Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQYP5JN111NANK8Q9K3N6X

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Duration:
39.6s
Cost:
$0.001033

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the pavements of Soho, glistening under the flickering streetlights. Detective Harlow Quinn barely noticed the cold seep through her coat as she sprinted after the figure ahead. The suspect ducked into a narrow alley, slipping around a corner. Quinn's breath quickened, not just from the chase, but from the rush of pursuing someone so close to a lead, so close to unearthing the threads that had haunted her since DS Morris's death. “Stop!” she shouted, his name hanging in the thick air between them, but he didn’t turn. Dark hair plastered against the nape of his neck as he quickened his pace, thoughts racing through her mind like the shards of broken glass on the wet street. She dashed forward, boots splashing through puddles, the soft thud of her heartbeat rising above the city’s nighttime symphony. Quinn crossed the alley, only a glimpse of him disappearing into shadows. She reached the alley mouth, the walls towering above, their damp surfaces slick and slicker still from the relentless downpour. He weaved through the city’s veins, a rabbit in the dark warren, close enough that she could feel the tension wrap around them. She started to vault over a low fence but stumbled as she came back down, pausing for breath, hands on her knees against the cold. The alley ended at a wall of tangled vines and barbed wires, a dead end but for— A set of rusted stairs led down, disappearing into the murk and mystery below. An abandoned Tube station. She jogged to the edge, hesitating. Was she really willing to plunge into that unknown darkness? “Damn it,” she muttered under her breath. The choice throbbed in her mind—the suspect or the safety of the rain-soaked streets above. The latter felt comforting, predictable. “Are you coming or what?” the voice echoed from under the stairway, taunting her. She didn’t recognize it, but a mix of arrogance and desperation dripped from the tone. “Why should I?” Her voice dripped with sarcasm, but her heart pounded with urgency. “Because I’d hate for you to miss the show." Her grip tightened on her badge. "You think you can play games with me?” A chuckle, rough around the edges, bounced off the damp walls until it shattered into silence. He stepped into a beam of light, half-shadowed but unmistakably smug. The choice crystallized in her mind: risk the unknown or lose him for good. Quinn took a step down the stairs, not looking back as the rain poured down above her. The moment she crossed the threshold, the world shifted. The air thickened, and a low hum created an otherworldly rhythm. Flickering neon lights sputtered into life, illuminating a space she had only heard about—the Veil Market. She navigated through a sea of wares and whispered transactions, her sharp instincts rattling like a maraca. “Leave her to me,” a voice hissed from the shadows, but Quinn kept moving, eyes scanning the array of items that seemed to pulse with a life of their own. Bottles glimmered with strange potions, and small trinkets, each more peculiar than the last, adorned the tables. But none of it registered; her mind remained focused on the figure weaving through the throngs. He dodged between a group huddled around a flickering stall, a vendor hawking what looked like beaten-up bones and fruits that glowed in defiance of the dark. Then he vanished into a crowd pressing toward a makeshift stage topped with a rough wooden platform. An enchanted show maybe, or a ruse. “Hey! You!” Quinn yelled, fingers dancing toward her holster, but the crowd closed in around her. Somebody touched her shoulder. She spun, instinctively drawing her weapon, pointing it at a dark figure. The man, olive-skinned and wearing a Saint Christopher medallion, raised his hands, palms outward. “Not worth it, Detective. You don’t want to make waves here,” he said, smoothing his curly hair back. “Tomás,” she recognized his face from the whispers of the underground scene. “What are you doing here?” “Look, just let him go. You won’t find anything here.” His warm brown eyes softened as he peered around. “It’s not worth it.” “Mary was. And she might be connected,” Quinn shot back, her gaze darting to catch any sign of her target. “The dead don’t lead you to the living,” Tomás countered, his voice steady. “You’re out of your depth.” Quinn’s resolve slipped a fraction, uncertainty clawing at her consciousness. “None of this is safe. Get out while you can.” He leaned closer, the scent of damp earth and sweat wafting over her. “Come with me.” “Where?” she snapped, the edge of impatience creeping into her words. “Back to the Raven. Or another safe place. This, this is a trap.” Before she could reply, the crowd roared, and the stranger she chased broke free, darting toward the back exit, eyes darting around like a hunted animal searching for safety. “Damn it!” Quinn pushed past Tomás, the urgency roaring back. “Quinn! You don’t know what you’re doing!” he shouted, but she didn’t care. She barreled through the market, weaving around stalls and dodging the shifty gazes of the locals, desperate to catch him. As she threaded through the penumbra of lives intertwined in the market, a flicker of something—not fear, but survival—swept through her. The scent of smoke mingled with the rain, and the bolt of adrenaline replaced the fog of indecision. The blurred thread between right and wrong began to unravel; she would follow him, no matter where this path led. She burst through a shabby canvas curtain and entered a dimly lit corridor. The atmosphere thickened, shadow men danced amid balls of light. Up ahead, her suspect twisted around another corner, wild eyes catching her for just a moment. Everything faded—the stalls, the vendors, Tomás. She only saw the fleeting figure, driven by revenge and the need for answers. Quinn hurtled toward him, the sound of her footsteps merging with the rumble of thunder above. “Stop!” she yelled again. Raw determination surged in her chest, and she pushed through yet another crowd, nightfall cloaking her in pursuit. With every step deeper into the Veil Market, Quinn felt the tug of transition, a sensation of danger lurking in the corners. This world held secrets that could unravel her reality, but she couldn’t turn back now. The chase pulled her deeper into the unknown, a pursuit of justice, ghosts, and perhaps, the cryptic truths she didn’t fully comprehend. No, there was no stopping now. The night was young, the rain still poured, and destiny beckoned from the shadows.
total_cost0.00103335

