Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZ07FXVMQVQ75TEM2A528

Run Details

Duration:
5.8s
Cost:
$0.000285

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the heart of Richmond Park, where the city's breath held its peace and the night's cloak draped heavy, Aurora Carter found herself beneath an obsidian sky, punctured by stars that seemed too close for comfort. The Fae Grove, Eva had called it, her voice echoing in Rory's mind like a distant whisper. She'd been here before, hadn't she? Yet, the place felt alien, the air thick with an unseen tension. The ancient oak standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their gnarled fingers reaching out as if to warn her away. Rory stepped between them, her boots sinking into the damp earth. The Grove's boundary crossed, she felt a shiver run down her spine, a prickling sensation that raised the hairs on her arms. She shook it off, attributing it to the chill night air. Her flashlight beam danced over wildflowers that bloomed defiantly out of season, their colors muted under the moon's cold gaze. The Grove was supposed to be a sanctuary, Eva had said. A place where time moved differently, where the veil between worlds was thin. But all Rory felt was unease, a gnawing sense of wrongness that clung to her like the damp fog. A twig snapped. Rory spun around, her heart pounding in her chest. "Hello?" Her voice echoed, swallowed by the silence. She saw nothing but the swaying shadows cast by her flashlight. Shaking her head, she muttered, "Just an animal." Yet, her hand reached for the Heartstone pendant hanging around her neck, a habit born of recent events. The pendant, a deep crimson gemstone set in a silver chain, pulsed faintly with warmth. Rory's breath hitched. It had never done that before. She looked around, her eyes widening as she noticed the subtle glow emanating from the wildflowers. They pulsed in rhythm with the Heartstone, their colors shifting, intensifying. The air hummed, a low vibration that resonated in her bones. Rory took a step back, her mind racing. This wasn't right. None of this was. She turned to leave, but the standing stones seemed farther away than she remembered. Panic clawed at her throat. She took off running, her flashlight beam bouncing wildly. Suddenly, she stopped. A figure stood at the edge of her light, tall and gaunt, its face obscured by shadows. Rory's breath caught, her heart hammering in her ears. "Who are you?" she demanded, her voice barely above a whisper. The figure didn't move, didn't speak. Instead, it tilted its head, a slow, unnatural motion. Rory's stomach churned. She took a step back, her hand closing around the Heartstone. It pulsed faster, hotter. The figure took a step forward, its feet not quite touching the ground. Rory turned and ran, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The Grove seemed to stretch out around her, the trees closing in, their branches reaching like skeletal fingers. She could hear it now, a soft, wet sound, like something moving through mud. Something following her. She dared a glance back. The figure was closer, its face still hidden. But she could see its hands now, long fingers tipped with sharp nails. They clicked together, a soft, rhythmic sound that sent ice through her veins. She stumbled, her foot catching on a root. She fell, her hands sinking into the damp earth. The figure loomed over her, its breath a cold wind on her face. Rory scrambled back, her hand closing around a rock. She threw it, her aim true. It hit the figure square in the face. There was a soft thud, a wet sound. The figure staggered back, its hands reaching up to its face. Rory didn't wait. She turned and ran, her heart pounding in her ears. The standing stones loomed ahead, their ancient faces mocking her. She reached them, her hands closing around the rough bark. She stepped between them, the boundary crossing with a jolt. She fell to her knees, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The Grove was silent behind her, the wrongness retreating like a tide. Rory looked down at the Heartstone, its glow fading, its warmth dissipating. She took a deep, shuddering breath, her body shaking with reaction. Whatever was in the Fae Grove, it wasn't something she wanted to meet again. She stood up, her legs wobbling, and walked away, leaving the Grove and its secrets behind.
total_cost0.000285

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount721
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount721
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count3
4
word"sentinels"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count2
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count3
13
word"warmth"
count2
14
word"resonated"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"stomach"
count1
17
word"churned"
count1
18
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"whisper"
2"tension"
3"loomed"
4"sentinels"
5"down her spine"
6"chill"
7"sanctuary"
8"sense of"
9"pounding"
10"echoed"
11"silence"
12"pulsed"
13"warmth"
14"resonated"
15"racing"
16"stomach"
17"churned"
18"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach churned"
99.75% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences66
matches
0"felt a shiver"
1"y with warmth"
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords721
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount714
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora1
Carter1
Fae2
Grove7
Eva2
Rory12
Heartstone4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Heartstone"
globalScore0.66
windowScore0.833
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed farther away than she remembered"
1"not quite touching the ground"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount721
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
4.60% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean55.46
std9.21
cv0.166
sampleLengths
071
164
263
357
462
543
640
746
845
956
1055
1154
1265
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences66
ratio0
matches(empty)
99.46% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount714
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.04061624649859944
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008403361344537815
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean10.92
std5.82
cv0.533
sampleLengths
036
117
26
312
420
511
622
711
820
911
1013
1119
123
139
148
1511
1626
1715
183
196
2016
2111
2211
238
243
254
2614
275
289
293
3017
319
3211
336
349
353
3611
374
3813
3910
4018
4114
423
435
448
4513
4613
478
489
4913
48.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3181818181818182
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners21
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"Suddenly, she stopped."
1"Instead, it tilted its head,"
ratio0.03
62.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences66
matches
0"She'd been here before, hadn't"
1"She shook it off, attributing"
2"Her flashlight beam danced over"
3"Her voice echoed, swallowed by"
4"She saw nothing but the"
5"It had never done that"
6"She looked around, her eyes"
7"They pulsed in rhythm with"
8"She turned to leave, but"
9"She took off running, her"
10"she demanded, her voice barely"
11"She took a step back,"
12"It pulsed faster, hotter."
13"She could hear it now,"
14"She dared a glance back."
15"They clicked together, a soft,"
16"She stumbled, her foot catching"
17"She fell, her hands sinking"
18"She threw it, her aim"
19"It hit the figure square"
ratio0.394
20.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences66
matches
0"The Fae Grove, Eva had"
1"She'd been here before, hadn't"
2"The ancient oak standing stones"
3"Rory stepped between them, her"
4"The Grove's boundary crossed, she"
5"She shook it off, attributing"
6"Her flashlight beam danced over"
7"The Grove was supposed to"
8"A place where time moved"
9"A twig snapped."
10"Rory spun around, her heart"
11"Her voice echoed, swallowed by"
12"She saw nothing but the"
13"The pendant, a deep crimson"
14"Rory's breath hitched."
15"It had never done that"
16"She looked around, her eyes"
17"They pulsed in rhythm with"
18"The air hummed, a low"
19"Rory took a step back,"
ratio0.879
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Yet, the place felt alien,"
ratio0.015
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"In the heart of Richmond Park, where the city's breath held its peace and the night's cloak draped heavy, Aurora Carter found herself beneath an obsidian sky, p…"
1"The ancient oak standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their gnarled fingers reaching out as if to warn her away."
2"The Grove's boundary crossed, she felt a shiver run down her spine, a prickling sensation that raised the hairs on her arms."
3"Her flashlight beam danced over wildflowers that bloomed defiantly out of season, their colors muted under the moon's cold gaze."
4"But all Rory felt was unease, a gnawing sense of wrongness that clung to her like the damp fog."
5"She looked around, her eyes widening as she noticed the subtle glow emanating from the wildflowers."
6"They pulsed in rhythm with the Heartstone, their colors shifting, intensifying."
7"The Grove seemed to stretch out around her, the trees closing in, their branches reaching like skeletal fingers."
8"Rory looked down at the Heartstone, its glow fading, its warmth dissipating."
9"She stood up, her legs wobbling, and walked away, leaving the Grove and its secrets behind."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she demanded, her voice barely above a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"her head she muttered (mutter)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
74.0594%