Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZ6JNNSES3T37MGWYM1PP

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Duration:
48.8s
Cost:
$0.001338

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s heart raced as the ancient oak standing stones loomed in front of her, their gnarled forms twisted like sentinels guarding a secret too dark to unearth. She had longed for the sanctuary of the Fae Grove, a place whispered about in hushed tones at the pub just below her flat. But now, the air thickened with unease, turning her anticipation into an icy dread. The path to the Grove curled ahead, lined with wildflowers that danced foolishly despite the chill of night. Their colours, vibrant in the moonlight, seemed to pulse with an energy that set her nerves on edge. With each cautious step forward, the rhythmic chirp of crickets faded into a muted backdrop, replaced by a low, unsettling hum that vibrated against her chest. “Get a grip, Rory,” she muttered, brushing a stubborn strand of black hair behind her ear. The stories of the Grove had sparked her interest; a portal to another realm, a refuge from everything that had haunted her back in London. It was supposed to be a personal retreat, a quiet escape to prepare for whatever came next. But standing at the threshold, the sense of being watched prickled her skin. She glanced towards the edge of the clearing, where the shadows pooled thickly beneath the trees. Something moved, a flicker at the periphery of her vision. Just a trick of the light, surely. Yet, when she steadied her gaze, she found only darkness, thick and oppressive. Drawing the Heartstone Pendant from beneath her blouse, she felt its familiar warmth against her palm. It pulsed gently, resonating with whatever life resided within this grove, yet its glow did little to dispel the encroaching chill. Why had she come here? Hadn’t she left the horrors behind, hoping for solace? “Hello?” she called, her voice surprisingly steady despite the tremor in her hands. “Is anyone there?” No response. Only the hum rose, a barely audible whisper curling around her, tightening like a constrictor. Rory stepped further into the clearing, and the grass crunched underfoot, a sound that echoed ominously amid the suffocating silence. She could almost hear her pulse in her ears, each thud a reminder of how very alone she was. The soft glow of the pendant flickered, pulsing in time with a beat that was not her own. There it was again—a raspy breath, close yet elusive. With a jolt, she spun around. The trees stood silent, not a single leaf quivered at her presence. Unease coiled tighter in her belly. “Show yourself!” she demanded, her voice cracking under the weight of impending dread. The wind rustled the branches above, as if mocking her, yet it did not answer. Just then, a haunting laugh—light, tinkling, yet laced with something sinister—drifted from the shadows. It sent a cascade of chills racing down her spine. Fear gripped her, but curiosity had always been an equal force. Perhaps she was not alone after all; she might find an ally in this realm, someone who could share its secrets. “Is anyone there?” A second time, but this time, her tone quivered slightly, betraying the facade of bravado. The laughter faded, and the clearing fell into an abyss of silence once more, leaving Aurora stranded in uncertainty. She stood tall, forcing herself to breathe in the musty air laden with the sweet scent of decaying vegetation. Had she come to face her fears, really? A memory twisted at the corners of her mind—Evan's threats, his fingers tight around her wrist. The crescent-shaped scar tingled in response. She squeezed the pendant, grounding herself in its warmth. “I am done hiding,” she whispered firmly. A rustle in the underbrush startled her. She pivoted sharply. Deep shadows danced, taunting her as something slithered just beyond her sight. Flickering glimpses of movement teased her senses—a flash of white, too quick to discern what it was, darted from the twilit fringes and vanished among the trees. It felt intentional, like a game played at her expense. Some seconds ticked by, aching and elongated. Anxiety twisted her stomach like a dagger. What if it was hunting her? “Stop playing games!” The words erupted before she could stifle them. “Come out!” Silence met her challenge again, leaving only that disturbing hum which had grown louder, echoing from deeper within the Grove. Breathe, Rory. You’re stronger than this. She forced herself to take a step forward, driven by a mix of terror and fierce determination. The grove opened before her, a clearing littered with aged stones, some adorned with curious etchings that shone faintly, illuminated solely by the pendant’s glow. In the centre lay an intricately carved altar draped with velvet moss. A chill gripped her as she approached, and the hum crescendoed into an unbearable resonance that surrounded her like a cage. It felt wrong, an unnatural energy swelling around her. The hairs on the back of her neck rose, a primal instinct demanding she leave. But why had she come? The pendant pulsed softly in her hand, a connection to something deeper, something calling to her. Urgency prickled her conscience—whatever lay here, she needed to unearth it—not just for her, but for all those who had felt the grip of darkness. But as she reached the altar, an overwhelming sensation sprawled within her—a clarity layered beneath the chaos, an understanding that she should turn back. A momentary hesitation gripped her, and she glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to