| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "this time her tone quivered slightly [slightly]" | | 1 | "she whispered firmly [firmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 76.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1275 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "sharply" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1275 | | totalAiIsms | 52 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "raced" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "anticipation" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "vibrated" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "oppressive" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "solace" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "silence" | | 19 | "reminder" | | 20 | "flickered" | | 21 | "quivered" | | 22 | "weight" | | 23 | "sinister" | | 24 | "racing" | | 25 | "down her spine" | | 26 | "facade" | | 27 | "firmly" | | 28 | "stomach" | | 29 | "echoing" | | 30 | "velvet" | | 31 | "resonance" | | 32 | "shattered" | | 33 | "reverberated" | | 34 | "tension" | | 35 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "d with unease" | | 1 | "y with dread" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1261 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1198 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 4 | | Evan | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Breathe | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Fear | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Silence" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Fear" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Breathe" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if mocking her, yet it did not answer" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.793 | | wordCount | 1261 | | matches | | 0 | "not just for her, but for all those who had felt the grip of darkness" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "understanding that she" |
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| 61.51% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 42.03 | | std | 15.35 | | cv | 0.365 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 70 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 53 | | 29 | 46 |
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| 93.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was, darted" | | 2 | "being hissed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 215 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.136 | | matches | | 0 | "The stories of the Grove had sparked her interest; a portal to another realm, a refuge from everything that had haunted her back in London." | | 1 | "There it was again—a raspy breath, close yet elusive." | | 2 | "Just then, a haunting laugh—light, tinkling, yet laced with something sinister—drifted from the shadows." | | 3 | "Perhaps she was not alone after all; she might find an ally in this realm, someone who could share its secrets." | | 4 | "A memory twisted at the corners of her mind—Evan's threats, his fingers tight around her wrist." | | 5 | "Flickering glimpses of movement teased her senses—a flash of white, too quick to discern what it was, darted from the twilit fringes and vanished among the trees." | | 6 | "Urgency prickled her conscience—whatever lay here, she needed to unearth it—not just for her, but for all those who had felt the grip of darkness." | | 7 | "But as she reached the altar, an overwhelming sensation sprawled within her—a clarity layered beneath the chaos, an understanding that she should turn back." | | 8 | "There, lurking just past the stones—the flash of yellow eyes, cold and unblinking." | | 9 | "Fear knotted her stomach, yet something else bubbled beneath—curiosity." | | 10 | "The Grove lit up with a flickering glow, shadows deepening ominously as the reality of her predicament spiralled—she had crossed a line, drawn in by the lure of the unknown." | | 11 | "The Grove seemed to respond, a tempest of energies swirling and colliding—a furious prelude to everything that was about to change." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1212 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.039603960396039604 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018151815181518153 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 14.33 | | std | 7.05 | | cv | 0.492 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 84.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5227272727272727 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a trick of the" | | 1 | "Only the hum rose, a" | | 2 | "Just then, a haunting laugh—light," | | 3 | "Perhaps she was not alone" | | 4 | "Then, a sharp yowl pierced" |
| | ratio | 0.058 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She had longed for the" | | 1 | "Their colours, vibrant in the" | | 2 | "she muttered, brushing a stubborn" | | 3 | "It was supposed to be" | | 4 | "She glanced towards the edge" | | 5 | "It pulsed gently, resonating with" | | 6 | "she called, her voice surprisingly" | | 7 | "She could almost hear her" | | 8 | "she demanded, her voice cracking" | | 9 | "It sent a cascade of" | | 10 | "She stood tall, forcing herself" | | 11 | "She squeezed the pendant, grounding" | | 12 | "she whispered firmly" | | 13 | "She pivoted sharply." | | 14 | "It felt intentional, like a" | | 15 | "You’re stronger than this." | | 16 | "She forced herself to take" | | 17 | "It felt wrong, an unnatural" | | 18 | "It shattered the reverie, slicing" | | 19 | "Her breath caught in her" |
| | ratio | 0.291 | |
| 99.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s heart raced as the" | | 1 | "She had longed for the" | | 2 | "The path to the Grove" | | 3 | "Their colours, vibrant in the" | | 4 | "she muttered, brushing a stubborn" | | 5 | "The stories of the Grove" | | 6 | "It was supposed to be" | | 7 | "She glanced towards the edge" | | 8 | "Something moved, a flicker at" | | 9 | "It pulsed gently, resonating with" | | 10 | "she called, her voice surprisingly" | | 11 | "Rory stepped further into the" | | 12 | "She could almost hear her" | | 13 | "The soft glow of the" | | 14 | "The trees stood silent, not" | | 15 | "Unease coiled tighter in her" | | 16 | "she demanded, her voice cracking" | | 17 | "The wind rustled the branches" | | 18 | "It sent a cascade of" | | 19 | "Fear gripped her, but curiosity" |
| | ratio | 0.721 | |
| 58.14% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, when she steadied her" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 30.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Their colours, vibrant in the moonlight, seemed to pulse with an energy that set her nerves on edge." | | 1 | "With each cautious step forward, the rhythmic chirp of crickets faded into a muted backdrop, replaced by a low, unsettling hum that vibrated against her chest." | | 2 | "The stories of the Grove had sparked her interest; a portal to another realm, a refuge from everything that had haunted her back in London." | | 3 | "Rory stepped further into the clearing, and the grass crunched underfoot, a sound that echoed ominously amid the suffocating silence." | | 4 | "The soft glow of the pendant flickered, pulsing in time with a beat that was not her own." | | 5 | "The grove opened before her, a clearing littered with aged stones, some adorned with curious etchings that shone faintly, illuminated solely by the pendant’s gl…" | | 6 | "A chill gripped her as she approached, and the hum crescendoed into an unbearable resonance that surrounded her like a cage." | | 7 | "The Grove seemed to respond, a tempest of energies swirling and colliding—a furious prelude to everything that was about to change." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, her voice surprisingly steady despite the tremor in her hands" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice cracking under the weight of impending dread" | | 2 | "she challenged, defiance lacing her words" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "she whispered firmly (whisper)" | | 3 | "it warned (warn)" | | 4 | "she challenged (challenge)" | | 5 | "she declared (declare)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0.857 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |