Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQYAVSC8B4846SJF84F3YR

Run Details

Duration:
17.4s
Cost:
$0.006942

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy against Rory’s collarbone, its crimson glow barely visible through the thin fabric of her hoodie. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the weight of the takeout containers inside shifting with her movement. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oak roots twisting like arthritic fingers into the damp earth. Richmond Park stretched around her, empty at this hour, the streetlamps casting long, wavering shadows that seemed to breathe. She shouldn’t have come. Not at night. Not alone. But the note had been clear: *"The Grove. Midnight. Bring the pendant."* No signature, no explanation. Just the same looping script as the first message, slipped under her door three nights ago. The one that had sent her running to Eva, then to Silas, then back to her flat with the pendant clutched in her fist like a talisman. The wind picked up, rattling the branches above her. A whisper, almost. Or maybe just the leaves. Rory stepped between the stones. The air thickened. The sounds of the park—distant traffic, the rustle of nocturnal animals—faded into a muffled hum, as if she’d been submerged in water. The pendant pulsed once, warm against her skin, then stilled. The clearing opened before her, bathed in silver moonlight that didn’t match the overcast sky outside. Wildflowers glowed faintly, their petals shimmering with dew that shouldn’t have been there. Not in October. She exhaled, fog curling in front of her face. The wrongness settled in her gut like a stone. A snap. Twig breaking. Rory spun. Nothing. Just the trees, their branches swaying in a wind that didn’t touch her. She swallowed, her pulse loud in her ears. "Hello?" Silence. She turned back toward the center of the grove. A figure stood there, cloaked in shadow, too still to be human. The pendant flared hot against her chest. The figure tilted its head. "You came." The voice was wrong. Too many layers, like two people speaking at once. Rory’s fingers twitched toward the pendant, but she didn’t touch it. "Who are you?" A pause. Then, a step forward. The moonlight caught the edge of a face—pale, too smooth, the eyes too large. "You don’t remember me." Rory’s breath hitched. "I’d remember if I’d met you before." The figure laughed, a sound like wind chimes in a storm. "Would you?" Another step. The air smelled suddenly of copper and damp earth. "You’ve been carrying my gift for weeks. Did you think it was coincidence?" The pendant burned. Rory yanked it out from under her shirt, the chain biting into the back of her neck. The crimson stone pulsed, casting jagged shadows on the ground. "What do you want?" The figure spread its hands. "To remind you." A rustle. Not from the trees. Behind her. Rory whirled. The grove was empty. But the shadows at the edge of the clearing had deepened, pooling like ink. One of them moved. She stumbled back, her heel catching on a root. The pendant flared, searing her palm. The figure in front of her was closer now, close enough that she could see the veins beneath its translucent skin, black as oil. "You don’t belong here," it murmured. The shadows stretched. A whisper slithered through the air, not from the figure but from the trees themselves. *"Aurora."* Her name. In her mother’s voice. Rory’s knees locked. The pendant was a brand against her skin. The figure reached for her, fingers too long, too many joints. "You have to remember." A scream tore through the grove. Not hers. Not human. The figure recoiled. The shadows recoiled. The pendant went cold. Rory didn’t wait. She ran.
total_cost0.006942

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount611
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount611
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"wavering"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"loomed"
2"wavering"
3"whisper"
4"pulsed"
5"pulse"
6"silence"
7"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords7
totalWords608
ratio0.012
matches
0"\"The Grove. Midnight. Bring the pendant.\""
1"\"Aurora.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount554
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory9
Park1
Eva1
Silas1
October1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
places
0"Park"
1"October"
globalScore0.688
windowScore0.833
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"shadows that seemed to breathe"
35.53% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.645
wordCount608
matches
0"not from the figure but from the trees themselves"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean22.52
std19.3
cv0.857
sampleLengths
075
19
259
317
45
567
618
74
825
91
1028
117
1227
1324
1410
1537
1634
178
188
1924
2045
2119
226
2326
2410
2510
265
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"been submerged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs81
matches(empty)
74.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences83
ratio0.024
matches
0"The sounds of the park—distant traffic, the rustle of nocturnal animals—faded into a muffled hum, as if she’d been submerged in water."
1"The moonlight caught the edge of a face—pale, too smooth, the eyes too large."
89.73% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount557
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay heavy against Rory’s"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.04488330341113106
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005385996409335727
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean7.33
std6.01
cv0.821
sampleLengths
020
119
217
319
44
53
62
716
816
927
109
113
125
135
143
1522
1610
1716
1813
193
209
219
222
232
242
251
2613
278
281
291
309
3112
327
335
342
354
369
3711
383
392
404
4114
424
433
447
4511
464
479
4813
493
40.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3253012048192771
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences57
matches
0"Just the same looping script"
1"Just the trees, their branches"
2"Too many layers, like two"
3"Then, a step forward."
ratio0.07
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences57
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She shouldn’t have come."
2"She exhaled, fog curling in"
3"She swallowed, her pulse loud"
4"She turned back toward the"
5"She stumbled back, her heel"
ratio0.105
65.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences57
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
3"Richmond Park stretched around her,"
4"She shouldn’t have come."
5"The one that had sent"
6"The wind picked up, rattling"
7"A whisper, almost."
8"Rory stepped between the stones."
9"The air thickened."
10"The sounds of the park—distant"
11"The pendant pulsed once, warm"
12"The clearing opened before her,"
13"Wildflowers glowed faintly, their petals"
14"She exhaled, fog curling in"
15"The wrongness settled in her"
16"She swallowed, her pulse loud"
17"She turned back toward the"
18"A figure stood there, cloaked"
19"The pendant flared hot against"
ratio0.789
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Richmond Park stretched around her, empty at this hour, the streetlamps casting long, wavering shadows that seemed to breathe."
1"The sounds of the park—distant traffic, the rustle of nocturnal animals—faded into a muffled hum, as if she’d been submerged in water."
2"Wildflowers glowed faintly, their petals shimmering with dew that shouldn’t have been there."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"it murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.154
82.4870%