meet the gaze of whatever hunted her. Then, a sharp yowl pierced the stillness. It shattered the reverie, slicing through the air like a knife. The unmistakable sound of something alive, something malevolent. Disoriented, she whirled around again, searching for the source. There, lurking just past the stones—the flash of yellow eyes, cold and unblinking. Her breath caught in her throat as the creature stepped forward, shrouded in shadow. Its features remained indistinct, but there was something human about the way it moved, something promising just beyond the veil of familiarity. “Leave this place,” it warned, its voice like a rasping breeze. Fear knotted her stomach, yet something else bubbled beneath—curiosity. “Who are you?” she challenged, defiance lacing her words. The eyes narrowed, unfathomable and ancient. “You shouldn’t have come,” the being hissed. “This Grove bears witness to things best left buried. Time flows differently here, and those who wander can lose themselves.” The suggestion was implicit, carrying a weight that made her spine tingle. “I’m not afraid!” she declared, thrusting the pendant forward. “I have something that belongs here!” The Heartstone pulsed, drowning out the sound of the hum for a fraught moment, igniting an interaction she could scarcely understand. The creature recoiled, a deep tremor quaking through the ground beneath her feet. It let out a hiss that reverberated through the clearing, ripping through the tension like thunder. “Foolish girl!” With a graceful movement, it lunged towards her, as the earth trembled, and a low growl erupted from the shadows, ensnaring her breath in terrified anticipation. Aurora stumbled back, adrenaline igniting her limbs. The Grove lit up with a flickering glow, shadows deepening ominously as the reality of her predicament spiralled—she had crossed a line, drawn in by the lure of the unknown. Darkness enveloped her as the creature advanced, a hollow promise of wrath echoing in the night. The air thickened, heavy with dread, and as Aurora stood rooted in place, the Heartstone shattered the silence, pulsing a fevered warmth against her palm. The Grove seemed to respond, a tempest of energies swirling and colliding—a furious prelude to everything that was about to change.
total_cost0.00133819

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"this time her tone quivered slightly [slightly]"
1"she whispered firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
76.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1275
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"really"
4"sharply"
5"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1275
totalAiIsms52
found
0
word"raced"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"sentinels"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"anticipation"
count2
5
word"chill"
count3
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"sense of"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"oppressive"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count3
14
word"pulsed"
count3
15
word"solace"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"silence"
count4
19
word"reminder"
count1
20
word"flickered"
count1
21
word"quivered"
count2
22
word"weight"
count2
23
word"sinister"
count1
24
word"racing"
count1
25
word"down her spine"
count1
26
word"facade"
count1
27
word"firmly"
count1
28
word"stomach"
count2
29
word"echoing"
count2
30
word"velvet"
count1
31
word"resonance"
count1
32
word"shattered"
count2
33
word"reverberated"
count1
34
word"tension"
count1
35
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"raced"
1"loomed"
2"sentinels"
3"sanctuary"
4"anticipation"
5"chill"
6"pulse"
7"rhythmic"
8"vibrated"
9"sense of"
10"flicker"
11"oppressive"
12"familiar"
13"warmth"
14"pulsed"
15"solace"
16"whisper"
17"echoed"
18"silence"
19"reminder"
20"flickered"
21"quivered"
22"weight"
23"sinister"
24"racing"
25"down her spine"
26"facade"
27"firmly"
28"stomach"
29"echoing"
30"velvet"
31"resonance"
32"shattered"
33"reverberated"
34"tension"
35"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences88
matches
0"d with unease"
1"y with dread"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1261
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1198
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove6
London1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Aurora4
Evan1
Silence1
Breathe1
Rory2
Fear2
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Evan"
4"Silence"
5"Rory"
6"Fear"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
3"Breathe"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if mocking her, yet it did not answer"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.793
wordCount1261
matches
0"not just for her, but for all those who had felt the grip of darkness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"understanding that she"
61.51% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean42.03
std15.35
cv0.365
sampleLengths
065
162
258
313
446
551
633
757
833
928
1056
1137
1265
1359
1420
1533
1648
1733
1870
1944
2035
2149
2220
2315
2439
2536
2629
2728
2853
2946
93.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was, darted"
2"being hissed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs215
matches
0"was hunting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences88
ratio0.136
matches
0"The stories of the Grove had sparked her interest; a portal to another realm, a refuge from everything that had haunted her back in London."
1"There it was again—a raspy breath, close yet elusive."
