Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZ8WDN82K6YSH94WQPX1K

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory's eyes narrowed as she peered through the peephole, her hand instinctively tightening around the door handle. The figure on the other side was unmistakable, even in the dim light of the hallway. Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stood with his back against the wall, his eyes fixed on the door as if daring her to open it. His slicked-back platinum blond hair gleamed in the faint light, and his tailored charcoal suit seemed out of place in the drab, worn hallway of Silas' bar. She hesitated, her mind racing with the memories of their complicated past. The way he'd walked out on her, the way she'd felt abandoned and hurt. The way she'd tried to convince herself she was better off without him. But the truth was, she'd never been the same since he'd left. The ache in her chest, the hollow feeling in her stomach – it was all still there, simmering just below the surface. Rory took a deep breath and slowly turned the handle, the sound of the deadbolt disengaging echoing through the hallway. She opened the door a crack, her eyes locked on Lucien's. "What do you want, Luc?" she asked, her voice firm, but her heart racing. Lucien pushed off the wall, his eyes never leaving hers. "I need to talk to you, Rory," he said, his voice low and smooth, like honey. "Can I come in?" She hesitated, her mind screaming at her to shut the door, to tell him to leave her alone. But her body seemed to have a mind of its own, and before she knew it, she was stepping aside, allowing him to enter. The door creaked shut behind him, and she felt a shiver run down her spine as he moved closer, his eyes never leaving hers. The flat was small, cluttered with books and research notes, the air thick with the scent of old paper and stale coffee. Lucien's eyes scanned the room, taking in the chaos, before coming back to hers. "It's... cozy," he said, his voice dripping with sarcasm. Rory felt a spark of anger ignite within her, but she bit it back, her eyes flashing with a warning. "What do you want, Luc?" she repeated, her voice firm. Lucien's gaze dropped to her lips, and for a moment, she thought she saw something there, something that looked almost like longing. But it was gone in an instant, replaced by his usual mask of calm. "I need your help," he said, his voice businesslike. "I have a problem, and I think you're the only one who can help me solve it." Rory raised an eyebrow, her mind racing with possibilities. What could Lucien possibly need her help with? And why did he think she was the only one who could help him? "What kind of problem?" she asked, her voice cautious. Lucien's eyes locked on hers, and for a moment, she felt like he was searching her very soul. "A problem with a certain... acquaintance," he said, his voice low. "Someone who's been causing me a great deal of trouble. And I think you might know them." Rory's heart skipped a beat as she felt a shiver run down her spine. She knew exactly who Lucien was talking about. Evan, her ex-boyfriend, the one who'd left her broken and battered. The one she'd thought she'd left behind. But the way Lucien said it, the way his eyes seemed to bore into her very soul, made her wonder if she'd been wrong. If Evan was still out there, watching her, waiting for her. She felt a cold sweat break out on her forehead as Lucien took a step closer, his eyes never leaving hers. "Rory, I need to know if you've seen him," he said, his voice low and urgent. "If you know where he is, I need you to tell me." Rory's mind was racing, her heart pounding in her chest. She knew she should tell him, she knew she should warn him. But something held her back, something that made her hesitate. Maybe it was the fear of facing Evan again, of reliving the pain and the hurt. Or maybe it was something more, something that made her feel like she was trapped in a web of secrets and lies. Whatever it was, it made her say the one thing she knew she shouldn't say. "I don't know what you're talking about," she lied, her voice firm, but her eyes betraying her. Lucien's eyes narrowed, his gaze piercing hers. "Don't play games with me, Rory," he said, his voice low and menacing. "I know you know something. And I'll find out what it is, even if I have to tear this flat apart." Rory felt a shiver run down her spine as Lucien's eyes seemed to bore into her very soul. She knew she was in trouble, she knew she was in over her head. But she also knew she couldn't back down, not now, not when Lucien was standing in front of her, his eyes blazing with a fierce intensity. The air was thick with tension as they stood there, locked in a silent battle of wills. Rory knew she had to make a choice, to decide whether to trust Lucien or to protect herself. But as she looked into his eyes, she saw something there, something that made her wonder if she was ready to face the truth, no matter how painful it might be. "I'll tell you something," she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper. "But you have to promise me one thing." Lucien's eyes locked on hers, his gaze piercing. "What's that?" he asked, his voice low. Rory took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. "You have to promise me you'll tell me the truth," she said, her voice firm. "No more lies, no more secrets. Just the truth." Lucien's eyes seemed to flash with something, something that looked almost like anger. But it was gone in an instant, replaced by a calm, calculating gaze. "I promise," he said, his voice low. "I'll tell you the truth, Rory. No matter how hard it might be." Rory felt a shiver run down her spine as Lucien's eyes seemed to bore into her very soul. She knew she was taking a risk, she knew she was stepping into the unknown. But she also knew she had to do it, had to face the truth, no matter how painful it might be. "Okay," she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper. "I'll tell you what I know."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
68.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1099
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count4
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1099
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"racing"
count4
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"simmering"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"down her spine"
count4
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"skipped a beat"
count1
8
word"pounding"
count2
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"calculating"
count1
highlights
0"racing"
1"stomach"
2"simmering"
3"echoing"
4"down her spine"
5"scanned"
6"eyebrow"
7"skipped a beat"
8"pounding"
9"intensity"
10"tension"
11"whisper"
12"calculating"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
2"a spark of anger"
61.87% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences66
matches
0"felt a shiver"
1"a spark of anger"
2"felt a shiver"
3"felt a shiver"
4"felt a shiver"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"think"
1"wonder"
2"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1099
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
57.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount916
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Lucien17
Rory10
Evan3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Frenchman"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.572
windowScore0.667
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if daring her to open it"
1"felt like he was searching her very sou"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1099
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
69.82% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean47.78
std18.84
cv0.394
sampleLengths
084
173
245
330
466
545
630
762
840
946
1075
1149
1270
1332
1441
1558
1666
1721
1815
1935
2046
2154
2216
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"was gone"
1"was trapped"
2"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was stepping"
1"was searching"
2"was talking"
3"was racing"
4"was standing"
5"was taking was stepping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences75
ratio0.013
matches
0"The ache in her chest, the hollow feeling in her stomach – it was all still there, simmering just below the surface."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount217
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.02304147465437788
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.009216589861751152
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
93.29% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean14.65
std5.62
cv0.383
sampleLengths
017
116
224
327
412
514
613
712
822
920
1011
1114
1210
1316
144
1518
1624
1724
1822
1914
209
2120
2210
2322
2414
259
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279
288
2914
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3317
3414
358
3611
377
3824
3911
4021
4116
4212
4310
4412
4510
4616
4722
4815
4917
44.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.29333333333333333
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners22
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Maybe it was the fear"
ratio0.015
74.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences66
matches
0"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
1"She hesitated, her mind racing"
2"She opened the door a"
3"she asked, her voice firm,"
4"he said, his voice low"
5"She hesitated, her mind screaming"
6"he said, his voice dripping"
7"she repeated, her voice firm"
8"he said, his voice businesslike"
9"she asked, her voice cautious"
10"he said, his voice low"
11"She knew exactly who Lucien"
12"She felt a cold sweat"
13"he said, his voice low"
14"She knew she should tell"
15"she lied, her voice firm,"
16"he said, his voice low"
17"She knew she was in"
18"she said finally, her voice"
19"he asked, his voice low"
ratio0.364
66.06% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences66
matches
0"Rory's eyes narrowed as she"
1"The figure on the other"
2"Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stood"
3"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
4"She hesitated, her mind racing"
5"The way he'd walked out"
6"The way she'd tried to"
7"The ache in her chest,"
8"Rory took a deep breath"
9"She opened the door a"
10"she asked, her voice firm,"
11"Lucien pushed off the wall,"
12"he said, his voice low"
13"She hesitated, her mind screaming"
14"The door creaked shut behind"
15"The flat was small, cluttered"
16"Lucien's eyes scanned the room,"
17"he said, his voice dripping"
18"Rory felt a spark of"
19"she repeated, her voice firm"
ratio0.788
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"If Evan was still out"
ratio0.015
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stood with his back against the wall, his eyes fixed on the door as if daring her to open it."
1"Lucien's gaze dropped to her lips, and for a moment, she thought she saw something there, something that looked almost like longing."
2"Rory's mind was racing, her heart pounding in her chest."
3"But something held her back, something that made her hesitate."
4"But she also knew she couldn't back down, not now, not when Lucien was standing in front of her, his eyes blazing with a fierce intensity."
5"But as she looked into his eyes, she saw something there, something that made her wonder if she was ready to face the truth, no matter how painful it might be."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount14
matches
0"she asked, her voice firm, but her heart racing"
1"he said, his voice low and smooth, like honey"
2"he said, his voice dripping with sarcasm"
3"she repeated, her voice firm"
4"she asked, her voice cautious"
5"he said, his voice low"
6"he said, his voice low and urgent"
7"she lied, her voice firm, but her eyes betraying her"
8"he said, his voice low and menacing"
9"she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper"
10"he asked, his voice low"
11"she said, her voice firm"
12"he said, his voice low"
13"she said finally, her voice barely above a whisper"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
68.6008%