Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQYHJ2TBCR56HZPY27F3X4

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Duration:
48.4s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped into The Fae Grove, the air thick with an unsettling stillness. The ancient oak standing stones loomed like sentinels, their gnarled branches twisting against the night sky. She had come here for answers, clutching the Heartstone Pendant in her pocket, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her. The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the darkness. Each step felt heavy, as if the ground itself resisted her presence. She paused, scanning the clearing. Shadows danced at the edges of her vision, flickering like candle flames. “Just the wind,” she muttered, though the words felt hollow. A rustle came from the underbrush, sharp and sudden. Aurora’s heart raced. She turned, eyes darting toward the sound, but nothing emerged. Just the whisper of leaves, the distant croak of a frog. “Get a grip, Rory,” she whispered to herself, forcing her feet to move forward. She had to find the portal, the one that would lead her to the answers she sought. The Heartstone pulsed gently against her thigh, a reminder of her purpose. As she walked deeper into the grove, the air thickened, wrapping around her like a shroud. The trees seemed to lean closer, their branches reaching out as if to ensnare her. She shook her head, trying to dispel the creeping dread. “Just a clearing,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “Nothing to be afraid of.” But the wrongness lingered, a palpable weight pressing down on her. The sounds of the night grew distorted, the chirping of crickets morphing into a low hum that vibrated in her bones. She stopped, straining to listen. “Hello?” The word slipped from her lips, swallowed by the darkness. Silence answered, thick and suffocating. She took a step back, her instincts screaming at her to leave. But she couldn’t. Not yet. The Heartstone warmed against her skin, urging her forward. She reached for it, fingers brushing the cool silver chain. The faint glow illuminated her palm, casting eerie shadows on the ground. “Where are you?” she called, her voice stronger now, defiance mingling with fear. A flicker of movement caught her eye. She turned sharply, but only the wind answered, rustling the wildflowers. “Stop playing games!” she shouted, frustration bubbling to the surface. The grove responded with a low, almost mocking rustle, as if the very trees laughed at her bravado. Aurora clenched her fists, grounding herself. She had faced worse than this. But the shadows shifted again, darker this time, pooling at the base of the standing stones. She squinted, heart pounding. “Show yourself!” A figure emerged, barely discernible in the dim light. It stood just beyond the stones, a silhouette against the moonlight. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. “Who are you?” she demanded, voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. The figure remained still, shrouded in darkness. A chill crept up her spine, and she took a cautious step back. “Rory,” it said, voice smooth and melodic, yet laced with an unsettling edge. “You’ve come seeking answers.” “How do you know my name?” The figure stepped closer, revealing a face that was both familiar and foreign. Its features shifted, like a reflection in water, never settling. “Your heart calls to me,” it whispered, the words curling around her like smoke. “You seek the truth of your past.” Aurora’s pulse quickened. “What do you know about my past?” “More than you can imagine.” The shadows thickened, swirling around the figure, and Aurora felt the air grow colder. She tightened her grip on the Heartstone, its warmth a stark contrast to the encroaching chill. “Stay back!” she warned, though her voice wavered. The figure laughed, a sound that echoed through the grove, reverberating off the standing stones. “You think you can command me? You are but a fleeting moment in this realm.” A rustle behind her made her spin around. The grove pulsed with life, shadows darting just out of sight. She was not alone. “Leave me alone!” she shouted, panic rising. The figure stepped forward, its face shifting again, revealing a smile that sent a jolt of fear through her. “You cannot escape what you are.” Aurora stumbled back, her foot catching on a root. She fell, the Heartstone slipping from her grasp, rolling away into the darkness. “No!” She scrambled to her feet, eyes wide. The figure laughed again, the sound echoing like a taunt. “Your heartstone will lead you to your fate.” She lunged for the pendant, but the shadows coiled around it, pulling it deeper into the grove. “Stop!” she cried, desperation clawing at her throat. The figure watched, amusement dancing in its eyes. “You cannot control the forces at play here, Rory.” Aurora’s breath came in ragged gasps. She felt the weight of the grove pressing down on her, the trees closing in, the shadows whispering secrets she couldn’t understand. “Why are you doing this?” “Because you are meant to be here,” it replied, voice dripping with honeyed malice. “You are part of the story.” The shadows shifted again, and Aurora felt a presence behind her, cold and suffocating. She turned, heart racing, but nothing was there. “Face your truth,” the figure urged, stepping closer, its form flickering like a candle flame. “I don’t want this!” she shouted, the words tearing from her throat. The figure tilted its head, a glimmer of something dark in its eyes. “But it is already yours.” Aurora’s gaze darted around the grove, searching for an escape. The standing stones loomed like ancient guardians, their presence both comforting and terrifying. “Leave me alone!” The figure laughed, a sound that echoed through the grove, mingling with the rustle of leaves. “Your fear only feeds the darkness.” With a surge of determination, Aurora turned and ran, the wildflowers brushing against her legs as she fled. The shadows chased her, whispering secrets she couldn’t comprehend. “Rory!” the figure called, voice echoing like a haunting melody. “You cannot escape your destiny!” She stumbled through the grove, heart pounding, the Heartstone’s glow flickering in the distance. The shadows closed in, and she felt the weight of the grove pressing down, suffocating her. “Get away from me!” But the darkness only laughed, a sound that echoed in her mind, wrapping around her like a vice. Aurora pushed forward, desperation fueling her steps. She had to find the portal, had to escape this place before it consumed her whole. The grove pulsed with life, shadows swirling around her, and she felt the weight of the unknown pressing down, urging her to confront the truth she had tried to flee. But she wouldn’t give in. Not yet. Not ever.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.971