2"Just then, a haunting laugh—light, tinkling, yet laced with something sinister—drifted from the shadows."
3"Perhaps she was not alone after all; she might find an ally in this realm, someone who could share its secrets."
4"A memory twisted at the corners of her mind—Evan's threats, his fingers tight around her wrist."
5"Flickering glimpses of movement teased her senses—a flash of white, too quick to discern what it was, darted from the twilit fringes and vanished among the trees."
6"Urgency prickled her conscience—whatever lay here, she needed to unearth it—not just for her, but for all those who had felt the grip of darkness."
7"But as she reached the altar, an overwhelming sensation sprawled within her—a clarity layered beneath the chaos, an understanding that she should turn back."
8"There, lurking just past the stones—the flash of yellow eyes, cold and unblinking."
9"Fear knotted her stomach, yet something else bubbled beneath—curiosity."
10"The Grove lit up with a flickering glow, shadows deepening ominously as the reality of her predicament spiralled—she had crossed a line, drawn in by the lure of the unknown."
11"The Grove seemed to respond, a tempest of energies swirling and colliding—a furious prelude to everything that was about to change."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1212
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.039603960396039604
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.018151815181518153
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean14.33
std7.05
cv0.492
sampleLengths
027
124
214
318
418
526
616
725
817
913
1016
1110
127
1313
1416
1521
165
179
1813
195
2015
2120
2219
2318
249
256
2612
276
2813
2915
3014
3110
3211
3321
3418
3519
3619
378
3816
396
409
417
427
433
4412
4527
4610
477
487
496
84.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5227272727272727
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences86
matches
0"Just a trick of the"
1"Only the hum rose, a"
2"Just then, a haunting laugh—light,"
3"Perhaps she was not alone"
4"Then, a sharp yowl pierced"
ratio0.058
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences86
matches
0"She had longed for the"
1"Their colours, vibrant in the"
2"she muttered, brushing a stubborn"
3"It was supposed to be"
4"She glanced towards the edge"
5"It pulsed gently, resonating with"
6"she called, her voice surprisingly"
7"She could almost hear her"
8"she demanded, her voice cracking"
9"It sent a cascade of"
10"She stood tall, forcing herself"
11"She squeezed the pendant, grounding"
12"she whispered firmly"
13"She pivoted sharply."
14"It felt intentional, like a"
15"You’re stronger than this."
16"She forced herself to take"
17"It felt wrong, an unnatural"
18"It shattered the reverie, slicing"
19"Her breath caught in her"
ratio0.291
99.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences86
matches
0"Aurora’s heart raced as the"
1"She had longed for the"
2"The path to the Grove"
3"Their colours, vibrant in the"
4"she muttered, brushing a stubborn"
5"The stories of the Grove"
6"It was supposed to be"
7"She glanced towards the edge"
8"Something moved, a flicker at"
9"It pulsed gently, resonating with"
10"she called, her voice surprisingly"
11"Rory stepped further into the"
12"She could almost hear her"
13"The soft glow of the"
14"The trees stood silent, not"
15"Unease coiled tighter in her"
16"she demanded, her voice cracking"
17"The wind rustled the branches"
18"It sent a cascade of"
19"Fear gripped her, but curiosity"
ratio0.721
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Yet, when she steadied her"
ratio0.012
30.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Their colours, vibrant in the moonlight, seemed to pulse with an energy that set her nerves on edge."
1"With each cautious step forward, the rhythmic chirp of crickets faded into a muted backdrop, replaced by a low, unsettling hum that vibrated against her chest."
2"The stories of the Grove had sparked her interest; a portal to another realm, a refuge from everything that had haunted her back in London."
3"Rory stepped further into the clearing, and the grass crunched underfoot, a sound that echoed ominously amid the suffocating silence."
4"The soft glow of the pendant flickered, pulsing in time with a beat that was not her own."
5"The grove opened before her, a clearing littered with aged stones, some adorned with curious etchings that shone faintly, illuminated solely by the pendant’s gl…"
6"A chill gripped her as she approached, and the hum crescendoed into an unbearable resonance that surrounded her like a cage."
7"The Grove seemed to respond, a tempest of energies swirling and colliding—a furious prelude to everything that was about to change."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she called, her voice surprisingly steady despite the tremor in her hands"
1"she demanded, her voice cracking under the weight of impending dread"
2"she challenged, defiance lacing her words"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
2"she whispered firmly (whisper)"
3"it warned (warn)"
4"she challenged (challenge)"
5"she declared (declare)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.857
effectiveRatio0.8
77.9318%