| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 786 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 786 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "anticipation" | | 2 | "kaleidoscope" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "tangible" | | 6 | "otherworldly" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "complex" | | 9 | "intricate" | | 10 | "raced" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
| | 1 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "A sense of unease" |
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| 75.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "g with anticipation" | | 1 | "A sense of unease" | | 2 | "d in awe" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 784 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.73% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 581 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 2.07 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 3 | | Nyx | 4 | | Rory | 12 | | Shade | 1 | | Stepping | 1 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.467 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place" | | 1 | "It was as if the tree had been shaped by deliberate design rather than natural growth" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 784 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.85% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 29.04 | | std | 12.78 | | cv | 0.44 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 19 |
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| 98.25% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.51% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.016 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a rush of images flooded her mind—scenes of distant lands, otherworldly creatures, and mystical rituals." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 583 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.03430531732418525 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012006861063464836 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 12.44 | | std | 5.7 | | cv | 0.458 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 61.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.38095238095238093 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "Cautiously, Rory approached the water's" | | 1 | "Then, the forest opened into" | | 2 | "Instead, a rush of images" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "She took a deep breath," | | 1 | "she whispered, her bright blue" | | 2 | "Their whisper carried on the" | | 3 | "she murmured, reaching out to" | | 4 | "It padded forward, unafraid, and" | | 5 | "They traversed the Grove, the" | | 6 | "She glanced at Nyx, wondering" | | 7 | "They picked their way through" | | 8 | "It was as if the" | | 9 | "She closed her eyes, expecting" | | 10 | "She gasped as the visions" |
| | ratio | 0.229 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the ancient" | | 1 | "The air seemed to shimmer" | | 2 | "She took a deep breath," | | 3 | "she whispered, her bright blue" | | 4 | "The Grove was a kaleidoscope" | | 5 | "Wildflowers of every colour grew" | | 6 | "Their whisper carried on the" | | 7 | "The group followed, their footsteps" | | 8 | "Rhys, the warlock, ran his" | | 9 | "she murmured, reaching out to" | | 10 | "Nyx explained, their violet eyes" | | 11 | "Rory turned, soaking in the" | | 12 | "The group whipped around, poised" | | 13 | "It padded forward, unafraid, and" | | 14 | "Rory began, her voice trailing" | | 15 | "Nyx's voice rumbled" | | 16 | "The doe nodded almost imperceptibly," | | 17 | "Isolde said, her voice carrying" | | 18 | "The group turned to see" | | 19 | "Rory's eyes widened." |
| | ratio | 0.708 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, her heart pounding with anticipation." | | 1 | "Beside her, Nyx, the living shadow, glided forward, their form shifting and melding with the forest's shadows." | | 2 | "As her fingers brushed the water, a ripple of energy coursed through her, a tingling sensation that made her smile." | | 3 | "As if on cue, a rustling in the underbrush broke the tranquil atmosphere." | | 4 | "At its centre stood a massive, gnarled tree, its bark textured like ancient scrolls, its branches twisting and spiralling into complex, intricate patterns." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx explained, their violet eyes reflecting the otherworldly glow of the Grove" | | 1 | "Rory began, her voice trailing off as the creature stepped back" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her voice carrying across the clearing" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx explained (explain)" | | 3 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 4 | "Isolde urged (urge)" | | 5 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.292 | | leniency | 0.583 | | rawRatio | 0.857 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |