Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQYVWPJQVDDJF46TDVQ0MC

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Duration:
4.4s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of *The Raven’s Nest* pulsed like a slow heartbeat against the London night, casting jagged shadows across the bar’s worn wooden floor. The air smelled of stale beer and something sharper—burnt coffee, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of old wounds. Aurora Carter stood at the counter, her fingers brushing the rim of a glass as she watched the door. She hadn’t been here in years, not since she’d left Cardiff, not since the weight of her past had pressed down on her like a physical thing. She turned just as the door swung open. Silas Blackwood stepped inside, his presence cutting through the dim light like a blade. His grey-streaked auburn hair was slightly dishevelled, his beard shadowed under the bar’s dim glow. He moved with that quiet authority she remembered, though now there was something in his gait—something heavier, slower. His limp wasn’t as pronounced tonight, but it wasn’t gone. Aurora’s breath caught. She’d thought she’d outrun him. Thought she’d outrun this. “Rory,” Silas said, his voice low, rough. He didn’t wait for her to move. He crossed the space between them in two strides, his hand outstretched before she could react. The scar on her wrist—small, crescent-shaped—flared beneath his touch. “You look different,” he said. She didn’t pull away. “And you.” A flicker of something passed over his face—regret, maybe, or the ghost of a memory. “I’ve been busy.” “Busy,” she echoed, the word hanging between them like a question. She stepped back, her heels clicking against the tiles. “You’ve got a bar now.” “And you’ve got a life.” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “Life’s a joke, Silas.” He didn’t smile. “You always were a stubborn little thing.” The bar’s owner, a wiry man with a permanent scowl, cleared his throat from behind the counter. “Looks like we’ve got company.” Silas didn’t look away. “Aurora Carter.” She turned to face him fully, her bright blue eyes sharp. “Aurora Carter. Rory. Laila. Carter. Malphora.” The names rolled off her tongue like old debts. “You’ve changed.” “You’ve changed too,” he said, his voice dropping to something darker. “You left me.” The words hit her like a punch. She swallowed, her throat tight. “I had to.” “And now?” Now, she thought, was when she’d stopped believing in anything but the next step. Now, she’d learned to walk fast, to disappear when the weight got too heavy. Now, she was just another face in the crowd, another name in a ledger. Silas exhaled, slow and deliberate. “You ever miss it?” The question hung between them. Miss what? The old world? The life she’d left behind? The person she’d been? She didn’t answer. “You ever think about the things you left behind?” he pressed. She turned away, her fingers tightening around the glass. “I don’t think about them.” “You don’t have to.” His voice was rough, almost dangerous. “But you do.” The bar’s owner leaned over the counter, his voice a growl. “Right. If you’re gonna be trouble, you can go outside.” Silas didn’t move. “Aurora.” She faced him again, her breath steady. “What do you want?” He reached into his coat, pulled out a folded piece of paper. She didn’t flinch. Didn’t react. “This was in my pocket when I came in.” She took it, her fingers brushing his. The paper was yellowed at the edges, the ink smudged. She unfolded it, her eyes scanning the words before she looked up at him. “You ever read this?” She didn’t answer. Instead, she handed it back. Silas took it, his jaw tight. “You’re not going to read it?” She shook her head. “No.” He studied her for a long moment. “You’re not the same person who left me.” She didn’t deny it. “I’m not.” “You’re still me.” The words struck her like a blow. She looked away, her vision blurring. “You’re not the same person who sent me away.” Silas’s hand found hers again, his grip firm. “I’m sorry.” She pulled back, her breath coming fast. “You don’t have to say that.” He didn’t let go. “I do.” The bar’s owner’s voice cut through the silence. “Right. If you’re gonna be a nuisance, you can go.” Silas didn’t release her. “Aurora.” She turned back to him, her eyes burning. “I don’t want to talk about this.” “You’re not leaving.” She tried to step away, but his grip was too strong. “You’re not my father.” Silas’s face darkened. “I’m not?” She didn’t answer. The words hung between them, heavy and unspoken. Silas released her, stepping back. “I’ve got a job for you.” She didn’t look at him. “A job.” “It’s simple. Just get it done.” She turned to the door, her pulse hammering in her throat. “I don’t do jobs.” Silas’s voice was low, dangerous. “You always did.” She didn’t look back. “I don’t anymore.” The door clicked shut behind her. She stood there for a moment, her breath steady, her mind racing. Then she turned, her shoulders stiff. The bar’s owner watched her, his expression unreadable. “You’re leaving,” he said. She nodded. “I am.” The neon sign flickered overhead, casting long shadows across the bar. Aurora Carter walked out into the London night, her steps quick and sure. She didn’t look back. Silas watched her go, his hand resting on the signet ring on his right hand. He exhaled, slow and deliberate. He’d known she’d come back. He’d known she’d never leave. He turned back to the bar, his voice rough. “Right. Let’s get this place ready for the weekend.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount928
