Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZAKJR20VNZM980R33FHM

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Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.012790

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt scraped back with a sound like a blade being drawn. Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the door, her knuckles whitening. The hallway light carved sharp angles across the man standing there—tailored charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back, one amber eye glinting like a coin in the dark. Lucien Moreau. Three months since she’d last seen him. Three months since she’d walked out of that jazz club in Soho, his voice still ringing in her ears: *"You don’t get to decide what’s best for me."* Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound between her ankles, purring like a motor. The cat always did have terrible taste in men. "Rory." His voice was smooth, the kind of smooth that came from practice, from knowing exactly how to make a name sound like an invitation. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed as he shifted his weight. She didn’t step aside. "What are you doing here?" A flicker of something—amusement? irritation?—crossed his face. "Straight to the point. I forgot how much I missed that." He tilted his head, the amber eye catching the light. "May I come in?" "No." The corner of his mouth twitched. "I didn’t think you’d make this easy." "I’m not making it anything. You’re the one who showed up unannounced at my friend’s flat at—" she glanced at the clock on the wall, "—eleven-thirty at night." "Your friend’s flat," he repeated, slow, like he was tasting the words. "Not yours." Rory exhaled through her nose. "You know what I mean." "Do I?" He leaned against the doorframe, close enough that she caught the scent of bergamot and something darker, something that always clung to him—smoke and old books. "Because last I checked, you didn’t have a flat. You had a room above a bar. And a job delivering dumplings." Her jaw set. "I have a name for that job, actually. It’s called *employment*." Lucien’s gaze dropped to her wrist, to the crescent-shaped scar peeking out from under her sleeve. His expression didn’t change, but his fingers tightened around the cane. "I didn’t come here to fight." "Then why *did* you come here?" Silence. The kind that stretched too long, the kind that had always filled the spaces between them, heavy with things neither of them would say. Ptolemy, traitor that he was, chose that moment to rub against Lucien’s leg, leaving a trail of orange fur on his trousers. Lucien crouched, running a hand over the cat’s back. "Still taking in strays, I see." Rory crossed her arms. "He’s not a stray. He’s Eva’s." "Mmm." He straightened, brushing fur from his sleeve. "Eva’s not here, is she?" Rory’s stomach twisted. Of course he knew that. Lucien Moreau didn’t show up anywhere without knowing exactly who was home and who wasn’t. "She’s at work." "Convenient." Her fingers curled into fists. "If you’re implying—" "I’m not implying anything." He held up a hand, palm out. "I’m stating facts. You’re alone. I’m here. And we have things to discuss." "We don’t." "Rory." The way he said her name—like it was a secret, like it was something precious—made her chest ache. She stepped back, finally, because if she didn’t, she was going to do something stupid. Like slam the door in his face. Or worse, let him in. The flat smelled of old paper and curry from the restaurant downstairs. Lucien took it in with a single sweep of his gaze—the stacks of books teetering on the coffee table, the half-empty mug of tea gone cold, the way the lamplight pooled in the corners like spilled ink. He moved further inside, his cane tapping against the floorboards, and Rory shut the door harder than she meant to. The lock clicked into place. Lucien turned, his heterochromatic eyes unreadable. "You’re still angry." She barked out a laugh. "No. Why would I be angry?" He didn’t rise to the bait. Instead, he set his cane against the wall and shrugged out of his jacket, draping it over the back of the armchair. The movement was deliberate, unhurried. Like he had all the time in the world. Rory’s pulse jumped. "What are you doing?" "Making myself comfortable." He rolled up his sleeves, revealing forearms corded with old scars, the kind that came from more than just accidents. "You’re not going to offer me a drink?" "I’m not playing host." "Then I’ll help myself." He moved toward the kitchenette, opening cabinets with the ease of someone who’d done it a hundred times before. Which, she realized with a jolt, he probably had. Rory followed, her boots thudding against the floor. "You don’t get to just—" "Whiskey?" He held up a bottle of something dark and expensive, the label half-peeled. "Or are you still a gin girl?" She swallowed. "I don’t drink with people who show up uninvited." Lucien poured two fingers into a glass anyway. "Liar." He took a sip, his throat working, before setting the glass down in front of her. "You drink when you’re nervous. When you’re angry. When you’re trying not to say something you’ll regret." Rory’s fingers twitched toward the glass. She curled them into her palm instead. "I don’t regret anything." "Don’t you?" He leaned against the counter, close enough that she could see the faint stubble along his jaw, the way his black eye seemed to drink in the light. "Because I do." The words hung between them, heavy and impossible to ignore. Rory’s breath hitched. "You—" "I regret letting you walk away." His voice was low, rough at the edges. "I regret not telling you to stay." Her chest tightened. "You didn’t *let* me do anything. I made my own choice." "And I respected it." He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist. She flinched, but didn’t pull away. "But respect doesn’t mean I have to like it." Rory’s throat went dry. "Lucien." He stepped closer, his hand sliding up her arm, over her shoulder, until his fingers tangled in the ends of her hair. "You cut it." She hadn’t even realized she’d reached for the scissors that day, three weeks after she’d left him. Just that one morning, she’d woken up and the weight of it had been too much. "It was in the way." His thumb traced the line of her jaw. "I liked it long." "I don’t care what you like." A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "Yes, you do." She should have pushed him away. Should have told him to leave. But his touch was familiar in a way that made her bones ache, and when he dipped his head, when his mouth brushed against hers, it wasn’t gentle. It was desperate. Hungry. Rory kissed him back. Three months of silence, of pretending she didn’t miss the way he tasted, the way his hands felt on her skin—it all unraveled in an instant. Lucien made a sound low in his throat, his fingers tightening in her hair, and then he was walking her backward, until her spine hit the wall. The impact knocked the breath from her lungs, but she didn’t care. She wrapped her arms around his neck, pulling him closer, and his mouth slanted over hers, hot and demanding. When he finally pulled back, his breath was ragged. "Tell me to stop." Rory’s lips were swollen, her pulse a drumbeat in her ears. She should have said it. Should have told him this was a mistake. But the words died in her throat. Lucien’s forehead rested against hers. "That’s what I thought." His hand slid down her side, his thumb hooking into the waistband of her jeans. "Bedroom?" Rory’s laugh was breathless. "You’re assuming a lot." He grinned, sharp and wicked. "Am I wrong?" She didn’t answer. Instead, she took his hand and led him down the hall.
total_cost0.01279

