Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZ70B2HTS2S4FQH9XYHQN

Run Details

Duration:
26.4s
Cost:
$0.015622
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, her heart pounding with anticipation. The air seemed to shimmer as if she'd passed through an invisible barrier. She took a deep breath, the cool breeze carrying a hint of wildflower fragrance. "It's like stepping into a painting," she whispered, her bright blue eyes taking in the lush surroundings. The Grove was a kaleidoscope of greens and golds, with moss-covered trees and ferns as tall as she was. Wildflowers of every colour grew in abundance, their sweet scent heady and almost intoxicating. Beside her, Nyx, the living shadow, glided forward, their form shifting and melding with the forest's shadows. "This place is not of our realm." Their whisper carried on the wind, sending a shiver down Rory's spine. The group followed, their footsteps silent on the soft forest floor. Rhys, the warlock, ran his fingers along the trunk of a massive oak, his expression one of wonder. "The magic here is tangible. It hums in the air like a forgotten melody." As they ventured deeper, the trees opened up to a clearing, where a circular pond glistened in the dappled sunlight. Floating lilies and water lilies boasted vibrant pinks and yellows, while dragonflies danced above the tranquil water. Cautiously, Rory approached the water's edge, her reflection rippled and distorted by the gentle ripples. "It's like looking into another world," she murmured, reaching out to touch the surface. As her fingers brushed the water, a ripple of energy coursed through her, a tingling sensation that made her smile. "It is a threshold, a place where realms intersect," Nyx explained, their violet eyes reflecting the otherworldly glow of the Grove. "A gateway to the Fae realm." Rory turned, soaking in the serenity of the place. "It feels like being in a dream." As if on cue, a rustling in the underbrush broke the tranquil atmosphere. The group whipped around, poised for action. From the shadows, a doe stepped out, its eyes luminous with an otherworldly light. It padded forward, unafraid, and nuzzled Rory's hand, its breath warm and scented with wild rose. "What is it? It feels..." Rory began, her voice trailing off as the creature stepped back. "It's a Fae creature," Nyx's voice rumbled. "A messenger perhaps. They can cross the Veil." The doe nodded almost imperceptibly, then trotted away, its graceful form disappearing into the trees. "We must follow," Isolde said, her voice carrying across the clearing. The group turned to see her standing by the standing stones, her silver hair shimmering in the sunlight. "The Grove will guide us." Rory's eyes widened. "You've been here before?" Isolde smiled enigmatically. "Once, long ago. The Grove holds many secrets, some known only to the Fae." With a gesture, she beckoned them to follow her. They traversed the Grove, the air growing heavy with ancient magic. Rory felt a connection to this place, as if some part of her recognized it. As they passed, trees whispered and leaves rustled in welcome. "The flora here is attuned to the Fae realm," Isolde explained. "It thrives on magic, feeding on the energy of the Veil." As they ventured deeper, the atmosphere changed. The air grew cooler, the sunlight filtering through the trees in eerie, diffracted beams. A sense of unease crept over Rory, a feeling she couldn't quite place. She glanced at Nyx, wondering if the Shade sensed the same thing. "This way," Isolde urged, leading them off the path. "The Grove has more to reveal." They picked their way through the brush, the trees growing wilder and more gnarled. Then, the forest opened into a smaller clearing. At its centre stood a massive, gnarled tree, its bark textured like ancient scrolls, its branches twisting and spiralling into complex, intricate patterns. It was as if the tree had been shaped by deliberate design rather than natural growth. Rory's eyes widened in awe. "It's incredible. I've never seen anything like it." "The wisdom tree," Isolde whispered. "This place is where the Seers come to seek knowledge and understanding. We must pay our respects." Stepping forward, Rory placed her hand on the rough bark. She closed her eyes, expecting to feel the energy she'd encountered at the pond. Instead, a rush of images flooded her mind—scenes of distant lands, otherworldly creatures, and mystical rituals. She gasped as the visions faded, her hand shaking against the rough trunk. "What just happened?" Isolde smiled softly. "The tree holds the accumulated knowledge of the Fae realm. Sometimes, it shares its insights. You have a connection to this place, Aurora, that's why it revealed itself to you." Rory's mind raced. "Is that why the pendant was warm earlier? This place... it's all tied together, isn't it?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount786
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount786
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"anticipation"
count1
2
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"tangible"
count1
6
word"otherworldly"
count3
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"complex"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"anticipation"
2"kaleidoscope"
3"whisper"
4"footsteps"
5"tangible"
6"otherworldly"
7"sense of"
8"complex"
9"intricate"
10"raced"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"A sense of unease"
75.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences50
matches
0"g with anticipation"
1"A sense of unease"
2"d in awe"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords784
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.73% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount581
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove3
Nyx4
Rory12
Shade1
Stepping1
Isolde6
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Shade"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Grove"
globalScore0.467
windowScore0.667
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"It was as if the tree had been shaped by deliberate design rather than natural growth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount784
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
82.85% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean29.04
std12.78
cv0.44
sampleLengths
040
150
236
343
437
549
627
716
850
916
1015
1115
1234
137
1426
1536
1622
1746
1815
1922
2039
2113
2222
2340
2416
2533
2619
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"been shaped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs106
matches(empty)
97.51% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences63
ratio0.016
matches
0"Instead, a rush of images flooded her mind—scenes of distant lands, otherworldly creatures, and mystical rituals."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount583
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03430531732418525
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.012006861063464836
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean12.44
std5.7
cv0.458
sampleLengths
013
113
214
317
419
514
617
719
811
918
1014
1120
1217
1315
1414
1520
1621
176
189
197
2013
217
2214
2316
2416
257
268
2715
2811
2918
305
313
324
333
3423
3511
3615
3710
3811
3911
407
4114
4213
4312
449
456
4614
478
4823
4916
61.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.38095238095238093
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences48
matches
0"Cautiously, Rory approached the water's"
1"Then, the forest opened into"
2"Instead, a rush of images"
ratio0.063
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences48
matches
0"She took a deep breath,"
1"she whispered, her bright blue"
2"Their whisper carried on the"
3"she murmured, reaching out to"
4"It padded forward, unafraid, and"
5"They traversed the Grove, the"
6"She glanced at Nyx, wondering"
7"They picked their way through"
8"It was as if the"
9"She closed her eyes, expecting"
10"She gasped as the visions"
ratio0.229
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount34
totalSentences48
matches
0"Rory stepped through the ancient"
1"The air seemed to shimmer"
2"She took a deep breath,"
3"she whispered, her bright blue"
4"The Grove was a kaleidoscope"
5"Wildflowers of every colour grew"
6"Their whisper carried on the"
7"The group followed, their footsteps"
8"Rhys, the warlock, ran his"
9"she murmured, reaching out to"
10"Nyx explained, their violet eyes"
11"Rory turned, soaking in the"
12"The group whipped around, poised"
13"It padded forward, unafraid, and"
14"Rory began, her voice trailing"
15"Nyx's voice rumbled"
16"The doe nodded almost imperceptibly,"
17"Isolde said, her voice carrying"
18"The group turned to see"
19"Rory's eyes widened."
ratio0.708
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"As if on cue, a"
ratio0.021
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, her heart pounding with anticipation."
1"Beside her, Nyx, the living shadow, glided forward, their form shifting and melding with the forest's shadows."
2"As her fingers brushed the water, a ripple of energy coursed through her, a tingling sensation that made her smile."
3"As if on cue, a rustling in the underbrush broke the tranquil atmosphere."
4"At its centre stood a massive, gnarled tree, its bark textured like ancient scrolls, its branches twisting and spiralling into complex, intricate patterns."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Nyx explained, their violet eyes reflecting the otherworldly glow of the Grove"
1"Rory began, her voice trailing off as the creature stepped back"
2"Isolde said, her voice carrying across the clearing"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Nyx explained (explain)"
3"Isolde explained (explain)"
4"Isolde urged (urge)"
5"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.292
leniency0.583
rawRatio0.857
effectiveRatio0.5
78.4971%