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount928
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"weight"
2"flicker"
3"echoed"
4"scanning"
5"silence"
6"unspoken"
7"pulse"
8"racing"
9"unreadable"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords921
ratio0.003
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount708
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.69
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
London2
Carter2
Cardiff1
Blackwood1
Aurora3
Silas12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Aurora"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.653
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount921
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean15.35
std14.38
cv0.937
sampleLengths
090
18
257
312
439
55
66
718
825
95
109
1110
1222
136
1417
1511
1614
1715
182
1942
209
2122
2211
2314
2413
2521
264
2711
2826
2931
304
318
3212
335
3415
356
363
3722
3810
3913
406
4118
425
4315
443
4515
465
4711
4811
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"was yellowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
56.93% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences133
ratio0.03
matches
0"The air smelled of stale beer and something sharper—burnt coffee, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of old wounds."
1"He moved with that quiet authority she remembered, though now there was something in his gait—something heavier, slower."
2"The scar on her wrist—small, crescent-shaped—flared beneath his touch."
3"A flicker of something passed over his face—regret, maybe, or the ghost of a memory."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount715
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03636363636363636
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002797202797202797
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean6.92
std4.74
cv0.684
sampleLengths
025
119
219
327
48
514
615
718
810
93
105
114
127
137
1416
159
165
174
182
1915
203
2111
229
235
245
255
264
273
287
2917
305
314
322
3311
346
359
362
3711
383
397
405
413
422
4314
4414
4514
465
474
485
492
40.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.19548872180451127
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners26
80.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"Instead, she handed it back."
1"Then she turned, her shoulders"
ratio0.024
12.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences83
matches
0"She hadn’t been here in"
1"She turned just as the"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3"He moved with that quiet"
4"His limp wasn’t as pronounced"
5"She’d thought she’d outrun him."
6"He didn’t wait for her"
7"He crossed the space between"
8"She didn’t pull away."
9"she echoed, the word hanging"
10"She stepped back, her heels"
11"She laughed, sharp and bitter."
12"He didn’t smile."
13"She turned to face him"
14"he said, his voice dropping"
15"She swallowed, her throat tight."
16"She didn’t answer."
17"She turned away, her fingers"
18"His voice was rough, almost"
19"She faced him again, her"
ratio0.518
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences83
matches
0"The neon glow of *The"
1"The air smelled of stale"
2"Aurora Carter stood at the"
3"She hadn’t been here in"
4"She turned just as the"
5"Silas Blackwood stepped inside, his"
6"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
7"He moved with that quiet"
8"His limp wasn’t as pronounced"
9"Aurora’s breath caught."
10"She’d thought she’d outrun him."
11"Silas said, his voice low,"
12"He didn’t wait for her"
13"He crossed the space between"
14"The scar on her wrist—small,"
15"She didn’t pull away."
16"A flicker of something passed"
17"she echoed, the word hanging"
18"She stepped back, her heels"
19"She laughed, sharp and bitter."
ratio0.928
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Now, she thought, was when"
1"Now, she’d learned to walk"
2"Now, she was just another"
ratio0.036
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Silas said, his voice low, rough"
1"she echoed, the word hanging between them like a question"
2"he said, his voice dropping to something darker"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.196
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.039
82.3652%