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1311
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1311
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"comfortable"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"weight"
2"flicker"
3"silence"
4"stomach"
5"unreadable"
6"pulse"
7"comfortable"
8"traced"
9"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"was desperate"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords12
totalWords1300
ratio0.009
matches
0"\"You don’t get to decide what’s best for me.\""
1"employment"
2"did"
3"let"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount986
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Soho1
Ptolemy2
Eva1
Rory13
Lucien10
Which1
Three3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.841
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1300
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean21.67
std17.12
cv0.79
sampleLengths
051
137
220
337
49
532
61
713
828
914
1010
1149
1214
1333
146
1547
1615
1710
1813
1926
201
218
2224
232
241
2545
2669
275
289
2911
3042
317
3231
334
3432
3513
3621
3711
3842
3917
4033
4114
4221
4314
4430
455
4625
4738
4812
496
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"being drawn"
1"was, chose"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was tasting"
1"was walking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences136
ratio0.059
matches
0"The hallway light carved sharp angles across the man standing there—tailored charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back, one amber eye glinting like a coin in the dark."
1"A flicker of something—amusement?"
2"irritation?—crossed his face."
3"\"I’m not making it anything. You’re the one who showed up unannounced at my friend’s flat at—\" she glanced at the clock on the wall, \"—eleven-thirty at night.\""
4"\"Do I?\" He leaned against the doorframe, close enough that she caught the scent of bergamot and something darker, something that always clung to him—smoke and old books."
5"The way he said her name—like it was a secret, like it was something precious—made her chest ache."
6"Lucien took it in with a single sweep of his gaze—the stacks of books teetering on the coffee table, the half-empty mug of tea gone cold, the way the lamplight pooled in the corners like spilled ink."
7"Three months of silence, of pretending she didn’t miss the way he tasted, the way his hands felt on her skin—it all unraveled in an instant."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount339
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.029498525073746312
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0058997050147492625
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean9.56
std7.74
cv0.81
sampleLengths
012
112
227
32
47
528
611
79
825
912
104
115
124
133
1421
154
161
176
187
1928
2012
212
225
235
2428
2521
263
2711
2816
2911
306
316
321
3324
3422
359
366
374
386
398
405
413
425
4315
443
451
465
473
4811
4913
57.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36764705882352944
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences88
matches
0"Of course he knew that."
1"Instead, he set his cane"
2"Just that one morning, she’d"
3"Instead, she took his hand"
ratio0.045
60.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences88
matches
0"His voice was smooth, the"
1"She didn’t step aside."
2"He tilted his head, the"
3"she glanced at the clock"
4"he repeated, slow, like he"
5"He leaned against the doorframe,"
6"Her jaw set."
7"His expression didn’t change, but"
8"He straightened, brushing fur from"
9"Her fingers curled into fists."
10"He held up a hand,"
11"She stepped back, finally, because"
12"He moved further inside, his"
13"She barked out a laugh."
14"He didn’t rise to the"
15"He rolled up his sleeves,"
16"He moved toward the kitchenette,"
17"He held up a bottle"
18"He took a sip, his"
19"She curled them into her"
ratio0.398
56.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences88
matches
0"The deadbolt scraped back with"
1"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
2"The hallway light carved sharp"
3"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound between"
4"The cat always did have"
5"His voice was smooth, the"
6"The ivory handle of his"
7"She didn’t step aside."
8"A flicker of something—amusement?"
9"He tilted his head, the"
10"The corner of his mouth"
11"she glanced at the clock"
12"he repeated, slow, like he"
13"Rory exhaled through her nose."
14"He leaned against the doorframe,"
15"Her jaw set."
16"Lucien’s gaze dropped to her"
17"His expression didn’t change, but"
18"The kind that stretched too"
19"Ptolemy, traitor that he was,"
ratio0.807
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"But his touch was familiar in a way that made her bones ache, and when he dipped his head, when his mouth brushed against hers, it wasn’t gentle."
1"Lucien made a sound low in his throat, his fingers tightening in her hair, and then he was walking her backward, until her spine hit the wall."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she’d, his voice still ringing in her ears: *"
1"He tilted, the amber eye catching the light"
2"He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist"
3"His hand slid, his thumb hooking into the waistband of her jeans"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.017
leniency0.033
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.033
83.2144%