 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 2 | "She exhaled, fog curling in" | | 3 | "She swallowed, her pulse loud" | | 4 | "She turned back toward the" | | 5 | "She stumbled back, her heel" |
| | ratio | 0.105 | |
| 65.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "Richmond Park stretched around her," | | 4 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 5 | "The one that had sent" | | 6 | "The wind picked up, rattling" | | 7 | "A whisper, almost." | | 8 | "Rory stepped between the stones." | | 9 | "The air thickened." | | 10 | "The sounds of the park—distant" | | 11 | "The pendant pulsed once, warm" | | 12 | "The clearing opened before her," | | 13 | "Wildflowers glowed faintly, their petals" | | 14 | "She exhaled, fog curling in" | | 15 | "The wrongness settled in her" | | 16 | "She swallowed, her pulse loud" | | 17 | "She turned back toward the" | | 18 | "A figure stood there, cloaked" | | 19 | "The pendant flared hot against" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park stretched around her, empty at this hour, the streetlamps casting long, wavering shadows that seemed to breathe." | | 1 | "The sounds of the park—distant traffic, the rustle of nocturnal animals—faded into a muffled hum, as if she’d been submerged in water." | | 2 | "Wildflowers glowed faintly, their petals shimmering with dew that shouldn’t have been there." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.077 | | leniency | 0.154 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |