Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQYNG8YYFRNPRHE22C7S2C

Run Details

Duration:
2m 22s
Cost:
$0.001780
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Camden Tube station reeked of mildew and ozone. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape strung across the tunnel entrance, her boots crunching on broken tiles. Flickering emergency lights stained everything sulfur-yellow and cast long shadows that seemed to twitch at the edges. The body lay sprawled near the edge of the platform, a middle-aged man in a torn trench coat. Uniformed officers had cordoned off the area, but their usual efficient chatter was absent. They moved quietly, exchanging glances. Detective Inspector Singh stood over the body, frowning at his notebook. He glanced up as Quinn approached. "Harlow. Didn't think this would be your sort of case." "The call said unusual circumstances." "Unusual location, more like." Singh gestured at the cavernous space, the graffiti-streaked walls, the tracks vanishing into darkness. "Homeless man found him an hour ago. No ID, no wallet. Looks like a mugging gone wrong." Quinn knelt beside the body, her worn leather watch catching the sickly light. The man's throat had been slashed, a deep, precise cut. Blood had pooled beneath him, black in the dimness. But something about the pattern felt wrong. Too contained. Too little splatter for a violent attack. She examined his hands. Clean nails, no defensive wounds. His coat was expensive wool, now ripped at the shoulder. A silver tiepin lay nearby, gem missing from its setting. "This wasn't a mugging," Quinn said. Singh sighed. "Why not?" "No struggle. He's lying perfectly flat. Throat wounds bleed heavily—look at the lack of arterial spray on the walls or floor around him." "The blood pooled underneath." "Exactly. He was already on the ground when his throat was cut." She leaned closer, her sharp jaw tightening. "And look at his shoes." Singh crouched beside her. The man's leather soles were clean. No scuff marks, no dirt from the filthy platform. "He was carried here," Quinn said. "A dump site? But why here? It's a warren down here. Dozens of easier places to hide a body." Quinn stood, scanning the platform. Abandoned ticket booths with shattered windows lined the wall. Faded posters advertised concerts from twenty years ago. One doorway led deeper into the station's administrative areas, its door hanging askew on broken hinges. She walked toward it, her footsteps echoing. Singh followed. "You're thinking organized crime? A message?" "I'm thinking the evidence doesn't add up." Quinn paused at the doorway. The floor just beyond the threshold was swept clean, unlike the dust and debris covering the platform. A single set of faint footprints led into the darkness. "Bring a light," she said. One of the uniformed officers handed her a powerful torch. Quinn swept the beam into the corridor. The walls here were cleaner, the graffiti absent. The footprints—small, possibly a woman's or a light man's—led toward a set of stairs descending deeper. "Where do these go?" she asked. Singh checked his tablet. "Old maintenance levels, I think. The maps are spotty for these decommissioned stations." Quinn followed the footprints. The air grew colder, carrying a scent like old books and wet stone. The stairs ended in a narrow corridor lined with pipes, then opened into a large round chamber that must have been some kind of junction room. A metal gate blocked a tunnel mouth on the far side, but the gate had been pried open. Beyond it, the darkness felt different. Thicker. Quinn stepped through the gate. Her torch beam illuminated a platform unlike the one above. This one was clean, the tiles intact. Wooden stalls lined the walls, shuttered and padlocked. A faded sign hung crookedly from the ceiling, the letters peeling but still readable: MARKET DAY—FULL MOON. She froze. "Bloody hell," Singh whispered behind her. "What is this place?" Quinn didn't answer. She moved to the nearest stall. Behind its counter, shelves held dusty jars filled with unidentifiable substances—glittering powders, dried herbs, small bones. One jar contained what looked like eyeballs floating in amber liquid. "This isn't a crime scene," Quinn said, her voice low. "It's a message." She returned to the body on the upper platform. Uniforms had begun packing up, assuming Singh's mugging theory. Quinn ignored them, her mind racing. A body dumped at the entrance to a hidden market. A throat cut post-mortem. Clean shoes. Expensive clothes. She knelt again, gently turning the man's head. Behind his left ear, a small tattoo—a stylized eye inside a triangle. She'd seen that symbol before. Three years ago, in the notes her partner Morris had left behind. "Give me your gloves," she told Singh. He handed her a fresh pair. Quinn pulled them on and carefully opened the man's coat. The lining was silk, hand-stitched. In an inner pocket, she found a flat brass object no larger than a pocket watch. She withdrew it carefully. A compass. Its casing bore a patina of verdigris, etched with intricate sigils that seemed to shift under the flickering light. The needle spun lazily, then pointed steadily toward the opened gate leading down to the hidden market. "What's that?" Singh asked. Quinn stood, holding the compass flat on her palm. The needle didn't waver. "Evidence." "A compass? Maybe he was an urban explorer." "No." She closed her fingers around the cool brass. The hum of energy against her skin was unmistakable. "This man wasn't mugged. He was killed somewhere else and left here as a warning. Or an invitation." "To whom?" She met Singh's gaze. "To whoever knows what this place is." One of the uniformed officers called from near the ticket barriers. "Detective? Found something." Quinn pocketed the compass and walked over. The officer pointed his torch beam at the floor near the barriers. A single sentence was scrawled in what looked like charcoal across the tiles: *The whisperers are waking.* The handwriting was elegant, almost calligraphic. Singh stared at it. "What does that mean?" Quinn didn't answer. Her mind was three years back, in a rain-slicked alley behind a South London pub. Morris on his knees, blood dripping from his nose, whispering the same phrase before he vanished. The official report said he'd run, gone rogue. She'd never believed it. Now this. She turned away from the writing, her bearing rigid with military precision. "Seal the entire station. No one in or out without my authorization." "Harlow, this is just—" "Do it." She started toward the exit, then paused. "And get someone from Occult Crimes down here." Singh blinked. "Occult Crimes? That's a joke division." "Maybe," Quinn said. "Or maybe they're the only ones who'll understand what we're dealing with." She strode back through the tunnel, the compass heavy in her pocket. The air grew warmer as she climbed toward street level, but the chill in her bones remained. Above, dawn was breaking over Camden. The city waking to another ordinary day. Quinn stood at the station entrance, watching the early morning traffic. She pulled the compass from her pocket again. The needle now pointed northeast, toward the center of London. Toward the British Museum. Her phone buzzed. An email notification. She tapped it open. A message from an encrypted server, sent two hours before the body was found. *Subject: Re: Your inquiry about DS Morris* *The Veil Market has a new caretaker. They're selling things that shouldn't be sold. Meet me at the archives. Bring what you found.* No signature. But the timing was impossible. She thumbed the phone off, her knuckles white around the compass. The patina on the brass seemed warmer now, as if reacting to her touch. The sigils glowed faintly in the dawn light. Singh emerged from the station, shaking his head. "I put in the call to Occult Crimes. They're sending someone named Kowalski. Said she's already familiar with the location." Quinn's breath caught. She'd heard that name before, in one of Morris's old case files. An academic, someone he'd consulted. "When?" "She's on her way." Quinn looked down at the compass again. The needle quivered, then spun until it pointed directly at Singh. She frowned, tilting it. The needle followed him as he walked toward the police vans. It wasn't pointing toward the museum anymore. It was pointing toward the supernatural. And right now, it was pointing at her colleague.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:43:25.325Z" 2/19/2026, 10:43:25 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.683
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1378
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"gently"
2"carefully"
3"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1378
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"efficient"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"racing"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"quivered"
count1
highlights
0"efficient"
1"scanning"
2"shattered"
3"footsteps"
4"echoing"
5"racing"
6"silk"
7"etched"
8"intricate"
9"chill"
10"familiar"
11"quivered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences136
matches(empty)
90.34% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences136
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords34
totalWords1366
ratio0.025
matches
0"The whisperers are waking."
1"Subject: Re: Your inquiry about DS Morris"
2"The Veil Market has a new caretaker. They're selling things that shouldn't be sold. Meet me at the archives. Bring what you found."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
53.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1090
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn21
Inspector1
Singh15
One4
Morris4
South1
London2
British1
Museum1
Re1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Inspector"
3"Singh"
4"Morris"
5"Market"
places
0"One"
1"South"
2"London"
3"British"
4"Museum"
globalScore0.537
windowScore0.667
4.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"shadows that seemed to twitch at the edges"
1"looked like eyeballs floating in amber li"
2"sigils that seemed to shift under the flickering light"
3"looked like charcoal across the tiles"
4"as if reacting to her touch"
5"seemed warmer now, as if reacting to her touch"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1366
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences163
matches
0"seen that symbol"
1"heard that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean19.8
std15.34
cv0.775
sampleLengths
046
137
227
35
435
548
629
76
84
923
104
1124
1219
136
1419
1538
169
176
1839
195
2041
216
2217
2361
247
2547
262
2710
2836
2913
3042
3137
327
3341
342
3536
364
3714
388
3936
402
4111
4214
4332
444
456
468
4746
482
4924
92.36% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences136
matches
0"been slashed"
1"was swept"
2"been pried"
3"was scrawled"
4"was found"
65.32% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was breaking"
1"wasn't pointing"
2"was pointing"
3"was pointing"
72.74% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences163
ratio0.025
matches
0"The footprints—small, possibly a woman's or a light man's—led toward a set of stairs descending deeper."
1"A faded sign hung crookedly from the ceiling, the letters peeling but still readable: MARKET DAY—FULL MOON."
2"Behind its counter, shelves held dusty jars filled with unidentifiable substances—glittering powders, dried herbs, small bones."
3"Behind his left ear, a small tattoo—a stylized eye inside a triangle."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1101
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02452316076294278
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010899182561307902
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean8.38
std5.06
cv0.604
sampleLengths
010
119
217
318
414
55
611
76
810
95
1018
1117
1213
1310
149
157
162
177
184
195
2010
2110
226
232
242
2523
264
2719
285
294
306
319
326
3319
345
359
368
3716
387
392
406
4112
4217
4310
445
4510
467
478
4816
496
57.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36809815950920244
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners60
28.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"Too little splatter for a"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences119
matches
0"They moved quietly, exchanging glances."
1"He glanced up as Quinn"
2"She examined his hands."
3"His coat was expensive wool,"
4"She leaned closer, her sharp"
5"She walked toward it, her"
6"Her torch beam illuminated a"
7"She moved to the nearest"
8"She returned to the body"
9"She knelt again, gently turning"
10"She'd seen that symbol before."
11"she told Singh"
12"He handed her a fresh"
13"She withdrew it carefully."
14"Its casing bore a patina"
15"She closed her fingers around"
16"She met Singh's gaze."
17"Her mind was three years"
18"She'd never believed it."
19"She turned away from the"
ratio0.261
65.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences119
matches
0"The abandoned Camden Tube station"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The body lay sprawled near"
3"They moved quietly, exchanging glances."
4"Detective Inspector Singh stood over"
5"He glanced up as Quinn"
6"Singh gestured at the cavernous"
7"Quinn knelt beside the body,"
8"The man's throat had been"
9"Blood had pooled beneath him,"
10"She examined his hands."
11"His coat was expensive wool,"
12"A silver tiepin lay nearby,"
13"She leaned closer, her sharp"
14"Singh crouched beside her."
15"The man's leather soles were"
16"Quinn stood, scanning the platform."
17"She walked toward it, her"
18"Quinn paused at the doorway"
19"The floor just beyond the"
ratio0.79
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Flickering emergency lights stained everything sulfur-yellow and cast long shadows that seemed to twitch at the edges."
1"Its casing bore a patina of verdigris, etched with intricate sigils that seemed to shift under the flickering light."
2"Morris on his knees, blood dripping from his nose, whispering the same phrase before he vanished."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She leaned, her sharp jaw tightening"
1"Quinn said, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Singh whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.439
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.049
80.5439%