Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQYD855RTCN3A0ECPF1QRB

Run Details

Duration:
3.0s
Cost:
$0.000075

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of the Raven’s Nest flickered like a dying ember, casting jagged shadows across the slick pavement. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots crunched on wet leaves as she sprinted past the bar’s green sign, the rain hammering down in sheets. Her breath came sharp and uneven, her fingers tightening around the grip of her pistol. *"He’s going underground,"* she muttered, her voice low. The suspect, a man in a slick black coat, had vanished into the labyrinth of alleys just ahead. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She cut through a side street, her pulse hammering in her ears as she pushed through the damp, the scent of damp earth and old wood thick in the air. Ahead, the flickering glow of another neon sign—this one red—pulled her forward. She skidded to a halt at the edge of a crumbling Tube station entrance, the metal door groaning as she shoved it open. The air inside was thick, stale, the scent of damp stone and something older, something *wrong*. The station was half-collapsed, but the path ahead was clear, a narrow tunnel leading deeper into the earth. Quinn’s flashlight cut through the darkness, illuminating the jagged edges of rusted metal and the occasional flicker of candlelight from a stall. She moved fast, her boots kicking up dust as she followed the sound of voices. A low murmur, the clink of coins, the occasional curse. Then she saw him. Tomás Herrera stood at the center of a small clearing, his back to her, his hands wrapped around a stack of what looked like enchanted goods. His scar glinted under the dim light, sharp and jagged. Across from him, a figure in a hooded cloak leaned against a wall, watching. *"You shouldn’t be here,"* Tomás said without turning, his voice rough. *"This isn’t for the likes of you."* Quinn didn’t answer. She raised her pistol, her finger tightening on the trigger. *"Move,"* she ordered, her voice a blade. *"Now."* The hooded figure didn’t react. Tomás, though, turned slowly, his expression unreadable. *"You’re late,"* he said, his voice carrying the weight of a man who knew too much. *"They’re already moving the market."* Quinn’s grip on the gun didn’t loosen. *"Who’s moving it?"* *"The ones who own the tunnels,"* Tomás replied, stepping aside. *"They’re closing in."* The tunnel behind them groaned, the walls shifting as if something massive was shifting beneath them. Quinn’s pulse roared in her ears. She had to move. Now. *"Where’s the exit?"* *"Up,"* Tomás said, pointing. *"But you’ll need a bone token."* Quinn didn’t ask what that meant. She fired once, the bullet striking the hooded figure’s shoulder. The man staggered, but didn’t fall. Quinn didn’t wait to see if he’d live. She turned and ran, her boots pounding against the uneven stone. Tomás was right behind her, his voice a low growl in her ear. *"You can’t leave now!"* *"I don’t have time,"* Quinn gasped, her breath ragged. The tunnel split ahead. One path led deeper into the earth, the other— *"The Market,"* Tomás hissed. *"The Veil Market. But they’ll know you’re coming."* Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t look back. The flashlight flickered, the beam cutting through the dark as she pushed forward, her mind racing. She had to get out. Now. The tunnel opened into a vast cavern, the air thick with the scent of damp stone and something older, something *alive*. The Veil Market sprawled before her, a maze of stalls and flickering lanterns, the hum of voices and the clink of coins filling the air. And there, in the center, stood the hooded figure from before, his hands raised in surrender. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She fired again.
total_cost0.00007524

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount612
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount612
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"flicker"
3"unreadable"
4"weight"
5"pounding"
6"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans19
markdownWords65
totalWords609
ratio0.107
matches
0"\"He’s going underground,\""
1"wrong"
2"\"You shouldn’t be here,\""
3"\"This isn’t for the likes of you.\""
4"\"Move,\""
5"\"Now.\""
6"\"You’re late,\""
7"\"They’re already moving the market.\""
8"\"Who’s moving it?\""
9"\"The ones who own the tunnels,\""
10"\"They’re closing in.\""
11"\"Where’s the exit?\""
12"\"Up,\""
13"\"But you’ll need a bone token.\""
14"\"You can’t leave now!\""
15"\"I don’t have time,\""
16"\"The Market,\""
17"\"The Veil Market. But they’ll know you’re coming.\""
18"alive"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount546
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Tube1
Herrera1
Tomás7
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Herrera"
5"Tomás"
6"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0.493
windowScore0.5
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like enchanted goods"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount609
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean25.38
std19.07
cv0.752
sampleLengths
056
159
269
347
44
550
618
713
88
933
1010
1113
1227
133
1410
1530
1628
179
1813
1912
2029
2146
2216
236
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs91
matches
0"was shifting"
49.18% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences61
ratio0.033
matches
0"Ahead, the flickering glow of another neon sign—this one red—pulled her forward."
1"One path led deeper into the earth, the other—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount549
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.023679417122040074
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0018214936247723133
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean9.98
std7.02
cv0.703
sampleLengths
019
122
215
38
418
53
630
712
823
916
1018
1122
1215
1310
144
1526
1610
1714
1811
197
203
2110
227
231
245
257
2616
275
287
293
3010
313
3216
336
344
351
363
374
386
396
4010
416
428
4311
4413
454
469
474
489
494
60.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.39344262295081966
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners24
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Then she saw him."
ratio0.02
97.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences49
matches
0"Her breath came sharp and"
1"she muttered, her voice low"
2"She cut through a side"
3"She skidded to a halt"
4"She moved fast, her boots"
5"His scar glinted under the"
6"She raised her pistol, her"
7"she ordered, her voice a"
8"he said, his voice carrying"
9"She had to move."
10"She fired once, the bullet"
11"She turned and ran, her"
12"She didn’t look back."
13"She had to get out."
14"She fired again."
ratio0.306
11.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences49
matches
0"The neon glow of the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots crunched"
2"Her breath came sharp and"
3"she muttered, her voice low"
4"The suspect, a man in"
5"Quinn didn’t hesitate."
6"She cut through a side"
7"She skidded to a halt"
8"The air inside was thick,"
9"The station was half-collapsed, but"
10"Quinn’s flashlight cut through the"
11"She moved fast, her boots"
12"A low murmur, the clink"
13"Tomás Herrera stood at the"
14"His scar glinted under the"
15"Tomás said without turning, his"
16"Quinn didn’t answer."
17"She raised her pistol, her"
18"she ordered, her voice a"
19"The hooded figure didn’t react."
ratio0.898
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The tunnel behind them groaned, the walls shifting as if something massive was shifting beneath them."
1"The flashlight flickered, the beam cutting through the dark as she pushed forward, her mind racing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she muttered, her voice low"
1"Tomás said, his voice rough"
2"she ordered, her voice a blade"
3"Quinn gasped, her breath ragged"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she ordered (order)"
2"Quinn gasped (gasp)"
3"Tomás hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.471
73.7936%