| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 721 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 721 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "sentinels" | | 5 | "down her spine" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "sanctuary" | | 8 | "sense of" | | 9 | "pounding" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "resonated" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "churned" | | 18 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 99.75% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "y with warmth" |
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| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 721 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.97% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 714 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.68 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 7 | | Eva | 2 | | Rory | 12 | | Heartstone | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.66 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 59.09% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed farther away than she remembered" | | 1 | "not quite touching the ground" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 721 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 4.60% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 13 | | mean | 55.46 | | std | 9.21 | | cv | 0.166 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 65 |
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| 99.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.46% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 714 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.04061624649859944 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008403361344537815 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 66 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 66 | | mean | 10.92 | | std | 5.82 | | cv | 0.533 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 48.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3181818181818182 | | totalSentences | 66 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, she stopped." | | 1 | "Instead, it tilted its head," |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 62.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been here before, hadn't" | | 1 | "She shook it off, attributing" | | 2 | "Her flashlight beam danced over" | | 3 | "Her voice echoed, swallowed by" | | 4 | "She saw nothing but the" | | 5 | "It had never done that" | | 6 | "She looked around, her eyes" | | 7 | "They pulsed in rhythm with" | | 8 | "She turned to leave, but" | | 9 | "She took off running, her" | | 10 | "she demanded, her voice barely" | | 11 | "She took a step back," | | 12 | "It pulsed faster, hotter." | | 13 | "She could hear it now," | | 14 | "She dared a glance back." | | 15 | "They clicked together, a soft," | | 16 | "She stumbled, her foot catching" | | 17 | "She fell, her hands sinking" | | 18 | "She threw it, her aim" | | 19 | "It hit the figure square" |
| | ratio | 0.394 | |
| 20.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove, Eva had" | | 1 | "She'd been here before, hadn't" | | 2 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 3 | "Rory stepped between them, her" | | 4 | "The Grove's boundary crossed, she" | | 5 | "She shook it off, attributing" | | 6 | "Her flashlight beam danced over" | | 7 | "The Grove was supposed to" | | 8 | "A place where time moved" | | 9 | "A twig snapped." | | 10 | "Rory spun around, her heart" | | 11 | "Her voice echoed, swallowed by" | | 12 | "She saw nothing but the" | | 13 | "The pendant, a deep crimson" | | 14 | "Rory's breath hitched." | | 15 | "It had never done that" | | 16 | "She looked around, her eyes" | | 17 | "They pulsed in rhythm with" | | 18 | "The air hummed, a low" | | 19 | "Rory took a step back," |
| | ratio | 0.879 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the place felt alien," |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "In the heart of Richmond Park, where the city's breath held its peace and the night's cloak draped heavy, Aurora Carter found herself beneath an obsidian sky, p…" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their gnarled fingers reaching out as if to warn her away." | | 2 | "The Grove's boundary crossed, she felt a shiver run down her spine, a prickling sensation that raised the hairs on her arms." | | 3 | "Her flashlight beam danced over wildflowers that bloomed defiantly out of season, their colors muted under the moon's cold gaze." | | 4 | "But all Rory felt was unease, a gnawing sense of wrongness that clung to her like the damp fog." | | 5 | "She looked around, her eyes widening as she noticed the subtle glow emanating from the wildflowers." | | 6 | "They pulsed in rhythm with the Heartstone, their colors shifting, intensifying." | | 7 | "The Grove seemed to stretch out around her, the trees closing in, their branches reaching like skeletal fingers." | | 8 | "Rory looked down at the Heartstone, its glow fading, its warmth dissipating." | | 9 | "She stood up, her legs wobbling, and walked away, leaving the Grove and its secrets behind." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "her head she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |