Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZ1N1MVE63AR83NH45KXX

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9.2s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the heart of Richmond Park, where the city's breath was a distant whisper, Aurora Carter found herself under an obsidian sky, the moon a sliver of silver, unwilling to shed much light. She had come to the Fae Grove, drawn by the promise of an otherworldly experience, a respite from her mundane life. Yet, as she stepped into the clearing, marked by ancient oak standing stones, a shiver ran down her spine, a chill that had nothing to do with the cool night air. The Grove was not as she had imagined. The wildflowers, usually vibrant, seemed to huddle close to the ground, their petals closed as if in sleep or fear. The silence was oppressive, unnatural. No hoot of an owl, no rustle of nocturnal creatures. Just the distant hum of the city, a reminder of the world beyond this pocket of strangeness. Aurora took a deep breath, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a habit when she was nervous. She had faced worse than an eerie silence, she told herself. She was here for a reason, after all. She had felt the Heartstone Pendant pulse with warmth when she entered the park, a sign that a Hel portal was near. She was close. She walked further into the Grove, her footsteps muffled by the thick grass. The standing stones loomed, their gnarled roots reaching out like skeletal fingers. She could swear she saw movement at the edge of her vision, but whenever she turned, there was nothing. Just the dance of shadows cast by the moon. A soft sound reached her ears, like whispers carried on the wind. She paused, listening. It came again, a faint rustling, a hushed murmur. She couldn't make out the words, but the tone was clear. It was pleading, desperate. She followed the sound, her heart pounding in her chest. The rustling grew louder, the whispers more insistent. She found herself in a grove within the Grove, a circle of trees with trunks twisted into grotesque shapes. The whispers seemed to come from within the trees themselves, their voices echoing in the hollows of the ancient oaks. She reached out, her fingers brushing the rough bark. The tree shuddered, the whispers growing louder, more urgent. Suddenly, the whispers stopped. The silence was deafening. Then, a voice, clear as day, "Help us, Aurora." She stumbled back, her heart in her throat. "Who's there?" she demanded, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach. "Help us," the voice repeated, this time a chorus of voices, male and female, young and old. "Please." Aurora took a deep breath, her mind racing. She was alone in the Grove, she knew that. Yet, she couldn't deny the plea in those voices. She reached into her pocket, her fingers closing around the Heartstone Pendant. It pulsed warmly, a beacon in the darkness. "I... I don't know how," she stammered, her voice barely above a whisper. "Find the portal," the voices said, their tone urgent. "Free us." Aurora nodded, her resolve hardening. She was here for a reason, after all. She would find the portal, she would help them. She turned, her eyes scanning the Grove. And that's when she saw it. A shimmer in the air, barely visible, but there. A Hel portal. She walked towards it, her heart pounding in her chest. The portal was small, barely the size of a doorway. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the shimmer. It was warm, pulsating with energy. She took a deep breath and stepped through. The world spun, colors blurred, and then, everything was still. Aurora found herself in a room, dimly lit, filled with ancient artifacts. She recognized the deep crimson gemstone of the Heartstone Pendant, its faint inner glow casting eerie shadows on the walls. She was in the right place. She heard a noise, a soft scraping sound. She turned, her eyes widening in horror. The room was filled with figures, their bodies translucent, their eyes glowing with the same deep crimson light as the Heartstone. They were trapped, their spirits bound to this place, their pleas echoing in her mind. "Free us, Aurora," they whispered, their voices a chorus of despair. Aurora took a deep breath, her mind racing. She had come here for a reason, to find the portal, to help them. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the cold stone of the altar. She could feel the power pulsating beneath her touch, the energy of the trapped spirits, their despair, their fear. She closed her eyes, her mind reaching out, connecting with the spirits. She felt their pain, their longing, their desperation. She felt the portal, the barrier that held them captive. She reached out, her mind grasping the edges of the portal, pulling, pushing, her strength waning with each attempt. Suddenly, she felt a surge of power, a warmth that filled her, gave her strength. She pulled, her muscles straining, her breath coming in short gasps. And then, with a final cry, she tore the portal open. The spirits surged forward, their bodies dissolving into streams of light, flowing through the portal, their voices a chorus of relief, of gratitude. Aurora stumbled back, her body drained, her mind numb. She had done it. She had freed them. But as the last spirit flowed through the portal, the room began to shake. The walls crumbled, the ceiling collapsed. Aurora looked around, panic rising in her chest. She had to get out, she had to leave. She ran, her heart pounding in her chest, her lungs burning. She stumbled through the portal, the world spinning around her, and then, everything was still. Aurora found herself back in the Fae Grove, the moon still a sliver in the sky. She looked around, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The Grove was silent, the trees still, the wildflowers blooming in the soft moonlight. The spirits were gone, their pleas silenced, their pain eased. She took a deep breath, her body aching, her mind exhausted. She had done it. She had helped them. She had faced her fear, she had conquered it. She was stronger than she thought, braver than she knew. She turned, her eyes scanning the Grove. And that's when she saw it. A figure, standing at the edge of the Grove, its body translucent, its eyes glowing with the same deep crimson light as the Heartstone. It was a spirit, but unlike the others. It was different. Aurora took a step back, her heart pounding in her chest. This spirit was not like the others. It was not pleading, not desperate. It was watching, waiting. It was... malevolent. "Who are you?" Aurora whispered, her voice barely audible. The spirit smiled, a cold, cruel smile. "I am the one who bound them," it said, its voice a low growl. "And now, I am free." Aurora stumbled back, her mind racing. She had freed the spirits, yes, but in doing so, she had released something else. Something dark, something dangerous. She had to leave, she had to go. She turned, her eyes scanning the Grove, looking for a way out. But it was too late. The spirit was already upon her, its cold fingers wrapping around her wrist, its eyes burning into hers. "You should not have come here, Aurora," it whispered, its voice a chilling promise. "Now, you will never leave." Aurora struggled, her heart pounding in her chest, her mind screaming. She had faced her fear, she had conquered it. But this... this was different. This was something else. This was something she could not fight, could not defeat. This was something that would consume her, body and soul. And as the spirit's grip tightened, Aurora knew. She was not alone. She never had been. And she never would be again.
total_cost0.0003994499999999999

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.615
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1308
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"warmly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"warmly"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1308
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"whisper"
count2
1
word"otherworldly"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count2
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"loomed"
count1
12
word"dance"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count5
14
word"echoing"
count2
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"racing"
count3
17
word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"beacon"
count1
19
word"resolve"
count1
20
word"scanning"
count3
21
word"could feel"
count1
22
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"otherworldly"
2"down her spine"
3"chill"
4"silence"
5"oppressive"
6"reminder"
7"tracing"
8"pulse"
9"warmth"
10"footsteps"
11"loomed"
12"dance"
13"pounding"
14"echoing"
15"stomach"
16"racing"
17"pulsed"
18"beacon"
19"resolve"
20"scanning"
21"could feel"
22"chilling"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"silence was deafening"
count1
highlights
0"a shiver ran down her spine"
1"The silence was deafening"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences125
matches
0"was nervous"
1"e with warmth"
2"g in horror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences125
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1307
ratio0
matches(empty)
93.75% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"She had faced worse than an eerie silence, she told herself."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1259
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora14
Carter1
Fae2
Grove11
Heartstone5
Pendant3
Hel2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.944
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1307
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
84.56% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean40.84
std18.21
cv0.446
sampleLengths
085
160
266
353
449
565
617
722
818
946
1013
1111
1247
1343
1448
1551
1611
1754
1849
1937
2040
2163
2249
2338
2448
2531
269
2726
2845
2942
3049
3122
96.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences125
matches
0"was filled"
1"were trapped"
2"were gone"
82.53% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs227
matches
0"was pleading"
1"was deafening"
2"was not pleading"
3"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences129
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1260
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.024603174603174603
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.007936507936507936
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean10.13
std5.8
cv0.573
sampleLengths
033
121
231
38
420
55
610
717
822
911
108
1122
123
1313
1412
1519
169
1712
183
199
2011
214
2210
238
2419
2520
269
279
284
294
309
318
3214
3317
341
358
369
379
3812
398
4013
419
422
435
448
459
467
476
489
493
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats35
diversityRatio0.1937984496124031
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences122
matches
0"Just the distant hum of"
1"Just the dance of shadows"
2"Suddenly, the whispers stopped."
3"Then, a voice, clear as"
4"Suddenly, she felt a surge"
ratio0.041
6.89% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount65
totalSentences122
matches
0"She had come to the"
1"She had faced worse than"
2"She was here for a"
3"She had felt the Heartstone"
4"She was close."
5"She walked further into the"
6"She could swear she saw"
7"She paused, listening."
8"It came again, a faint"
9"She couldn't make out the"
10"It was pleading, desperate."
11"She followed the sound, her"
12"She found herself in a"
13"She reached out, her fingers"
14"She stumbled back, her heart"
15"she demanded, her voice steady"
16"She was alone in the"
17"She reached into her pocket,"
18"It pulsed warmly, a beacon"
19"she stammered, her voice barely"
ratio0.533
25.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences122
matches
0"She had come to the"
1"The Grove was not as"
2"The wildflowers, usually vibrant, seemed"
3"The silence was oppressive, unnatural."
4"Aurora took a deep breath,"
5"She had faced worse than"
6"She was here for a"
7"She had felt the Heartstone"
8"She was close."
9"She walked further into the"
10"The standing stones loomed, their"
11"She could swear she saw"
12"A soft sound reached her"
13"She paused, listening."
14"It came again, a faint"
15"She couldn't make out the"
16"It was pleading, desperate."
17"She followed the sound, her"
18"The rustling grew louder, the"
19"She found herself in a"
ratio0.869
81.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences122
matches
0"Yet, as she stepped into"
1"Yet, she couldn't deny the"
ratio0.016
30.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She closed her eyes, her mind reaching out, connecting with the spirits."
1"She reached out, her mind grasping the edges of the portal, pulling, pushing, her strength waning with each attempt."
2"Suddenly, she felt a surge of power, a warmth that filled her, gave her strength."
3"She pulled, her muscles straining, her breath coming in short gasps."
4"The spirits surged forward, their bodies dissolving into streams of light, flowing through the portal, their voices a chorus of relief, of gratitude."
5"She ran, her heart pounding in her chest, her lungs burning."
6"A figure, standing at the edge of the Grove, its body translucent, its eyes glowing with the same deep crimson light as the Heartstone."
7"She turned, her eyes scanning the Grove, looking for a way out."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she demanded, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her stomach"
1"she stammered, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"the voices said, their tone urgent"
3"they whispered, their voices a chorus of despair"
4"Aurora whispered, her voice barely audible"
5"it said, its voice a low growl"
6"it whispered, its voice a chilling promise"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"the voice repeated (repeat)"
2"she stammered (stammer)"
3"they whispered (whisper)"
4"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
5"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.615
leniency1
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.75
75.2207%