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she yelled again [again]"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.696
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
95.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"glistening"
count1
1
word"quickened"
count2
2
word"racing"
count1
3
word"symphony"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"predictable"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"crystallized"
count1
13
word"otherworldly"
count1
14
word"navigated"
count1
15
word"scanning"
count1
16
word"pulse"
count1
17
word"dancing"
count1
18
word"resolve"
count1
19
word"roaring"
count1
20
word"flicker"
count1
21
word"unravel"
count2
22
word"fleeting"
count1
23
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"glistening"
1"quickened"
2"racing"
3"symphony"
4"could feel"
5"tension"
6"throbbed"
7"comforting"
8"predictable"
9"echoed"
10"shattered"
11"silence"
12"crystallized"
13"otherworldly"
14"navigated"
15"scanning"
16"pulse"
17"dancing"
18"resolve"
19"roaring"
20"flicker"
21"unravel"
22"fleeting"
23"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences69
matches
0"d with urgency"
1"felt the tug"
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1098
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount976
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Morris1
Dark1
Tube1
Veil2
Market2
Bottles1
Somebody1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás3
Raw1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Bottles"
4"Somebody"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Dark"
2"Veil"
3"Market"
globalScore0.936
windowScore1
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"items that seemed to pulse with a life of their own"
1"looked like beaten-up bones and fruits th"
17.85% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.821
wordCount1098
matches
0"not just from the chase, but from the rush of pursuing someone so close to a lead, so clo"
1"not fear, but survival"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean30.5
std18.05
cv0.592
sampleLengths
076
145
251
365
434
527
629
714
89
914
1041
1117
1253
1363
1451
1516
1630
1718
1817
1923
2020
2118
2210
2326
2411
2513
2629
2710
2833
2959
3023
3116
3236
3322
3459
3520
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences76
ratio0.092
matches
0"The alley ended at a wall of tangled vines and barbed wires, a dead end but for—"
1"The choice throbbed in her mind—the suspect or the safety of the rain-soaked streets above."
2"Flickering neon lights sputtered into life, illuminating a space she had only heard about—the Veil Market."
3"But none of it registered; her mind remained focused on the figure weaving through the throngs."
4"As she threaded through the penumbra of lives intertwined in the market, a flicker of something—not fear, but survival—swept through her."
5"The blurred thread between right and wrong began to unravel; she would follow him, no matter where this path led."
6"Everything faded—the stalls, the vendors, Tomás."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount985
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03147208121827411
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012182741116751269
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean14.45
std6.66
cv0.461
sampleLengths
013
118
211
334
416
529
619
712
820
923
1025
1117
1214
134
146
1510
167
1715
185
1914
2015
2114
229
236
248
2516
2611
2714
2817
299
3011
3116
3217
3330
3417
3516
3627
3717
387
3916
404
4112
4214
4318
4412
455
4619
474
4820
4913
85.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5394736842105263
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners41
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then he vanished into a"
ratio0.014
80.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences69
matches
0"she shouted, his name hanging"
1"She dashed forward, boots splashing"
2"She reached the alley mouth,"
3"He weaved through the city’s"
4"She started to vault over"
5"She jogged to the edge,"
6"she muttered under her breath"
7"She didn’t recognize it, but"
8"Her voice dripped with sarcasm,"
9"Her grip tightened on her"
10"He stepped into a beam"
11"She navigated through a sea"
12"He dodged between a group"
13"She spun, instinctively drawing her"
14"he said, smoothing his curly"
15"she recognized his face from"
16"His warm brown eyes softened"
17"He leaned closer, the scent"
18"she snapped, the edge of"
19"he shouted, but she didn’t"
ratio0.348
39.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences69
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn barely noticed"
2"The suspect ducked into a"
3"Quinn's breath quickened, not just"
4"she shouted, his name hanging"
5"She dashed forward, boots splashing"
6"Quinn crossed the alley, only"
7"She reached the alley mouth,"
8"He weaved through the city’s"
9"She started to vault over"
10"The alley ended at a"
11"A set of rusted stairs"
12"An abandoned Tube station."
13"She jogged to the edge,"
14"she muttered under her breath"
15"The choice throbbed in her"
16"The latter felt comforting, predictable."
17"the voice echoed from under"
18"She didn’t recognize it, but"
19"Her voice dripped with sarcasm,"
ratio0.841
72.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Before she could reply, the"
ratio0.014
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Quinn's breath quickened, not just from the chase, but from the rush of pursuing someone so close to a lead, so close to unearthing the threads that had haunted…"
1"She dashed forward, boots splashing through puddles, the soft thud of her heartbeat rising above the city’s nighttime symphony."
2"He dodged between a group huddled around a flickering stall, a vendor hawking what looked like beaten-up bones and fruits that glowed in defiance of the dark."
3"She spun, instinctively drawing her weapon, pointing it at a dark figure."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Her voice dripped, but her heart pounded with urgency"
1"Quinn shot back, her gaze darting to catch any sign of her target"
2"Tomás countered, his voice steady"
3"He leaned, the scent of damp earth and sweat wafting over her"
4"she snapped, the edge of impatience creeping into her words"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"a voice hissed (hiss)"
3"Quinn yelled (yell)"
4"she snapped (snap)"
5"he shouted (shout)"
6"she yelled again (yell)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0.875
effectiveRatio0.609
75.4534%