| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1044 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1044 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "radiant" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "chilling" | | 5 | "footfall" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "echoes" | | 8 | "race" | | 9 | "resolve" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "glistening" | | 14 | "cacophony" | | 15 | "trepidation" | | 16 | "palpable" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "stark" | | 19 | "tension" | | 20 | "silk" | | 21 | "scanning" | | 22 | "weight" | | 23 | "looming" | | 24 | "chilled" | | 25 | "glean" | | 26 | "fleeting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.63% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1027 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 995 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 3 | | Carter | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | Hel | 1 | | Quiet | 1 | | Ether | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Quiet" | | 6 | "Ether" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed almost devoid of stars" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1027 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.56% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 51.35 | | std | 17.87 | | cv | 0.348 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 82 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 73 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 66 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.141 | | matches | | 0 | "But that was just it—wildflowers shouldn't thrive like this in the dead of night, in the toss and tumult of winter." | | 1 | "Pausing was like pulling away old scabs of memory—a childhood of traipsing through woods, the warmth of her mother’s voice teaching caution, teaching bravery." | | 2 | "The pendant pulsed against her chest—an anchor she had to trust." | | 3 | "The sounds morphed and warped—a cacophony of whispers that clambered over one another, over her steadily mounting heartbeat." | | 4 | "There it was again – movement, a shade barely shifting across her peripheral." | | 5 | "\"Show yourself!” She demanded; her eyes scanning for the beholder of these words left only the silhouettes cast by moon and mystery." | | 6 | "But a hearty crunch underfoot—too deliberate, too here to be imagined—halted her in place." | | 7 | "Or was this a test—a trial of spirit and character, far beyond what Rory could glean?" | | 8 | "Then another step forward—hers or the Grove's, who could know—broke the still." | | 9 | "Limbs weakened momentarily, driving her back home; yet curiosity moored her feet fast." |
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| 92.53% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 989 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.04853387259858443 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017189079878665317 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 81.91% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 14.46 | | std | 5.13 | | cv | 0.355 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 98.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.6056338028169014 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Always, the path was clearer" | | 1 | "Perhaps this Grove played games" | | 2 | "Then another step forward—hers or" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath was steady, but" | | 1 | "Its faint inner glow, a" | | 2 | "She wasn't here for a" | | 3 | "Her logical frame told her" | | 4 | "She coaxed herself away from" | | 5 | "She resumed walking, trying not" | | 6 | "It seemed like it was" | | 7 | "She spun fast, training her" | | 8 | "She needed the certainty more" | | 9 | "Its glow grew stronger with" | | 10 | "She tried to ignore the" | | 11 | "She pressed on, the forest's" | | 12 | "Her own word startled her" | | 13 | "It carried unnaturally, mingling with" | | 14 | "She wasn't about to let" | | 15 | "She demanded; her eyes scanning" | | 16 | "She wasn't alone, not now," | | 17 | "Her voice held stronger, cutting" | | 18 | "She could taste the closeness" | | 19 | "She paused, consideration fleeting in" |
| | ratio | 0.29 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "A shiver trailed up Aurora" | | 1 | "Her breath was steady, but" | | 2 | "This isn't just another random" | | 3 | "Its faint inner glow, a" | | 4 | "Richmond Park sprawled in inky" | | 5 | "She wasn't here for a" | | 6 | "The Fae Grove called out" | | 7 | "Wildflowers bloomed around her, their" | | 8 | "Her logical frame told her" | | 9 | "A slight crunch snapped from" | | 10 | "Rory stopped, senses now razor-sharp." | | 11 | "Pausing was like pulling away" | | 12 | "She coaxed herself away from" | | 13 | "She resumed walking, trying not" | | 14 | "It seemed like it was" | | 15 | "Another flicker of movement caught" | | 16 | "She spun fast, training her" | | 17 | "She needed the certainty more" | | 18 | "The pendant pulsed against her" | | 19 | "Its glow grew stronger with" |
| | ratio | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed around her, their petals radiant under moonlight that weaved through the branches." | | 1 | "She spun fast, training her gaze on only the winding arms of oaks and the blanketing darkness that seemed almost devoid of stars." | | 2 | "The sounds morphed and warped—a cacophony of whispers that clambered over one another, over her steadily mounting heartbeat." | | 3 | "The kind that lent strength to her trembling gait, emboldened by the wild concoction of instinct and curiosity." | | 4 | "Blazing, a siren's call resonating through the threads of her consciousness, willing her to step through." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She coaxed, though her voice was a moth-eaten attempt at confidence" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She coaxed (coax)" | | 1 | "She demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "the vastness expanded (expand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |