| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.341 | | leniency | 0.683 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "lazily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "efficient" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "shattered" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "racing" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "quivered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.34% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 163 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 34 | | totalWords | 1366 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "The whisperers are waking." | | 1 | "Subject: Re: Your inquiry about DS Morris" | | 2 | "The Veil Market has a new caretaker. They're selling things that shouldn't be sold. Meet me at the archives. Bring what you found." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1090 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 21 | | Inspector | 1 | | Singh | 15 | | One | 4 | | Morris | 4 | | South | 1 | | London | 2 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Re | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Inspector" | | 3 | "Singh" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Market" |
| | places | | 0 | "One" | | 1 | "South" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "British" | | 4 | "Museum" |
| | globalScore | 0.537 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 4.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to twitch at the edges" | | 1 | "looked like eyeballs floating in amber li" | | 2 | "sigils that seemed to shift under the flickering light" | | 3 | "looked like charcoal across the tiles" | | 4 | "as if reacting to her touch" | | 5 | "seemed warmer now, as if reacting to her touch" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1366 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "seen that symbol" | | 1 | "heard that name" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 19.8 | | std | 15.34 | | cv | 0.775 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 61 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 46 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 92.36% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | | 0 | "been slashed" | | 1 | "was swept" | | 2 | "been pried" | | 3 | "was scrawled" | | 4 | "was found" |
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| 65.32% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | | 0 | "was breaking" | | 1 | "wasn't pointing" | | 2 | "was pointing" | | 3 | "was pointing" |
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| 72.74% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 163 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "The footprints—small, possibly a woman's or a light man's—led toward a set of stairs descending deeper." | | 1 | "A faded sign hung crookedly from the ceiling, the letters peeling but still readable: MARKET DAY—FULL MOON." | | 2 | "Behind its counter, shelves held dusty jars filled with unidentifiable substances—glittering powders, dried herbs, small bones." | | 3 | "Behind his left ear, a small tattoo—a stylized eye inside a triangle." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1101 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02452316076294278 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010899182561307902 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 163 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 163 | | mean | 8.38 | | std | 5.06 | | cv | 0.604 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 57.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.36809815950920244 | | totalSentences | 163 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 28.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Too little splatter for a" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "They moved quietly, exchanging glances." | | 1 | "He glanced up as Quinn" | | 2 | "She examined his hands." | | 3 | "His coat was expensive wool," | | 4 | "She leaned closer, her sharp" | | 5 | "She walked toward it, her" | | 6 | "Her torch beam illuminated a" | | 7 | "She moved to the nearest" | | 8 | "She returned to the body" | | 9 | "She knelt again, gently turning" | | 10 | "She'd seen that symbol before." | | 11 | "she told Singh" | | 12 | "He handed her a fresh" | | 13 | "She withdrew it carefully." | | 14 | "Its casing bore a patina" | | 15 | "She closed her fingers around" | | 16 | "She met Singh's gaze." | | 17 | "Her mind was three years" | | 18 | "She'd never believed it." | | 19 | "She turned away from the" |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 65.04% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 94 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Camden Tube station" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under" | | 2 | "The body lay sprawled near" | | 3 | "They moved quietly, exchanging glances." | | 4 | "Detective Inspector Singh stood over" | | 5 | "He glanced up as Quinn" | | 6 | "Singh gestured at the cavernous" | | 7 | "Quinn knelt beside the body," | | 8 | "The man's throat had been" | | 9 | "Blood had pooled beneath him," | | 10 | "She examined his hands." | | 11 | "His coat was expensive wool," | | 12 | "A silver tiepin lay nearby," | | 13 | "She leaned closer, her sharp" | | 14 | "Singh crouched beside her." | | 15 | "The man's leather soles were" | | 16 | "Quinn stood, scanning the platform." | | 17 | "She walked toward it, her" | | 18 | "Quinn paused at the doorway" | | 19 | "The floor just beyond the" |
| | ratio | 0.79 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Flickering emergency lights stained everything sulfur-yellow and cast long shadows that seemed to twitch at the edges." | | 1 | "Its casing bore a patina of verdigris, etched with intricate sigils that seemed to shift under the flickering light." | | 2 | "Morris on his knees, blood dripping from his nose, whispering the same phrase before he vanished." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She leaned, her sharp jaw tightening" | | 1 | "Quinn said, her voice low" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Singh whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.22 | | leniency | 0.439 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.049 | |