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"sharply"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsms40
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"reminder"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count3
8
word"palpable"
count1
9
word"weight"
count4
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count2
14
word"chill"
count2
15
word"familiar"
count1
16
word"pulse"
count1
17
word"quickened"
count1
18
word"stark"
count1
19
word"wavered"
count1
20
word"echoed"
count3
21
word"fleeting"
count1
22
word"echoing"
count2
23
word"dancing"
count1
24
word"racing"
count1
25
word"comforting"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"reminder"
4"scanning"
5"raced"
6"whisper"
7"pulsed"
8"palpable"
9"weight"
10"vibrated"
11"silence"
12"flicker"
13"pounding"
14"chill"
15"familiar"
16"pulse"
17"quickened"
18"stark"
19"wavered"
20"echoed"
21"fleeting"
22"echoing"
23"dancing"
24"racing"
25"comforting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
96.91% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences89
matches
0"g with fear"
1"a jolt of fear"
2"a surge of determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1118
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.63% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount962
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone6
Pendant1
Silence1
Aurora12
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Silence"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.876
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1118
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean19.28
std11.57
cv0.6
sampleLengths
057
146
210
333
443
541
616
737
811
922
1031
1113
1218
1310
1430
1520
162
1726
1813
1920
2017
216
2223
2321
2410
255
2630
278
2830
2923
307
3125
3222
338
3418
3517
368
3717
3828
395
4020
4122
4215
4312
4418
4523
463
4716
486
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences107
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount962
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.034303534303534305
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007276507276507277
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean10.45
std5.28
cv0.505
sampleLengths
013
116
228
317
412
55
612
710
89
93
1010
1111
1214
1317
1412
1516
1615
1710
1811
195
2011
2121
225
2311
245
2512
263
272
289
2910
3012
3113
327
3311
3410
3518
366
376
3816
394
402
419
4211
436
4413
457
4613
4713
484
496
52.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3177570093457944
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners34
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Just the whisper of leaves,"
ratio0.012
57.21% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences86
matches
0"She had come here for"
1"She paused, scanning the clearing."
2"she muttered, though the words"
3"She turned, eyes darting toward"
4"she whispered to herself, forcing"
5"She had to find the"
6"She shook her head, trying"
7"she said, her voice barely"
8"She stopped, straining to listen."
9"She took a step back,"
10"She reached for it, fingers"
11"she called, her voice stronger"
12"She turned sharply, but only"
13"she shouted, frustration bubbling to"
14"She had faced worse than"
15"She squinted, heart pounding."
16"It stood just beyond the"
17"she demanded, voice steady despite"
18"it said, voice smooth and"
19"Its features shifted, like a"
ratio0.407
6.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences86
matches
0"Aurora stepped into The Fae"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She had come here for"
3"The moon hung low, casting"
4"Each step felt heavy, as"
5"She paused, scanning the clearing."
6"Shadows danced at the edges"
7"she muttered, though the words"
8"A rustle came from the"
9"Aurora’s heart raced."
10"She turned, eyes darting toward"
11"she whispered to herself, forcing"
12"She had to find the"
13"The Heartstone pulsed gently against"
14"The trees seemed to lean"
15"She shook her head, trying"
16"she said, her voice barely"
17"The sounds of the night"
18"She stopped, straining to listen."
19"The word slipped from her"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She had come here for answers, clutching the Heartstone Pendant in her pocket, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her."
1"The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the darkness."
2"The grove responded with a low, almost mocking rustle, as if the very trees laughed at her bravado."
3"The figure stepped closer, revealing a face that was both familiar and foreign."
4"The figure stepped forward, its face shifting again, revealing a smile that sent a jolt of fear through her."
5"She fell, the Heartstone slipping from her grasp, rolling away into the darkness."
6"She stumbled through the grove, heart pounding, the Heartstone’s glow flickering in the distance."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"she muttered, though the words felt hollow"
1"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"she called, her voice stronger now, defiance mingling with fear"
3"she shouted, frustration bubbling to the surface"
4"she demanded, voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
5"it said, voice smooth and melodic, yet laced with an unsettling edge"
6"she warned, though her voice wavered"
7"She scrambled, eyes wide"
8"she cried, desperation clawing at her throat"
9"it replied, voice dripping with honeyed malice"
10"she shouted, the words tearing from her throat"
11"the figure called, voice echoing like a haunting melody"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she shouted (shout)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"it whispered (whisper)"
5"she warned (warn)"
6"she shouted (shout)"
7"she cried (cry)"
8"the figure urged (urge)"
9"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.571
75.0968%